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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（译林版2024）
Unit 5 Animal friends 单元书面表达专练
一、书面表达
1．假设你有一只宠物猫，非常讨人喜欢，请你把它介绍给我们吧。
提示：内容包括它的名字、性格、年龄、外貌、喜欢的食物、生活习惯等。
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数：不少于60 词，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。
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2．请以“My favourite animal”为题，运用本单元所学的表达方式，写一篇60词左右的短文，描述你所喜欢的动物的习性、特征及你为什么喜欢它等。
内容包括：
1）Do you like animals
2）Which animal do you like best Why
My favourite animal
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3．每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假如你是Jill，现在正和你的朋友们谈论自己最喜欢的动物以及原因。下面表格中是你们谈论的内容，请以Our favorite animals为题，写一篇文章。60词以上，可以适当发挥。（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
Persons Favorite animals Reasons
Lisa 猫 能抓老鼠，并且很可爱
Eric 狗 能做很多事，是最受欢迎的宠物
Jil1 马 擅长奔跑，并且很漂亮
Our favorite animals
Everyone has his /her favorite animal.
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4．请根据下面的内容提示，以“What a wonderful dog”为题写一篇短文。60词以上，可适当发挥。
提示：
1）玛利亚（Maria）是2岁孩子大卫（David）的奶奶，她疼爱孙子，但有点健忘（forgetful）。
2）一次她带着孙子和她的狗去公园看大妈 （Dama）们跳广场舞 （square dancing），忽然自己也想学跳舞。
3）她玩得太高兴而忘记带孩子回家，回到家才想起把孩子忘在公园里。
4）等她急忙回公园找时，发现她的宠物狗一直待在孩子的身边。
What a wonderful dog
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5．每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假如你是Jill，现在正和你的朋友们谈论自己最喜欢的动物以及原因。下面提示是你们谈论的内容，请以“Our favourite animals”为题，写一篇文章。60词以上，可以适当发挥。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)
提示：1）Lisa：猫——能抓老鼠，并且很可爱；
2）Eric：狗——能做很多事，是最受欢迎的宠物；
3）Jill：马——擅长奔跑，并且很漂亮。
Our favourite animals
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6．上周你去了深圳野生动物园(Shenzhen Safari Park)，请根据你的所观所感，写一篇短文，词数80左右。
要点：1）有很多游客，可以开车进入动物园，并且可以和马、大象一起玩，它们很友好；2）看到了大熊猫，它们黑白相间，性情温和，看起来像熊，喜欢吃竹子；3）老虎很孤独，也许它们想回到森林里；4．野生动物变得越来越少，保护野生动物很重要。
要求：要点全部表达清楚，可适当拓展，语法正确、语句通顺。
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7．以你自己的宠物或你熟悉的小动物为题按照下面的要求写一篇英语作文。
要求：意思连贯, 词句通顺, 标点正确, 书写规范。
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答案解析部分
1．I have a pet cat. Its name is Coco. It's only three months old. It's white and small. It's very cute. It likes drinking milk and eating fish. It likes jumping up and down. At noon, it likes sleeping in the sun. At night, it likes sleeping with me together. I like it very much.
开头引入：直接点明主题，说明自己有一只宠物猫。介绍宠物猫：名字：使用了简单的直接描述"Its name is Coco."。年龄：用"It's only three months old."来准确表达小猫的年龄。外貌：描述了猫的毛色和体型"It's white and small."，并使用了"It's very cute."来强调其可爱。喜欢的食物：列举了两种食物"It likes drinking milk and eating fish."，通过并列结构展现了猫的饮食喜好。描述生活习惯：使用了两个时间段来描述猫的不同习性："At noon, it likes sleeping in the sun." 和 "At night, it likes sleeping with me together."。结尾表达情感：用"I like it very much."简单直接地表达了对小猫的喜爱。时态：全文采用了现在时，符合描述宠物当前状态的要求。句式：使用了简单句和并列句，如"It's white and small."和"It likes drinking milk and eating fish."，结构清晰。固定搭配：如"likes drinking milk and eating fish"中的"likes doing sth."，和"sleeping with me together"中的"together"作为副词修饰动词，都是地道的英语表达。
考查提纲作文。注意写作内容要完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏重要信息。使用适当的形容词和动词来描述小猫的特点和习性，使描述更加生动。结尾表达作者对小猫的喜爱，增强了文章的情感色彩。
2．My favourite animal
I like animals very much, but among all the animals I like dogs best, and I have a pet dog. Its name is Beibei. It has long black hair, and its hair is very bright. It has a pair of bright eyes. It is very clever. It often helps me do a lot of things, and it can make me happy when I feel sad. It likes meat very much, but sometimes it eats ice cream. It looks very funny. I like it a lot.
