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环境保护
话题作文
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目录
01
佳作赏析
03
评分标准
04
学以致用
02
写作运用
Rubbish Sorting Starts with Me
　　①Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of
rubbish sorting. It is important for us to create an environmentally friendly
society. Rubbish sorting has ②made a great contribution to environmental
protection. At the same time, it can reduce rubbish generation and recycle
rubbish. Here are some suggestions for rubbish sorting.
First of all③, we can learn the knowledge of rubbish sorting through
books and the Internet. Besides, we can participate in voluntary service to
help people sort their rubbish. Second③, we are supposed to put all kinds of
rubbish into different coloured trash cans. Third③, we can make old clothes
into shopping bags and waste into art.And the most important thing is to
reduce the use of plastic bags.
　　④If all of us try our best to sort rubbish, we’ll lead a better life. All of us
can do our part to protect the environment and encourage others to sort their
rubbish. ⑤Let’s pull together and take action from now on.
　　
第一段：重要性和意义
第二段：分析做法
第三段：表达观点
◇佳作赏析
　　①Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of
rubbish sorting.② It is important for us to create an environmentally friendly
society. Rubbish sorting has③ made a great contribution to environmental
protection. At the same time, it can reduce rubbish generation and recycle
rubbish. Here are some suggestions for rubbish sorting.
如今, 越来越多的人已经意识到...的重要性
◇写作积累
对我们来说，做...很重要
It is important for us to do sth.
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of...
为...做出巨大的贡献
v
make a great contribution to
reduce
减少
First of all③, we can learn the knowledge of rubbish sorting through books and the Internet. Besides, we can participate in voluntary service to help people sort their rubbish. Second③, we are supposed to put all kinds of rubbish into different coloured trash cans. Third③, we can make old clothes into shopping bags and waste into art.And the most important thing is to reduce the use of plastic bags.
逻辑顺序短语
First of all,
To start with,
What's more,
In addition,
Last but not least,
At last,
Finally,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
Besides,
Second,
Third,
④ If all of us try our best to sort rubbish, we’ll lead a better life. All of us can do our part to protect the environment and encourage others to sort their
rubbish.⑤ Let’s pull together and take action from now on.
If all of us try our best to do sth. ..., we will...
Let’s pull together and take action from now on
如果我们尽我们最大努力做......我们将会......
现在，让我们齐心协力，行动起来。
sort rubbish (动词短语）
垃圾分类
rubbish sorting(名词短语）
假如你叫李华，作为深圳的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s Try Our Best to Protect the Environment”为题，向中学生发出倡议，呼吁大家尽最大的努力保护环境！
◇写作运用
时态
一般现在时
人称
第一人称
结构
1
2
3
生态环境现状
环保措施
呼吁
1
2
3
Pre-writing
1
While-writing
但近年来，地球上发生了许多灾难，同时很多人破坏环境。
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Shenzhen. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth.
But in recent years,
many disasters
happened on
on the earth.
many people
did something wrong to the environment.
Meanwhile,
1
因此, 越来越多的人意识到环境的重要性。我们应该为我们的家园做出贡献。
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Shenzhen. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth. Meanwhile, many people did something wrong to the environment.
more and more people
environment.
We
make contributions to
As a result,
Therefore,
As a result,
While-writing
more and more people have realized the importance of...
make contributions to
should
our home
should do sth.
be supposed to
need to do sth.
had better do sth.
have realized the importance of
While-writing
首先，在日常生活中，节约用水和能源对我们来说很重要。比如，当我们离开房间时应该关灯。
First of all,
It is important for sb. to do
us
For example,
We
turn off the light
in our daily life.
2
It is important for sb. to do
turn off the light
save water and energy
save water and energy
are supposed to
when
we
leave the room.
While-writing
其次，为了减少空气污染，我们应该出行乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行。
First, it is important for us to save water in our daily life. We should turn off the light when we leave the room.
What’s more,
in order to
by bus，
by bike
on foot.
go out
2
go out
air pollution
in order to
we
or
reduce
had better
air pollution,
reduce
While-writing
另外，我们要在扔垃圾前学会把垃圾分类，我们最好少用塑料袋。
First, it is important for us to save water in our daily life. We should turn off the light when we leave the room. Second, in order to reduce the air pollution, we’d better go out by bike, by bus or on foot.
Besides ,
we
before
We
plastic bags.
sort out the rubbish
2
sort out the rubbish
plastic bags
need to
use
learn to
had better not
we
throw
it.
While-writing
最后，我们必须保护野生动物，我们吃他们是不对的。
First, it is important for us to save water in our daily life. We should turn off the light when we leave the room. What’s more, in order to reduce the air pollution, we’d better go out by bike, by bus or on foot. Besides, we should learn to sort out the rubbish before we throw it. We’d better not use plastic bags.
Last but not least,
we
wild animals.
protect
2
wild animals
It is wrong of us to do sth.
must
It is wrong of us to do
eat them.
While-writing
总而言之，在我看来，毫无疑问的是如果我们尽我们最大努力去保护环境，我们将会过上更好的生活。现在，让我们齐心协力，行动起来！
Let’s pull together and take action from now on.
we will
All in all,
protect environment
lead
3
If all of us try our best to
Let’s pull together and take action from now on
如果我们尽我们最大努力做......我们将会......
现在，让我们齐心协力，行动起来。
All in all，
in my opinion，
there is no doubt that
④
a better life.
in my opinion,
If all of us try our best to do sth. ..., we will...
there is no doubt that...
the standard of evaluation 评分标准
Let’s Try Our Best to Protect the Environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Shenzhen. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Besides the bad things were caused by the terrible environment, many people also did something wrong to the environment. As students in Shenzhen, we should try our best to protect the environment.
First, it is important for us to save water in our daily life. We should turn off the light when we leave the room. Second, in order to reduce the air pollution, we’d better go out by bike, by bus or on foot. These ways can help protect the environment. Third, we should learn to sort out the rubbish before we throw it. We’d better not use plastic bags. What’s more, we must protect the wild animals. It is wrong of us to eat them.
Let’s start from doing small things and try our best to protect the environment. If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
◇正式写作
(二)
　　近年来, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕, 污染越来越严重 假如你
是学生 Jone, 你校要进行 “如何保护我们的环境 ” 专题演讲比赛, 请你用
英语写一篇演讲稿, 呼吁更多人参与到环境保护中
　　要求: 1. 语言准确, 行文连贯, 条理清晰;
2. 不少于80词;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名
◇学以致用
　　As we all know the environment around us is getting worse and
worse these years. So I think we must do something to protect the
environment.
　　But what can we do Firstly, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic
bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. Secondly,
we can reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. What’s more, we
should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the
classrooms in order to save energy.
　　In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there
will be less pollution and our life will be better. There is only one Earth. I
hope everyone can protect our environment well.











◇学以致用
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