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高考英语读后续写
助人为乐类话题写作素材
一、描写感动情绪
1.Surprised and moved, she bowed low to us and murmured,"Thank you!" weeping tears of gratitude.
她又惊喜又感动，向我们深深鞠躬低声道谢，流下感激的泪水。
2.In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words.
刹那间,
我泪流满面，感动得说不出话来。
3.With tears streaming down her face, she thanked him again and again.
她泪流满面，再三感谢她。
4.Tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to Mum’s warm hug, and said gently “Mum, thank you.”
他热泪盈眶，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，温柔地说："妈妈，谢谢你。"
二、描写帮助行为
1.As I said goodbye to him, I reached into my pocket and offered him a $20 bill for his help.
当我说道别时，我把手伸进口袋，递给他一张20美元的钞票感谢他的帮助。
2.My mind was racing, trying to think of a solution to assist her.
我转动脑筋，试图想出一个解决办法帮助她。
3.I tearfully shared what I had seen with them and asked them to do something to give them a helping hand.
我含泪把我所看到的告诉了他们，并请他们做一些事情来帮助他们。
三、主旨升华句
（一）
1.This kind act has a lasting influence on me.I always give others a helping hand if possible.
这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。
2.Just as the saying goes,“Roses given, fragrance in hand.”
正如谚语所说。“赠人玫瑰，手有余香。”
3.When I encountered difficulties, my friend's selfless help made me feel deeply grateful.
在我遇到困难时，朋友无私的帮助让我深感感激。
4.No matter what difficulties arise, she always enters my life with a friendly smile.
无论遇到什么困难，她总是带着友善的微笑走进我的生活。
5.Her sincere care made me feel less alone when facing challenges.
她真诚的关心让我在面对挑战时不再感到孤单。
6.Although it was just a small help, it made me feel the warmth of humanity.
虽然只是一个小小的帮助，但她却让我感受到了人间的温情。
7.Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时小小的善行会有很大影响。
8.As a matter of fact, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness.
事实上，一个表达关爱的小举动也会融化人们内心的孤独。
9.When I encountered setbacks, my friend's enthusiastic help reignited my hope.
当我遭遇挫折时，朋友那热心的帮助让我重新燃起了希望。
10.This world is warmer because there are so many people willing to help others.
这个世界因为有许多乐于助人的人而变得更加温暖。
11.Every time I face difficulties, my parents are always the first to be by my side, offering support and help.
每一次我遇到困难时，我的父母总是最先出现在我身边，给我支持和帮助。
12.I am deeply grateful to those who have helped me selflessly because they showed me the beauty of the world.
我深深感激那些无私帮助过我的人，因为他们让我看到了世界的美好。
13.He is always willing to help others, and even the smallest assistance brings warmth to those around him.
他总是乐于助人，哪怕是微小的忙碌，也让周围的人感到温暖。
14.When I felt discouraged, my friend's warm encouragement gave me the motivation to keep moving forward.
在我灰心丧气的时候，朋友的温暖鼓励给了我继续前行的动力。
（二）
1.With the sparkle of gratitude in her eyes, she handed him a cup of hot tea, the warmth spreading like ripples in a still pond.
她眼中闪烁着感激的光芒，把一杯热茶递给他，温暖像静水中的涟漪一样扩散开来。
2.Carrying a basket of fresh bread, he stepped into the elderly couple’s home, his heart light with the joy of giving.
他提着一篮新鲜的面包，走进了这对老年夫妇的家，心中充满了给予的喜悦。
3.Showered with unexpected kindness, the young boy realized that a small gesture could illuminate someone’s world like a spark in the dark.
在意外的善意中，年轻男孩意识到一个小小的举动可以像黑暗中的火花一样照亮某人的世界。
4.With his voice trembling slightly, he expressed his gratitude, his words flowing like a gentle melody.
他声音微微颤抖，表达了他的感激之情，话语如温柔的旋律般流淌。
5.Encouraged by her neighbor’s support, she embraced the chance to begin again, her determination as firm as an ancient oak.
在邻居的支持下，她抓住了重新开始的机会，她的决心坚定如古老的橡树。
6.With every smile he shared, he planted seeds of joy, each one promising a brighter future.
随着他分享的每一个微笑，他播下了快乐的种子，每一个都承诺着一个更光明的未来。
7.With determination glinting in her eyes, she overcame every obstacle, her spirit acting as a beacon guiding others forward.
她眼中闪烁着决心，克服了每一个障碍，她的精神如同灯塔，引导他人前行。
8.With every encouraging word, he built her confidence, layer by layer, like a craftsman shaping a masterpiece.
