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It was a snowing Monday night. Mava received an invitation from her friend Lily, asking Maya to attend her birthday party next Wednesday evening. To Maya’s amazement and excitement, the invitation looked like it came from Hogwarts. It would be a Harry Potter-themed costume party. As Lily’s good friend and as one of the millions of Harry Potter fans, Maya definitely accepted the invitation without a second thought. Her favourite character was Harry’s best female friend Hermione. Maya admired her not just because she was extremely clever and a bit of a know-it-all, but also for her bravery and a positive mindset. Every time faced with difficulty, she always had a way out. Maya was so eager to wear Hermione’s costume that she couldn’t wait to make preparations for it. She made a list of things to buy, which consisted of a f lark V-neck sweater, a white collared shirt with the Gryffindor tie, a skirt, stockings, Mary Jane shoes, a black cloak (斗篷) and of course a scarf of bee color.
With the list in hand, Maya happily went to tell her mother, Sarah, all about it. Sarah was weaving a sweater in the living room. After learning Maya’s plan, Sarah thought it was not necessary to buy all the clothing for they cost a lot and Maya had already had a dark V-neck sweater, a white collared shirt, many skirts, stockings and a pair of Mary Jane shoes. Therefore, she advised her daughter to rent or buy a second-hand black cloak and a brown and golden scarf. But Maya insisted that all the costumes should be brand-new. “Hermione is more about books than looks. Just remember to keep things tidy, simple and modest.” Sarah stopped weaving and told her daughter. Maya agreed with her mom, but she still wanted a new cloak and a new scarf.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking at the half-weaved sweater, Maya got an idea.
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Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf.
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文章大意
周一晚下雪，玛瓦收到好友莉莉的生日派对邀请，这是一场哈利 波特主题的变装派对。玛瓦作为哈利 波特粉丝，欣然答应，她最喜欢赫敏，急切地准备赫敏的服装，并列出采购清单。母亲萨拉认为部分服装已有，建议租赁或购买二手的黑斗篷和围巾，但玛瓦坚持要全新的。
故事山分析
开端：玛瓦收到哈利 波特主题生日派对邀请，决定扮演赫敏。
发展：玛瓦列采购清单，母亲萨拉认为部分物品无需新买，两人产生分歧。
高潮：玛瓦想到解决办法，与母亲一起制作服装，最终完成的过程将是故事高潮。
结局：玛瓦穿着自制服装参加派对，收获快乐，同时体会到与母亲合作的意义，对物品价值有新认知。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：萨拉在编织毛衣。回应：玛瓦想到利用母亲编织技能，一起制作围巾和斗篷，既解决服装问题，又增进亲子关系。
伏笔：玛瓦坚持要全新服装。回应：通过自制服装，满足玛瓦对 “新” 的追求，同时让她明白自制物品的独特价值。
伏笔：玛瓦喜欢赫敏的勇敢和积极心态。回应：在制作服装遇到困难时，玛瓦以赫敏为榜样，勇敢面对并解决问题。
伏笔：萨拉提到赫敏注重内在，穿着应整洁、简单、朴素。回应：自制服装符合这一特点，让玛瓦更好理解赫敏的形象内涵。
伏笔：玛瓦和母亲在购买服装上有分歧。回应：通过共同制作服装，化解分歧，达成共识，促进家庭和谐。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述玛瓦想到的主意，即和母亲一起制作斗篷和围巾。详细描写她向母亲提出想法的过程，包括母亲的反应，两人如何计划，如确定制作材料、商量制作方法等。
第二段：叙述制作过程中发生的事情，如遇到的困难（针法错误、材料不足等）及如何解决。描述玛瓦和母亲在制作过程中的互动，如互相鼓励、交流心得，最后完成服装时两人的喜悦心情。
情感线
起初玛瓦因派对邀请兴奋，与母亲意见不合时有些失落。想到制作服装的主意后，重新燃起希望，制作过程中虽有困难，但在和母亲的互动中感受到亲情温暖，完成服装时充满成就感和喜悦。母亲从最初对购买新服装的反对，到理解女儿想法并一起制作，增进了对女儿的爱。
故事线
玛瓦收到哈利 波特主题派对邀请，决定扮演赫敏。
玛瓦列采购清单，母亲建议部分物品买二手，两人产生分歧。
玛瓦看到母亲编织毛衣，想到和母亲一起制作斗篷和围巾。
玛瓦和母亲确定制作计划，准备材料。
制作过程中遇到困难，母女共同解决。
完成服装，玛瓦穿着参加派对，收获快乐与成长。
主旨升华句
Sometimes, the most precious things in life are not bought with money but created with love and effort, just like Maya's self - made costumes.
