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湖北省高中名校联盟 2025 届高三第三次联合测评英语试题
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ally and I first met at a local riding club, where we were both eager beginners, learning the basics of horseback riding. Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields. We spent countless hours together, talking about everything under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively.
Ally was very passionate about riding, and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her. However, being someone who set high standards for myself and those I cared about, I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills, even if it meant being a bit demanding.
One sunny afternoon, during a particularly challenging riding exercise, I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence.
“That's too risky, " Ally protested, biting her lips in concern. “I'm not ready for that yet. "
"Come on, Ally," I urged, tapping my foot impatiently. "You've got to push yourself if you want to get better. "
Our voices rose, and soon we were locked in a heated discussion, and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless. Finally, we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that. But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us.
One evening after that argument, as I was helping my parents close up the store, my phone rang. It was Ally. I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement.
“Hey," she began, her voice full of hope. “I was thinking we could try that technique again. I feel like I'm ready now. "
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me. "I don't think that's a good idea,' I replied, my tone firm.
She paused, and I could almost hear her disappointment. “Okay," she said softly. “I'll see you then. "
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother.
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.
湖北省高中名校联盟 2025 届高三第三次联合测评英语试题
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ally and I first met at a local riding club, where we were both eager beginners(定从), learning the basics of horseback riding(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields(状从). We spent countless hours together, talking about everything(现在分词做伴随动作) under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively(状从).
Ally was very passionate about riding, and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her. However, being someone(现在分词做伴随动作) who set high standards for myself and those(定从) I cared about(定从), I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills, even if it meant being a bit demanding(状从).
One sunny afternoon, during a particularly challenging riding exercise(介短状语), I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence(宾从).
“That's too risky, " Ally protested, biting her lips in concern(现在分词短语做伴随动作，描写心情). “I'm not ready for that yet. "
"Come on, Ally," I urged, tapping my foot impatiently.(现在分词短语做伴随动作，描写心情) "You've got to push yourself if you want to get better(状从). "
Our voices rose(状态描写), and soon we were locked in a heated discussion, and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless(拟人，描写马). Finally, we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that(宾从). But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us(事件的描述，产生隔阂).
One evening after that argument, as I was helping my parents close up the store(状从), my phone rang. It was Ally. I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement(独立主格，心情描写).
“Hey," she began, her voice full of hope(独立主格，心情描写). “I was thinking we could try that technique again(宾从). I feel like I'm ready now(宾从). "
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me(状从). "I don't think that's a good idea(宾从),' I replied, my tone firm.(独立主格，描写声音)
She paused, and I could almost hear her disappointment. “Okay," she said softly. “I'll see you then. "
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother.
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.
1. 续写分类与思路分析
分类 事故与成长型（Accident and Growth）
续写思路 1. 事故发生（Ally受伤）→ 2. 内心冲突（愧疚、自责）→ 3. 成长（理解、尊重）
布局 第一段：接到电话得知Ally受伤；第二段：医院探望及心理成长
续写要点 承接原文情绪、细腻心理描写、高级词汇运用
2. 故事山模式分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 主人公从固执到理解，Ally从胆怯到勇敢 "I'm not ready for that yet."
情感层次 争执 → 震惊 → 愧疚 → 成长 "Her voice full of hope."
关键情节点 争吵 → 事故 → 和解 "Our voices rose…"
语言特色 高级词汇、心理描写、情境铺垫 "I shook my head…"
关键词分析 accident, regret, friendship, understanding "I don't think that's a good idea."
心理描写 主人公的愧疚、Ally的勇敢 "I picked up the phone, my heart still heavy."
动作描写 骑马、摔倒、医院探望 "Grabbing my coat, I rushed out."
环境描写 马场的紧张、医院的沉静 "Even our horses sensed the tension."
隐含主题 友谊的成长与尊重 "Next time, we ride at your pace."
情感转折 从固执到理解，从紧张到释然 "Her voice trembling, she admitted the truth."
空间转换 马场 → 家 → 医院 "I rushed to the hospital."
