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大题 09 应用文写作
历年考情
应用文写作考查对词汇知识的掌握情况及其句式的运用。写作最基础的部分就是词汇。针对英语基础较薄
弱、考试经验较欠缺的同学，不管是听说还是读写，单词的储备都是很必要的，毕竟没有输入就很难有输出。
英语写作想要得到提高，要求考生要分三步走：积累词汇、积累素材、构建逻辑。
命题规律
1. 对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查；
2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合；
3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文；
4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的
自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意
考向预测
预测 2025 年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。
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【2024 新课标Ⅰ&II 卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一
封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
1. 审题技能
1)明确体裁：确定是书信、邮件、演讲稿、征文、报道等哪种应用文类型，不同体裁有不同的格式和语言
风格。如书信有特定的称呼、落款；演讲稿语言要有感染力，需有开场白和结束语。
2)把握主题：精准理解题目核心话题，如 2024 年新高考 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷是分享美术课经历的告知信，就要围绕
美术课展开。
3)梳理要点：将题目给出的信息点逐一列出，确保写作时不遗漏，如 2023 年新课标 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷建议信中，
要明确写出分组存在的问题和提出的建议。
2. 构思技能
1)搭建框架：开头部分根据体裁和主题进行引入，如书信可直接表明写信目的；中间部分展开要点，可分
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点阐述；结尾部分根据不同情境进行收束，如书信可表达期待回复，演讲稿可呼吁行动等。
2)组织逻辑：使内容有清晰的逻辑关系，如因果、并列、递进等。比如在阐述建议的原因时可用 “首先”“其
次”“最后” 等连接词。
3)拓展细节：在要点基础上适当拓展，增加内容丰富度。如分享美术课经历时，可描述具体的作画过程、
周围环境等。
3. 表达技能
1)词汇运用
a. 准确性：确保用词准确恰当，避免出现搭配错误等，如 “对…… 感兴趣” 要用 “be interested in” 而非 “be
interested with”。
b.多样性：使用丰富的词汇，包括高级词汇、同义词、短语等。如用 “incredible” 替代 “very good”，用 “be
occupied with” 表示 “be busy with”。
2)语法运用
a.正确性：保证语法结构正确，如主谓一致、时态语态、从句用法等。写通知时，若通知的是将来的活动，
常用一般将来时。
b.多样性：运用多种语法结构，如定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等，提升文章档次。如 “Last week,
we held a speech contest, which was a great success.”。
c.语篇衔接：合理使用衔接词，如 “firstly”“secondly”“however”“therefore”“besides” 等，使文章上下文连贯，
过渡自然。
【2025届山东省日照市高三下学期一模】假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的校园文化主题标语(slogan)
设计大赛，并获得一等奖。请你给英国笔友 Chris 写信分享此次经历，内容包括：
(1)介绍你设计的标语；
(2)你的感受。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing（1）
【广东省深圳市高级中学 2024-2025 学年高三上学期第三次诊断考试】假定你是高三学生李华，在一本英语
文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇关于你最珍视的
家庭传统的短文。
1. 介绍该传统；
2. 该传统的重要性。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Tradition in My Family
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Writing（2）
【湖南省长沙四大名校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月月考】假如你是校英语社团 (the English Club) 负责
人李华，打算在全校发起讲英语故事大赛。请你写一则通知。内容包括：
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1.活动目的与安排；
2.呼吁报名参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing（3）
【江西省吉安市六校协作体 2025 学年高三上学期 1 月联考】你在一家英语网站看到一个关于“How to Form
Good Study Habits”的论坛，请你写一篇帖子发布在该论坛上，内容包括：
1. 学习习惯的重要性；
2. 介绍你的学习习惯；
3. 如何养成好的学习习惯。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Writing（4）
【江苏省苏州中学、海门中学、姜堰中学、淮阴中学等四校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月联考】校英文报
现向全体高三同学征稿，话题为“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”。请撰写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 你
的观点；2. 你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
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（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My View on Off-campus Tutoring for Senior Three Students
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Writing（5）
．【辽宁省丹东市五校协作体 2024-2025 学年高三上学期 12 月月考】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Jerry
来信表示对中国文化很感兴趣，恰逢你校开设了英文线上课程——“中国戏曲鉴赏（Appreciation of Chinese
Opera）”，请你回信向他推荐此课程。内容包括：
1.开设时间；
2.课程内容；
3.推荐理由。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing（6）
【浙江省诸暨市牌头中学等多校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月适应性考试】假定你是育才中学的李华，你
校下周五要举办校园音乐节，请你给你校来自英国的交换生 Tom 写一封邮件介绍本届音乐节，并邀请他在
音乐节上表演一个节目。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing（7）
【山东省青岛市崂山区青岛第二中学 2024-2025 学年高三上学期 1 月期末】．假定你是李华，你校志愿者团