这是一篇命题作文。本文要求按照所给的题目My favourite animal，运用本单元所学的表达方式写一篇英语短文来介绍你最喜爱的动物。写作中要包含所给的两个方面的内容，你最喜欢的动物是什么，和你喜欢它们的原因。文章的句子时态用一般现在时。句子的主语用第三人称单数。文章在书写时语句要通顺，语言要流畅，文章中不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章按照题目的要求写出自己最喜欢的动物是狗，并且描写了狗的模样和喜欢它的原因。文章使用了常用的句式结构，句式结构简单，容易理解。文章使用了一些短语，例如：a pet dog；long black hair；a pair of；help sb. do sth; a lot of；make+宾语+形容词；ice cream；a lot等。
3．Our
favorite animals
Everyone
has his /her favorite animal. Now my two friends and I are talking about our
favorite animals. Lisa likes cats best. She thinks that they can catch mice and
they look very lovely. Dogs are Eric's favorite animals. He thinks that they
can do lots of things for people and they are the most popular pets. As for me,
I like horses best. Because they are good at running and they are very
beautiful.
这是一篇提示性作文，要求介绍一吉尔的语气介绍一下自己和朋友最喜欢的动物，以及各自动物可爱的地方。三人的宠物及各自的特点以表格的形式告诉了我们，所以直接按照表格描述即可，时态使用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称和第三人称。
文章开门点题，告诉读者每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物，这样就很自然地引出了话题，然后根据表格顺序介绍各自喜欢的动物和特点。文章简短，但是结构合理叙事清晰有条理。在语言运用上很到位，使用了常见的短语，比如talk about；lots of；as for me；be good at等，句子有并列句也有复合句， Now my two friends and I are talking about our favorite animals. 这是一个并列句， She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely. 这是一个宾语从句， Because they are good at running and they are very beautiful. 使用because说明原因，总体上看这是一篇不错的习作。
4．What a wonderful dog
Maria
is a 2-year-old kid—David's grandma. She
likes her grandson very much, but she is a little forgetful.
One
day, she took her grandson and her dog to watch Damas' square dancing in the
park. Suddenly, she wanted to join them and learned to dance. She was so happy
that she forgot to take her grandson home. When she arrived home, she noticed
that she left her grandson in the park. She hurried to the park to look for
him, and she found that her dog was there with her grandson. What a wonderful
dog! He stayed with the kid all the time until his owner came back!
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。 要求根据下面的内容提示，以“What a wonderful dog”为题写一篇短文。60词以上 ，要求包括提示中所有内容，也可适当发挥，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第三人称，一般过去时。
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 a little 有一点；want to do sth.想要做某事；so…that…如此……以至于……；forget to do sth.忘记做某事； look for 寻找；等和句型结构 She was so happy that she forgot to take her grandson home. When she arrived home, she noticed that she left her grandson in the park.What a wonderful dog! 等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
5．Our
favourite animals
Everyone has his/her favourite animal. Now my
two friends and I are talking about our favourite animals. Lisa likes cats
best. She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely. Dogs are
Eric's favourite animals. He thinks that they can do lots of things for people
and they are the most popular pets. As for me, I like horses best. Because they
are good at running and they are very beautiful.
本文是一篇命题作文，全文要用一般现在时进行描述，重点突出喜欢的动物及喜欢的原因。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
本文从三个动物的角度来说明为什么我们喜欢它们，文中适当运用现在进行时，如 Now my two friends and I are talking about our favourite animals ，使得语言灵活，全文语法规则正确，整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
6． Last week, I visited Shenzhen Safari Park. There were many tourists in the park. You can drive into the park and see many kinds of animals. The horses and elephants are friendly. You can play with them. I saw some pandas in the park. They are black and white. They are kind and look like bears. They like eating bamboo. I saw some tigers too. They looked unhappy and felt lonely. Perhaps they wanted to return to the forests. Wild animals are getting fewer and fewer, so it's important to protect them.
本文是一篇记叙文，全文要用一般过去时和一般现在时进行描述，重点突出在动物园的所见所闻和感受。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
开篇即点明主题，Last week, I visited Shenzhen Safari Park. There were many tourists in the park. 文中适当运用like doing，want to do等非谓语动词，使得语言灵活，语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
7． I keep two goldfish, is Dad's colleagues gave me. The two goldfish are in red, only the ends of the belly and tail are white. My goldfish has three main features. First is in their heads, a pair of black eyes. Second is that they have a belly bigger than other fish. You don't look at their bellies, but they had to act with the necessary flexibility. Third, they are as pretty as a Peacock's tail. Their tail is thin and transparent, is endearing to swing.
要求写一篇自己熟悉动物的说明文，作文内容要包括动物的外形，如皮肤颜色，眼睛耳朵的大小颜色，有无尾巴，头是怎么样的等等，动物的习性，如喜欢吃什么，以及平时的活动等等。
考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型。在写作时应注意语言表达要符合英文习惯。

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