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外研版英语七年级下册Unit 5 Amazing nature
第4课时 话题写作
话题感知
写作话题→神奇的大自然 写作内容→描述自然奇观，讲述如何保护自然环境 写作技能→能正确运用比较级和最高级形式
素材积累
Ⅰ词汇积累
1. one of ... ……之一
2. a land full of ... 充满……的土地
3. be famous for 以……而闻名
4. ... meters long/high ……米长/高
5. more... than... 比……更……
6. take away... 夺走……
7. stop people from doing sth. 阻止人们做某事
8. cry for help 大声呼救
Ⅱ 高分句型
1. The most beautiful place in my opinion is...
我认为最美丽的地方是……
2. It is famous for...
它以……而闻名。
3. It is like... 它像……
4. Words can’t express my love for ...
语言无法描述我对……的热爱。
5. We should take action and protect them.
我们应该采取行动保护它们。
典文示例
Ⅰ写作任务
2023年9月17日，我国云南“普洱景迈山古茶林文化景观”被联合国教科文组织列入《世界遗产名录》。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的南非好友Jack发一封电子邮件，向他介绍景迈山。
内容提示：
1. 景迈山位于中国西南部的云南省，海拔1500米左右；
2. 景迈山古茶林文化景观由5片古茶林、9个古村寨和3片分隔防护林组成；
3. 景迈山以普洱茶闻名于世……
要求：
1. 文中应包括所给内容提示，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：cultural landscape 文化景观；World Heritage List《世界遗产名录》；Pu’er tea 普洱茶；old tea forest 古茶林；protective separation forest 分隔防护林
Ⅱ思路点拨
1. 体裁：说明文
2. 时态：一般现在时
3. 人称：第一人称、第二人称
4. 框架结构
开篇点拨 → I’d like to... 具体介绍 → Jingmai Mountain is in... It’s famous for... 发出邀请 → Why not come to...
Dear Jack，
As you know, the Cultural Landscape of Old Tea Forests of Jingmai Mountain in Pu’er has been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List.
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ佳作欣赏
Dear Jack,
As you know the Cultural landscape of Old Tea Forests of Jingmai Mountain in Pu’er has been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List. I’d like to tell you something about Jingmai Mountain.
Jingmai Mountain is in the southwest of China’s Yunnan Province. It’s about 1,500 meters above the sea level. The cultural landscape is made up of five old tea forests, nine traditional villages and three protective separation forests. Jingmai Mountain is famous for Pu’er tea in the world. Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a history of over 6,000 years in China. I’m proud to say that Jingmai Mountain is one of the best natural places in China. Words can’t express my love for it.
Why not come to visit Jingmai Mountain and enjoy pu’er tea this summer I’m sure you will love it.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练
假如你是一只叫做飞飞的丹顶鹤，现在生活在扎龙自然保护区，由于人类的帮助，你的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你给人类写一篇词数在80～100之间的英语感谢信。
内容必须包括以下要点：
扎龙基本情况 最大的湿地之一；提供…… 鸟儿的栖居情况
人类为湿地和鸟类做的事 1. 中国政府制定法律…… 2. 观鸟协会
我在这里的生活现状 1. 介绍最好的朋友——天鹅 2. 最喜欢的季节和原因
参考词汇：red-crowned crane 丹顶鹤；swan 天鹅；Zhalong Nature Reserve 扎龙自然保护区；wetland 湿地；provide 提供
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Feifei. I'm writing to thank you for your help.
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Thanks again for helping us.
范文
第4课时 话题写作
One possible version:
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Feifei. I’m writing to thank you for your help.
Zhalong Nature Reserve is one of the largest wetlands in the world. It provides us with a lot of food and water. Many birds live here. They are very happy. Thanks to the laws made by the Chinese government, we are safe. We don’t have to worry about bad guys hunting us. Humans build birdwatching places, so there are a lot of people coming to watch us. I have a best swan friend here. She is beautiful. I like spring very much, because the weather is warm and I have enough food.
Thanks again for helping us.
Best wishes,
Feifei

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