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Ruby was so proud of her new skates! She put them on right away and was soon rushing along the sidewalk. Her little brother Max could only watch in envy.
“I wish I had a pair!” he told his mum.
“Well, you’re nearly big enough to wear Ruby’s old skates,” she replied.
But when Max tried on Ruby’s old skates, they were too big. He stuffed newspaper into the boots. Much to his disappointment, he fell over each time he tried to stand up in them.
Finally, he gave up, only watching Ruby skating around him.
“I should put on a skating display!” Ruby decided. “All our aunts, uncles and cousins will come. You’ll watch me, Max ”
Max sighed. He didn’t want to watch the show. He wanted to be in it! “Poor Max!” said his mum. Then, she took out a pair of thick red socks to let Max pull them on with the hope of fitting better.
Max eye d the red socks skeptically, saying, “Mum, these look just like my red soccer socks, but smaller.” His mum smiled, “Ah, your red soccer socks are too thin and meant for running, but these are magic socks that have the power to expand and stretch to fit most feet...”
Magic When Mum left the room, Max took the wand (魔杖) from his magic set and waved it around a few times, “Magic socks, you are so great! Use your magic to help me skate” Max slipped the socks on and tried skating in his bedroom. He didn’t full over! He tried again. He still didn’t fall. He could now skate— thanks to his magic socks! Hooray!
The next morning, when he skated up to Ruby on one foot, she stared in amazement.“ Max, you are magic!” Thrilled, Ruby invited him to join in the show. To prepare well for the show, Max practiced happily with the magic socks on every day. Max even tried tricks like jumps, believing the socks would help him.
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（1） 续写词数应为150个左右；
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The show time came and their family gathered in the garden.
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“But you’re not wearing magic socks!” said Mum.
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文章大意
Ruby 有了新溜冰鞋，小弟弟 Max 羡慕不已。妈妈说 Max 差不多能穿 Ruby 的旧溜冰鞋了，可 Max 穿上后发现太大，尝试各种方法都无法正常站立，最终放弃。Ruby 决定举办滑冰表演，邀请所有亲戚观看。妈妈拿出一双厚红袜子，称其有魔法能让 Max 穿上溜冰鞋。Max 半信半疑，用魔杖对袜子施展 “魔法” 后，竟真的能在卧室里滑冰了。第二天，Max 的滑冰技巧让 Ruby 惊叹，受邀参加表演，之后他每天都穿着魔法袜子快乐练习。
故事山分析
开端：Ruby 有新溜冰鞋，Max 渴望也有一双，尝试穿旧鞋失败。
发展：Ruby 准备滑冰表演，妈妈拿出 “魔法袜子” 帮助 Max，Max 能滑冰并受邀参加表演，开始练习。
高潮：表演时刻到来，Max 在表演中会有怎样的表现，是否会出现意外情况，是故事高潮。
结局：表演结束，Max 对 “魔法袜子” 有新认识，家人也会有不同反应，他和家人之间的关系也会因这次经历而有所变化。
五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：妈妈说袜子有魔法，能让 Max 穿上溜冰鞋。回应：在表演中，“魔法袜子” 会成为关键，可能是 Max 自信表演的支撑，也可能出现意外情况，如袜子破了，引发对 “魔法” 的新解读。
伏笔：Max 相信袜子有魔法，每天穿着练习，甚至尝试高难度动作。回应：表演时，Max 可能因过度依赖 “魔法” 而遇到困难，如跳跃时差点摔倒，但最终凭借自己的能力化解，意识到自身努力的重要性。
伏笔：Ruby 邀请 Max 参加表演，Max 积极练习。回应：表演时，Max 和 Ruby 的互动会很精彩，可能会有合作表演，展现他们的默契和成长。
伏笔：Max 最初穿旧溜冰鞋总是摔倒。回应：表演时，Max 成功的表现会形成鲜明对比，突出 “魔法袜子” 带来的改变以及他自身的进步。
伏笔：家人会观看表演。回应：家人的反应会影响故事走向，如他们对 Max 的表现赞不绝口，会让 Max 更有成就感，也会让妈妈的 “魔法” 说法更具趣味性。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描写表演时的场景，包括花园的布置、家人的期待、Max 和 Ruby 的出场，Max 穿着 “魔法袜子” 自信地展示各种技巧，如单脚滑行、旋转等，家人的欢呼和掌声。
第二段：设置情节转折，比如表演结束后，Max 不小心弄破了袜子，妈妈指出他没穿 “魔法袜子” 也能滑得很好，引发 Max 对 “魔法” 的思考，意识到是自己的练习和努力让他成功，最后表达他对这次经历的感悟。
情感线
起初 Max 因不能滑冰而失落，穿上 “魔法袜子” 能滑冰后兴奋又自信，准备表演时满怀期待。表演时紧张又激动，享受成功的喜悦。妈妈指出袜子秘密时，他先是惊讶，随后明白努力的意义，内心充满成就感和对未来的信心。
故事线
Ruby 有新溜冰鞋，Max 穿旧鞋失败。
Ruby 准备滑冰表演，妈妈拿出 “魔法袜子” 帮助 Max。
Max 能滑冰并受邀参加表演，开始练习。
表演时刻到来，Max 和 Ruby 在家人面前精彩表演。
Max 表演结束弄破袜子，妈妈揭示袜子秘密。
Max 意识到努力的重要性，收获成长。
主旨升华句（5 句英文）
Sometimes, the magic we believe in is not just a supernatural force, but the power of our own efforts and determination that lead us to achieve our dreams.
