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Unit4 Our animal friends
单元话题（人与动物）写作满分范文18篇（紧贴新教材）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1．动物是人类亲密的朋友，你喜欢哪种动物呢？假设你参加的英语社团举办了以“My favourite animal”为题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英文征文稿。
内容包括：
1.描述一种你喜欢的动物；
2.列举保护动物的方法(至少两条)；
3.呼吁大家爱护动物，与动物和谐相处。
要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；
2.语句连贯，词数60左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite animal
Animals are our friends. My favourite animal is
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【答案】例文
My favourite animal
Animals are our friends. My favourite animal is the panda. Pandas are black and white. They like eating bamboo and also like sleeping. You may think they are a little boring. Actually, they aren’t boring—they are amazing.
Pandas are one of the symbols of China. So please try your best to help them. First, people shouldn’t cut down trees so that there are more forests for them to live in. Besides, people should not kill pandas. What’s more, we should take good care of them.
Pandas are very important animals. Let’s take action and save pandas together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中呼吁大家爱护动物这一点，可以适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的动物；
第二步，具体阐述保护动物的方法；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家采取行动爱护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①the symbols of……的象征
②cut down砍伐
③take good care of好好照顾
④try your best to do尽你最大的努力去做……
[高分句型]
①First, people shouldn’t cut down trees so that there are more forests for them to live in. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Let’s take action and save pandas together. (祈使句)
2．假设你养了一只宠物狗，名叫Dudu。请写一篇短文介绍你的宠物狗。内容包括它的外貌、性格、你和它之间有趣的故事等。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语法正确；
2.70~100 词。
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【答案】例文
I have a pet dog named Dudu. He is small with soft, white fur and two bright eyes. Dudu is very friendly and always makes me feel warm. He is full of energy and loves to play. One day, I couldn’t find my shoes. It turned out that Dudu hid them under the sofa, as if he was playing hide-and-seek with me. We always have a great time together, and he is not just a pet, but a real friend to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宠物狗的情况；
第二步，叙述你和宠物狗之间发生的有趣的事情；
第三步，表达自己对它的感情。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②turn out结果是
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It turned out that Dudu hid them under the sofa, as if he was playing hide-and-seek with me.(宾语从句)
3．假设你是李明，你的美国笔友Steve上周在报纸上读了关于东北虎 (manchurian tiger) 正濒临灭绝的文章，他想制作一份海报，让更多的人了解保护野生动物的重要性。他写了封邮件向你寻求建议，请你根据Steve的邮件内容向他回复。
Dear Li Ming, How are you I hope everything goes on well with you. Last week, I read an article about manchurian tigers from the newspaper. I’m terribly sorry to find that they are endangered animals now! I want to design a poster about them. Would you please tell me how to do it if you were me ●What slogan (标语) will you choose to write ●Do you think it is meaningful to make such a poster Why Please email me whenever you are not busy. Best wishes! Steve
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【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my suggestions.
First, I will draw a picture of the manchurian tiger on the poster. Then, I’ll write the number of them to tell people about their terrible situation. Next, I’ll write about why we should protect them. Finally, I’ll write about how to protect them.
I will choose the slogan “Everyone should protect manchurian tigers” as the top of the poster. I think it’s very meaningful to make such a poster because more people will pay more attention to protecting them. And protecting animals is our responsibility.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，给出建议；
第二步，根据邮件中的问题，给出具体的建议；
第三步，发表自己对保护东北虎的看法，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……的数量
[高分句型]
①I think it’s very meaningful to make such a poster because more people will pay more attention to protecting them. （because引导的原因状语从句）
4．你最喜爱的动物是什么？你和它之间发生了哪些故事呢？请写一篇短文，和大家分享。
要点：
1. 你最喜爱的动物是什么？
2. 它有什么样的外貌及性格特点？
3. 你们之间有着怎样难忘的故事？
要求：
1. 参考上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名、地名等）；
4. 词数70 左右。
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【答案】例文
Today I want to share my favorite animal with you.
