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Unit 7 Being a Smart Shopper 单元书面表达
一、书面表达
1．随着电脑的普及和网络的发展，越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。网购有什么优点吸引那么多人去尝试呢？你觉得网购利大于弊，还是弊大于利？请以“My view on shopping online”为题写一篇英语作文。
要求：90词左右。
My view on shopping online
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2．写作
请根据下列要点写一篇60个词左右的英语短文。
要点: 玲玲的妈妈很喜欢在超市购物, 妈妈认为在超市购物方便、安全; 货全人多, 很热闹; 买衣服可以试穿, 也可以谈论价格; 她打算下周带上玲玲给她买一件连衣裙。
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3．网购已成为人们热衷的购物方式，人们轻点鼠标就能完成。假如你是校英文报刊的记
者，你就这一现象对你班同学进行了采访。请结合下面表格的提示内容，以Online shopping in people's eyes为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，发表在报刊上。
观点 原因
喜欢 方便、便宜
不喜欢 商品不真实、付款不安全
Online shopping in people's eyes
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4．请根据下列要点写一篇60词左右的英语短文。
要点：1）林林正在超市买礼物；
2）这个周末是林林姐姐的生日；
3）她买了一件漂亮的连衣裙；
4）她还买了像草莓、香肠之类的别的东西。
要求：不要逐字逐句翻译；可进行适当拓展，使之连贯、通顺。
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5．近几年来，网购越来越受人们欢迎，它正悄悄地改变着人们的生活。请根据要求，以“Online shopping”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文，谈谈网购的优点和缺点。
1）网购成为一种时尚；
2）优点：不用出门就能买到东西；节省时间；价格低等；
3）缺点：网上的商品与实际不符；网上支付存在安全隐患等。
Online shopping
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6．随着网络技术的发展，网上购物的优势愈加凸显，越来越多的人更愿意选择网上购物。请你结合表格中内容，谈谈网上购物的优势。
Online shopping Advantages
Buy almost everything Shop at any time Compare prices easily …
要求:
1）包含表格中的所有信息，并至少增加一个优势；
2）词数：70左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Online shopping is becoming more and more popular among people.
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Online shopping is changing our way of life.
7．随着网络的发展，人们的消费观念有所转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。请你就"网上购物"这个话题展开讨论，写一篇英语短文。短文需包含网上购物的优缺点。70词左右。
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8． 根据提示写一篇关于一个新的购物中心的短文。
要求：
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点；
2. 可以适当发挥;
3. 词数:70左右。
The New Shopping Mall
location(位置) next to the bus station
shops in it a supermarket (on the first floor), clothes shops, one sports shop, restaurants (on the top floor)
feeling interesting
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答案解析部分
1．My view on shopping online
Shopping online is a popular way of shopping now. Many young people like to shop online because offline shopping takes lots of time and we are often very tired after a long time of shopping. Another reason is that there is a surprising sale on the products in the online shops.
But there are also many problems. For example, we can't see the real products, so we may feel unhappy after we get the bad products. Sometimes the products which we buy aren't as good as they really are.
So we should be careful when we buy something online.
这是一篇命题作文。主要是通过网购与线下购物的对比，在购物时间和价格上阐明网购的优点。弊端是看不到真正的产品，有时我们买的产品不如实际的好。最后提示大家网购时要小心。用第一人称和一般现在时来写作。要适当使用过渡词，使文章上下句联系紧密。
文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。 shopping online网购 和 offline shopping 线下购物； after a long time of shopping. 长时间购物之后，介词短语； But there are also many problems. there be句型的使用； we can't see the real products, so we may feel unhappy after we get the bad products. 并列句的使用；定语从句和形容词原级的使用； So we should be careful when we buy something online. 时间状语从句的运用。 还运用了but ，so ， For example 等使上下文衔接的更好。
2．例文：
Lingling's mother likes shopping in the supermarket. Shopping is her favourite hobby. She thinks there are all kinds of products in the supermarket. It's easy to buy some things. She says "It's safe that I give them money and they give me the products. "There are so many people there and the supermarket is very lively. People can choose their favourite clothes and try them on. Then talk about the price. She will buy a dress for Lingling next week.
提纲作文注意：
1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。
3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
3．One possible version：
On line shopping in people's eyes
Do you like online shopping Here're some ideas of my classmates．
Some students like online shopping．They think it is easy．They don't need to go to shops but can buy almost everything at any time．And most things are cheap．
Some students don't like it．They think products on the Internet look very nice．But sometimes they're not good when you get them．And paying over the Internet isn't always safe.
