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Unit 7 A Special Day 话题写作拓展
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【话题分析】
本单元聚焦 “值得记忆的一天”，围绕这一主题进行写作时，需紧扣特殊日子里的经历展开。时态以一般过去时为主，通过第一人称视角，清晰地阐述事件发生的时间、地点、过程以及自身感受。写作中，要注重细节描述，使文章生动形象，让读者能真切感受到这一天的特殊性。
【写作实例】
学校英语社团组织了一次以 “A Special Day in My Life” 为主题的写作分享活动，请结合以下要点，写一篇约 90 词的英语短文参与分享。
特殊日子的基本信息：时间、天气、地点。
在这一天发生的具体事情。
此次经历给你带来的收获和感悟。
【思路点拨】
特殊日子信息：确定一个具体的时间，
如 “It was a sunny Sunday last month”，明确天气状况，地点可以是有特殊意义的地方，像 “the local community center”。
具体事情：详细描述在这个地方所参与的活动，
比如 “Volunteered at the local community center, helped organize a charity sale, met different people”。
收获感悟：思考此次经历对自己的影响，
例如 “It made me more confident in communicating with others. I learned the importance of helping those in need”。
【教材典句运用】
“We saw the plant make dirty water clean again.”
（观察到事物的变化过程，可用于描述活动中的发现）
“It was tiring but I enjoyed working with my hands.”
（表达对活动的感受，辛苦却有乐趣）
【经典范文】
A Special Day in My Life
It was a sunny Sunday last month. I went to the local community center. There, I volunteered to help organize a charity sale. At first, I was a bit nervous when talking to people to promote the items. But as time went on, I got more comfortable. I met many kind - hearted people who were willing to donate money for those in need.
I also helped sort out the donated goods and set up the stalls. Although I was tired at the end of the day, I felt really fulfilled. This experience made me more confident in communicating with others. I learned the importance of helping those in need. It was truly a special day that I'll always remember.
【亮点点评】
时间地点清晰：用 “last month” 和 “the local community center” 明确了事件发生的时间和地点。
活动描述具体：“volunteered to help organize a charity sale” 以及后续的工作内容，使活动过程丰富详实。
感受感悟深刻：“made me more confident” 和 “learned the importance” 表达了活动带来的收获，升华主题。
【同步检测】
假设你是林晓，学校英语校刊正在征集以 “A Day I'll Never Forget at School” 为题的文章，请你投稿。内容包括在学校这一天发生的特别的课程、有趣的活动、遇到的困难及解决办法，以及当天的心情。要求词数 80 左右，可适当增加细节，文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
上周，你和家人一起去了乡村度假。请根据下面表格的提示信息，写一篇题为 “A Wonderful Countryside Vacation” 的英语短文。
| 时间 | 上周 |
| 参加者 | 你和家人 |
| 地点 | 乡村 |
| 活动 | 采摘水果、钓鱼、体验乡村生活……|
| 感受 |……|
要求：语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥，词数 60 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Wonderful Countryside Vacation
Last week, I went on a vacation with my family to the countryside.
A wonderful Countryside Vacation
Last week, I went on a vacation with my family to the countryside. We had a great time there. We picked a lot of fresh fruits like apples and strawberries. My father and I went fishing by the river. We also experienced the real countryside life, such as feeding the chickens. It was so interesting. We all felt really relaxed and enjoyed the peaceful environment. It was a wonderful vacation.
假如你是李阳，上个月学校组织了一次去科技馆的参观活动。请以 “A Visit to the Science Museum” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示问题：
(1) What did you see in the museum
(2) What interesting things did you do there
(3) How did you feel about the visit
提示词语：learn a lot, amazing inventions, excited
要求：词数 60 左右，可适当发挥。
A Visit to the Science Museum
I'm Li Yang. Last month, our school organized a visit to the science museum. In the museum, I saw many amazing inventions, like the earliest computers. We also joined in some science shows. We learned how to make a small robot move. It was so much fun. I learned a lot from this visit. I was really excited and wanted to learn more about science.
你叫王丽，你的英国笔友 Emily 想了解你一次特别的周末经历。请你给她写一封 60 词左右的邮件，介绍这个周末你去了哪里，做了什么，以及你的感受。
Dear Emily,
假如你叫张峰，请根据表格中所给的信息写一则旅行日记。词数不少于 60。
|Date |November 10th, Saturday|
|Weather|cloudy|
|Place |the Natural History Museum, a nearby park|
|Food |sandwiches, fruits|
|Feeling |knowledgeable, relaxed|
Saturday, November 10th Cloudy
Saturday, November 10th Cloudy
Today I went to the Natural History Museum with my parents. We saw many interesting fossils and learned a lot about nature. After that, we went to a nearby park. We had sandwiches and fruits for lunch. We walked around the park and enjoyed the fresh air. I felt very knowledgeable after visiting the museum and relaxed in the park. It was a great day.
