资源简介

应用文之志愿者活动类
假定你是李华，想邀请热心于公益的留学生朋友Fred一起去你市火车站参加为期两天的志愿服务活动。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和地点；
2.志愿服务的内容（至少三个方面）。
要求：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，想邀请热心于公益的留学生朋友Fred一起去你市火车站参加为期两天的志愿服务活动。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.活动的时间和地点；2.志愿服务的内容（至少三个方面）。时态应为一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：volunteer(志愿服务)，railway station(火车站)，function(功能)，gather(集合)，actively(积极地)，detail (细节)，luggage (行李)，entrance (入口)，board (上车)，accompany(陪伴)，direct (指引)，rewarding(值得的)及passenger(乘客)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be involved in(参与)，put on(穿上)，in time (及时)，get familiar with (熟悉)，get down to(开始)，make sure(确保)以及keep order(维持秩序)，而且还使用了状语从句If any elderly or young passengers are travelling alone, we may accompany them and make sure they board in time.宾语从句I believe you’ll find the experience rewarding.非谓语动词I’m writing to invite you to join me for voluntary work at the railway station from May 1st and 2nd.及One of our duties is to answer questions and direct passengers to the right places.全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅.
Dear Fred,
I’m writing to invite you to join me for voluntary work at the railway station from May 1st and 2nd. I know you are always actively involved in volunteering so you won’t miss this opportunity. Here are some details about the activity.
We are to gather at the entrance to the station at 8:00 a.m. and put on uniforms before being shown around to get familiar with the functions of different areas. Then we’ll get down to work. One of our duties is to answer questions and direct passengers to the right places. If any elderly or young passengers are travelling alone, we may accompany them and make sure they board in time. More often we’ll help with heavy luggage and keep order.
I believe you’ll find the experience rewarding.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校最近将组织一批志愿者到火车站提供服务。请你以学生会的名义用英语写一则书面通知。内容主要包括:
1. 时间:11月18日(星期日), 上午8:00-11:00
2. 地点:福州火车站
3. 活动内容:捡垃圾(pick up rubbish)、信息咨询(provide information for passengers)、帮助使用自助售票机(ticket vending machine)等
4. 注意事项
注意:1. 词数100 左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Notice
Volunteer Activity at Fu Zhou Railway Station
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Council
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一则通知。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一则通知：假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校最近将组织一批志愿者到火车站提供服务。请你以学生会的名义用英语写一则书面通知。内容主要包括:1. 时间:11月18日(星期日), 上午8:00-11:00；2. 地点:福州火车站；3. 活动内容:捡垃圾、信息咨询、帮助使用自助售票机等；4. 注意事项。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； rubbish（垃圾），ticket vending machine（自动售票机），volunteer（志愿者），passenger（乘客）， baggage（行李），service（服务）及benefit（获益）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有pick up（捡），provide sth for sb（为某人提供某物），a variety of (种种)，in addition（此外），on time(按时)以及benefit from（从……中获益），而且还使用了宾语从句“Welcome to join us, and we believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.”及“In addition, some volunteers can teach passengers how to use the ticket vending machine.”，非谓语动词“To help students learn more about sharing, volunteers in our school will be organized to offer service at Fu Zhou Railway Station.”及“Please remember to come to the station on time.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
Notice
Volunteer Activity at Fu Zhou Railway Station
To help students learn more about sharing, volunteers in our school will be organized to offer service at Fu Zhou Railway Station.
The activity will be held from 8 a.m. to 11a.m this Sunday morning on November 18th . Volunteers can offer a variety of services. Some can pick up rubbish on the ground and provide information for passengers. Some can help the passengers with heavy baggage. In addition, some volunteers can teach passengers how to use the ticket vending machine.
Please remember to come to the station on time. Welcome to join us, and we believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.
Student Council
假定你是李华，上周日你校学生会组织了一批同学到公园开展环境保护志愿活动。 请你为校广播台写一篇英文报道，内容包括:
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动时间、地点和内容(捡垃圾、宣讲环保知识)；
3. 活动反响。 注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Environmental Protection — We Care, We Can
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文报道，详细描述在公园开展的环境保护志愿活动。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：三段式
第一段写活动目的； 第二段写活动地点和内容； 第三段写活动反响。
要求：
内容包括如下几个方面：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动时间、地点和内容(捡垃圾、宣讲环保知识)；
3. 活动反响。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
raise public awareness of, carry out, search for, preach to the public, related to, environmental protection, good feedback.
第三步：连词成句
Raise public awareness of environmental protection.
The Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly.
They preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
The activities received very good feedback.