Through Max's experience, we learn that the support and encouragement from family, even in the form of a little white lie, can inspire us to overcome difficulties and reach new heights.
This story shows that what seems like magic at first glance may turn out to be the result of our own hard work, and that self - belief and practice are the true keys to success.
Max discovered that the real magic behind his skating skills was not in the socks, but in his willingness to try and improve, reminding us that true growth comes from within.
In the journey of life, we may look for external magic to solve our problems, but it's often our own perseverance and self - improvement that create the most amazing transformations.
写作示范一
The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. The grass was decorated with colorful balloons, and a small platform was set up in the middle. Max and Ruby stepped onto the platform, their faces beaming with excitement. Max, wearing his "magic socks", started with a smooth one - foot glide, then spun around gracefully. Ruby followed suit, showing off her own skills. The family cheered and clapped loudly, their voices filling the air. Max even managed a small jump, landing steadily on his feet, which brought even louder applause.
"But you're not wearing magic socks!" said Mum. As Max finished his performance, he tripped and tore one of his socks. To his surprise, he still managed to stand up and skate without falling. Mum came over and pointed out the now - torn sock. Max looked at it in shock at first. Then, he realized that it wasn't the socks that made him skate well, but his own practice. He smiled and said, "You're right, Mum. I guess I made my own magic with all that practicing." Everyone laughed, and Max felt a great sense of pride in his achievement.
写作示范二
The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. A soft breeze blew, making the flowers in the garden sway gently, as if they were also looking forward to the show. Max, with a big smile on his face, skated out first. He performed a series of difficult moves, like backward skating and fast - paced turns. Ruby joined him, and they skated in harmony, creating a wonderful display. The aunts, uncles and cousins were all amazed, constantly taking pictures and cheering.
"But you're not wearing magic socks!" said Mum. After the performance, Max was so excited that he didn't notice his sock had come off. Mum picked it up and showed it to him. Max was puzzled at first. Then, he remembered all the days he spent practicing. He realized that his hard work was the real magic. He said to his family, "I thought it was the socks, but it was really me. I'm so glad I practiced hard." Everyone nodded in agreement, and Max knew that this was a performance he would never forget, not because of the "magic socks", but because of his own growth.
【答案】
The show time came and their family gathered in the garden. Max was nervous, afraid that he would fall over again. However, everything went perfectly! The audience held their breath as the two siblings did their special skating tricks, turns and jumps and when it was over, they clapped and cheered. Max had never been more proud! Mum went to hug them and praised Max for his graceful skating skills. Max thanked Mum a lot and owed his success to his magic socks.
“But you’re not wearing magic socks!” said Mum. “I put them in the wash this morning.” Max stared at her, and then at magic socks, which were hanging on the washing line. Actually, he was wearing the red soccer socks. Max was so surprised that he could still skate — even without his magic socks! “You don’t need magic to skate,” said Mum. “You just need to practice and believe in yourself!” She was right! He could skate, all on his own.

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