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（10）读后续写——高考英语考前三个月速记清单
答题技巧
写作步骤：
Step 1: 信息浏览与主题把握
明确要素：who（人物）、what（事件）、where（地点）、when（时间）、why（原因）
总结文章大意与表达主题
Step 2: 段落梳理与情节提炼（重点）
梳理开头（beginning），了解故事起始背景
把握发展（development），明确情节推进脉络
确定高潮（climax），找出故事最紧张时刻
梳理结尾（ending），知晓故事最终走向
Step 3: 依据段落开头，构思续写内容（突破点）
仔细研读续写段落的开头语，以此为基础展开合理想象
Step 4: 细节刻画与衔接优化（亮点）
添加丰富细节，使故事更生动形象
营造情节冲突，增强故事吸引力
优化衔接表达，使文章过渡自然流畅
Step 5: 达成首尾呼应，确保结构合理完整
结尾呼应开头，强化主题
检查文章结构，确保逻辑连贯、条理清晰
续写标准：
故事围绕主要人物展开
详细刻画人物角色及其情感
有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑
运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动
第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑合理通顺
续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极向上
高分要求：
增加细节：
环境描写；肖像描写；动作描写；语言描写；心理描写
营造冲突：
人物和人物之间的冲突；人物和环境之间的冲突
升格语言：
非谓语动词；with复合结构；形容词作状语；特殊句式；虚拟手段；常用修辞手法
需要注意：
情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑，避免太过离奇；
叙述力求精练、生动、连贯，对话不要太多，书面化的长句不宜太多。
词汇与句型
写天气
sunny (阳光明媚的)
bright (晴朗的；明亮的)
clear (清澈的；晴朗无云的)
cloudless (无云的)
warm (温暖的)
cloudy (多云的)
dull (阴沉的；无趣的)
rainy (下雨的)
drizzling (下毛毛雨的)
pouring (倾盆大雨的)
misty (有雾的；模糊的)
snowy (下雪的)
windy (有风的)
breezy (微风轻拂的)
gusty (阵风的；狂风的)
stormy (暴风雨的；激烈的)
写外貌
short矮
scruffily dressed 衣着不整洁
tal1高
neatly dressed衣着干净整洁
overweight超重的
well dressed穿着讲究的
plump丰腴的
smartly dressed穿着光鲜
thin瘦的
skinny 极瘦的
plain相貌平平的
slim苗条的
good-looking好看的
medium height中等身高
elegantly dressed穿着考究
tubby矮胖的
muscular强壮的
写性格
boring乏味的
cold冷酷的
charming可爱的
confident 自信的
calm镇定的
strong坚强的
humorous 幽默的
optimistic乐观的
selfish自私的
outstanding杰出的
romantic浪漫的
quiet文静的
pessimistic悲观的
nervous焦虑的
pleasant友好的
lovely可爱的
proud骄傲的
gentle 温柔的
generous宽宏大量的
rude没礼貌的
adventurous有冒险精神的
sociable善于交际的
vigorous精力旺盛的
spirited精神饱满的
情感描写
开心
She had a bright smile and jumped up and down, with joy shining in her eyes.
她笑容灿烂，蹦蹦跳跳，眼中闪烁着喜悦。
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他高兴得双眸闪闪发亮。
The crowd got excited. They cheered and clapped, with happy looks on their faces.（
人群兴奋起来。他们欢呼鼓掌，脸上洋溢着开心的神情。
愤怒
He was full of rage and glared at the person in front, his eyes full of anger and his voice loud.
他怒火中烧，怒视着前面的人，眼神充满愤怒，声音很大。
He got very angry, his face turning red, and he clenched his fists tightly.
他非常生气，脸都变红了，紧紧握住拳头。
His face clouded with anger.他满面怒容。
She looked at him with eyes flashing angrily.她愤怒地看着他。
伤心
Overcome with grief, he cried loudly, and then fell to the floor, covering his face with hands.
被悲痛笼罩，他大声哭泣，然后倒在地上，用手捂住脸。
She was in a sad mood. Her steps were heavy and her eyes were dull as she walked slowly.
她心情悲伤。她脚步沉重，眼睛无光，缓缓地走着。
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
紧张
She was very nervous waiting for the test results. Her hands were sweaty and her mind was full of thoughts.
她等考试结果时非常紧张。手心出汗，脑子里思绪万千。
As the performance time got closer, she felt nervous. She walked around backstage, adjusting her clothes and breathing deeply.
随着表演时间临近，她感到紧张。在后台走来走去，调整衣服，深呼吸。
His heart was beating loudly. He played with his pen, unable to pay attention.
他的心跳得很响。他摆弄着笔，无法集中注意力。
Nervousness came to him like a shadow. His legs felt weak and his mouth was dry. He tried to be brave.紧张像影子一样袭来。他腿发软，嘴巴发干。努力鼓起勇气。
恐惧
She was so scared that she stood still, her eyes wide open in fear and her breath quick.
