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湖南省长沙市2024-2025学年高三下学期月考（六）英语试题
47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
Paragraph 2: After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
湖南省长沙市第一中学2024-2025学年高三下学期月考（六）英语试题
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide(独立主格，描写状态), arms hanging awkwardly(独立主格，描写动作), ready to work but unsure of what to do(宾从)(adj短语做补语). “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!(do型强调句)” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage(同位语) where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency(独立主格，描写人物). My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl(adj短语做补语) I was washing(定从), nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty(宾从), but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth(心理描写).
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed(宾从)!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant(状从), he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us(with复合结构).
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table(宾从). A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor(现在分词做结果状语). It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred(表从). I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag(补语，前面放句号表强调). It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping(现在分词做伴随动作) Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence(宾从).
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
Paragraph 2: After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
1. 读后续写类型分析
本文属于生活经历类读后续写，讲述了一个新手在餐厅打工的经历。续写时需要围绕主人公的成长、情感变化以及如何解决问题展开。构思时应注重情感的递进和问题的解决，布局上可以从主人公的内心活动、动作描写以及环境变化入手，提炼出“犯错—反思—成长”的框架。
2. 故事山模式分析
开端：主人公初入职场，紧张且不知所措。
发展：主人公犯错，经理严厉批评，主人公感到恐惧和内疚。
高潮：主人公试图解决问题，但遇到新的困难（湿抹布无法清理）。
结局：主人公反思并成长。
3. 续写衔接点
情感衔接：主人公的紧张、内疚、反思。
动作衔接：清理啤酒、拿抹布、与经理的互动。
环境衔接：餐厅的忙碌氛围、厨房与餐厅的空间转换。
4. 伏笔与冲突点
伏笔：经理的严厉态度、主人公的紧张情绪。
冲突点：主人公的失误、清理啤酒时的困难。
隐含线索：主人公的成长与责任感。
解决方案：主人公通过反思和行动解决问题。
5. 表格分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 主人公初入职场，紧张且不知所措；经理严厉但注重细节。 “I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly.”
情感层次 紧张、内疚、反思、成长。 “A mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.”
关键情节点 主人公犯错，经理批评，主人公试图解决问题。 “Take care of it!” Aaron turned and stormed off.
语言特色 简洁直接，突出紧张氛围。 “His voice sharp with urgency.”
关键词分析 紧张、内疚、反思、成长。 “fear,” “conscience,” “mistake,” “reflection.”
心理描写 主人公的内心活动丰富，从紧张到内疚再到反思。 “I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise...”
动作描写 主人公的动作描写细致，突出紧张感。 “My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing...”
环境描写 餐厅的忙碌氛围，厨房与餐厅的空间转换。 “As we made our way through the restaurant...”
隐含主题 成长与责任感。 “I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag.”
情感转折 从紧张到内疚再到反思。 “A mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out...”
空间转换 厨房到餐厅的空间转换。 “I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags...”
时间过渡 从犯错到解决问题的过渡。 “Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen...”
6. 续写推荐例句
动作描写
He swiftly grabbed the rag and rushed to the table.
She carefully wiped the spilled beer, trying not to make a bigger mess.
With trembling hands, he picked up the broken pieces.
She hurriedly fetched more rags from the kitchen.
He knelt down to clean the floor, his heart pounding.
She quickly mopped up the liquid, hoping no one noticed.
He dashed back to the kitchen, his mind racing.
She gently placed the clean dishes on the shelf.
心理描写
A wave of guilt washed over him as he realized his mistake.
She felt a knot of anxiety tighten in her chest.
He couldn’t shake the feeling of dread as he approached the table.
She was overwhelmed with a sense of responsibility.
He struggled to calm his racing thoughts.
She felt a surge of determination to fix the situation.
He was torn between fear and the need to do the right thing.
She reflected on her actions, realizing how much she had learned.
环境描写
The kitchen was a whirlwind of activity, with everyone focused on their tasks.
The restaurant buzzed with the sounds of clinking dishes and chatter.
The dim lighting in the dining area created a cozy yet busy atmosphere.
The smell of freshly cooked food filled the air, mingling with the scent of cleaning supplies.
The floor was slick with spilled drinks, making it difficult to walk.
The noise from the kitchen echoed through the restaurant, adding to the chaos.
The tables were neatly arranged, but the mess under table twenty-two stood out.
The cool air from the kitchen contrasted with the warmth of the dining area.
7. 高级替换词
场景 常见词 高级替换词
紧张 nervous anxious, uneasy
内疚 guilty remorseful, ashamed
反思 reflect ponder, contemplate
成长 grow mature, develop
忙碌 busy hectic, bustling
8. 高中语法现象与地道搭配
语法现象
现在分词作状语：
原文： “My hands, (being) slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers.”
