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During that hot summer, little Sammy and his sister Marie spent their vacation at their grandparents’ farm. The farm was filled with fun and adventure, but one day, an unfortunate accident occurred. While playing, Sammy accidentally shot his grandmother’s beloved pet duck with a slingshot (弹弓). Panicked, he quickly hid the duck behind a pile of old wood in the yard. He was afraid to tell his grandmother the truth, worried about being punished.
However, what he didn’t know was that his sister Marie had seen the entire event. The next day, when Grandma asked Marie to wash the dishes, Marie seized the opportunity to shift the responsibility onto Sammy. She said, “Sammy told me he wanted to help in the kitchen today, Grandma.” Sammy was shocked and confused because he had not said such a thing. Marie approached him and whispered threateningly, “Remember the duck ” It was then that Sammy realized Marie had seen his secret and was now using it to make him do the housework she didn’t want to do.
This situation continued for several days. Whenever there were household chores to be done, Marie would threaten Sammy with “Remember the duck ”. Sammy felt an increasing burden of guilt and responsibility.
注意：续写词数应为 80左右。
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma
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Sammy与奶奶的故事续写
续写要点
Sammy 坦白：详细描述 Sammy 向奶奶坦白时的神情、动作和话语，展现他内心的恐惧与愧疚。比如，他可能低着头，声音颤抖，身体微微发抖。
奶奶反应：刻画奶奶听到坦白后的表情、语言和行动，体现奶奶的宽容与智慧。奶奶或许会放下手中的事情，认真倾听，然后温柔地安慰 Sammy。
Marie 受触动：描写 Marie 在一旁听到对话后的反应，包括她的表情变化、内心的挣扎以及最终的转变。她可能从最初的紧张害怕，到后来感到羞愧和懊悔。
结局与感悟：讲述事情的最终解决方式，以及 Sammy 和 Marie 从中得到的成长与感悟，如学会诚实、珍惜亲情等。
情感线（150 字）
Sammy：起初因害怕惩罚而极度恐惧，在秘密被 Marie 要挟后，压力与愧疚感不断累积。决定坦白时，内心充满忐忑。坦白后，虽害怕被责骂，但更多的是卸下重担的轻松。最后，在奶奶的宽容下，感到温暖与安心，对奶奶充满感激。
Marie：看到 Sammy 犯错时，最初有想要利用此事的心思。在要挟 Sammy 过程中，可能有一丝得意。但当 Sammy 向奶奶坦白时，她开始紧张害怕，担心自己的行为被揭露。听到奶奶的教导后，内心充满羞愧，意识到自己的错误。
故事线（6 条）
Sammy 鼓起勇气，找到正在厨房忙碌的奶奶，开始艰难地坦白自己的过错。
奶奶停下手中的活，认真倾听，脸上没有一丝愤怒，反而充满了慈爱。
躲在一旁偷听的 Marie，听到 Sammy 的话后，脸色变得煞白，身体也微微颤抖。
奶奶听完后，把 Sammy 和 Marie 叫到一起，轻声询问 Marie 是否知晓此事。
Marie 红着脸，低着头承认了自己的要挟行为，并向 Sammy 道歉。
奶奶教导两人要诚实和宽容，一家人最终和好如初，关系更加亲密。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
Honesty is not only the best policy but also the key to mending relationships and finding inner peace.（诚实不仅是上策，也是修复关系和获得内心平静的关键。）
In the face of mistakes, courage to confess and forgiveness to accept can turn a bad situation into a precious life lesson.（面对错误时，勇于承认和宽容接纳能将糟糕的局面转化为宝贵的人生教训。）
Sibling bonds are tested by challenges, but truth and love can always strengthen them.（兄弟姐妹的关系会受到挑战的考验，但真相和爱总能让它们更加牢固。）
True growth comes from acknowledging our wrongdoings and learning from them, as Sammy and Marie did.（真正的成长源于承认我们的错误并从中学习，就像 Sammy 和 Marie 所做的那样。）
The power of forgiveness can heal wounds, both in ourselves and in our relationships, just as Grandma showed.（正如奶奶所展示的，宽容的力量可以治愈我们自己和人际关系中的创伤。）
两篇写作示范
示范一
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Sammy walked slowly into the living room, his head hanging low. With a quivering voice, he poured out his guilt about the duck. Grandma put down her book, looking at him gently. “I knew, dear. Everyone makes mistakes,” she said. Marie, who was listening nearby, felt a lump in her throat. Grandma called Marie over, and with tears in her eyes, Marie confessed her blackmailing. Grandma smiled, hugging them both. “Now, we start fresh,” she said. From then on, the siblings understood the importance of honesty and forgiveness.
示范二
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Sammy’s hands were shaking as he approached Grandma in the garden. “Grandma, I... I shot the duck,” he sobbed. Grandma turned around, her eyes soft. “It’s okay, Sammy. What matters is you telling me now.” Marie, hiding behind a tree, was shocked. Grandma called Marie out. Realizing her mistake, Marie apologized. Grandma patiently taught them about honesty. That day, the siblings learned that honesty could fix even the biggest mistakes, and their bond grew stronger than ever.
参考答案
Finally, he couldn’t bear the secret and pressure any longer and decided to tell everything to Grandma. Grandma knelt down smiling, gave him a hug and forgave him. Grandma called Marie to come to her and disclosed the whole truth, and meantime blamed her for taking advantage of her brother. Marie also felt ashamed and regretful, so she said sorry to Grandma and her brother, promising not to do so again. Both of them learned a lot from this trip. So it is important to admit your mistake, apologize and seek others’ forgiveness.

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