It is my grandfather’s pet—a parrot. Her name is Lucky. Why do I give her this name Because it’s a symbol of good luck. Lucky is 3 years old this year. She is green and yellow and looks very beautiful. Lucky is kind of lazy. As for food, Lucky likes rice best. She likes to play with me and learn my words. She is also good at singing. She always sings to me when I come back from school.
Lucky is not only a pet, but also my friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么；
第二步，描述它的外貌及性格特点；
第三步，描述你们之间难忘的故事。
[亮点词汇]
① share sth with sb 和某人分享某事
② a symbol of ……的象征
③ kind of有点
[高分句型]
She always sings to me when I come back from school.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛。
请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。
What problems are wild animals facing
What can we do to protect them as students
注意：
（1）词数90左右，应包括所有要点；
（2）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
One Earth, One Home
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【答案】例文
One Earth, One Home
Some wild animals are facing serious problems. People often cut down many trees to take away more land from the animals. They also kill some animals for their fur or bones.
As students, what can we do to save them First, we shouldn’t buy things made of animals’ body parts. Second, we should let more people understand the importance of protecting the wild animals.
It’s time for us to save the wild animals because we share the earth with them. If we don’t take action to protect them, they may disappear from the earth.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍野生动物面临的问题；
第二步，介绍作为学生应该如何保护野生动物；
第三步，表明保护野生动物的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① cut down砍伐
② take action采取行动
[高分句型]
If we don’t take action to protect them, they may disappear from the earth.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．假如你是李文，你的外教罗宾老师 (Mr Robin) 让你用英语向同学们介绍一种动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。
名称 金丝猴 (golden monkey)
颜色 黄色或黑色
分布 中国南部
特点 群居 (live in groups)；食树叶和水果
现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中
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【答案】例文：
Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to tell you one of the animals in China—the golden monkey. Golden monkeys live in the south of China. Some of them are yellow and some are black. They live in groups. They like eating leaves and fruit. People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. We must help save them.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：讲稿
时态：一般现在时
提示：根据提供的关于金丝猴的资料，写演讲稿，介绍金丝猴的特点和现状。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，介绍金丝猴的名称和分布。
第二步，描述金丝猴的颜色、生活习性和食物。
第三步，说明金丝猴的现状，呼吁保护。
[亮点词汇]
① golden monkey 金丝猴
② live in groups 群居
③ in great danger 处于极大危险中
[高分句型]
People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. (so连接表因果关系的并列句)
进阶拓展训练6篇
7．假如你有一只宠物猫，它非常讨人喜欢。请你根据下表的提示写一篇英语短文，把它介绍给你的好朋友。40词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Name Mimi Age 2
Appearance（外表） Brown; two big eyes
Character Smart and interesting
Favorite food Fish Hobby（爱好） Play with a ball
书写区域Good writing makes your article better.
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【答案】例文：
I have a cat. Its name is Mimi. It’s two years old. It’s brown. It has two big eyes. It’s very smart and interesting. It likes eating fish best. It likes playing with a ball. I like my cat very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宠物猫的名字和年龄；
第二步，介绍它的外表、性格、喜欢的食物及爱好。
第三步，表达对宠物猫的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①interesting有趣的
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③play with和……一起玩
[高分句型]
It’s very smart and interesting. (and并列句)
8．下面是有关露西 (Lucy) 的宠物 (pet) 的信息。请你根据表格中的内容写一段英语小短文来介绍它。60词左右。
Name Mimi Colour black and white
Size small Features (特征) friendly and clever
What it eats fish, meat and mice What it can do catch mice
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【答案】例文
Lucy likes animals very much. She has a pet cat. Its name is Mimi. It’s black and white. It eats fish and meat. It’s small, but it’s good at catching mice. So it can eat mice every day. Lucy likes Mimi very much because it’s very friendly and clever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
根据表格提示内容介绍露西的宠物猫，包括名字、颜色、大小、特征、食物和能做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①very much 非常
②black and white 黑白相间
③be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
Lucy likes Mimi very much because it’s very friendly and clever.（原因状语从句）
9．请结合下图内容及提示，以“The Animals in the Zoo”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英文短文。
giant panda大熊猫； forest森林； camel骆驼； desert沙漠； kangaroo袋鼠； grassland草原； snake蛇； jungle丛林 Where are they from What do they like to eat
要求：1. 内容积极向上，不少于60词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The Animals in the Zoo
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【答案】例文
The Animals in the Zoo
There are many kinds of animals from all over the world in the zoo. First of all, we have giant pandas from China, Asia. They like eating bamboo and live in the forest. Besides, we also have camels from Africa, which used to live in the desert and eat grass and leaves. Kangaroos from Australia love eating grass too. They live in the grassland. Finally, there are some snakes from Europe, and they love meat and live in the jungle.