打算寒假开展社区服务活动。请你写信给你校交换生 Ryan,邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.邀请参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing（8）
【河北省沧衡名校联盟 2024-2025 学年高三下学期开学考试】最近你们班进行了“高中生要不要读英文原著”
的讨论。请你给校英语报写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
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1．反映讨论情况；
2．表达自己的观点。
注意：1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Debate on Reading English Originals in High School
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Writing（1）
【2024 北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的 Asia Today 栏目投稿。
得知今年新中国成立 75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他
回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Writing（2）
【2023 新高考 I&II 卷】假定你是李华，外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，
你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing（3）
【2023 年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主
题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
Writing（4）
【2024 全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以 Development of Transport in China 为题
写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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Writing（5）
【2021 年全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，
内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Writing（6）
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【2021 年浙江卷 1 月】假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此
写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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历年考情
应用文写作考查对词汇知识的掌握情况及其句式的运用。写作最基础的部分就是词汇。针对英语基础较薄
弱、考试经验较欠缺的同学，不管是听说还是读写，单词的储备都是很必要的，毕竟没有输入就很难有输出。
英语写作想要得到提高，要求考生要分三步走：积累词汇、积累素材、构建逻辑。
命题规律
1. 对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查；
2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合；
3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文；
4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的
自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意
考向预测
预测 2025 年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。
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【2024 新课标Ⅰ&II 卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一
封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided
to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity
but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as
I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
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1. 审题技能
1)明确体裁：确定是书信、邮件、演讲稿、征文、报道等哪种应用文类型，不同体裁有不同的格式和语言
风格。如书信有特定的称呼、落款；演讲稿语言要有感染力，需有开场白和结束语。
2)把握主题：精准理解题目核心话题，如 2024 年新高考 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷是分享美术课经历的告知信，就要围绕
美术课展开。
3)梳理要点：将题目给出的信息点逐一列出，确保写作时不遗漏，如 2023 年新课标 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷建议信中，
要明确写出分组存在的问题和提出的建议。
2. 构思技能
1)搭建框架：开头部分根据体裁和主题进行引入，如书信可直接表明写信目的；中间部分展开要点，可分
点阐述；结尾部分根据不同情境进行收束，如书信可表达期待回复，演讲稿可呼吁行动等。
2)组织逻辑：使内容有清晰的逻辑关系，如因果、并列、递进等。比如在阐述建议的原因时可用 “首先”“其
次”“最后” 等连接词。
3)拓展细节：在要点基础上适当拓展，增加内容丰富度。如分享美术课经历时，可描述具体的作画过程、
周围环境等。
3. 表达技能
1)词汇运用
a. 准确性：确保用词准确恰当，避免出现搭配错误等，如 “对…… 感兴趣” 要用 “be interested in” 而非 “be
interested with”。
b.多样性：使用丰富的词汇，包括高级词汇、同义词、短语等。如用 “incredible” 替代 “very good”，用 “be
occupied with” 表示 “be busy with”。
2)语法运用
a.正确性：保证语法结构正确，如主谓一致、时态语态、从句用法等。写通知时，若通知的是将来的活动，
常用一般将来时。
b.多样性：运用多种语法结构，如定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等，提升文章档次。如 “Last week,
we held a speech contest, which was a great success.”。
c.语篇衔接：合理使用衔接词，如 “firstly”“secondly”“however”“therefore”“besides” 等，使文章上下文连贯，
过渡自然。
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【2025届山东省日照市高三下学期一模】假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的校园文化主题标语(slogan)
设计大赛，并获得一等奖。请你给英国笔友 Chris 写信分享此次经历，内容包括：
(1)介绍你设计的标语；
(2)你的感受。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am more than thrilled to tell you that I won the first prize in the Campus Culture Slogan Design Contest
organized by my school last week. I can't wait to share with you my design.
