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Unit 6 Rain or Shine. (话题写作指导）
原题版
【话题分析】
本话题聚焦 “天气与活动”，旨在让大家学会围绕不同天气状况，描述人们相应的活动以及内心感受。写作时，要精准运用描述天气的词汇和句型，熟练使用现在进行时展现正在发生的动作。
【常用句型】
How's the weather today 今天天气怎么样？
What's the weather like in... 某地天气如何？
It's + 描述天气的形容词。天气……
The weather is... + 地点。某地的天气是……
sb. am/is/are doing sth. 某人正在做某事
Everyone is having a great time. 每个人都玩得很开心。
【写作实例】
假如你是张鹏，你的外国朋友 David 对中国传统节日很感兴趣。端午节到了，请写一封邮件向他介绍你家是如何过节的，包含天气情况、过节的活动以及你的感受。
【思路点拨】
【经典范文】
Dear David,
I'm writing to tell you how we celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Today is sunny and a little hot. It's a perfect day for outdoor activities. My family are all busy with the festival preparations. My mother is making zongzi in the kitchen. The smell of the rice and bamboo leaves fills the house. My father and I are watching the dragon boat races on TV. The boats are moving so fast, and the players are full of energy.
I really enjoy this festival. It makes me feel the strong bond of my family and the rich culture of our country. I hope you can come to China and experience it with us next time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Peng
【亮点点评】
用 “be busy with” 短语体现家人为节日忙碌的状态。
通过描述气味 “the smell of...” 增加细节，使文章更生动。
“full of energy” 形象地描绘出赛龙舟选手的精神面貌。
表达感受时，阐述了节日对家庭关系和个人文化认知的意义。
【同步检测】
1.假如你是刘梅，正在英国的叔叔家做客。请根据下表信息，给你北京的朋友吴敏写一封信，不少于 60 词。
| 地点 | 天气 | 活动 | 感受 |
| 英国 | 多云，有点冷 | 参观博物馆，在公园散步 | 新奇，开心 |
2. 假设今天是周六，现在是下午三点，外面阳光明媚。你和家人正在郊外进行野餐，请根据提示，写一篇不少于 60 词的英语短文描述你们的活动。
提示：
(1) 描述家人和你各自在做什么。
(2) 谈谈你对这次野餐的感受。
要求：语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
3. 假设你是李阳。你的笔友 Linda 想了解你所在城市秋天的情况。请根据以下表格内容提示，给 Linda 写一封邮件，介绍你所在城市秋天的天气、常见活动以及你对秋天的感受。
天气 凉爽，有时有风，树叶变黄
活动 爬山，赏枫叶，骑自行车
感受 愉悦，放松
要求：
(1) 字数：不少于 60 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）。
(2) 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥。
(3) 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
4. 请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：
(1) 仔细观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。
(2) 可以给图中人物起名字，展开合理想象。
(3) 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强。
(4) 不少于五句话，注意规范书写。
选择图 1：
5. 现在是晚上七点钟，外面正在刮大风。假如你是赵琳，正在给你的同学写短信，介绍今天的天气，你和家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60 个词左右。
【真题链接】
下面是校园运动会的场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述运动会上同学们的活动。
提示：
(1) How's the weather today
(2) What are the students doing in the sports meeting
(3) How do they feel
要求：
(1) 短文须包含所有提示内容。
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数不少于 60 词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.假如你是来自加拿大的 Mike，寒假期间你正在中国成都旅游，请向你的朋友介绍一下你在成都的情况，并介绍你的新朋友。
写作要点：
(1) 现在成都正值冬天。
(2) 介绍今天的一些情况：
① 今天天气晴朗但有点冷；
② 你正在武侯祠参观，一些游客正在拍照；
③ 你的新朋友张宇正在给你讲解历史故事。
(3) 介绍你的新朋友张宇（外貌、性格、爱好等）。
写作要求：
(1) 内容完整、合理；语句正确；行文连贯。
(2) 字迹工整、书写规范。
(3) 60 词以上。
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
3. 假设你正在和你的父母、弟弟在桂林度假，你的网友对你去的地方很感兴趣，发消息让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包括以下内容：
天气 温暖，阳光充足
时间 寒假 (winter vacation)
地点 Guilin
活动 游览漓江，参观象鼻山，品尝美食
观点 ……（你认为这次旅行怎么样？）
要求：
(1) 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。
(2) 词数：80 词左右。
(3) 可适当发挥。
4. 在冬季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1) 80 词左右。
(2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
5. 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Emily 正在网上聊天时想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。
要求：
(1) 内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。
(2) 60 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。