Animals are our friends and we should treat them well.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明动物园里有来自世界各地的动物；
第二步，具体描述这些动物的居住地以及喜欢吃的食物。
第三步，最后表达动物是我们的朋友，我们应该好好对待它们。
[亮点词汇]
① many kinds of许多种类的
② like doing sth喜欢做某事
③ live in生活在
[高分句型]
Besides, we also have camels from Africa, which used to live in the desert and eat grass and leaves.（定语从句）
10．请以“The Animal I Want to Protect Most”为题，写一篇短文。内容需包括：
1. 你最想保护的动物是什么；
2. 描述该动物的一些特点（外貌、习性等）；
3. 它面临的生存威胁；
4. 你认为可以采取哪些措施来保护它。
要求：
1. 词数80—120词；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】例文
The Animal I Want to Protect Most
The animal I want to protect most is the elephant. Elephants are huge animals with large ears, long trunks and thick legs. Their trunks are extremely useful, which can be used to pick up food, draw water and even communicate with other elephants. They are very social and live in groups, taking good care of each other.
However, elephants are in great danger now. People cut down too many trees, making elephants lose their habitats. Moreover, some greedy people kill elephants for their ivory.
To protect elephants, we should first stop deforestation and leave enough living space for them. Also, we need to strengthen the fight against illegal hunting and impose stricter laws on those who hunt elephants. Additionally, we can raise public awareness about elephant protection through education and publicity activities. Only by taking these measures can we ensure the survival and well-being of elephants.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最想保护的动物；
第二步，描述该动物的特点（外貌、习性等）；
第三步，说明该动物面临的生存威胁；
第四步，提出你认为可以采取的保护措施。
[亮点词汇]
① be used to do被用于做
② take good care of好好照顾
③ additionally另外
[高分句型]
① Their trunks are extremely useful, which can be used to pick up food, draw water and even communicate with other elephants. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② Only by taking these measures can we ensure the survival and well-being of elephants.（倒装句）
11．如今，很多动物处于危险之中，保护动物是我们每个人的职责。你们学校校刊自然专栏正在征集有关动物保护的文章。请根据下面思维导图的提示，以“Ways to protect animals”为题写一篇文章进行投稿。
Don’t buy products (产品) made from animals.
Ways to protect animals.
Don’t throw rubbish here and there.
Protect the homes of animals.
写作要求：
(1) 短文应包括思维导图中所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
(3) 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：plastic 塑料(的)
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
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【答案】例文
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
First, we can’t buy any products made from animals. This can help to save and protect animals and we can do it easily. Second, we can’t throw rubbish here and there, especially plastic rubbish. When animals eat plastic rubbish by mistake, they may get sick or even die. Third, we must protect the homes of animals. Trees are homes of many animals. When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we’d better get in touch with the animal centre for help.