时间过渡 争执后的夜晚 → 第二天下午 "One evening… The next afternoon…"
动作、心理、环境描写的推荐英文例句：
动作描写：
She bit her lip nervously, her eyes darting around the room.
He tapped his foot impatiently, his arms crossed tightly over his chest.
She reached out and gently squeezed my hand, her touch warm and reassuring.
He rushed out the door, his heart pounding in his chest.
She shook her head firmly, her voice steady despite the tension.
He paused, taking a deep breath before continuing.
She leaned back in her chair, her expression thoughtful.
He clenched his fists, trying to control his rising frustration.
心理描写：
A wave of guilt washed over me, making it hard to breathe.
My heart sank as I realized the gravity of the situation.
I felt a renewed sense of hope, like a light breaking through the darkness.
Her words lingered in my mind, stirring up a mix of emotions.
I couldn’t shake the feeling of regret, no matter how hard I tried.
A sense of relief flooded through me, easing the tension in my shoulders.
My mind raced with worry, each thought more frantic than the last.
I felt a deep sense of gratitude, knowing she had forgiven me.
环境描写：
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow over the fields.
The hospital room was quiet, save for the faint beeping of machines.
The wind rustled through the trees, creating a soothing, rhythmic sound.
The air was thick with tension, making it hard to breathe.
The open fields stretched out before us, endless and inviting.
The room felt cold and sterile, adding to my unease.
The horses grazed peacefully in the distance, their movements calm and unhurried.
The sky was overcast, matching the somber mood of the day.
常见单词的高级替换词：
Happy → Elated, Jubilant, Content, Ecstatic, Thrilled
场景：描述人物情绪时使用，如“She was elated after winning the competition.”
Sad → Melancholic, Sorrowful, Despondent, Mournful, Heartbroken
场景：描述人物情绪时使用，如“He felt a deep sense of sorrow after the loss.”
Angry → Furious, Livid, Incensed, Outraged, Irate
场景：描述人物情绪时使用，如“She was furious when she found out the truth.”
Tired → Exhausted, Weary, Fatigued, Drained, Spent
场景：描述人物状态时使用，如“After the long journey, he was completely exhausted.”
Beautiful → Gorgeous, Stunning, Breathtaking, Radiant, Exquisite
场景：描述景色或人物外貌时使用，如“The sunset was absolutely breathtaking.”
高中语法现象及地道搭配分析：
定语从句：
例句: "Ally, who was very passionate about riding, always pushed herself to improve."
分析: 使用who引导的定语从句，修饰Ally，增加了句子的复杂性和信息量。
现在分词作状语：
例句: "She looked up at me, her face pale but still kind."
分析: 使用现在分词结构作伴随状语，描述动作的同时增加了细节。
虚拟语气：
例句: "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard."
分析: 使用shouldn’t have done表示对过去行为的后悔，是虚拟语气的一种常见用法。
倒装句：
例句: "Not only did she fall, but she also hurt her leg."
分析: 使用倒装句强调动作的先后顺序，增加了句子的表现力。
并列句：
例句: "I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us."
分析: 使用并列句连接两个动作，使句子更加流畅自然。
生词短语积累：
Passionate (adj.) - 热情的，充满激情的
近义词: Enthusiastic, Ardent
反义词: Indifferent, Apathetic
例句: She was passionate about her work, always putting in extra effort.
例句: His passionate speech inspired everyone in the room.
Tension (n.) - 紧张，张力
近义词: Stress, Strain
反义词: Relaxation, Ease
例句: The tension in the room was palpable as they waited for the results.
例句: She tried to ease the tension by cracking a joke.
Regret (n.) - 后悔，遗憾
近义词: Remorse, Sorrow
反义词: Satisfaction, Contentment
例句: He felt a deep sense of regret after losing his temper.
例句: She expressed regret for not taking the opportunity when she had the chance.
Reassuring (adj.) - 令人安心的，安慰的
近义词: Comforting, Soothing
反义词: Disturbing, Unsettling
例句: His reassuring smile made her feel at ease.
例句: The doctor’s reassuring words helped calm her nerves.
Somber (adj.) - 阴沉的，忧郁的
近义词: Gloomy, Melancholic
反义词: Cheerful, Bright
例句: The somber mood of the funeral was overwhelming.