爷爷 在院子里晒太阳
奶奶 在厨房做饭
爸爸 在书房工作
妈妈 在客厅看电视
弟弟 在卧室玩玩具
提示词组：in the yard（在院子里）Unit 6 Rain or Shine. (话题写作指导）
解析版
【话题分析】
本话题聚焦 “天气与活动”，旨在让大家学会围绕不同天气状况，描述人们相应的活动以及内心感受。写作时，要精准运用描述天气的词汇和句型，熟练使用现在进行时展现正在发生的动作。
【常用句型】
How's the weather today 今天天气怎么样？
What's the weather like in... 某地天气如何？
It's + 描述天气的形容词。天气……
The weather is... + 地点。某地的天气是……
sb. am/is/are doing sth. 某人正在做某事
Everyone is having a great time. 每个人都玩得很开心。
【写作实例】
假如你是张鹏，你的外国朋友 David 对中国传统节日很感兴趣。端午节到了，请写一封邮件向他介绍你家是如何过节的，包含天气情况、过节的活动以及你的感受。
【思路点拨】
【经典范文】
Dear David,
I'm writing to tell you how we celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Today is sunny and a little hot. It's a perfect day for outdoor activities. My family are all busy with the festival preparations. My mother is making zongzi in the kitchen. The smell of the rice and bamboo leaves fills the house. My father and I are watching the dragon boat races on TV. The boats are moving so fast, and the players are full of energy.
I really enjoy this festival. It makes me feel the strong bond of my family and the rich culture of our country. I hope you can come to China and experience it with us next time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Peng
【亮点点评】
用 “be busy with” 短语体现家人为节日忙碌的状态。
通过描述气味 “the smell of...” 增加细节，使文章更生动。
“full of energy” 形象地描绘出赛龙舟选手的精神面貌。
表达感受时，阐述了节日对家庭关系和个人文化认知的意义。
【同步检测】
假如你是刘梅，正在英国的叔叔家做客。请根据下表信息，给你北京的朋友吴敏写一封信，不少于 60 词。
| 地点 | 天气 | 活动 | 感受 |
| 英国 | 多云，有点冷 | 参观博物馆，在公园散步 | 新奇，开心 |
Dear Wu Min,
How's everything going I'm visiting my uncle in the UK. It's quite different from Beijing. The weather here is cloudy and a bit cold. But I'm having a great time.
I've visited some wonderful museums. There are many interesting exhibits. Today, I'm taking a walk in the park with my cousin. The air is fresh, and the scenery is beautiful. I feel so curious and happy to experience these new things. What's the weather like in Beijing Are you doing anything special
Write back soon.
Yours,
Liu Mei
2. 假设今天是周六，现在是下午三点，外面阳光明媚。你和家人正在郊外进行野餐，请根据提示，写一篇不少于 60 词的英语短文描述你们的活动。
提示：
(1) 描述家人和你各自在做什么。
(2) 谈谈你对这次野餐的感受。
要求：语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
Today is Saturday. It's three o'clock in the afternoon, and the sun is shining brightly. My family and I are having a picnic in the countryside.
My father is setting up the grill and cooking delicious food. The smell is making my mouth water. My mother is laying out the picnic mat and putting all the food on it. My little brother is running around, chasing after butterflies. I'm taking pictures of the beautiful scenery and my happy family.
This picnic is so much fun. It makes us relax and enjoy the beauty of nature. I hope we can have more picnics like this in the future.
3. 假设你是李阳。你的笔友 Linda 想了解你所在城市秋天的情况。请根据以下表格内容提示，给 Linda 写一封邮件，介绍你所在城市秋天的天气、常见活动以及你对秋天的感受。
天气 凉爽，有时有风，树叶变黄
活动 爬山，赏枫叶，骑自行车
感受 愉悦，放松
要求：
(1) 字数：不少于 60 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）。
(2) 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥。
(3) 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear from you. Autumn in my city is really beautiful.
The weather is cool, and it's windy sometimes. The leaves turn yellow, making the whole city look like a golden world. People here like to do many activities in autumn. I often go climbing with my friends. We can enjoy the fresh air and the wonderful view. Also, we go to the park to admire the maple leaves. They are so colorful. Sometimes, I go cycling along the river. It's very relaxing.
