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B2U3 The Internet
Reading for writing
Online safety/How to stay safe online
1.清单词。
(1)blog n.博客 vi.写博客 (2)avoid v.避免 (3)experience n.体验
(4)expert n.专家 (5)blogger n.博主 (6)uncomfortable adj.不舒服的
(7)site n.网站 (8) immediately adv.立即 (9) privacy n.隐私
(10) address n.地址 (11) common adj.常见的 (12) polite adj.有礼貌的
(13) excuse n.借口 (14) rude adj.粗鲁的，无力的 (15) target n.目标
(16) troll n.发挑衅帖子的人 (17)cyberbully n.网络霸凌 (18)false adj.假的
(19) mean adj.刻薄的 (20)particular adj.特定的 (21) embarrassing adj.让人尴尬的
(22) likely adj.可能的 (23) attack v.攻击 (24) joke n.玩笑
(25) upset adj.心烦的
2.清词块。
(1)would blog about sth.想写关于某事的博客 (2)stay safe保持安全
(3)on the Internet在网上 (4)first of all首先
(5) the golden rule of … ……的黄金法则 (6) post comments发表评论
(7) click on sth.点击…… (8) protect one’s privacy保护某人的隐私
(9) give out公布 (10) steal one’s identity窃取某人的身份
(11) identity theft身份盗窃 (12) in order to do sth.为了做某事
(13) stir up trouble挑起麻烦 (14) be mean to sb.对某人刻薄
(15) be directed at sb.针对某人 (16)chat room聊天室
(17) make trouble惹麻烦 (18) make fun of取笑
3.清句子。
(1) Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet 【分析】本句谓语动词有______个，分别是_________________________________________, 第一个I在句子做______语，thought做__________语，所以I’d blog about …on the Internet 是_________从句，该从句省略连接词的条件是____________________________________________。 that has been asked many times是that引导的___________从句，修饰______________________, 指__________(人/物), that在从句中做______语，还可替换为关系代词_____________,该从句中谓语动词是___________________________,属于__________________________(时态和语态), how do you stay…on the Internet 在句中做__________语，对前面的名词question进行解释或补充说明，and连接两个并列的__________________，分别是____________________。 【翻译】_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ (2) I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two. 【分析】本句谓语动词有_____个，分别是____________________,连词有____个，即________, 表___________,many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two中谓语动词是____________ _________, 属于_________________________(时态),该句中该时态的标志词是_____________，意为_________________。 【翻译】__________________________________________________________________________ (3) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 【分析】there’s the golden rule of the Internet是_______句，there’s表示_____________。If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable是_________引导的_______________从句，if在从句中做____________语，that makes you feel uncomfortable是_________引导的___ ___________从句，修饰__________________,指________(人/物),that在从句在做______语， _________(可以/不可以)替换为which,原因是_________________________________________ ________________________________________________,主句leave the site immediately是______________句，该句式的特点是_______________________________________________ ________________________________。 【翻译】________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ (4) Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don’t want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. 【分析】Being online是____________________做_______语，常考知识点是______________ _________________________,being rude是____________________做_______________的_____ 语, and连接了前后两个并列的_____________句。 【翻译】_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ (5) A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. 【分析】本句谓语动词有_____个，分别是______________________,连词有_____个，即_________,who posts comments or questions是________引导的__________从句，修饰________ _______________，指________(人/物), who在从句中做_______语，__________(可以/不可以)替换为关系代词that, 原因是________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________, in order to stir up trouble online是__________________做__________语。 【翻译】_________________________________________________________________________ (6) Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. 【分析】本句谓语动词有______个，分别是______________________,连词有____个，即____ ________,so that they can stay on a site是__________引导的__________________从句。 【注意】so that… 以至于，引导______________________ so + adj.+ that… 如此……以至于，that引导_________________________ 【翻译】________________________________________________________________________ (7) Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. 【分析】本句谓语动词有_____个，分别是__________________,连词有___个，即______,连接前后两个__________句，表__________。something mean意思是____________________,属于 ___________修饰__________________,所以____________要后置。 