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No.3感谢信
一、考点综述
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、慰问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
二、典型示范
假定你是李津，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1.【感谢信结构以及实例说明】
【分析】
第一步:审题。
（1）体裁：感谢信
（2）要点：
1. 写邮件感谢经常帮助你学习英语的朋友；
2. 表示感谢；
3. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
4. 临别祝愿。
（3）人称：第一人称和第二人称
（4）时态：一般现在时。
第二步:列提纲 （内容结构、重点词组、句型）
（1）谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
（2）关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。
第三步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。
第四步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
Dear Alex,
（点明主题）Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
（说明感谢的原因）Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
（再次致谢）Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Jin
2.【感谢信常用词汇】
1. thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth.
向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good/ rapid progress in… 在…取得很大/飞速的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes by/with time going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12. pay a visit to 地点. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
3.【感谢信常用句型结构】
1. My true/sincere/ heartfelt gratitude is beyond any words/description. / No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。
2. We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
我们非常感激你为我们做的一切。
3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久会看到你。
5. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
6. I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
7. Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
8. I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮助。
10. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
11. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....
多亏了你的帮助，在...我取得了了飞速的进步。
12. Without/But for your help (If it were not for your help), I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
13. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我不胜感激。
14. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
4. 【增分佳句】
开头表达感谢之情并说明原因的常用语：
1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks/appreciation/gratitude to you for your kindness during my stay in London.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在伦敦逗留期间您的帮助。
2. I would like to express/convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your generous help.
我想要对你的慷慨帮助表达最诚挚的谢意。
3. On behalf of my whole family, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful gift.
我谨代表我们全家，对你赠送的精美礼物表达我最真诚的谢意。
4. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
6. It was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister./family member
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。It is adj./n. of/for sb. to do sth.
8. I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
10. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
11.I am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
12. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间细述事件经过或者详细介绍对方的帮助、帮助所起的作用、对礼物的喜爱等的常用语：
1. Thanks to your care and company, I had a wonderful time during the two-week holiday.
多亏了您的照顾和陪伴，我愉快地度过了两周的假期。
2. But for/Without your help/guidance/assistance, I wouldn't have made such rapid progress.
如果没有您的帮助/指导/协助，我就不可能进步这么快。
3. And much to my delight, my spoken English has greatly improved under your professional guidance.
而且令我非常高兴的是，我的英语口语水平在您的指导下大大提高了。
4. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to assist me in that snowstorm.
能在那场暴风雪中给予我帮助，您真好/善良/体贴
5. If it were not for your help, I wouldn't have won the prize.
如果没有你的帮助，我不可能得奖。
结尾再次表示感谢，欢迎来访等的常用语：
1. Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2. Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
6. I will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together.
我永远也忘不了您对我的帮助，以及我们一起度过的时光。
7. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.无法报答你给予我的帮助。
三、真题演练
(2021年天津第二次)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】
第一步:审题。
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家（感谢的原因），他母亲Nancy（感谢的对象）通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
（1）体裁：感谢信
（2）要点：
1. 表示感谢并问候；
2. 计划与家人一起做的事情；
3. 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
（3）人称：第一人称和第二人称
（4）时态：一般将来时为主。
第二步:列提纲 （内容结构、重点词组、句型）
（1）谋篇布局
首段，表示感谢并问候，中间段计划与家人一起做的事情，你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备；最后一段表达祝愿。
（2）关键词和句子
第三步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。
第四步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【范文1】
Dear Nancy,
How is everything going (with you) (问候) It’s really wonderful to hear from you./I’m really glad to hear from you. (写作背景) I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK./ I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to you and your family for taking care of me during my stay in the UK. (感谢)
Since I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are planning to travel to Beijing, where I want to see the flag raising. In addition, I want to pay a visit to Peking University to experience the academic atmosphere there. (假期计划)Besides, I have decided to major in computer/ to choose the computer major, which I believe will be useful/beneficial to the society and will help to prepare me for my future career.(所选专业) To get prepared for my study in university, I have consulted people engaged in this major and read a lot of relevant books. (为选专业所做的准备)
I will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together. (再次感谢)Best wishes to you and your family.(祝福)
Yours,
Li Jin
【范文2】
Dear Nancy,
How’s everything going It’s really wonderful to hear from you. I’d like to express my heartfelt thanks to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK.
Since I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing this holiday, where I want to see the flag raising.（非限制性定语从) In addition, I want to go to Tsinghua Campus, enjoying the elegant demeanor(风度）of the famous university (非谓语动词短语作状语). I have decided to choose the computer major, which I believe is of great use to society and will help me prepare for my future career(非限制性定语从句).I have consulted people engaged in this major and been to training institutions for consultation.
Thank you so much for your generous help. Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours,
Li Jin
四、巩固练习
假如你是李华，在美国做过一年交换生，现在刚刚回国。请你根据以下提示，给曾为你提供食宿的杰克逊夫妇写一封感谢信，内容主要包括：
1.表达感谢；
2.说明自己的英语已有很大提高；
3.代表父母表示谢意，并邀请对方有空来做客
注意：词数不少于100。
exchange student 交换生

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