I really love autumn. It makes me feel pleased and at ease. What's autumn like in your place
Best wishes,
Li Yang
4. 请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：
(1) 仔细观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。
(2) 可以给图中人物起名字，展开合理想象。
(3) 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强。
(4) 不少于五句话，注意规范书写。
选择图 1：
Today is a snowy day. The whole world is covered in white. There are many children playing in the snow. Look! Tom and Jerry are making a snowman. They are rolling big snowballs for the body and the head. Mary and Lucy are having a snowball fight. They are laughing loudly. I'm joining them, and we are all having a fantastic time. The snow makes our day full of joy.
5. 现在是晚上七点钟，外面正在刮大风。假如你是赵琳，正在给你的同学写短信，介绍今天的天气，你和家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60 个词左右。
Dear classmate,
It's 7:00 pm. and it's windy outside. My family are all at home. My grandfather is reading a book in his room. My grandmother is knitting a scarf in the living room. My father is watching the news on TV. My mother is doing some housework. I'm doing my homework. Although it's windy outside, I feel warm and safe at home. What about you
Best regards,
Zhao Lin
【真题链接】
下面是校园运动会的场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述运动会上同学们的活动。
提示：
(1) How's the weather today
(2) What are the students doing in the sports meeting
(3) How do they feel
要求：
(1) 短文须包含所有提示内容。
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数不少于 60 词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
It's a sunny day today. There is a sports meeting in our school. Look! Some students are running on the track. They are running so fast, and their faces are red. Some are doing the long jump. They are trying their best to jump far. Others are cheering for their classmates. Everyone is excited. The sports meeting makes our school full of energy.
2.假如你是来自加拿大的 Mike，寒假期间你正在中国成都旅游，请向你的朋友介绍一下你在成都的情况，并介绍你的新朋友。
写作要点：
(1) 现在成都正值冬天。
(2) 介绍今天的一些情况：
① 今天天气晴朗但有点冷；
② 你正在武侯祠参观，一些游客正在拍照；
③ 你的新朋友张宇正在给你讲解历史故事。
(3) 介绍你的新朋友张宇（外貌、性格、爱好等）。
写作要求：
(1) 内容完整、合理；语句正确；行文连贯。
(2) 字迹工整、书写规范。
(3) 60 词以上。
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
Dear friend,
How are you I'm in Chengdu now. It's winter here. Today, the weather is sunny but a bit cold. I'm visiting the Wuhou Memorial Temple. There are many tourists taking pictures. My new friend Zhang Yu is with me. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He is very friendly and knowledgeable. He is telling me interesting historical stories. I'm really enjoying my time here.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mike
3. 假设你正在和你的父母、弟弟在桂林度假，你的网友对你去的地方很感兴趣，发消息让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包括以下内容：
天气 温暖，阳光充足
时间 寒假 (winter vacation)
地点 Guilin
活动 游览漓江，参观象鼻山，品尝美食
观点 ……（你认为这次旅行怎么样？）
要求：
(1) 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。
(2) 词数：80 词左右。
(3) 可适当发挥。
Hi! I'm on winter vacation in Guilin with my family. We're having a great time here. The weather is warm and sunny, which is perfect for traveling.
We've visited the Li River. The water is so clear, and the scenery along the river is amazing. We also went to the Elephant Trunk Hill. It looks really like an elephant drinking water. And we've tasted a lot of delicious local food.
I think this trip is wonderful. Guilin is a beautiful city, and I hope I can come here again.
4. 在冬季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1) 80 词左右。
(2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
In winter, the weather in my hometown is cold and snowy. The whole town is covered with white snow. People here wear thick clothes to keep warm. Some are making snowmen in the yard. Children are having a snowball fight, laughing and shouting. Adults are sitting around the fire, chatting and drinking hot tea. Although it's cold outside, the warm atmosphere at home makes everyone feel cozy.
5. 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Emily 正在网上聊天时想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。
要求：
(1) 内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。
(2) 60 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。
爷爷 在院子里晒太阳
奶奶 在厨房做饭
爸爸 在书房工作
妈妈 在客厅看电视
弟弟 在卧室玩玩具
提示词组：in the yard（在院子里）
Hi, Emily. Now my family are all at home. My grandfather is sitting in the yard, enjoying the sunshine. My grandmother is cooking delicious food in the kitchen. My father is working in the study. My mother is watching TV in the living room. And my little brother is playing with his toys in the bedroom. We're all having a relaxing evening.

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