I think we should try our best to protect animals in different ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点, 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。许多动物现在处于危险之中，保护这些动物是每个人的责任；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍保护动物的方法；
第三步，书写结语。再次呼吁大家保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②in our daily life在日常生活中
③especially特别地
④by mistake错误地
⑤cut down砍倒
⑥try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①When we see people cutting down trees, we must stop them at once. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If we see a wild animal that seems alone or sick, we’d better get in touch with the animal centre for help. (if引导条件状语从句)
12．如果你喜欢动物，动物园一定是你经常光顾的地方吧。假设你上周去了深圳野生动物园 (Shenzhen Safari Park)， 请你写一篇文章描述你在动物园里的见闻。
提示词语: excited, trip, photo, meaningful
提示问题:
●Who did you go there with
●What did you do there
●What animals did you see in the zoo
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【答案】One possible version:
Last week, I went to Shenzhen Safari Park with my parents. I was excited about this trip because I love animals very much. There were many kinds of animals in the zoo. I saw some interesting animals such as lions, tigers and elephants. I did a lot of things when I walked around the zoo. I took some photos of the elephants and tigers. I watched the monkeys climbing the trees up and down. I think it’s a meaningful trip because I learned a lot about animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明上周去了动物园；
第二步，具体介绍去动物园的情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①was excited about兴奋于
②many kinds of许多种类的
③such as例如
④up and down上上下下
[高分句型]
①I was excited about this trip because I love animals very much. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I did a lot of things when I walked around the zoo. (when引导时间状语从句)
能力综合实践6篇
13．请结合下面导图的内容及提示，以“My favourite animal”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
要求:
1.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Favourite Animal
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【答案】例文：
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the monkey. It is lovely and clever. It looks like us humans, but it has a long tail. It likes to eat fruit. Bananas are its favourite fruit. Some monkeys live in the forest and some live in the zoo. Children love to see them.
The monkey is good at climbing trees. They often jump up and down. They are very funny. I love monkeys.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确主题，介绍自己最喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍动物的特征、动物的来源地、动物具备的能力以及喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①look like看起来像
②live in居住
③be good at擅长做……
[高分句型]
Some monkeys live in the forest and some live in the zoo. (and并列句)
14．动物是我们人类的好朋友，是和谐生态环境的重要组成部分。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请结合下面的导图，以“My Favourite Animal”为主题，在网站撰写一篇帖子介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:
1.包含导图所给信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确；
3.词数70左右。
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Animal
Animals are our good friends. My favourite animal is a lovely cat, Mimi.
Mimi is an important part of my family. She is only three years old. She is quite a beautiful cat. She has white fur, two big eyes, a small nose, a small mouth, and a long tail. She is both cute and friendly. When I am at home, she always likes running around me and playing games with me. She is so clever that she can take good care of her babies. However, sometimes she is playful and she makes my room untidy, but I don’t mind at all.
I like my cat because she can make my daily life full of fun. What’s your favourite animal
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍自己最喜欢的动物。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：向读者介绍自己最喜欢的动物，包括它的特点、与自己的互动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明动物是人类的好朋友，引出自己最喜欢的动物 —— 猫。
第二步，描述猫的外貌、性格特点，以及与自己的互动。
第三步，表达自己对猫的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①at home在家
②so adj. that...太……以至于……
③take care of照顾
④not...at all一点儿也不
⑤full of充满
[高分句型]
①She is so clever that she can take good care of her babies.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
②I like my cat because she can make my daily life full of fun.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．请以“My Animal Friend”为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，介绍你的动物朋友。
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【答案】例文
My Animal Friend
Do you know what animals I like best Please guess! They have four legs. They like eating meat and bones. Many people like them and keep them at home. Do you know the answer now Yes, they are dogs.
I have a pet dog at home. It is brown with a black nose and white feet. It looks very cute and beautiful. I often play with it.
I think animals are very important to us. Let’s make friends with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意细节描写，适当增加逻辑词，使行文连贯，过渡自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己的动物朋友是什么，点明主题；
第二步，具体描写动物的特征；
第三步，书写结语，表达对动物的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①play with和……玩
②make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①It is brown with a black nose and white feet.（with作伴随状语）
②I think animals are very important to us.（宾语从句）
16．请描述你最喜欢的动物，包括它的外貌、习性和你喜欢它的原因。 （不少于 50 词）
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【答案】例文
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are very cute. They have black and white fur. They look very friendly and lovely.
