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(共17张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Lending a Helping Hand
Unit 10
Learning aims
阅读社区服务文章，厘清事件情节
能写一篇社区服务活动的短文
Lead in
Can you volunteer your time
Activity 1
Work out the plot of the text by reading
Read the text and find the main idea of it.
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Volunteering at a nursing home on Lei Feng Day was a wonderful experience.
Read Para. 2 and answer the questions.
1: What did the volunteers do first after arriving at the nursing home
2: What activities did the volunteers do with the elderly at the nursing home
3: How did Mrs. Li feel about the volunteers’ visit
They first cleaned the windows and swept the floor.
They chatted, played cards with them, and shared stories about their school life with Mrs. Li, who was an English teacher.
Mrs. Li was very happy to be with the volunteers.
Read the text and complete the plot chart.
Beginning
Middle
End
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m.
At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. We told Mrs. Li about our school life.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Read for structure.
title
Beginning
Body
Plot
End
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
● Beginning
● Middle
Plot
● End
Activity 2
Write a passage about your community service experience
写作指导
Structure and content
title
Beginning
Body
Plot
End
● Beginning
● Middle
Plot
● End
Volunteering at ________________
when
where
what
What you did
● First
● Then
….
Your feeling about it
Useful expressions
Beginning
General statement about volunteering:
Volunteering is a meaningful way to help others and make a difference in the community.
Helping others through volunteering is an important part of being a good citizen.
Introduce the specific activity:
"On…, I volunteered at …with my classmates/friends."
Last weekend, I had the opportunity to volunteer at…, and it was an unforgettable experience.
State the purpose or feeling:
I was excited to spend the day helping others and learning new things.
I felt happy to contribute to the community and make someone’s day better.
Body
Describe the activities:
First, we …, e.g., cleaned the windows, swept the floor, etc.].
After that, we …, e.g., chatted with the elderly, played games, etc.].
Share an interaction or memorable moment:
One of the residents,…, was very kind. We talked about …and it was really interesting.
I especially enjoyed playing cards with …because they were so funny and cheerful.
Explain how you felt during the activity:
I felt proud to help and see the smiles on their faces.
It was heartwarming to know that our small actions could bring so much joy to others.
End
●State your future plans or feelings:
I hope to volunteer again soon because it was such a rewarding experience.
I will never forget this day, and I encourage everyone to try volunteering too.
● End with a positive message:
Together, we can make a difference in the lives of others.
Helping others not only makes them happy but also brings joy to our own hearts.
Draw your own plot chart about a community service activity.
Beginning
Middle
End
Draft your essay about a community service activity.
Volunteering at ___________________
On _______________, I volunteered at _____________________________________. It was _______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
At first ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Next ________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________.
I felt ____________________. We ________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________.
Write your final draft in your exercise book.
Volunteering at an Animal Shelter
On April 10th, I volunteered at an animal shelter with my friends. It was a heartwarming experience.
We arrived at 10:00 a.m. First, we cleaned the cages and filled the food bowls. After that, we played with the dogs and cats. One dog, named Max, was very friendly. We took him for a walk, and he wagged his tail happily.
I felt proud to help these animals. Small actions can bring happiness to both animals and people. Together, we can make a difference!
Sample
Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1 (more improvements needed), 2 (fair), 3 (good), or 4 (excellent) for the ratings.
How well can you ________ Partner’s
rating
express your view of helping others
use the thinking skill of making a plot
introduce a community service activity
organize ideas into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use the simple past tense
use punctuation
spell the words
Summary
◆文章框架
title
Beginning
Body
Plot
End
● Beginning
● Middle
Plot
Volunteering at ________________
when
where
what
What you did
● First
● Then
….
Your feeling about it
● End
Homework
1 Write the new words in this period three times each.
2 Revise your writing draft.

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