The volunteers and the people in the park said they had learned more about environmental protection.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系： also，Both…and…
2.表目的关系：In order to
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，确保行文流畅。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In order to raise public awareness of environmental protection, the Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
该句中用短语“in order to do”的形式作目的状语。
[高分句型2] They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly.
该句中that引导定语从句，先行词是the garbage。
【答案】Environmental Protection—We Care, We Can
In order to raise public awareness of environmental protection, the Student Union organized some students as volunteers to carry out a special task last Sunday.
They went to the Central Park to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly. They also preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
The activities received very good feedback. Both the volunteers and the people in the park said they had learned more about environmental protection.
假定你是李华，为助力你市创建国家卫生城市(National Health City)，上周末你校学生会组织了一次志愿者活动，到你校附近社区帮助打扫卫生。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动详情；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Volunteer Activity
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。为助力创建国家卫生城市(National Health City)，上周末校学生会组织了一次到校附近社区打扫卫生的志愿者活动，要求考生就此活动为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】
词汇积累
呈现新面貌：take on a new look→presenting a new look
热情地：warmly→affectionately
完全的：thorough→complete
参与：participation→concernment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The communities took on a new look.
拓展句：Although the volunteers were very tired, the communities took on a new look.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The activity was so warmly welcomed that more than 500 students signed up for it.( so…that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
All the volunteers were divided into several groups and they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents and the workers do a thorough cleaning.(关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【答案】A Volunteer Activity
To help our hometown build a National Health City, the Students’ Union of our school organized a volunteer activity last weekend.
The activity was so warmly welcomed that more than 500 students signed up for it. All the volunteers were divided into several groups and they went to the nearby communities, where they helped the residents and the workers do a thorough cleaning. The communities took on a new look.
This activity was highly thought of, because it not only made a difference, but also raised the students’ sense of participation.
上个月我校某班学生去当地一家孤儿院（orphanage）开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。
要点：1.时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)；
2.孤儿院孩子们的反应；
3.简短评论。
要求：1.词数100左右；2.可合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children’s bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children’s lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
假如你是李华，上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院（orphanage）开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。
要点：1.时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)
2.孤儿院孩子们的反应；
3.简短评论。
要求：1.词数100左右
2.可合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children’s bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children’s lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
假如你是李华，上周六你们班组织了一次志愿者活动，去敬老院看望慰问老人。根据下表中所提供的信息，讲述这次活动的情况，并谈谈自己的感受。 提示词：gerocomium 敬老院， the elderly 老年人
Time 9:00---11:00, last Saturday
Place the gerocomium near our school
Volunteer work took a lot of presents to, performed program(表演节目)，
talked with the elderly，
……..
feeling (感受) ……..
要求：1. 不少于60词；2.内容要点可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头已经给出。
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）.
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）. My classmates and I went to the gerocomim near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives.
All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue.
假定你是李华，你校近期将组织开展一次垃圾分类志愿者活动，请给你的英国留学生朋友Max写一封邮件，邀请他参加．内容包括：
1．活动时间及地点；
2．活动内容及目的；
参考词汇：垃圾分类： garbage classification
注意：1．词数 100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Max，
In order to raise awareness of the protection of the environment， our school will organize a voluntary activity this Sunday morning．I am writing to invite you to join us．（写信目的）
We will gather at the gate of Jinjiang Park at eight and do some voluntary work in groups．Activities will include putting up posters, telling the citizens the importance of protecting the environment and picking up rubbish in the park and do some garbage classification. We hope to make our community a better place by working in our spare time If you are interested and available, please meet us there on time．Don't forget to wear light clothes and bring some tools．（活动时间，地点及目的）
Looking forward to your reply．（期望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
假如你是李华，春节期间，你所在的志愿者小组就如何在疫情期间科学防疫进行了一次线上服务活动。请你根据以下要点提示给外文网写一篇新闻报道：1. 活动形式和内容2. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：the novel coronavirus 新型冠状病毒
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就寒假期间进行的科学防疫线上活动给外文网写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 活动形式和内容
2. 活动反响
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
prevent/ be anxious about/ invite sb. to do sth./ range from…to…/ in addition/ take turns to do sth./ provide sb. with sth./ confidence/ appeal to sb. to do sth./ in the form of/ think highly of/ joint efforts
第三步：连词成句
1. To educate more people how to prevent the novel coronavirus and protect themselves, we volunteers organized an online voluntary activity during the Spring Festival.
2. Knowing many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, including correct way to wash hands, indoor body-building exercises and so on.