I like pandas because they are not only beautiful but also very gentle. They spend most of their time eating bamboo and relaxing. Pandas are also a symbol of peace, which makes me admire them. Whenever I see a panda, I feel happy and relaxed. That’s why the panda is my favorite animal.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我最喜欢的动物的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请描述你最喜欢的动物，包括它的外貌、习性和你喜欢它的原因”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最喜欢的动物是什么、该动物的外貌及说明喜欢该动物的原因等”几个方面重点介绍我最喜欢的动物的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“这就是为什么熊猫是我最喜欢的动物”的总结。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……，而且……
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③a symbol of……的象征
④make sb do sth让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①They spend most of their time eating bamboo and relaxing. (动名词作宾语)
②That’s why the panda is my favorite animal. (why引导的表语从句)
17．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）；
2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）；
3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数60左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it’s very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出关于濒危动物的话题；
第二步，具体阐述有哪些濒危动物，濒危的原因及采取的措施；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁人们一起保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger处于危险之中
②such as例如
③cut down砍倒
④stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
⑤Thanks for为……而感谢
[高分句型]
①They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. (原因状语从句）
②If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.（条件状语从句)
18．熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们，请你根据以下表格的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你的朋友们介绍表格中的这只熊猫。
Name Xiaopang
Age Nine
Be like Black and white; big eyes; fat; gentle (温和的) and cute…
Favorite food Bamboo
Hobbies Climb (爬) trees and swim…
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：80词左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
There is a panda in the zoo.
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【答案】例文
There is a panda in the zoo. His name is Xiaopang. He is nine years old. Xiaopang is black and white with big eyes. He looks fat but very gentle and cute.
Bamboo is his favorite food, and he eats it every day. Xiaopang has many hobbies. He loves climbing trees and swimming. When he climbs, he moves slowly, which makes people laugh. In the water, he swims happily. Everyone likes Xiaopang because he brings joy to visitors.
Pandas are China’s national treasures, and Xiaopang is a wonderful example of why they are so loved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出话题“熊猫——小胖”；
第二步，具体阐述熊猫的性格特点和爱好；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①black and white黑白相间
②gentle and cute温柔可爱
③national treasures国宝
[高分句型]
①When he climbs, he moves slowly, which makes people laugh. (which引导的定语从句)
②Everyone likes Xiaopang because he brings joy to visitors. (because引导的原因状语从句)学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit4 Our animal friends
单元话题（人与动物）写作满分范文18篇（紧贴新教材）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1．动物是人类亲密的朋友，你喜欢哪种动物呢？假设你参加的英语社团举办了以“My favourite animal”为题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英文征文稿。
内容包括：
1.描述一种你喜欢的动物；
2.列举保护动物的方法(至少两条)；
3.呼吁大家爱护动物，与动物和谐相处。
要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；
2.语句连贯，词数60左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite animal
Animals are our friends. My favourite animal is
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2．假设你养了一只宠物狗，名叫Dudu。请写一篇短文介绍你的宠物狗。内容包括它的外貌、性格、你和它之间有趣的故事等。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语法正确；
2.70~100 词。
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3．假设你是李明，你的美国笔友Steve上周在报纸上读了关于东北虎 (manchurian tiger) 正濒临灭绝的文章，他想制作一份海报，让更多的人了解保护野生动物的重要性。他写了封邮件向你寻求建议，请你根据Steve的邮件内容向他回复。
Dear Li Ming, How are you I hope everything goes on well with you. Last week, I read an article about manchurian tigers from the newspaper. I’m terribly sorry to find that they are endangered animals now! I want to design a poster about them. Would you please tell me how to do it if you were me ●What slogan (标语) will you choose to write ●Do you think it is meaningful to make such a poster Why Please email me whenever you are not busy. Best wishes! Steve
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4．你最喜爱的动物是什么？你和它之间发生了哪些故事呢？请写一篇短文，和大家分享。
要点：
1. 你最喜爱的动物是什么？
2. 它有什么样的外貌及性格特点？
3. 你们之间有着怎样难忘的故事？
要求：
1. 参考上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名、地名等）；
4. 词数70 左右。
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5．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛。
请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。
What problems are wild animals facing
What can we do to protect them as students
注意：
（1）词数90左右，应包括所有要点；
（2）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
One Earth, One Home
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6．假如你是李文，你的外教罗宾老师 (Mr Robin) 让你用英语向同学们介绍一种动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。
名称 金丝猴 (golden monkey)
颜色 黄色或黑色
分布 中国南部
特点 群居 (live in groups)；食树叶和水果
现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中
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进阶拓展训练6篇
7．假如你有一只宠物猫，它非常讨人喜欢。请你根据下表的提示写一篇英语短文，把它介绍给你的好朋友。40词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Name Mimi Age 2
Appearance（外表） Brown; two big eyes
Character Smart and interesting
Favorite food Fish Hobby（爱好） Play with a ball
书写区域Good writing makes your article better.