The slogan I designed is “Reading makes me wise and wise books make a wise man”. It is well-received for
its using Chinese four-character idiom to showcase the close relationship between reading and wisdom. The judges
sang high praise for it because it is simple in words but rich in meaning.
I felt greatly honored to win the contest. I love reading, so I hope what I did will inspire more students to
read more. Let’s enjoy reading.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友 Chris 写信分享参加了学校组织的校园文化主题标
语(slogan)设计大赛，并获得一等奖的经历。
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【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
展示：showcase→demonstrate
高度赞扬：sing high praise for→praise highly
简单的：simple→brief
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：I am more than thrilled to tell you that I won the first prize in the Campus Culture Slogan Design Contest
organized by my school last week.
拓展句：I am more than thrilled to tell you that I won the first prize in the Campus Culture Slogan Design Contest
which was organized by my school last week.
Writing（1）
【广东省深圳市高级中学 2024-2025 学年高三上学期第三次诊断考试】假定你是高三学生李华，在一本英语
文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇关于你最珍视的
家庭传统的短文。
1. 介绍该传统；
2. 该传统的重要性。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Tradition in My Family
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【答案】A Tradition in My Family
One of the most cherished traditions in my family is having a big family dinner every Sunday. All family
members gather around the table, sharing delicious food and stories. During the dinner, we often recall the happy
memories we’ve had together, which adds a warm and sweet atmosphere to the occasion.
This tradition is of great importance. It strengthens our family bond, allowing us to communicate and
understand each other better. Also, it provides a sense of belonging and stability, making us feel loved and
supported.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，介绍自己最珍视的家庭传统并阐述该传统
的重要性。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
珍视：cherish → value/treasure
加强：strengthen → enhance
重要：importance → significance
提供：provide → offer/supply
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This tradition is of great importance.
拓展句：This tradition, which has been passed down from generation to generation in my family, is of great
importance.
Writing（2）
【湖南省长沙四大名校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月月考】假如你是校英语社团 (the English Club) 负责
人李华，打算在全校发起讲英语故事大赛。请你写一则通知。内容包括：
1.活动目的与安排；
2.呼吁报名参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Notice
To enhance students’ interest in English, our school is going to initiate an English story-telling contest. Here
are some details about this activity.
The contest will be held in the school auditorium, from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm, next Friday afternoon. Five
foreign teachers working at our school will serve as judges. Those who are interested are welcome to participate.
Please sign up at the English Club by this Friday afternoon.
We are convinced that this activity will be a great success. Let’s seize the opportunity to make progress
together!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英语社团负责人身份写一则举办讲英语故事大赛的通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
增强：enhance → strengthen
发起：initiate → launch
比赛：contest → competition
抓住：seize → get hold of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To enhance students’ interest in English, our school is going to initiate an English story-telling contest.
拓展句：Our school is going to initiate an English story-telling contest in order that students enhance their interest
in English.
Writing（3）
【江西省吉安市六校协作体 2025 学年高三上学期 1 月联考】你在一家英语网站看到一个关于“How to Form
Good Study Habits”的论坛，请你写一篇帖子发布在该论坛上，内容包括：
1. 学习习惯的重要性；
2. 介绍你的学习习惯；
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3. 如何养成好的学习习惯。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good study habits are very important to our academic success and personal growth.
As to my study habits, I often make a detailed study plan at the beginning of each week. This helps me
organize my tasks and time appropriately. I also make it a point to review and summarize what I’ve learned every
day. Additionally, I don’t hesitate to ask questions or discuss with classmates and teachers.
To form good study habits, we should set clear goals and establish a regular study schedule and stick to it.
Moreover, consistency and self- discipline are the keys to nurturing and maintaining these habits.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就在网站看到的关于“How to Form Good Study Habits”的论坛
写一篇帖子，发布在该论坛上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适当地：appropriately→properly
此外：additionally→in addition
毫不犹豫做某事：not hesitate to do sth→do sth without hesitation
养成（习惯）：form→develop
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To form good study habits, we should set clear goals and establish a regular study schedule and stick to it.