Zhang Feng
【真题链接】
假如你是刘悦，上周末你参加了学校组织的历史文化村落考察活动。请根据下面的图示写一篇短文，介绍这次考察之旅。
How （乘坐大巴）；
Weather（阳光明媚）；
How long （一整天）；
What did you do （参观古老建筑、听老人讲过去的故事、了解传统手工艺）；
Feeling（收获满满，对历史更感兴趣）
要求：短文须包含以上全部图片信息，可适当发挥；条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；词数 60 个左右。
A Trip to the Historic Village
真题链接
A Trip to the Historic Village
I'm Liu Yue. Last weekend, I took a trip to a historic village with my schoolmates. We went there by bus. The weather was sunny. We spent the whole day there. We visited the old buildings and learned about their history. An old man told us stories about the past. We also learned some traditional handicrafts. I felt I got a lot from this trip and became more interested in history. It was really a great trip.
古人云：“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行。” 学校组织了一次实践活动，假如你是李华，需要在班级分享会上向大家分享你的这次实践经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要点：实践活动的时间、地点；在活动中做了什么；活动后的收获和感受。
要求：参考要点内容，并适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；文中不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；词数：不少于 80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Experience of the Practical Activity
Last month, I took part in a practical activity organized by our school.
My Experience of the Practical Activity
Last month, I took part in a practical activity organized by our school. We went to a farm. When we got there, we helped the farmers plant vegetables. We also learned how to milk cows. After a day's work, I was a little tired but happy. I learned the importance of hard work and the value of food. It was a meaningful activity that I'll always remember.
假如你是陈琳，去年国庆节和家人一起参观了西安，根据下面提供的信息，以 “My National Day Trip to Xi'an” 为题，介绍你的西安之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇不少于 60 词的小短文，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：第一天：On the first day；兵马俑：Terracotta Army；第二天：On the second day；古城墙：the Ancient City Wall；第三天：On the third day；品尝美食：taste delicious food
提示：
第一天，参观兵马俑，被其壮观所震撼。
第二天，登上古城墙，骑自行车环绕城墙，欣赏城市风景。
第三天，在市区品尝各种美食，感受当地文化。
这次旅行让你对中国历史有了更深的了解，虽然疲惫但很开心。
My National Day Trip to Xi'an
My National Day Trip to Xi'an
Last National Day, I visited Xi'an with my family. On the first day, we visited the Terracotta Army. I was shocked by its grandeur. On the second day, we climbed the Ancient City Wall and rode bikes around it. The city views were great. On the third day, we tasted delicious food in the city. This trip made me know more about Chinese history. I was tired but really happy.
某英文网站正在举办以 “My Unforgettable Trip” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是赵宇，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文来投稿，分享自己难忘的旅行经历。
提示：
When and where did you go
Who did you go with And how did you go there
What interesting things happened during the trip
What did you learn from the trip
要求：
词数不少于 80 词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Unforgettable Trip
I still remember the trip I took last year. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
My Unforgettable Trip
I still remember the trip I took last year. It was truly an unforgettable experience. I went to Guilin with my parents last summer. We went there by train. During the trip, we took a boat along the Li River. The scenery was so beautiful that I couldn't stop taking pictures. We also tried some local snacks. From this trip, I learned to enjoy the beauty of nature and cherish the time with my family. It was really a great trip.Unit 7 A Special Day 话题写作拓展
原题版
【话题分析】
本单元聚焦 “值得记忆的一天”，围绕这一主题进行写作时，需紧扣特殊日子里的经历展开。时态以一般过去时为主，通过第一人称视角，清晰地阐述事件发生的时间、地点、过程以及自身感受。写作中，要注重细节描述，使文章生动形象，让读者能真切感受到这一天的特殊性。
【写作实例】
学校英语社团组织了一次以 “A Special Day in My Life” 为主题的写作分享活动，请结合以下要点，写一篇约 90 词的英语短文参与分享。
特殊日子的基本信息：时间、天气、地点。
在这一天发生的具体事情。
此次经历给你带来的收获和感悟。
【思路点拨】
特殊日子信息：确定一个具体的时间，
如 “It was a sunny Sunday last month”，明确天气状况，地点可以是有特殊意义的地方，像 “the local community center”。
具体事情：详细描述在这个地方所参与的活动，
比如 “Volunteered at the local community center, helped organize a charity sale, met different people”。
收获感悟：思考此次经历对自己的影响，
例如 “It made me more confident in communicating with others. I learned the importance of helping those in need”。
【教材典句运用】
“We saw the plant make dirty water clean again.”