随着每一句鼓励的话语，他一点一点地建立了她的自信，就像工匠雕刻一件杰作。
9.Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others.
我从来没有想到，一个随意的善举会给他人注入如此巨大的力量。
10.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family, but he also did whatever he could to help those in need.
他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
四、优秀片段
一、归还老人丢失的手套
With a tender heart, I spotted the gloves he cherished, lost and alone on the bench.As I handed them back, his eyes, a window to his soul, sparkled with surprise and gratitude."Thank you," he whispered, his voice quivering slightly, as he gently squeezed my hand—a silent testament to the joy of giving.At that moment, I felt the warmth of compassion, understanding that small gestures have immense impact.心怀柔情，我瞥见了他珍视的手套，遗失在长椅上，孤单无援。 当我递还它们时，他的眼睛，灵魂之窗，因惊讶和感激而闪烁。“谢谢你，”他轻声说，声音微微颤抖，同时轻轻握住我的手——这是给予之乐的无声证明。在那一刻，我感受到了同情的温暖，明白小小的举动有着巨大的影响。
二、年轻男子帮助迷路父亲回家
My heart swelled with gratitude as the young man gently guided my lost father to our doorstep.His kind gesture, a beacon of hope in the twilight, spoke volumes of his character."I'm in your debt," I uttered, my voice thick with emotion, as I clasped his hand firmly.The sincerity in his eyes and the gentle smile on his face reassured me of the humanity's inherent goodness.At that moment, I realized the depth of kindness in strangers, a reminder that compassion knows no bounds.当那位年轻人轻轻地将我迷路的父亲带到我们的门前时，我的心充满了感激。他亲切的举动，在黄昏中成为了希望的灯塔，充分展现了他的品格。"我欠你的情，"我声音充满情感地说，同时紧紧地握住他的手。他眼中的真诚和脸上温柔的微笑让我确信了人性的固有善良。在那一刻，我意识到了陌生人的深厚善意，这是一个提醒，同情心没有界限。
三、给被困路上旅客面包和衣服度过暴风雪
As the winter storm raged, I watched the stranded tourists with a heavy heart, their shivering forms a stark contrast to the cozy warmth of my home.Driven by compassion, I gathered loaves of bread and warm clothes, and offered them with a gentle, "Please, take these to ward off the chill." Their eyes, initially dulled by the cold, brightened with surprise and gratitude.The simple act of sharing taught me the true meaning of empathy and the power of small gestures to bring comfort in the face of adversity.当冬季风暴肆虐时，我怀着沉重的心情看着被困的游客，他们在寒冷中颤抖的身影与我家的温馨温暖形成了鲜明对比。出于同情，我收集了面包和保暖的衣物，温和地递给他们："请拿这些来抵御寒冷。"他们的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡无光，随后因惊讶和感激而明亮起来。分享这个简单行为教会了我同情的真正含义，以及在逆境中带来安慰的小举动的力量。
四、清洁工拾金不昧归还戒指
The cleaner's heartoverflowed with integrity as she found the glinting ring, knowing its worth yet choosing to return it."This belongs to someone precious," she thought, handing it back with a humble smile.The lady's eyes glistened with tears of gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank you" echoing with sincerity.The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity of kindness, a reminder that honesty is the most valuable treasure one can possess.清洁工在发现那枚闪闪发光的戒指时，内心充满了正直，知道它的价值却选择归还。“这属于某个珍贵的人，”她想着，带着谦逊的微笑递还戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而闪烁着泪光，她紧握清洁工的手，她的“谢谢你”充满了真诚。这一行为重申了对纯真善良的信仰，提醒着诚实是一个人可以拥有的最宝贵的财富。
五、真题链接
（2024新高考Ⅰ卷）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it,” he said.
Just then I realized that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____________________________
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.______________________
【参考范文】
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.He was obviously nervous, which made me naturally guess that he was worried about the taxi fare, so I quickly explained my situation and offered to give him something equal to the value of the fare.But Gunter seriously refused and said he could wait for my conference ending and my next return to Vienna.Relieved and touched by his kindness, I quickly put down my phone number for him and asked for his.I boarded the bus as I promised to call and pay back the taxi fare.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.He came to meet me and greeted me with his usual big smile.I paid him with a mountain of thanks and offered him a special present which he accepted delightedly.We talked for a moment, during which I sent the praise and regards from my colleagues when they heard of the story and he said that inspired him to continue spreading kindness.After our departure, I still reflected on the whole incident: how a stranger’s kindness spared my trouble and how it built our faith in each other.

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