拓展句：We should set clear goals and establish a regular study schedule and stick to it so that we can form good
study habits.
Writing（4）
【江苏省苏州中学、海门中学、姜堰中学、淮阴中学等四校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月联考】校英文报
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现向全体高三同学征稿，话题为“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”。请撰写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 你
的观点；2. 你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My View on Off-campus Tutoring for Senior Three Students
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【答案】Possible version 1
My View on Off-campus Tutoring for Senior Three Students
As far as I’m concerned, it is totally unnecessary for senior three students to sign up for off-campus tutoring.
My reasons are as follows.
Firstly, the school lessons comprehensively include all the crucial points and teachers are readily available
for consultation whenever questions arise, so it’s a waste of time and money to attend off-campus tutoring.
Secondly, senior three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendous pressure, leaving no extra
energy for off-campus tutoring. Last but not least, self-study holds great importance as it cultivates independent
thinking and problem-solving skills.
In conclusion, there is absolutely no need for senior three students to receive off-campus tutoring.(108w)
Possible version 2
My View on Off-campus Tutoring for Senior Three Students
With college entrance exam approaching, I think off-campus tutoring is of benefit to senior three students.
For one thing, off-campus tutoring can provide targeted assistance. School teachers have to cater to the
overall level of the class, thus neglecting individual problems. By contrast, tutorial teachers can offer tailored
instructions based on the unique needs of everyone. For another, in tutorial classes, students have more chances to
interact with the tutor and receive timely feedback, which helps fulfil their potential and makes the learning process
more joyful.
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In summary, off-campus tutoring can enhance learning efficiency, so it is advantageous f or senior three
students. (102w)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”的话题撰写一篇短文向校
英文报投稿。
【详解】（范文 1）1. 词汇积累
多余的：unnecessary → redundant
压力：pressure → stress
培养：cultivate → develop
总之：in conclusion → in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, senior three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendous pressure, leaving no extra
energy for off-campus tutoring.
拓展句：Secondly, senior three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendous pressure, which leaves
no extra energy for off-campus tutoring.
Writing（5）
．【辽宁省丹东市五校协作体 2024-2025 学年高三上学期 12 月月考】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Jerry
来信表示对中国文化很感兴趣，恰逢你校开设了英文线上课程——“中国戏曲鉴赏（Appreciation of Chinese
Opera）”，请你回信向他推荐此课程。内容包括：
1.开设时间；
2.课程内容；
3.推荐理由。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jerry,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to recommend to you our school’s online course
Appreciation of Chinese Traditional Opera.
The course, which aims to bring authentic Chinese traditional opera for students both at home and abroad, is
scheduled to be available in September on our school website, which will get updated every Monday morning. In
this course, you will get to know the history and various types of Chinese opera, which are all of unique
characteristics. Kunqu Opera, for example, is well-known for its poctic language and delicate movements.
Moreover, it will introduce the music in opera, which is usually accompanied by traditional Chinese instruments
like erhu. The most attractive part, in my opinion, is the fancy costumes and makeup. In a word, the course is a
good chance for you to deepen your understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
I do hope my recommendation can be of help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友 Jerry 写一封回信，向他推荐学校开设的英文线
上课程——中国戏曲鉴赏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim to do→be intended to do
各种各样的：various→varied
例如：for example→for instance
著名的：well-known→noted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In a word, the course is a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：In a word, the course is a good chance for you which will help you deepen your understanding of Chinese
traditional culture.
Writing（6）
【浙江省诸暨市牌头中学等多校 2024-2025 学年高三下学期 2 月适应性考试】假定你是育才中学的李华，你
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校下周五要举办校园音乐节，请你给你校来自英国的交换生 Tom 写一封邮件介绍本届音乐节，并邀请他在
音乐节上表演一个节目。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m excited to inform you about our upcoming Campus Music Festival,
scheduled for next Friday afternoon in the school auditorium. This event is a vibrant celebration of music and
culture, where students from all grades come together to showcase their musical talents. There will be performances
ranging from traditional Chinese instruments to modern pop songs, along with dance routines and even a fashion
show that reflects diverse musical influences. It’s not only an occasion for entertainment but also for fostering
cultural exchange and appreciation among us.
