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At age twenty-five, with a degree in social work, I hoped to change the world. Excited to be working with people in need, I possessed the idealistic attitude that anything was possible.
One evening, sitting in my one-bedroom apartment, I received a call from my aunt, saying that my ten-year-old cousin Mai a had been removed from her home and placed into a care center because she got divorced (离婚) and she couldn’t afford to raise her. I was living in Indiana, but she in Arizona. I tried to offer advice on the situation. I contacted the social worker in Arizona.
The social worker said that Mai a had been removed from her home and it was unlikely that she would be able to return. Mai a would likely remain in foster care unless she could move in with a family member. In particular, she needed to be in a home like mine without men. Hearing this, my heart jumped with emotions. Would it be possible for me, a graduate student, to raise a ten-year-old girl I had a heart-to-heart talk with my mother and decided to travel to Arizona together.
Upon arrival in Arizona, we met with the social worker, who took us to see Maia. By then, she had been moved to a foster home. She was living with a kind woman. She hugged us tightly and begged us to take her home with us. We attended a meeting with the social worker and the lawyers. With my family’s support, I decided to adopt her.
My mother and I said goodbye and left Mai a behind in Arizona while we returned home. It was a difficult, tearful goodbye. I took a semester off from school and took foster-parenting classes, got my certification, moved from my apartment into a two-bedroom rental house, and had the home inspected by social workers, all within several weeks’ time. I also went to relevant departments to have my adoption agreements signed and it was a tiresome process. Paperwork, interviews, home inspections and certifications took up most of my time.
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After everything was worked out, I returned to Arizona to collect Maia.
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Eventually we arrived at our new home.
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收养故事的续写
续写要点
第一段：详细描写 “我” 踏入寄养家庭接 Maia 时的场景，Maia 的动作、表情、话语要生动呈现，突出她的喜悦。刻画寄养母亲的神态与动作，体现其善良。描述去机场途中，Maia 对新家好奇的具体表现，如反复询问房间布置等，“我” 对新生活的忐忑与期待也需细致描绘。
第二段：着重展现 Maia 初到新家时的新奇探索，如对每个房间的独特反应，她对新家物品的触摸与惊叹。深入刻画 “我们” 在沙发上规划未来的对话细节，如讨论学校活动、周末计划等，以及 “我” 对未来与 Maia 相伴生活的坚定决心。
情感线（150 字）
起初，“我” 在收养手续办理过程中充满疲惫与期待。接 Maia 时，看到她的欣喜，“我” 的紧张与喜悦交织，Maia 则是纯粹的兴奋。在前往机场途中，Maia 的好奇与 “我” 的不安并存。到达新家，Maia 被新家吸引，惊叹不断，“我” 因能给她稳定住所而满心温暖。之后，在规划未来时，“我们” 都充满希望，“我” 更是坚定了陪伴 Maia 成长的信念，情感逐渐升温，愈发深厚。
故事线（6 条）
“我” 完成收养手续，前往亚利桑那州的寄养家庭接 Maia。
Maia 见到 “我” 后兴奋地拥抱，寄养母亲交接行李。
在去机场路上，Maia 好奇询问新家情况，“我” 怀着复杂心情回应。
“我们” 抵达新家，Maia 好奇探索每个房间。
“我们” 坐在沙发上，热烈讨论 Maia 上学、交友等未来生活。
“我” 决心与 Maia 共同面对未来，开启新的生活篇章。
主旨升华句（英文）
This adoption journey beautifully demonstrates that love has the power to transcend challenges and create a new, meaningful life for those in need.
The story of Maia and her adoptive parent shows that a selfless act of kindness can turn a life around and bring hope to the darkest of situations.
Through this experience, we learn that family is not always defined by blood but by the love and commitment we share with others.
Their narrative serves as a powerful reminder that in a world often filled with hardships, the willingness to take on responsibility can lead to the most beautiful of transformations.
The tale of Maia's adoption teaches us that every child deserves a chance at a happy life, and it is our duty to offer them that hope and stability.
写作示范一
After everything was worked out, I returned to Arizona to collect Maia. As I entered the foster home, Maia's face brightened like a sunbeam. She sprinted towards me, her eyes brimming with tears of joy. “You're finally here!” she cried, wrapping her arms around me tightly. The foster mother, with a gentle smile, handed me Maia's small bag. On the way to the airport, Maia bombarded me with questions about our new home. “Is my room painted pink ” she asked eagerly. I held her hand, my heart swelling with a mix of anticipation and nervousness.
Eventually we arrived at our new home. Maia pushed open the door and gasped in delight. She darted from the living room to the kitchen, her eyes wide with wonder. “It's perfect!” she exclaimed. We settled on the couch, and she chattered excitedly about making friends at school. I listened, filled with gratitude and determination to give her the best life possible. This new beginning was full of promise, and I was ready to embrace it with Maia.
写作示范二
After everything was worked out, I returned to Arizona to collect Maia. The moment I stepped into the foster home, Maia rushed into my arms, her laughter filling the room. “I've been waiting for you!” she said, her face beaming. The foster mother gave me a warm smile and Maia's suitcase. During the drive to the airport, Maia was like a little bird, chirping about her dreams for our new home. I felt a knot of excitement in my stomach, knowing our lives were about to change.
Eventually we arrived at our new home. Maia stood at the entrance, her eyes scanning the house in awe. She ran her fingers along the walls, exploring every nook and cranny. “It's ours,” she whispered in amazement. We sat on the couch, planning her first day at school and future family outings. I looked at her, filled with a sense of purpose. This new chapter was filled with hope, and I was committed to making it a wonderful journey for Maia and me.
参考答案
After everything was worked out, I returned to Arizona to collect Maia. Seeing me appearing in the foster home again, Mai a burst into tears and hugged me tightly. At that moment, I could judge that Maia expected for such a moment for a long time. She had been longing to leave the foster home as soon as possible. Without any delay, I and Mai a began to collect what belongings she could have. The next day, after saying goodbye to the foster family, we boarded the plane to our new home.
Eventually we arrived at our new home. Of course, everything didn’t proceed as smoothly as I expected. I got side-eyes from people when I registered her for school — a twenty-six-year-old with a ten-year-old daughter — as they did the math in their heads. I called my mother for advice on how to deal with the pre-teen mood swings that I had suffered myself not so many years before. In the end we managed to live together, love each other and, in many ways, grow up together.

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