（观察到事物的变化过程，可用于描述活动中的发现）
“It was tiring but I enjoyed working with my hands.”
（表达对活动的感受，辛苦却有乐趣）
【经典范文】
A Special Day in My Life
It was a sunny Sunday last month. I went to the local community center. There, I volunteered to help organize a charity sale. At first, I was a bit nervous when talking to people to promote the items. But as time went on, I got more comfortable. I met many kind - hearted people who were willing to donate money for those in need.
I also helped sort out the donated goods and set up the stalls. Although I was tired at the end of the day, I felt really fulfilled. This experience made me more confident in communicating with others. I learned the importance of helping those in need. It was truly a special day that I'll always remember.
【亮点点评】
时间地点清晰：用 “last month” 和 “the local community center” 明确了事件发生的时间和地点。
活动描述具体：“volunteered to help organize a charity sale” 以及后续的工作内容，使活动过程丰富详实。
感受感悟深刻：“made me more confident” 和 “learned the importance” 表达了活动带来的收获，升华主题。
【同步检测】
假设你是林晓，学校英语校刊正在征集以 “A Day I'll Never Forget at School” 为题的文章，请你投稿。内容包括在学校这一天发生的特别的课程、有趣的活动、遇到的困难及解决办法，以及当天的心情。要求词数 80 左右，可适当增加细节，文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
上周，你和家人一起去了乡村度假。请根据下面表格的提示信息，写一篇题为 “A Wonderful Countryside Vacation” 的英语短文。
| 时间 | 上周 |
| 参加者 | 你和家人 |
| 地点 | 乡村 |
| 活动 | 采摘水果、钓鱼、体验乡村生活……|
| 感受 |……|
要求：语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥，词数 60 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Wonderful Countryside Vacation
Last week, I went on a vacation with my family to the countryside.
假如你是李阳，上个月学校组织了一次去科技馆的参观活动。请以 “A Visit to the Science Museum” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示问题：
(1) What did you see in the museum
(2) What interesting things did you do there
(3) How did you feel about the visit
提示词语：learn a lot, amazing inventions, excited
要求：词数 60 左右，可适当发挥。
你叫王丽，你的英国笔友 Emily 想了解你一次特别的周末经历。请你给她写一封 60 词左右的邮件，介绍这个周末你去了哪里，做了什么，以及你的感受。
Dear Emily,
假如你叫张峰，请根据表格中所给的信息写一则旅行日记。词数不少于 60。
|Date |November 10th, Saturday|
|Weather|cloudy|
|Place |the Natural History Museum, a nearby park|
|Food |sandwiches, fruits|
|Feeling |knowledgeable, relaxed|
Saturday, November 10th Cloudy
【真题链接】
假如你是刘悦，上周末你参加了学校组织的历史文化村落考察活动。请根据下面的图示写一篇短文，介绍这次考察之旅。
How （乘坐大巴）；
Weather（阳光明媚）；
How long （一整天）；
What did you do （参观古老建筑、听老人讲过去的故事、了解传统手工艺）；
Feeling（收获满满，对历史更感兴趣）
要求：短文须包含以上全部图片信息，可适当发挥；条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；词数 60 个左右。
A Trip to the Historic Village
古人云：“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行。” 学校组织了一次实践活动，假如你是李华，需要在班级分享会上向大家分享你的这次实践经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要点：实践活动的时间、地点；在活动中做了什么；活动后的收获和感受。
要求：参考要点内容，并适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；文中不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；词数：不少于 80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Experience of the Practical Activity
Last month, I took part in a practical activity organized by our school.
假如你是陈琳，去年国庆节和家人一起参观了西安，根据下面提供的信息，以 “My National Day Trip to Xi'an” 为题，介绍你的西安之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇不少于 60 词的小短文，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：第一天：On the first day；兵马俑：Terracotta Army；第二天：On the second day；古城墙：the Ancient City Wall；第三天：On the third day；品尝美食：taste delicious food
提示：
第一天，参观兵马俑，被其壮观所震撼。
第二天，登上古城墙，骑自行车环绕城墙，欣赏城市风景。
第三天，在市区品尝各种美食，感受当地文化。
这次旅行让你对中国历史有了更深的了解，虽然疲惫但很开心。
My National Day Trip to Xi'an
某英文网站正在举办以 “My Unforgettable Trip” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是赵宇，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文来投稿，分享自己难忘的旅行经历。
提示：
When and where did you go
Who did you go with And how did you go there
What interesting things happened during the trip
What did you learn from the trip
要求：
词数不少于 80 词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Unforgettable Trip
I still remember the trip I took last year. It was truly an unforgettable experience.

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