We would be absolutely delighted if you could grace the festival with a performance. Your participation
would bring a special international touch to our music festival. Please let me know if you’re interested or need any
assistance preparing for it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校来自英国的交换生 Tom 写一封邮件介绍本届音乐节，
并邀请他在音乐节上表演一个节目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
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培养：foster→develop
高兴的：delighted→glad
激动的：excited→thrilled
感兴趣的：be interested→take interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m excited to inform you about our upcoming Campus Music Festival, scheduled for next Friday afternoon
in the school auditorium.
拓展句：I’m excited to inform you about our upcoming Campus Music Festival, which is scheduled for next Friday
afternoon in the school auditorium.
Writing（7）
【山东省青岛市崂山区青岛第二中学 2024-2025 学年高三上学期 1 月期末】．假定你是李华，你校志愿者团
打算寒假开展社区服务活动。请你写信给你校交换生 Ryan,邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.邀请参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
How’s your day going I’m writing to invite you to our school volunteer group’s community service during the
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winter vacation.
First, we’ll go to the community library, helping organize books and reading to the kids. Next, we’ll visit the
nursing home, where we’ll do housework for the elderly, such as cleaning rooms and washing clothes. We’ll also
chat with them to bring some joy.
Given your passion for cultural experiences and community activities, I’m sure you’ll enjoy this. Hope you can
join us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信给学校交换生 Ryan，邀请他参加学校寒假开展社区服务
活动。其内容包括：活动介绍和邀请参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first → to begin with
帮助：help → assist
快乐：joy → happiness/delight
热情：passion → enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to our school volunteer group’s community service during the winter vacation.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to our school volunteer group’s community service which is held during the
winter vacation.
Writing（8）
【河北省沧衡名校联盟 2024-2025 学年高三下学期开学考试】最近你们班进行了“高中生要不要读英文原著”
的讨论。请你给校英语报写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1．反映讨论情况；
2．表达自己的观点。
注意：1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Debate on Reading English Originals in High School
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【答案】
The Debate on Reading English Originals in High School
Recently, our class engaged in a lively debate on whether high school students should read English originals.
Opinions were divided. Some argue that reading English originals can significantly improve our language skills and
understanding of different cultures. On the other hand, others feel that the complexity of the language in originals
can be difficult for high school students, potentially leading to a loss of interest in reading.
Personally, I believe that reading English originals is challenging but rewarding. I believe simplified versions
might be more appropriate for our level. With the right support and selection of books, we can enjoy the journey
into the world of English literature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就最近班级进行的“高中生要不要读英文原著”的讨论给校英语
报写一篇英语短文，反映讨论情况，并表达自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently → lately
观点：opinion → view
提高：improve → promote
合适的：appropriate→ suitable
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：On the other hand, others feel that the complexity of the language in originals can be difficult for high school
students, potentially leading to a loss of interest in reading.
拓展句：On the other hand, others feel that the complexity of the language in originals can be difficult for high
school students, which can potentially lead to a loss of interest in reading.
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Writing（1）
【2024 北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的 Asia Today 栏目投稿。
得知今年新中国成立 75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他
回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights
in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s
role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的 Asia Today 栏目投稿。得知今年新中
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国成立 75 周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原 句 ： It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
Writing（2）
【2023 新高考 I&II 卷】假定你是李华，外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，
你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English
training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This
can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room
for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with
someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students
choose their own partners.
Writing（3）
【2023 年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主
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题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will
all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Jim 策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
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主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
Writing（4）
【2024 全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以 Development of Transport in China 为题
写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development.
Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of
travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
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alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times,
making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores
China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate
China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with
environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China 为题写一
篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句 ： Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a
symbol of urban mobility.
Writing（5）
【2021 年全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，
内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one possible version:
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Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve
problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to
broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't
tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand,
online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper
way to make our study more efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding
a proper way to make our study more efficient.
Writing（6）
【2021 年浙江卷 1 月】假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此
写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
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注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because
you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that
you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
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