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Having got married a few years earlier, my husband and I now had a large gold-rimmed (镶金的) china dinner service and a sizable collection of crystal glasses — all of them neatly packed away in tissue paper and bubble wrap, not serving their essential purpose for a single time. We agreed that they should be saved for a special occasion.
We were waiting for the very occasion until my father was gone.
To organize his funeral, I went to my parents’ house. Soon I found myself wandering the house in search of my dad. As I opened the wardrobe (衣柜) door in my parents’ room, I was shocked to discover piles of sweaters, nearly all of which were still in their wrapping, never worn.
I knew those sweaters. Whenever I was stuck for an idea of what to buy my dad for his birthday or Christmas, I’d fall back on one of two items that always seemed to go down well; a sweater or a bottle of whiskey. My dad had been a maker of sweaters for all his life. It felt only right and proper that he deserved some nice sweaters in his late years. My dad also claimed to enjoy a nice drop of whiskey. Over the years, he’d collect several bottles from clients and suppliers in the run-up to Christmas. So, when illness brought his career to a premature end, it seemed only natural that I became his regular whiskey supplier.
The trouble was, I never saw him wearing any of those sweaters, and I never saw him enjoying a whiskey. I often asked him why. His answer was always the same, “I’ m saving them for a special occasion.”
I returned downstairs and went to what was known in the family as “Dad’s Cupboard” and there was every bottle of whiskey I’d ever bought him. All unopened.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)开头已给出。
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me.
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My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table.
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关于父亲 “特殊场合” 的故事续写
一、续写要点（两段）
第一段
详细描述主角带着父亲遗物离开父母家时的复杂心情，可能会有对父亲的思念，也有对过去行为的反思。
主角在回家途中，内心不断坚定不再为 “特殊场合” 而保留物品的想法，思考如何将这个理念融入自己的生活。
到家前，主角可能会回忆与父亲相处的点滴，进一步强化改变的决心。
第二段
着重描写丈夫看到遗物时的反应细节，除了惊讶，可能还有好奇和对主角情绪的关切。
讲述主角与丈夫深入交流后，两人共同决定改变生活方式的具体计划，如定期举办家庭聚餐使用精美餐具等。
阐述在后续生活中，这种改变给他们带来的积极影响，以及他们如何将这种生活态度传递给身边的人。
二、情感线（150 字）
起初，主角面对父亲遗物，悲伤与懊悔交织，沉浸在失去父亲的痛苦和对父亲未享受礼物的遗憾中。在回家路上，主角从回忆里汲取力量，逐渐坚定改变生活方式的信念。回到家与丈夫分享后，得到丈夫支持，两人的情感更加紧密，共同对新生活充满期待。在后续实践中，他们因这种改变收获满足与快乐，情感也愈发深厚，同时也希望将这份积极传递出去。
三、故事线（6 条）
主角带着父亲的毛衣和威士忌离开家，途中思绪万千，回忆起与父亲的过往种种。
主角到家后，丈夫看到桌上物品，两人展开深入交谈，主角倾诉内心想法。
主角和丈夫决定每周举办一次家庭聚餐，使用金镶边瓷器和水晶杯，开启新的生活方式。
在一次家庭聚餐中，邀请了亲朋好友，大家对他们的改变表示好奇，主角分享父亲的故事。
主角和丈夫将部分毛衣捐赠给慈善机构，看到受助者的笑容，内心充满温暖。
主角和丈夫的生活态度影响了身边人，朋友们也开始重新审视自己的生活，珍惜当下。
四、主旨升华句 5 句英文
Life is a precious gift, and every moment is a special occasion waiting to be cherished.
生命是一份珍贵的礼物，每一刻都是一个值得珍惜的特殊时刻。
We should not let our possessions gather dust, but rather use them to create beautiful memories every day.
我们不应让我们的物品积满灰尘，而应每天用它们来创造美好的回忆。
The story of my father taught me that true happiness lies in the simple pleasures of life, not in waiting for some distant perfect moment.
我父亲的故事告诉我，真正的幸福在于生活中的简单快乐，而不是等待某个遥远的完美时刻。
By embracing the present and making the most of what we have, we can turn ordinary days into extraordinary ones.
通过拥抱当下，充分利用我们所拥有的，我们可以把平凡的日子变成非凡的日子。
Let us not postpone our joy; instead, let us find reasons to celebrate and live life to the fullest every single day.
让我们不要推迟我们的快乐；相反，让我们每天都找到庆祝的理由，尽情地生活。
五、两篇写作示范
示范一
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. As I carried the sweaters and whiskey out of my parents' house, memories of my dad flooded my mind. I remembered his kind smile and the way he always said he was saving these for a special occasion. In the car, I couldn't hold back my tears. I thought about how many precious moments he had missed. By the time I reached home, I was determined to make a change.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. I sat him down and poured my heart out. After listening, he nodded solemnly. We decided to start a new tradition. Every Sunday, we'd have a family dinner using our fancy china and crystal glasses. We opened a bottle of whiskey and raised a toast to my dad. We also donated half of the sweaters to a local shelter. As the weeks passed, our home was filled with more laughter and warmth. We realized that life was too short to wait for special occasions.
示范二
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. With the boxes of sweaters and bottles of whiskey in my arms, I took one last look around my parents' house. The sadness of losing my dad was overwhelming, but so was the realization of how much he had missed. On the drive home, I kept thinking about all the times I could have urged him to enjoy these gifts. When I got home, I was ready to embrace a new way of life.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. I shared my father's story with him, my voice trembling. He immediately hugged me and said he was on board with any change I wanted to make. We planned a big dinner party for our friends. We used our gold - rimmed china and crystal glasses, and served the whiskey. During the party, we told everyone about my dad and our new philosophy. Some of our friends were inspired and decided to follow suit. We continued to donate the sweaters and, in the process, found a new sense of purpose. This experience taught us that every day could be a special occasion if we chose to make it so.
【答案】范文
A wave of mixed emotions swept over me. My fingers trembled as I traced the dust-covered whiskey labels, each representing a missed opportunity to share warmth with Dad. Suddenly, the china set stored in our attic flashed through my mind — those pristine plates imprisoned in bubble wrap, just like Dad’s untouched treasures. With determined steps, I began carefully unpacking every sweater, arranging them on Dad’s bed as colorful soldiers of remembrance. The whiskey bottles clinked gently as I carried them downstairs, their amber liquid finally catching afternoon sunlight through the window.
My husband was surprised to see those items all on the table. “Are we… using the special china tonight ” he asked, noticing our wedding crystal shining beside Dad’s whiskey collection. I poured two glasses, the golden liquid swirling like liquid sunset. “Every day with loved ones is the special occasion,” I whispered, clinking my glass against his. The crystal’s clear chime echoed through the house, mingling with the faint rustle of tissue paper being torn from plates that would finally host laughter instead of dust.

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