题目要求写一篇关于网上购物的文章，并给出了采访调查结果。首先同学们要注意到文章要结构完整，不能只是简单地将调查结果罗列出来，同学们应当在开头将访问调查的背景描述出来或是表达出具有概括意义的语句，让读者知道你写的是什么内容。接下来再将调查结果用恰当的语言表述出来，注意使用适当的连接词使文章语言顺畅。
范文比较规整、简单，同学们可以根据自己的情况参考借鉴范文。我们可以发现范文中不只是题目表格中给出的内容，而是加以拓展了。如“They don't need to go to shops but can buy almost everything at any time．”这样一方面可以扩充字数，另一方面也使文章更加的丰满。同学们可以学习这一点，适当拓展文章内容，但也不要过于繁冗而显得累赘。
4． Now Lingling is shopping in the supermarket. She wants to buy a present for her sister because this weekend will be her sister's birthday. She walks around the supermarket and sees a very beautiful dress. She thinks her sister would like it. The dress is fifty yuan, and she pays for it. She also buys something else like strawberries and sausages.
这是一篇提纲的作文。根据所给要点写一篇60词左右的短文，先写林林正在超市购物，再写他为姐姐的生日买了连衣裙、草莓和香肠之类的东西。写作时主要用第三人称和一般现在时，用上适当的连接词和过渡词。
考查书面表达，文章开头用了现在进行时，交待清了时间、地点和事件，使文章简单明了。She wants to buy a present for her sister because this weekend will be her sister's birthday.原因状语从句的使用，增强了文章的表达档次。and、also等词的使用，使文章连贯流畅、过渡自然。
5．Online shopping
Shopping online is becoming more and more popular now. It is changing our way of life.
Shopping online has lots of advantages. We can buy almost everything on the Internet at home. First, it helps us save time. Second, we may also save money because the things online are much cheaper. Third, we can compare the prices of the same product.
But it has some disadvantages. First, when we are shopping online, we can't see the products. Second, paying over the Internet isn't always safe.
So, it's better for us to pay more attention to shopping online.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 " Online shopping "为题，谈谈网购的优点和缺点。写作内容包括网购的趋势、优点和缺点。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称复数。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对网购的趋势、优点和缺点三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和使用的lots of大量的，save money省钱，pay attention to注意等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
6．Online shopping is becoming more and more popular among people.
There are many advantages of online shopping. First, we can buy almost everything online. There are thousands of stores on the Internet and we can choose anything we like. Second, we can shop at any time. We can buy things when we have a computer or a mobile phone. Third, we can compare the prices easily so we can buy good things at good prices. Fourth, we don't need to take things home by ourselves. We can receive them a few days later by post.
Online shopping is changing our way of life.
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍网购的优势。时态是现在进行时和一般现在时，首先介绍网上购物在人们之中变得越来越受欢迎；然后具体网购的优势；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：more and more popular；there be；many advantages of；thousands of；on the Internet；at any time；at good prices；need to do sth.；by oneself；by post等。比较级Online shopping is becoming more and more popular among people.；there be结构There are many advantages of online shopping.；定语从句There are thousands of stores on the Internet and we can choose anything we like.；状语从句Second, we can shop at any time. We can buy things when we have a computer or a mobile phone. Third, we can compare the prices easily so we can buy good things at good prices.的运用为文章增色不少。连词first，second，third，fourth，and，so，or的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
7．Because of the Internet, many people begin to enjoy shopping online. It is popular now and changes our way of life.
Shopping online has many advantages. On the Internet, you can buy what you want. There are many kinds of things. You don't have to see many people at the supermarket and you won't get tired. You can save not only time but also money.
It also has some disadvantages. You can only see pictures. You can't see the real products. It's easy for you to buy what you don't need.
本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照表格内要点提示介绍网络购物的优缺点，写作时需要涵盖表格中的全部要点，切忌遗漏。时态一般现在时，第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分段叙述，第一段点明主题，第二段介绍网络购物的优点，如方便快捷、商品种类多、价格透明等；第三段介绍网络购物的缺点，例如无法直接接触商品、可能存在安全风险或质量问题 ；最后一段总结全文或发表个人感悟。 这样的结构能够使文章条理清晰，观点明确，同时确保内容全面且符合题目要求的70词左右。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全， 论点明确。文章首先简要介绍了网上购物的普及及其对生活方式的影响，接着列举了网上购物的优点，如商品种类丰富、节省时间和金钱、避免人群拥挤等。随后，作者指出了网上购物的一些缺点，例如只能看到图片而无法直接接触实物，容易购买不必要的东西。文中使用了一些简洁有力的好词好句，如"changes our way of life"（改变了我们的生活方式），"many kinds of things"（各种各样的商品），"save not only time but also money"（不仅节省时间还节省金钱）以及"it's easy for you to buy what you don't need"（你很容易买到不需要的东西）。这些表达使文章内容充实且易于理解。
8．One possible version:
The New Shopping Mall
There is a new shopping mall near our school. It's next to the bus station and it's easy to find.
There is a supermarket on the first floor, so it is convenient for us to buy almost everything in it. There are many clothes shops in it. Girls like them very much. But there aren't many shops for boys. There's only one sports shop. I think there should be more shops for boys. There are many restaurants on the top floor. You can eat different kinds of foods there. My favourite is Sichuan food.
The mall is an interesting place to meet friends and have fun.

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