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I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木丛). Sadly, the lady told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
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Once home we gently cleaned him up.
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文章大意
1950 年，作者 8 岁时全家从澳大利亚的图文巴搬去英国，因母亲要在伦敦接受罕见病治疗。出发前，父亲把心爱的 5 岁红色牧牛犬 Spider 交给朋友 Sandy 照顾。六周后，Sandy 来信告知 Spider 在他们乘船离开两周后跑丢了。尽管多方寻找，一直无果。两年后全家回到澳大利亚，父亲立刻开始寻找 Spider。八个月后的一个寒冷冬日，父亲接到 375 公里外金金镇一位老妇人的电话，说有只很老的黄狗来吃食已有几周。全家立刻前往，可惜到达时老妇人说狗已经几天没来了。父亲吹起为 Spider 特制的口哨。
故事山分析
开端：全家因母亲治病搬去英国，Spider 被托付给朋友。
发展：Spider 跑丢，多方寻找无果。
高潮：全家回国后父亲继续寻找，接到老妇人电话前往却得知狗已几天未出现，父亲吹口哨。
结局（待续写）：期待小狗 Spider 出现，与家人团聚。
五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应
“Spider, who was loved by us all”—— 回应：续写中家人对 Spider 的关爱体现在找到它后的精心照顾，如为它清理、陪伴它恢复。
“Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many ‘sightings’, the dog was never found.”—— 回应：暗示小狗一直在流浪寻找主人，续写中可体现小狗历经艰难最终找到主人。
“My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation.”—— 回应：找到小狗时它可能又瘦又虚弱，体现父亲之前担忧的合理性。
“One cold winter’s Saturday morning”—— 回应：可描述小狗在寒冷环境下的状态，如瑟瑟发抖，更凸显找到它后的温暖。
“He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.”—— 回应：续写中小狗听到口哨声有反应，如从灌木丛中跑出来。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：重点描写小狗听到口哨声后的反应，从灌木丛中出现的样子，如身体状况、动作等，以及家人看到小狗时的激动表现。
第二段：描述带小狗回家后的情景，如为它清理、喂食，小狗逐渐恢复精神，家人与小狗相处的温馨画面，体现团聚的喜悦。
情感线（150 字）
开始时家人因可能找不到 Spider 而失落、担忧。当听到灌木丛中的声音，希望瞬间燃起。看到 Spider 出现，激动与喜悦涌上心头。带它回家后，满心都是对它的心疼与关爱，在照顾过程中，家庭的温暖和对 Spider 失而复得的珍惜之情愈发浓烈，最终洋溢着幸福与满足。
故事线（6 条）
小狗听到口哨声从灌木丛中出现。
家人看到小狗，父亲冲过去抱住它。
家人发现小狗的身体状况很差。
带小狗回家，为它清理身体。
给小狗喂食，小狗逐渐恢复精神。
小狗与家人重新建立亲密关系，快乐生活。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This reunion of the dog and our family shows that the power of love and loyalty can overcome any distance and hardship.（小狗与我们家庭的团聚表明，爱与忠诚的力量能够战胜任何距离和艰难。）
The long - awaited return of Spider reminds us that hope never fades, no matter how desperate the situation may seem.（Spider 的迟迟归来提醒我们，无论情况看起来多么绝望，希望永不消逝。）
Through this experience, we understand that the bonds between humans and animals are deep - rooted and can withstand the test of time.（通过这次经历，我们明白人类与动物之间的纽带是根深蒂固的，能够经受住时间的考验。）
Spider's journey back home is a beautiful story of perseverance and the unbreakable connection between family members, even if one of them is a pet.（Spider 回家的旅程是一个关于坚持不懈以及家庭成员之间牢不可破联系的美好故事，即使其中一员是宠物。）
The reunion of Spider and our family warms our hearts and teaches us the value of never giving up on those we love.（Spider 与我们家庭的团聚温暖了我们的心，教会我们永远不要放弃我们所爱的人的价值。）
写作示范
范文一
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. A skinny, dirty figure emerged slowly. It was Spider! His fur was matted, and his body was shaking, but as soon as he saw my father, his tail began to wag feebly. My father rushed towards him, tears streaming down his face. He knelt down and opened his arms wide. Spider limped into his embrace, whining softly. We were all overjoyed, hugging each other and crying with happiness.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We filled a tub with warm water and carefully washed away the dirt. Father fed him small amounts of soft food, and Spider gobbled it up hungrily. Over the next few days, Spider regained his strength. He followed my father everywhere, and our home was filled with his cheerful barks again. This reunion was a true miracle, a testament to the unbreakable bond between us and our beloved pet.
范文二
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. A weak and ragged - looking Spider stumbled out. His eyes lit up when he heard the whistle and saw my father. He tried to run but his legs were too weak. My mother and I rushed to him, gently lifting him up. My father's hands trembled as he stroked Spider's head. We could see the scars of his long journey on his body.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We used a soft brush to untangle his matted fur and applied ointment to his wounds. Spider ate the food we offered with gusto. Day by day, he grew stronger. He played with us in the yard, and the love that had been missing for so long was back in our home. This experience taught us that love and patience can bring back what seems lost forever.
【答案】Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My father’s eyes lit up immediately. We all looked in the direction of the sound and saw a yellow dog emerge from the bush. It was Spider! He ran towards my father, wagging his tail excitedly. My father kneeled down and hugged him tightly, tears streaming down his face. It was a heartwarming reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. He was thin and tired, but still recognized us. We gave him a warm bath and fed him a delicious meal. Spider lay on the floor, looking happy and content. My father sat beside him, stroking his fur and telling him how much he had missed him. It was as if nothing had changed between them. From then on, Spider became a part of our family again, bringing us endless joy and companionship.

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