【翻译】________________________________________________________________________ (8) However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 【分析】本句是_______________________________的结构，表示_____________________。 【注意】likely adj.可能的 →unlikely adj.不可能的 be likely/unlikely to do sth.可能/不可能做某事 be more likely to do sth.更可能做某事 be less likely to do sth.更不可能做某事 【翻译】________________________________________________________________________ (9) Mean comments were being posted by someone we didn’t know. 【分析】本句谓语动词有____个，分别是_____________________________, 主句谓语动词是 _______________, 属于_________________________(时态/语态),we didn’t know是__________从句，修饰______________________,指______(人/物),从句中主语是_____,谓语是__________, 缺_____语，所以该从句可以省略关系代词__________。 【翻译】_________________________________________________________________________ (10) I think he or she was only trying to make trouble. 【分析】本句谓语动词有_____个，分别是___________________, he or she was only trying to make trouble是___________从句，该从句可省略连接词的条件是________________________ _________________________________。 【翻译】________________________________________________________________________ (11) A photo of her had been posted online and she was being made fun of. 【分析】本句谓语动词有___个，分别是___________________________________, and连接前后两个并列的___________句，均属于_________________的结构，had been posted属于______ ____________________________(时态/语态),该时态的基本结构是________________________, was being made属于______________________________(时态/语态)，该时态的基本结构是____ _________________。 【翻译】_________________________________________________________________________
4.写作指导
博客大部分是议论文，是针对某一问题或事件进行分析、评论，表明自己观点的一种文体。 一篇完整的博客应包含标题(title)，介绍(introduction)，主体(body)和结语(ending)。 (1)标题：简洁有吸引力，可以用动词短语，名词短语或问句作为标题 (2)介绍：引出博客的话题以及论点 (3)主体：分析、论证论点，表明看法 (4)结语：期待读者评论
5.实战演练
请根据以下要点以“ Online Shopping Safety”为题写一篇关于如何安全地网上购物的帖子并发表在你的博客上。词数100左右。 1.挑选你熟悉的购物网站； 2.使用较为复杂的密码； 3.勿使用公共电脑购物。
6.写作步骤
第一步 审题定方向 定主题定文体定人称定时态定要点
第二步 谋布局写句子 列框架列要点 写句子(翻译及仿写)标题：动词短语，名词短语和问句为主介绍(第一段):提出话题或现象1.(仿写) Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet 今天我想在博客上讨论一个已经被问很多次的问题 — 如何安全网购？ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 2.这是我知道的一些技巧。 _______________________________________________________________主体(第二段):给出建议3.(仿写) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you fell uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 首先，互联网上有一条黄金法则：如果你在上网购物，使用你熟悉的网站。 (be familiar with sth.对……熟悉) _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 4.(仿写) Second, protect your privacy. 第二，保护你的隐私。使用一个复杂的密码并保存好。(password n.密码) _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 5.不要使用你的生日或者电话号码作为你的密码。 _______________________________________________________________ 6.(仿写)However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 密码越复杂，你就越安全。 _______________________________________________________________ 7.第三，绝不使用公共电脑去网购，否则你的隐私将会被那台电脑记录。(record v.记录) _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________结语(第三段):欢迎读者评论8.(仿写) Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below! 你网购时有不好的经历吗？或者你有一些保持网购安全的好建议吗？在下面发表你的评论。 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
第三步 誊抄 _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________
7.同题转换
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter写信向你询问有关安全网购的建议，请结合实际，写信给出你的建议。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ (得知你想要了解更多关于安全网购的知识，我写信就如何安全网购给你提供一些可行的建议。) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you go shopping online, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Second, protect your privacy. Use a strong password and keep it well. Don’t use your birthday and phone number as your password. The more difficult the password is, the safer you are. Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers. _____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ (我希望我所说的将对你有所帮助) Yours, Li Hua
3.清句子。
