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I’m not going to say storms are good, because I know what they’ve stolen from people. But my story is of a storm that gave me more than I’d thought to ask for.
The tornado(龙卷风)blew through on a Sunday. We were visiting grandparents in Raleigh then unaware that seventy miles away the big tree in our front yard was tearing through our roof and destroying the kitchen.
When we returned, we saw Rosica’s father and brothers in our yard, gathering debris(碎片)and using a chain saw to cut the thickest branches of the fallen tree, though we barely knew them then. They were covered in sweat and dirt.
My mom didn’t seem to notice how happy they were to help us because the first thing she said was “Oh, you don’t need to be doing all that work!” Mr. Flores laughed.“Claro! Of course, we don’t. But more importantly, you cannot sleep in that house e and speak to my wife. She’ll help you figure out what to do.” My mom doesn’t usually let people tell her what to do, but she sighed(叹气)deeply as she took in the sight of our home in the failing light, reached for my hand, and followed our neighbor to their house.
The Flores family lived across the street. Their home was the same size as ours but housed three generations. Rosica was my age. I knew her name and face, but since she was new to our school, and had a different teacher than I did, we had never spoken. It was she who answered the door.“Mama is changing the sheets on the bed for you, and there’s some lemon cheesecake on the table.”
“Please don’t trouble yourself. I think I’d call a hotel and see about a room,” my mom said, more uneasy than usual. Mrs. Flores came down the stairs and smiled at us warmly, “Y our room is ready. I know it’s more encouraged to give than receive, but allow yourself to receive a place to stay, and allow us the chance to give you something you need!”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began.
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文章大意
文章讲述了作者一家在外地时，家中遭遇龙卷风袭击，大树砸穿屋顶并毁坏厨房。回家后，虽不太熟悉的邻居弗洛雷斯一家主动帮忙清理废墟，还热情邀请作者一家到他们家居住。作者妈妈起初有些犹豫，但最终还是接受了邻居的好意。弗洛雷斯一家的热情和善良让作者一家在困境中感受到温暖。
故事山分析
开端：作者一家外出时，家中遭遇龙卷风破坏。
发展：回家后看到邻居弗洛雷斯一家帮忙清理，还被邀请到邻居家居住，作者妈妈从犹豫到接受。
高潮（可在续写中体现）：作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住期间发生的温暖故事。
结局（可在续写中体现）：形成新的传统，邻里关系更加亲密。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：作者与罗西卡虽同校但从未交谈。回应：在居住期间，两人逐渐熟悉，成为朋友，一起玩耍、交流。
伏笔：弗洛雷斯一家热情邀请作者一家。回应：续写中，弗洛雷斯一家在生活各方面照顾作者一家，让他们感受到家的温暖。
伏笔：作者妈妈的犹豫。回应：在居住过程中，妈妈逐渐放下顾虑，与弗洛雷斯一家相处融洽，对他们的帮助十分感激。
伏笔：弗洛雷斯家房子不大却住三代人。回应：体现出他们虽然空间有限，但依然慷慨地接纳作者一家，突出善良品质。
伏笔：罗西卡说妈妈在换床单和准备蛋糕。回应：后续可以体现弗洛雷斯一家在生活细节上的照顾，比如准备适合作者口味的饭菜等。
续写要点
第一段：详细描述在弗洛雷斯家居住的两周里的生活细节，如两家人一起吃饭、聊天，作者和罗西卡增进友谊等。
第二段：着重讲述新传统的具体内容，比如定期家庭聚会、互相帮忙等，以及这个传统对邻里关系的积极影响。
情感线
起初，作者一家因房屋受损而陷入困境，心情低落、焦虑。邻居弗洛雷斯一家的热情帮助，让作者一家感受到温暖，作者妈妈从犹豫到接受，体现出对邻居善意的信任。在居住期间，两家人情感不断升温，作者和罗西卡成为朋友，两家人像亲人一样相处。新传统的形成，更是将这种邻里间的温暖和情谊延续下去，成为彼此生活中重要的情感支撑。
故事线
作者一家房屋受损，邻居帮忙清理并邀请居住。
作者一家在弗洛雷斯家居住，感受温暖照顾。
作者与罗西卡从陌生到熟悉，成为好朋友。
两家人相处融洽，关系越来越亲密。
形成新的传统，邻里间定期互动。
邻里关系因这次经历变得更加深厚，温暖延续。
主旨升华句
This experience taught us that in the face of difficulties, the kindness and support of neighbors can turn a disaster into a chance for building deeper connections.
The warmth we received from the Flores family not only helped us through a tough time but also became a precious memory that would always remind us of the power of human kindness.
Our story shows that a simple act of generosity can create a beautiful bond between neighbors and make our community a more harmonious and loving place.
The friendship and care that grew during our stay at the Flores' home prove that even in the most unexpected situations, true kindness can bloom and bring light to our lives.
This encounter with the Flores family taught us that the value of a community lies not in its material wealth but in the love and support its members offer to one another.
写作示范一
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. Each day was filled with warmth and care. In the evenings, we would all gather around the dinner table. The Flores family shared their stories, making us laugh with their funny anecdotes. Rosica and I spent hours together, doing homework and exploring the neighborhood. She introduced me to her favorite spots, and we formed a deep friendship. My mom, at first reserved, gradually opened up. She helped Mrs. Flores in the kitchen, and they chatted like old friends.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every month, our two families would have a potluck dinner. We would take turns hosting at each other's houses. These gatherings were filled with delicious food, laughter, and shared experiences. We would talk about our lives, dreams, and challenges. The storm that once brought destruction had now become the catalyst for a lasting bond between our families, showing us the true meaning of community and neighborly love.
写作示范二
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Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. Mrs. Flores made sure we had everything we needed. She even adjusted the menu to suit our tastes. During the days, while my mom was busy dealing with insurance matters, I was never alone. Rosica and I played board games, watched movies, and shared secrets. Her grandparents would tell us stories about their youth, and we listened intently, fascinated by their experiences. The small house was filled with the sound of joy and togetherness.
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Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. Every holiday, we would decorate our houses together. In spring, we planted flowers in the front yards. During Christmas, we would put up lights and exchange handmade gifts. These activities not only strengthened the bond between our families but also inspired other neighbors to be more friendly. The storm, instead of tearing us apart, had brought our community closer, and we all cherished the new - found warmth and connection.
【答案】 Our two-week stay at Flores’s home started. In the beginning, my mom was very uneasy and thought that living here could be a trouble for the family. She would help them with the housework as much as possible. The family were very friendly to us. They always said to us that, “Be at home!” They not only prepared everything we needed for us, but also cooked us delicious food, trying their best to make us feel at home. Gradually, we became familiar with each other just like a family. With Thanksgiving Day coming, our house was still under repair, which meant that we had to celebrate the festival with the family.
Following our stay in their home, a beautiful tradition began. On Thanksgiving Day, we together made a big dinner. My mom roasted the turkey which was popular with everyone. During the dinner, my mom extended her thanks to the family. “Thank you! I really don’t know what to say, but really thank you!” “Friends need no thanks!” said Mrs. Flores. We all laughed and enjoyed the dinner with joy and gratitude.

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