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（人教版2024）七年级
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Unit4 Eat Well
Writing
郑州外国语学校朗悦校区 贾艳红
Learning Objectives
Review
Analyze
Pre-writing
Feeling
Post-writing
Self-revision
While-writing
Homework
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Learning Objectives
（基础性目标）1.我能够基于文章2a，以思维导图的形式梳理出饮食与健康类主题文章的结构和各部分的要点；
（拓展性目标）2.我能够列出我的饮食习惯类文章的时态，人称和写作要点，并梳理出我的饮食习惯的文章结构；
（拓展性目标）3.我能够正确使用谈论食物的句型以及可数名词和不可数名词来描述自己或他人的饮食习惯，并写出评价与合理建议。
（挑战性目标）4.我能够根据自评和互评修正和完善自己的文章。
Warming up
Are they healthy or unhealthy
Warming up
Are they healthy or unhealthy
hamburger(s)
carrot(s)
fruit
soft drinks
eggs
milk tea
Cola
beef noodles
Warming up
Are they healthy or unhealthy And why
yogurt
milk and bread
potato chips
And why are they healthy or unhealthy
Revision
Why are they healthy
balanced in nutrients;
full of vitamins and minerals;
have less salt, sugar and fat;
help keep our weight down;
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
Revision
Why are they unhealthy
have lots of salt,fat and sugar;
make us put on weight;
may cause heart problems;
can cause tooth problems.
Hi, I'm Lisa. Do you want to know about my eating habits Here is my post about that. Read and know more about me!
Pre-writing
2a
The Joy Clinic wants teenagers to share their eating habits. Read Lisa’s post. How many eating habits does Lisa write about What are they
Pre-writing
Predict
What’s the main idea of this passage？
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
2a
Pre-writing
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Read the passage quickly and check your prediction.
top sentences
2a
Pair work
Read carefully and discuss the following questions.
1. What are Lisa’s good eating habits and bad habits
2. Why does Lisa think soft drinks are bad for her
3. What should Lisa do to improve her drinking habits
2a
Pre-writing
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Read and check the answers to the following questions.
two good habits
two bad habits
2a
Pre-writing
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Read and check the answers to the following questions.
the reason why soft drinks are bad for Lisa
2a
Pre-writing
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Read and check the answers to the following questions.
how to improve drinking habits
2a
Pre-writing
Read and summarize the structure of the passage.
how to improve(具体措施)
The structure
my good habits（具体描述好的饮食习惯）
my good habits（具体描述坏的饮食习惯）
I have some good eating habits. I eat breakfast every day...
However, I have some bad habits. I drink to many soft drinks...
I should drink fewer soft drinks...
...drink more water....
2a
Pre-writing
Talk about your own eating habits. Use the questions to help you.
1. What good habit(s) do you have
I eat fruit and vegetables every day. And I have breakfast every day to start my day with energy!
2. What bad habbit(s) do you have
I eat many snacks between meals and I like eating late at night. They make me put on wight and cause sleep problems.
3. What can you do to improve your eating habits
I can eat fewer snacks between meals and have early dinner.
根据下面要点提示中列举的部分中学生的饮食现状，以“How to eat healthily”为题，写一篇80-100词的短文，要求条理清晰，语句通顺。
要点提示：1. 饮食不均衡；
2. 经常吃垃圾食品；
3. 经常喝软饮料。
While-writing
good and bad eating habits
advice on healthy eating habits
express hope
审题立意
审时态：
审人称：
审要点：
一般现在时
第三人称
饮食现状、健康饮食建议
While-writing
How to
eat healthily
审体裁：
说明文
2a
List the structure of the composition.
结尾：表达希望
段落布局
开头：指出饮食现状及问题
中间：提出健康饮食建议
Many middle school students have some bad eating habits.
First, they should have a balanced diet...
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet!
Third, they should have three meals a day and...
Second, they should drink more water.
While-writing
good and bad eating habits
advice on healthy eating habits
express hope
审题立意
While-writing
How to
eat healthily
Hope all of us can have a healthy diet；
Let’s keep a healthy diet! ...
eat fruit, vegetables and eggs; drink milk/yogurt...
eat junk food,eat hamburgers; eat ice cream....
put on weight；cause tooth problems；be bad for
keep/have a balanced diet;improve eating habits;
dink more water;drink milk instead of cola;
avoid eating fast food;cook your own meals
Sample
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have some bad eating habits. Some like eating junk food like hamburgers and ice-cream. They often drink too many soft drinks like cola and coffee. Sometimes they go to school without having breakfast. It’s bad for their health.
To eat healthily, first, they should have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. It’s good to eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. Also, eggs, milk and meat are healthy for them. Second, cola and coffee can cause tooth problems, so they should drink water instead of them. Third, students should have three
meals a day and eat on time. Breakfast gives people energy. If they don’t eat breakfast to go to school, they will find it is easy to feel sleepy.
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet!
Checklist Theme Clear Yes Needs to be improved
Coment Complete Yes Needs to be improved
Language Correct Yes Needs to be improved
Structure Connected Yes Needs to be improved
Handwriting Clean Yes Needs to be improved
Suggestion: 2b
Finish writing the post, exchange your work with your classmate and evaluate according to the checklist.
Post-writing
Summary
结尾：表达希望
段落布局
开头：指出饮食现状及问题
中间：提出健康饮食建议
Many middle school students have some bad eating habits.
First, they should have a balanced diet...
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet!
Third, they should have three meals a day and...
Second, they should drink more water.
Feelings
Animals are friends!
They are part of our lives.
Fish can provide protein；
Orange can provide vitamins;
Oil can provide energy;
Drinks can provide the water.
Food is life!
Keep a balanced diet!
Feelings
Finish your post and polish it according to your classmate’s comments.
Read more articles or watch a video about food on the Internet.
Homework
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Are they healthy or unhealthy （预备性练习）
And why are they healthy or unhealthy （预备性练习）
Predict：What’s the main idea of this passage？ Good habits Bad habits （基础性目标）
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Read the passage quickly and check your prediction.（基础性目标）
Read carefully and discuss the following questions. （基础性目标）
What are Lisa’s good eating habits and bad habits
Why does Lisa think soft drinks are bad for her
What should Lisa do to improve her drinking habits
Read and summarize the structure of the passage.（基础性目标）
Talk about your own eating habits. Use the questions to help you.（拓展性目标）
4. 写作（拓展性目标）
根据下面要点提示中列举的部分中学生的饮食现状，以“How to eat healthily”为题，写一篇80-100词的短文，要求条理清晰，语句通顺。
要点提示：1. 饮食不均衡；
2. 经常吃垃圾食品；
3. 经常喝软饮料。
参考例文：
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have some bad eating habits. Some like eating junk food like hamburgers and ice-cream. They often drink too many soft drinks like cola and coffee. Sometimes they go to school without having breakfast. It’s bad for their health.
To eat healthily, first, they should have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. It’s good to eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. Also, eggs, milk and meat are healthy for them. Second, cola and coffee can cause tooth problems, so they should drink water instead of them. Third, students should have three meals a day and eat on time. Breakfast gives people energy. If they don’t eat breakfast to go to school, they will find it is easy to feel sleepy.
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet!
5.课后作业
1）Finish your post and polish it according to your classmate’s comments.（挑战性目标）
2）Read more articles or watch a video about food on the Internet.（挑战性目标）
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