3. Additionally, we take turns to answer people's questions online, which not only eased their anxiety but also offered them confidence.
4. More importantly, we called on people to limit their outdoor activities, avoid crowded places and wear a mask, in the form of videos, pictures, cartoons, etc.
5. This activity was highly thought of, giving more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【答案】An online voluntary activity
In an attempt to educate more people how to prevent the novel coronavirus and protect themselves, an online voluntary activity was organized by our group of volunteers during the Spring Festival.
Knowing that many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, ranging from the correct way to wash hands to indoor body-building exercises. In addition, we take turns to answer people's questions online, which not only eased their anxiety but also provided them with confidence. More importantly, we appealed to people to minimize outdoor activities, avoid crowded places and wear a mask, in the form of videos, pictures, cartoons, etc.
This activity was highly praised, which gave more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Knowing that many people were too anxious about the outbreak of the disease, we invited professional experts to give online instructions, ranging from the correct way to wash hands to indoor body-building exercises.中that引导宾语从句；This activity was highly praised, which gave more people confidence that the novel virus could be controlled and finally defeated with our joint efforts.中which引导非限制性定语从句，that引导同位语从句。
假定你是某国际学校的校英语报记者李华，春节将至，你校学生会于上周日组织了部分志愿者去到当地农村看望因疫情影响而无法与父母团聚的留守儿童。请你就此活动写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：留守儿童 left-behind children
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文报道，报道你校学生会于上周日组织的去当地农村看望因疫情影响而无法与父母团聚的留守儿童的活动。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍活动目的；
2. 介绍活动过程；
3. 介绍活动反响。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a group of; pay a visit to…; set out for…; help sb. to do sth.; teach sb. to do sth.; bring sth. to sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. Last Sunday morning, we gathered at the school gate and set out for a rural area in high spirits.
2. We arrived there at nine and the children welcomed us warmly.
3. We introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better.
4. We organized some entertainment activities like teaching those children to sing and dance.
5. It not only gave us an opportunity to experience a different life but also brought some warmth to those left-behind children.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：firstly; in the end
2.表并列补充关系：and; additionally; not only…but also…
3.表因果关系：because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【答案】 Volunteers’ Visit to Local Left-behind Children
With the approach of the Spring Festival, a group of volunteers from our school’s Students’ Union paid a visit to those left-behind children whose parents cannot return home because of the epidemic situation, aiming to show our care and help them have a happy holiday.
Last Sunday morning, we gathered at the school gate and set out for a rural area in high spirits. We arrived there at nine and the children welcomed us warmly. Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better. Additionally, we organized some entertainment activities like teaching those children to sing and dance. In the end, we sent books and school things to them as New Year’s presents.
This activity was really impressive. It not only gave us an opportunity to experience a different life but also brought some warmth to those left-behind children.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. With the approach of the Spring Festival, a group of volunteers from our school’s Students’ Union paid a visit to those left-behind children whose parents cannot return home because of the epidemic situation, aiming to show our care and help them have a happy holiday. （由关系代词whose引导限制性定语从句，先行词为“left-behind children”）
[高分句型2]. Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, which helped us to know each other better. （由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
singing and dancing together.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
【详解】
略
图片
9．书面表达
上周日，你们学校组织了一次志愿者活动。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给校报写一封信，报道相关情况，要点包括：
1. 活动地点：文化广场；
2. 活动形式：发传单、做演讲；
3. 活动内容：宣传地震常识和防震知识；
4. 参加活动的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：leaflet传单
Dear Editor，
We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday.
Best wishes!
【答案】
Dear Editor，
We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passers by from which they can learn what the earthquake is and how to protect themselves against the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and told them to take action in a right and efficient way. Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs.
We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，上周日你和同学一起参加学生会组织的志愿者活动，到附近社区进行义务劳动，受到社区居民的欢迎。请根据下列活动内容用英语给校园英语报写一则报道。
1. 打扫卫生；
2. 浇灌花木；
3. 帮老人们做家务；
4. 做戒烟宣传；
5. 为孩子们辅导功课；
提示词：义务劳动 voluntary labor 社区 community
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Students’ Voluntary Work in a Neighbourhood
Last weekend, some students took part in an activity organized by the Students’ Union. They did some voluntary work in a nearby neighbourhood. Once they got there, they divided themselves into small groups to do different jobs. Some did some cleaning and watered the plants; Some coached pupils in English; Some helped the elderly with their housework; Others were busy walking around to make the public aware of the harm of smoking.
The activity was much praised by the neighbourhood and the students also enjoyed it. They got to know the society better and learned how to help the people around.

展开更多......

收起↑