分析： “slippery with bubbles” 是现在分词短语，修饰 “hands”。
宾语从句：
原文： “He said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.”
分析： “something about rags” 是宾语从句，省略了引导词 “that”。
地道搭配
let it slip：
词意： 让某物滑落。
例句： “She let the secret slip during the conversation.”
近义词： drop, lose
反义词： hold, grasp
storm off：
词意： 怒气冲冲地离开。
例句： “He stormed off after the argument.”
近义词： march off, leave angrily
反义词： stay, remain
take care of：
词意： 处理，照顾。
例句： “Can you take care of this issue for me ”
近义词： handle, manage
反义词： neglect, ignore
rush into：
词意： 匆忙进入。
例句： “She rushed into the room, out of breath.”
近义词： hurry into, dash into
反义词： stroll into, walk slowly
reflect on：
词意： 反思。
例句： “He took a moment to reflect on his actions.”
近义词： ponder, contemplate
反义词： ignore, disregard
Possible Versions
Version 1
Paragraph 1: I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
His arms were crossed, and his expression was unreadable(人物神态描写). My heart skipped a beat(紧张心理描写) as I clutched the dry rags tightly(状从), hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he wouldn’t notice my earlier mistake(宾从). “What are you doing ” he asked, his voice low but firm(独立主格反应状态). I stammered, “I… I needed more rags to clean the spill.” He nodded slightly, his eyes narrowing(独立主格做神态说明) as if assessing my response(状从省略). “Hurry up,” he finally said, stepping aside(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Relieved(adj单独使用做主语补语或状语), I dashed back to the table, my hands trembling(独立主格做神态说明) as I began to soak up the beer with the fresh rags(状从). The restaurant buzzed around me(环境描写), but all I could focus on(定从) was the task at hand.
Paragraph 2: After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
“Check every detail,” he had said. I realized that my haste had caused the problem, and I vowed to be more careful in the future(宾从). As I stood up(状从), wiping my hands on my apron(现在分词做伴随动作), I noticed Aaron watching me from a distance. This time, his expression was softer, almost approving(现在分词短语做伴随动作)(情绪描写). I felt a sense of accomplishment(心理描写), knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I had handled the situation despite the initial panic(宾从). The rest of the shift passed smoothly, and by the end of the night, I felt more confident in my abilities(心理刻画). This experience taught me the importance of attention to detail and the value of staying calm under pressure(主旨升华).
加分点与替换词：
语法加分点：过去进行时（was standing）、条件句（if assessing）、动词不定式（to clean）。
替换词：unreadable → inscrutable, stammered → faltered, relieved → eased.
情绪描写：heart skipped a beat, trembling, sense of accomplishment.
动作描写：clutched tightly, dashed back, wiping hands.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. His arms were crossed(神态描写), and his expression was unreadable(神态描写). My heart skipped a beat(心理描写) as I clutched the rags tightly(状从), unsure of what to say(adj做补语+宾从). “Where do you think you’re going ” he asked, his voice low but firm. I stammered, “I—I needed more rags to clean up the mess.” He nodded slightly, his eyes narrowing(独立主格刻画人物神态) as if assessing my sincerity(状从省略形式). “Good,” he said finally, stepping aside(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “But next time, think ahead. We don’t have time for mistakes in this kitchen.” His words stung(很好的句子), but I knew he was right(宾从). I hurried back to the table, determined to prove myself.(adj短语做主语补语)
Paragraph 2: After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.The kitchen was quieter now, the rush of the dinner service fading into a steady hum(独立主格，环境描写). As I wiped down the last table(状从), I realized that this job was more than just washing dishes and cleaning spills(宾从). It was about attention to detail, about taking responsibility for my actions.(递进句式，提炼主题) Aaron’s harshness wasn’t just about the mess; it was about teaching me to be better(递进句式). I felt a newfound respect for him and for the work we did(定从)(心理刻画). This wasn’t just a part-time job; it was a lesson in diligence and accountability(递进句式). I knew I still had a lot to learn(宾从), but I was ready to face the challenges ahead.
第二节 （满分25分）
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “What’s up” he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me(独立主格). Feeling the weight of my mistake(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I stammered nervously, “I need dry rags...to...clean...” Upon hearing this(一...就...), Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail(虚拟语气),” he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice(同位语做补语). “This job isn’t just about reacting; it’s also about being careful(递进句式). Now, go clean that up!” Avoiding his gaze(动作反应心理), I dashed towards table twenty-two(对原文的衔接). With an ample supply of rags(状语), I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping(并列，现在分词短语做伴随动作).
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work(虚拟语气). Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作反应心理), I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron’s words in mind(现在分词短语做伴随动作). With very dish washed and every table cleared(状语，过去分词短语做后置定语), I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job(递进句式升华主题), preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence(现在分词短语做伴随动作).

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