Through the process of making costumes together, Maya and her mother not only solved their disagreement but also deepened their bond, showing that family cooperation can overcome any obstacle.
Maya learned that embodying her favorite character was not just about appearance but also about the spirit of using creativity and perseverance to face challenges, just like Hermione.
The experience taught Maya that the value of an item lies not only in its newness but in the memories and emotions attached to it during the creation process.
This story shows that when we combine our passions with family support, we can create something truly special, which enriches our lives and brings us closer to our loved ones.
写作示范一
Looking at the half - weaved sweater, Maya got an idea. She rushed to her mother and said, "Mom, instead of buying new ones, why don't we make the cloak and the scarf ourselves You're so good at weaving. I can help you, too." Sarah was surprised at first but then smiled, seeing the determination in Maya's eyes. They discussed the materials they needed. Maya found some black fabric in the storage room that could be used for the cloak. Sarah measured the fabric and showed Maya how to cut it into the right shape. For the scarf, they decided on using some wool in brown and golden colors.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. Maya encountered some problems when sewing the edges of the cloak. The stitches were uneven, but she didn't give up. She asked her mother for advice and tried again. Sarah, on the other hand, had to adjust the pattern of the scarf several times to make it look perfect. Finally, the big day arrived. Maya put on her self - made costume. The cloak flowed behind her, and the scarf was wrapped neatly around her neck. She looked exactly like Hermione. She thanked her mother with a big hug, feeling proud of what they had accomplished together.
写作示范二
Looking at the half - weaved sweater, Maya got an idea. She sat down beside her mother and said, "Mom, I think we can make the cloak and scarf on our own. It'll be more special that way." Sarah considered her daughter's words and nodded in agreement. They searched online for patterns of the cloak and scarf. Maya was responsible for ordering the wool for the scarf, while Sarah found an old black sheet that could be transformed into a cloak. They planned to start working on the weekend.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. As Maya cut the black sheet, she accidentally cut it a bit too short. She was worried, but her mother reassured her that they could add an extra strip to make it long enough. Sarah, in the process of weaving the scarf, found that the color combination wasn't as good as she expected. So, they adjusted the colors. After days of hard work, the costume was finally ready. Maya put it on and twirled around in front of the mirror. She felt like she was in the world of Harry Potter. She couldn't wait to show it off at the party and tell everyone how she and her mother made it together.
【答案】Looking at the half-weaved sweater,Maya got an idea. “Mom,” Maya exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with excitement, “why don’t we make the cloak and scarf ourselves ” Sarah was more than delighted at her daughter’s proposal. She would put aside the sweater she was weaving and set out to weave a scarf similar to Hermione’s. Maya took the task of making the cloak. She had learned something about sewing at school. They found a DIY instruction video for a cloak online and used leftover cloth from a project Sarah had finished.
Over the following days, Maya was making her cloak while Sarah was weaving the scarf. Sarah was experienced at weaving so the scarf weaving went smoothly. The brown and gold stripes scarf was in sight. As for the cloak, although following the video instructions, Maya found it not that seemingly easy. Nevertheless, with great passion and patience, Maya did it eventually. On the long expected night, wearing Hermione’s costume, especially the hand-made scarf and cloak, Maya felt a surge of warmth and pride, ready to embrace the magical evening ahead. “You are brilliant like a real Hermione,” Sarah smiled at her daughter.

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