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As I walked down the street with my four-year-old daughter Lisa, two elderly ladies stopped to admire Lisa’s beauty, especially her long, beautiful hair flowing gently down her back, like a cascade of silk. Lisa’s conceited (自负的) reply made me feel awkward. Back at home, I talked to Lisa about inner beauty other than outer beauty. I explained to her that inner beauty means being kind to family and friends, sharing toys, and showing care and love when others are in trouble.
“If you do these things, you are beautiful on the inside. Do you understand what I mean ” I asked her. She looked at me with confusion but seriously nodded. I hugged her, telling her that I didn’t want her to forget what I said. The topic never came up again.
Nearly one year later, there was a little girl, Jenna, in Lisa’s class who was experiencing cancer (癌症) treatment and had lost all her hair when we saw her. As five-year-old Lisa noticed her best friend Jenna’s head, with freshly grown thin hair, she was wondering what had happened. When we returned home, I explained to Lisa what Jenna was going through and why she had lost most of her previous long, beautiful hair. Having known the cause, she felt a pang of sadness, silent for a while.
Lisa remembered my words about inner beauty and how it was more important than physical appearance. Lisa wanted to do something to support her friend, but she wasn’t sure what she could do. One day, Lisa’ s teacher mentioned a local charity (慈善机构) that collected hair donations to make wigs (假发) for children who had lost their hair because of medical treatments.
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Lisa’s eyes brightened when she heard the information.
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Touched by Lisa’s kind act, I hugged her tightly (紧紧地).
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Lisa 捐发故事续写
续写要点
第一段
得知信息后的反应：着重描写 Lisa 听到可捐赠头发做假发这一信息时的神态、语言和动作，如眼睛放光、兴奋地大喊等，体现她内心的激动与决心。
决定捐赠头发：详细叙述 Lisa 决定捐赠头发的过程，包括她如何告知家人自己的想法，面对可能的阻碍（如对剪短头发的不舍）时的态度，以及家人的反应。
准备捐赠：描述 Lisa 在决定捐赠头发后，积极做准备的行动，如寻找剪刀、梳理头发等，突出她的坚定。
第二段
家人的感动与支持：刻画家人（尤其是 “我”）看到 Lisa 的行为后的感动表现，如紧紧拥抱、夸赞等，展现家人对她的认可与支持。
捐赠过程：细致描写 Lisa 前往慈善机构捐赠头发的经历，包括工作人员的接待、对她的赞扬，以及 Lisa 在捐赠过程中的感受。
对 Lisa 的影响及意义：阐述这次捐赠行为对 Lisa 自身的影响，如她对美的理解进一步深化，自信心增强，以及与朋友 Jenna 的关系可能因此变得更加紧密等。
情感线
第一段
兴奋与坚定：Lisa 听到捐赠头发的信息后，瞬间兴奋起来，眼中闪烁着光芒，毫不犹豫地决定捐赠自己的头发，此时她的内心充满坚定，一心想要帮助朋友 Jenna。
坚持与期待：在面对家人可能的劝阻时，Lisa 态度坚决，耐心解释自己的想法，满心期待着通过捐赠头发能让 Jenna 开心，她的坚持源于对朋友的关心和对内心美的追求。
第二段
感动与自豪：家人看到 Lisa 的举动后，被她的善良深深打动，为她感到无比自豪，“我” 紧紧拥抱她，通过言语和动作传达对她的认可。
喜悦与成长：Lisa 在捐赠头发的过程中，收获了工作人员的赞扬，内心充满喜悦，她切实感受到自己的行为带来的积极影响，进一步理解了内在美的意义，自身也在这个过程中得到成长。
故事线
Lisa 听到捐赠头发的信息，眼睛发亮，立即决定要捐赠头发帮助 Jenna。
Lisa 跑回家，兴奋地告诉家人自己的决定，面对妈妈的劝说，她坚定地表示要践行内在美的理念。
妈妈被 Lisa 的决心打动，帮她小心地剪掉长发，Lisa 全程充满期待。
家人看到 Lisa 的行为，十分感动，“我” 紧紧拥抱她，表达自豪之情。
Lisa 和家人前往慈善机构捐赠头发，工作人员热情接待并夸赞她。
捐赠后，Lisa 满心欢喜，期待着把这个好消息告诉 Jenna，她对美有了更深刻的认识。
主旨升华句
Lisa's act of kindness not only brought hope to her friend but also illuminated the true meaning of beauty, reminding us that compassion and selflessness are the most radiant qualities. （Lisa 的善举不仅给她的朋友带来了希望，也阐明了美的真正含义，提醒我们同情和无私是最闪耀的品质。）
Through this experience, Lisa learned that true beauty lies not in physical appearance but in the willingness to help others, setting an inspiring example for us all. （通过这次经历，Lisa 明白了真正的美不在于外表，而在于帮助他人的意愿，为我们所有人树立了一个鼓舞人心的榜样。）
The journey of Lisa's hair donation shows that even a small child can make a big difference when guided by the principle of inner beauty, and that kindness has the power to transform lives. （Lisa 捐赠头发的历程表明，在内在美原则的指引下，即使是小孩子也能产生巨大的影响，善良具有改变生活的力量。）