(1) Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet 【分析】本句谓语动词有5个，分别是thought, would blog, has been asked, stay和avoid，第一个I在句子做主语，thought做谓语，所以I’d blog about …on the Internet 是宾语从句，该从句省略连接词的条件是从句中不缺任何成分，且意思完整。that has been asked many times是that引导的定语从句，修饰先行词a question,指物(人/物), that在从句中做主语，还可替换为关系代词which,该从句中谓语动词是has been asked,属于现在完成时的被动语态(时态和语态), how do you stay…on the Internet 在句中做同位语，对前面的名词question进行解释或补充说明，and连接两个并列的谓语动词，分别是stay和avoid。 【翻译】今天我想在博客上讨论一个已经被问过很多次的问题—你如何在网上保持安全并避免在互联网上出现不好的体验？ (2) I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是am和have taught, 连词有1个，即but, 表转折, many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two中谓语动词是have taught, 属于现在完成时(时态),该句中该时态的标志词是many years，意为多年来。 【翻译】我不是专家，但多年来作为一个博主，我学到了一两件事。 (3) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 【分析】there’s the golden rule of the Internet是存现/在句，there’s表示有……。If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable是if引导的条件状语从句，if在从句中做条件状语，that makes you feel uncomfortable是that引导的定语从句，修饰先行词something,指物(人/物),that在从句在做主语，不可以(可以/不可以)替换为which,原因是先行词是all, something, everything, anything, nothing, little, much, few等指物的不定代词时，只用that不用which。主句leave the site immediately是祈使句，该句式的特点是祈使句以动词原形开头，省略主语you。 【翻译】首先，互联网上有一条黄金法则：如果你看到或读到一些让你感到不舒服的东西，立即离开网站。 (4) Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don’t want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. 【分析】Being online是动名词短语做主语，常考知识点是动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数,being rude是动名词短语做介词for的宾语, and连接了前后两个并列的简单句。 【翻译】上网并不是无礼的借口，你也不想成为发挑衅帖子的人和网络霸凌者的目标。 (5) A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是is和posts,连词有1个，即who, who posts comments or questions是who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词a person，指人(人/物), who在从句中做主语，不可以(可以/不可以)替换为关系代词that, 原因是先行词是person, people, those时，宜用who不宜用that, in order to stir up trouble online是不定式短语做目的状语。 【翻译】网络喷子是为了在网上挑起麻烦而发布评论或问题的人。 (6) Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是use和can stay,连词有1个，即so that, so that they can stay on a site是so that 引导的目的状语从句。 【注意】so that… 以至于，引导目的状语从句 so + adj.+ that… 如此……以至于，that引导结果状语从句 【翻译】网络喷子经常使用几个假名字，这样他们就可以留在一个网站上。 (7) Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是will write和is,连词有1个，即but, 连接前后两个简单句，表转折。something mean意思是一些刻薄的东西,属于形容词修饰不定代词,所以形容词要后置。 【翻译】像网络喷子一样，网络霸凌者也会写一些刻薄的东西，但通常是针对特定的人。 (8) However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 【分析】本句是the+比较级……, the + 比较级……的结构，表示越……，越……。 【注意】likely adj.可能的 →unlikely adj.不可能的 be likely/unlikely to do sth.可能/不可能做某事 be more likely to do sth.更可能做某事 be less likely to do sth.更不可能做某事 【翻译】然而，你越有礼貌，就越不可能受到攻击。 (9) Mean comments were being posted by someone we didn’t know. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是were being posted和didn’t know, 主句谓语动词是were being posted, 属于过去进行时的被动语态(时态/语态),we didn’t know是定语从句，修饰先行词someone,指人(人/物),从句中主语是we,谓语是didn’t know, 缺宾语，所以该从句可以省略关系代词who/whom。 【翻译】一些我们不认识的人发表了刻薄的评论。 (10) I think he or she was only trying to make trouble. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是think和was trying, he or she was only trying to make trouble是宾语从句，该从句可省略连接词的条件是从句中不缺任何成分，句意完整。 【翻译】我认为他或她只是想制造麻烦。 (11) A photo of her had been posted online and she was being made fun of. 【分析】本句谓语动词有2个，分别是had been posted和was being made, and连接前后两个并列的简单句，均属于主语+谓语的结构，had been posted属于过去完成时的被动语态(时态/语态),该时态的基本结构是had been done, was being made属于过去进行时的被动语态(时态/语态)，该时态的基本结构是was/were being done。 【翻译】她的一张照片被贴在网上，她一直被人取笑。
介绍(第一段):提出话题或现象 1.(仿写) Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet 今天我想在博客上讨论一个已经被问很多次的问题 — 如何安全网购？ Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how to stay safe when shopping online 2.这是我知道的一些技巧。 Here are some tips I know for you.
主体(第二段):给出建议 3.(仿写) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you fell uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 首先，互联网上有一条黄金法则：如果你在上网购物，使用你熟悉的网站。 (be familiar with sth.对……熟悉) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you go shopping online, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. 4.(仿写) Second, protect your privacy. 第二，保护你的隐私。使用一个复杂的密码并保存好。(password n.密码) Second, protect your privacy. Use a strong password and keep it well. 5.不要使用你的生日或者电话号码作为你的密码。 Don’t use your birthday and phone number as your password. 6.(仿写)However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 密码越复杂，你就越安全。 The more difficult the password is, the safer you are. 7.第三，绝不使用公共电脑去网购，否则你的隐私将会被那台电脑记录。(record v.记录) Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers.
结语(第三段):欢迎读者评论 8.(仿写) Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below! 你网购时有不好的经历吗？或者你有一些保持网购安全的好建议吗？在下面发表你的评论。 Have you had any bad experience when shopping online or do you have some good advice for staying safe when shopping online Post your comments below!

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