例句: The sky was somber, reflecting the sadness of the day.
Possible Answers
Version 1
The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally’s mother. Her voice was trembling(声音描写，反应情绪) as she told me(状从) that Ally had been in an accident while riding(状从省略，she was). “She tried that technique you mentioned,” she said quietly. “She fell and broke her leg.” On hearing this(on doing sth 一...就...), I felt a wave of guilt washing over me(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “I’m so sorry to hear that,” I stammered, my voice cracking(独立主格描写情绪). “I never meant for her to get hurt.” I realized I should have been more supportive and patient, understanding(现在分词做伴随动作) that everyone has their own pace in learning. This realization weighed heavily on me(心理描写), and I knew I needed to make up for it.
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg. As I sat beside her(状从), I apologized sincerely for my behavior. “I’m so sorry, Ally,” I said, tears welling up in my eyes.(独立主格) “I should never have pushed you so hard(虚拟语气). Your safety is more important than any riding achievement.” Ally smiled weakly, forgiving me with a reassuring look(现在分词做伴随动作). We chatted joyfully, talking about the importance of listening to each other and respecting our limits(现在分词短语做伴随动作). From that moment, I promised to be a better friend, one who supports and encourages her without being overly demanding(定从). Our friendship, though tested(状语从句压缩，though it was tested), became stronger through mutual understanding and forgiveness.
Version 2：
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice trembled(声音描写反应情绪) as she spoke(状从), "Ally had an accident during her riding practice. She tried that technique you two discussed, and... she fell. She’s at the hospital now." My heart sank(心理描写), and a wave of guilt washed over me(心理描写). I couldn’t believe she had attempted it alone. I had been so stubborn, so insistent, and now Ally was paying the price. I quickly grabbed my jacket and rushed out the door, my mind racing with worry and regret(心理描写).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast(石膏) on her leg.She looked up at me with a weak smile, her face pale but still kind.(独立主格描写表情) "I guess I wasn’t as ready as I thought(状从)," she said softly. I sat down beside her, my throat tight with emotion.(情绪描写) "I’m so sorry, Ally," I whispered. "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard(虚拟语气，反映后悔的情绪)." She reached out and squeezed my hand. "It’s okay," she replied. "I wanted to prove to myself that I could do it(宾从后置). But maybe next time, we’ll take it slower, together." I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us(现在分词短语做伴随动作). From that day on, I promised myself to be more patient and supportive, not just with Ally, but with everyone I cared about.
Versio 3
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was trembling(声音描写反应情绪), and I could sense the urgency in her tone. "Ally had an accident while practicing that technique(状从压缩) you two talked about," she said, her words heavy with worry(独立主格反应情绪). My heart sank(情绪描写), and a wave of guilt washed over me(心理描写). I had been so insistent, so focused on pushing her to improve, that I hadn’t considered the risks. I quickly grabbed my jacket and rushed out the door, my mind racing(独立主格) with thoughts of what could have happened(with复合结构+宾从). The ride to the hospital felt like an eternity, each second filled with regret and fear(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She looked up at me with a weak smile, her face pale but still kind(独立主格，描写状态). "I guess I wasn’t as ready as I thought(状从)," she said softly, her voice tinged with both pain and acceptance(独立主格 描写情绪). I sat down beside her, my throat tight with emotion(独立主格描写情绪). "I’m so sorry, Ally," I whispered, my voice barely audible(独立主格描写状态). "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard(虚拟语气，表示后悔)." She reached out and gently squeezed my hand, her touch warm and reassuring(独立主格补充信息). "It’s okay," she replied. "I wanted to prove to myself that I could do it(宾从后置). But maybe next time, we’ll take it slower, together." I nodded, feeling(现在分词短语做伴随动作) a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us.