Lisa's selfless decision to donate her hair is a testament to the fact that beauty is not skin - deep; it is the love and care we show to those in need that truly make us beautiful. （Lisa 无私地决定捐赠头发证明了美并非肤浅的；我们给予那些需要帮助的人的爱与关怀才真正让我们变得美丽。）
This heart - warming story of Lisa's act of kindness teaches us that the pursuit of inner beauty can turn ordinary moments into extraordinary memories, and that every act of love counts. （这个关于 Lisa 善举的温馨故事告诉我们，对内在美的追求可以将平凡的时刻变成非凡的回忆，每一个爱的举动都意义重大。）
写作示范
示范一
Lisa’s eyes brightened when she heard the information. She jumped up and down, shouting, “Mom, I want to donate my hair to help Jenna!” Without waiting for a response, she rushed to her room, rummaging through drawers to find scissors. When I tried to reason with her, saying she might miss her long hair, she looked at me with determination. “Mom, you said inner beauty is important. I want to be beautiful inside by helping Jenna.” Her words melted my heart. I sat her down and gently cut her hair. She watched in the mirror, a big smile on her face, excited about what she was doing.
Touched by Lisa’s kind act, I hugged her tightly. “You are the most beautiful girl in the world, Lisa,” I told her. We then went to the charity together. The staff were impressed by Lisa’s generosity. They praised her for her kindness, and Lisa blushed with pride. On our way home, Lisa talked non - stop about how she couldn’t wait to see Jenna’s reaction. This experience not only made Lisa understand the true meaning of beauty but also strengthened our family bond. It was a moment I would always cherish.
示范二
Lisa’s eyes brightened when she heard the information. Immediately, she turned to me and said, “Mom, I have to do this for Jenna.” Her voice was filled with conviction. She spent the rest of the evening looking at pictures of kids with wigs, imagining how happy Jenna would be with one. The next day, she woke up early, asking me to cut her hair. I was hesitant at first, but seeing her eagerness, I agreed. As the long locks fell, Lisa didn’t show a hint of regret. Instead, she seemed more confident than ever.
Touched by Lisa’s kind act, I hugged her tightly. I told her how proud I was of her decision. We visited the charity, and the staff welcomed us warmly. They took Lisa’s hair carefully, explaining how it would be made into a beautiful wig. Lisa listened intently, her eyes shining with joy. After the donation, Lisa felt a sense of accomplishment. She knew she had done something truly meaningful. This act of kindness not only helped Jenna but also taught Lisa a valuable life lesson about the power of inner beauty.
参考答案
Lisa’s eyes brightened when she heard the information. She had always taken pride in her long, beautiful hair, but she saw an opportunity to use it to help Jenna. That night, Lisa approached me with a determined look on her face. “Mommy, can we cut my hair ” she asked. I was taken aback. “Why do you want to do that, sweetheart ” I inquired. “Because Jenna doesn’t have any hair, and I want to help her,” Lisa explained. “I heard we can donate hair to make wigs for kids like her.”
Touched by Lisa’s kind act, I hugged her tightly (紧紧地). “That’s a wonderful idea, Lisa. Let’s do it.” A few days later, Lisa’s hair was cut, and the long locks were sent to the charity. Lisa felt a sense of pride and fulfillment, knowing that her hair would help someone in need. She also felt a deep connection to Jenna, who now had a special friend understanding her struggles. Looking into her lovely, deep brown eyes, I solemnly said, “Lisa, you are not only beautiful on the outside but also on the inside.” Lisa smiled, her eyes glistening with pride.

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