她吓得一动不动，惊恐地瞪大双眼，呼吸急促。
Fear came over him like a cold wind, making his hands shake.
恐惧像一阵冷风袭来，让他的手颤抖。
She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.他的心怦怦跳，似乎被吓坏了。
I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father's face.我胆怯地低着头，不敢看爸爸的脸。
感动
She was very touched. Holding the gift tightly, she felt a warm feeling inside.
她非常感动。紧紧握着礼物，她内心感到一股温暖。
She was full of emotion listening to the kind words. Her face showed her deep gratitude.
她听着那些温暖的话语，情绪激动。脸上流露出深深的感激。
Tears filling his eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.他热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
With tears streaming down her face, she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，她……。
满意
There is always a smile of contentment on her face.她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction.看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。
He glanced at her with a pleased smile.他面带满意的笑容瞥了她一眼。
惊讶
The audience was inexpressibly astonished at the brilliant performance.
那出色的表演使观众感到说不出的惊叹。
She was surprised that he had no words of blame for her.
使她惊讶的是，他没有对她说任何责备的话。
思考
An idea flashed across his mind.他脑子里闪过一个念头。
An idea formed in his mind.他脑中有了一个主意。
An idea occurred to/hit/struck him.他突然有了一个主意。
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
她在沉思，几乎听不见周围的话。
动物描写
circle/hover 盘旋 fly 飞翔 unfold 张开,展开
unfold the wings 展开翅膀 fly away 飞走 flap the wings 拍打翅膀
move the wings 扇动着翅膀 take wing 展翅飞翔 let out a squeaking call 发出吱吱声
Suddenly a bird flew straight and quick like an arrow to the sky.一只鸟像箭一样直冲天空。
Sunshine is glittering on her wings.阳光在它的翅膀上闪闪发光。
It flew near the ground and went into some tall grass.
它飞到离地面很近的地方,钻进了高高的草丛里。
What a hungry bear! After we returned home safe and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.多饿的熊啊!在我们平安回到家后,我们意识到应该为熊做点什么。
社会温情
pass on 传递 spread kindness 传播善意 timely help 及时的帮助
reach out伸出援手 make a difference 起作用
carry sb. through difficult times 帮助某人渡过难关
Shortly afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face, and wished me a pleasant journey.
不久之后,他把轮胎修好了。他站起来,擦去脸上的汗水,并祝我旅途愉快。
He patted me on the shoulder to ease my anxiety.
他拍了拍我的肩膀,以缓解我的焦虑。
To her relief, the local people helped to carry her through these difficult times.
令她感到欣慰的是,当地人们帮助她度过了这些困难时期。
Without his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane.
如果没有他的及时帮助,我肯定会误机。
From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.
从那天起,每当我遇到需要帮助的人,我总是向他们伸出援手,希望把这个墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
I made up my mind to pass on "love" to others. Just as the saying goes, "Roses given, fragrance in hand."
我下定决心要把“爱”传递给别人。俗话说:“赠人玫瑰,手有余香。”
It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. A small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
我突然意识到,我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
常用句型
1. 主语+谓语1…，谓语2…，and 谓语3….
描述一系列的动作。如果是两个动作，可以用主+谓…and (then) 谓…
She stopped the truck safely outside the garage and then rushed back to the basement.
She turned around and saw me standing in the doorway.
2. Doing…, 主语+谓语…
有时可以在doing前加before, after, while等。
Hearing his brother's words, she rushed back to the shop to find the boy but time never waits for anyone.
Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
3. 主语+谓语…, doing… .
该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转化为：主语+谓语1...and谓语2...。
"It's OK," Mama said, comforting me with a hug.
4. 主语+谓语…，独立主格…
独立主格在句中作状语。该句型可以转化为并列句：主语1+谓语…and主语2+谓语…。
He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.=He stood there and tears of gratitude welled up in his eyes.
She opened the letter, her hands trembling with excitement.= She opened the letter and her hands trembled with excitement.
5. 表情感类的形容词，主语+谓语.
情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的状态。有时也可以放在句尾：主+谓...，表情感类的形容词。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance.
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock.
6. 句子副词，主语+谓语…
句子副词在句中作状语，修饰整个句子，放在句首，引出句子。
Incredibly, she was able to carry her last child out before the roof and walls fell.
"Actually, I was touched by your kindness!" said Jenny, wiping her tears.
7. 时间状语，主语+谓语.
时间状语一般放在句末，但有些时间状语放在句首，能使行文连贯，逻辑合理。
For the first time in her life, Maria felt frightened and alone.
After seemingly a long time, Jane felt tired and laydown in the darkness.
8. 地点状语或表示运动方向的副词+谓语（vi.）+主语全部倒装句
主语必须是名词，谓语动词为不及物动词，常见的表运动方向的副词有：in, out, off, away, up, down, outside, inside等。
In his hand was a flower, with its petals all worn.
Away went the crowd one by one.

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