Version 4
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was filled with concern(描写情绪) as she explained(状从) that Ally had attempted the technique we had argued about and had fallen during practice. My heart raced(描写心理), and I felt a knot tighten in my stomach(描写心理). I had been so stubborn, so focused on proving my point, that I hadn’t considered how my words might push her to take unnecessary risks(结果状语从句). Without hesitation, I grabbed my keys and rushed to the hospital, my mind filled with worry and regret(独立主格补充描写心情). The drive felt endless, each mile amplifying my guilt.(独立主格补充描写心理)
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She was lying in bed, her leg propped up(独立主格描写状态), and her face lit up with a faint smile when she saw me(状从). "I guess I overestimated myself," she said, her voice tinged with both humor and pain(独立主格补充描写信息). I sat down beside her, my heart heavy with remorse(独立主格，补充描写心情). "I’m really sorry, Ally," I said, my voice trembling(独立主格，补充描写心情). "I shouldn’t have pressured you like that.(虚拟语气，表达悔恨)" She shook her head gently. "It’s not your fault," she replied. "I wanted to try it, but I realize now that I need to take things at my own pace." Her words brought a sense of relief, and I promised myself to be more patient and supportive in the future.
Version 5
Paragraph 1: The next afternoon, I received a call from Ally's mother. Her voice was shaky(神态描写), and she explained that Ally had been injured while attempting the technique we had discussed. My heart dropped,(失落的心理描写) and I felt a cold wave of guilt wash over me(纠结，挫败的心理描写). I had been so focused on pushing her to improve that I hadn’t stopped to think about the dangers(目的状从). I immediately left everything and rushed to the hospital, my mind filled with fear and regret.(独立主格补充描写人物) The drive felt like a blur, each moment weighed down by the thought of what could have been avoided(独立主格+宾从,用虚拟语气表达悔恨).
Paragraph 2: I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.
She was sitting up in bed, her face pale but her eyes still bright(独立主格，描写人物状态). "I guess I learned the hard way," she said with a small laugh, though I could see the pain behind her smile(让步状从). I sat down beside her, my heart aching with remorse(独立主格补充描写心理). "I’m so sorry, Ally," I said, my voice filled with regret.(独立主格补充描写心理) "I shouldn’t have pushed you like that(虚拟语气，刻画悔恨)." She reached out and patted my hand gently. "It’s okay," she said. "I wanted to try it, but I realize now that I need to listen to my own limits." Her forgiveness brought a sense of relief, and I vowed to be more understanding and supportive in the future.
语法加分点及替换词：
定语从句：
例句: "Ally, who was always eager to improve, had taken my words to heart."
替换词: who → that, whom
近义词: eager → enthusiastic, keen
现在分词作状语：
例句: "She looked up at me, her face pale but still kind."
替换词: pale → ashen, pallid
近义词: kind → gentle, compassionate
虚拟语气：
例句: "I shouldn’t have pushed you so hard."
替换词: shouldn’t have → ought not to have
近义词: pushed → pressured, urged
倒装句：
例句: "Not only did she fall, but she also hurt her leg."
替换词: not only → not just
近义词: hurt → injured, harmed
并列句：
例句: "I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of friendship and understanding between us."
替换词: nodded → agreed, acknowledged
近义词: renewed → restored, revived
情绪描写亮点词汇：
Guilt (n.) - 内疚
替换词: Remorse, Regret
例句: A wave of guilt washed over me as I realized my mistake.
Relief (n.) - 宽慰
替换词: Comfort, Solace
例句: Her forgiveness brought a sense of relief to my troubled heart.
Worry (n.) - 担忧
替换词: Anxiety, Concern
例句: My mind was filled with worry as I rushed to the hospital.
Regret (n.) - 后悔
替换词: Sorrow, Remorse
例句: I felt a deep sense of regret for pushing her too hard.
动作描写亮点词汇：
Rushed (v.) - 冲
替换词: Hurried, Dashed
例句: I rushed to the hospital, my heart pounding in my chest.
Squeezed (v.) - 紧握
替换词: Grasped, Clutched
例句: She squeezed my hand gently, her touch warm and reassuring.
Nodded (v.) - 点头
替换词: Agreed, Acknowledged
例句: I nodded, feeling a renewed sense of understanding.
Paused (v.) - 停顿
替换词: Hesitated, Stopped
例句: She paused, taking a deep breath before continuing.

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