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8．下面是有关露西 (Lucy) 的宠物 (pet) 的信息。请你根据表格中的内容写一段英语小短文来介绍它。60词左右。
Name Mimi Colour black and white
Size small Features (特征) friendly and clever
What it eats fish, meat and mice What it can do catch mice
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9．请结合下图内容及提示，以“The Animals in the Zoo”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英文短文。
giant panda大熊猫； forest森林； camel骆驼； desert沙漠； kangaroo袋鼠； grassland草原； snake蛇； jungle丛林 Where are they from What do they like to eat
要求：1. 内容积极向上，不少于60词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The Animals in the Zoo
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10．请以“The Animal I Want to Protect Most”为题，写一篇短文。内容需包括：
1. 你最想保护的动物是什么；
2. 描述该动物的一些特点（外貌、习性等）；
3. 它面临的生存威胁；
4. 你认为可以采取哪些措施来保护它。
要求：
1. 词数80—120词；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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11．如今，很多动物处于危险之中，保护动物是我们每个人的职责。你们学校校刊自然专栏正在征集有关动物保护的文章。请根据下面思维导图的提示，以“Ways to protect animals”为题写一篇文章进行投稿。
Don’t buy products (产品) made from animals.
Ways to protect animals.
Don’t throw rubbish here and there.
Protect the homes of animals.
写作要求：
(1) 短文应包括思维导图中所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
(3) 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：plastic 塑料(的)
Ways to protect animals
Many animals are in danger now and protecting these animals is the duty of everyone. The following ways are the simple things that we can do in our daily life.
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12．如果你喜欢动物，动物园一定是你经常光顾的地方吧。假设你上周去了深圳野生动物园 (Shenzhen Safari Park)， 请你写一篇文章描述你在动物园里的见闻。
提示词语: excited, trip, photo, meaningful
提示问题:
●Who did you go there with
●What did you do there
●What animals did you see in the zoo
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能力综合实践6篇
13．请结合下面导图的内容及提示，以“My favourite animal”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
要求:
1.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Favourite Animal
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14．动物是我们人类的好朋友，是和谐生态环境的重要组成部分。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请结合下面的导图，以“My Favourite Animal”为主题，在网站撰写一篇帖子介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:
1.包含导图所给信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确；
3.词数70左右。
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15．请以“My Animal Friend”为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，介绍你的动物朋友。
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16．请描述你最喜欢的动物，包括它的外貌、习性和你喜欢它的原因。 （不少于 50 词）
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17．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）；
2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）；
3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数60左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们，请你根据以下表格的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你的朋友们介绍表格中的这只熊猫。
Name Xiaopang
Age Nine
Be like Black and white; big eyes; fat; gentle (温和的) and cute…
Favorite food Bamboo
Hobbies Climb (爬) trees and swim…
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：80词左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
There is a panda in the zoo.
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