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外研版八年级下学期期中复习
1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore
1．请以“My trip to——”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
要求：
1.请在题目空格处填入你旅行的地点，如：Beijing，Jinan或Qingdao等；
2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。否则不予评分；
3.不少于60词。
提示：
1. Where did you go
2. What did you do there
3. How did you feel about the trip
My trip to ________
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2．书面表达
你一定去过许多有趣的地方,那么你最难忘的地方是哪里 请你以“An unforgettable trip”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,来描述一次令你难忘的旅游经历。要写清楚旅游的过程以及你的切身感受。
3．假期中你一定有很多有意义的经历吧，也许你和朋友、家人去旅行过，又或者参加过某个有意义的活动。请简述一下假期中你认为有意义的一段经历。词数：70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I went to the Fuyun Hill near my city in summer holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4． 书面表达
某英文杂志正在进行My space hero的征文活动，假如你是该杂志的热心读者，你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。请你根据下面有关景海鹏的资料写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，参加征文活动(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；
2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务；
3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；
4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。
My space hero
My space hero is Jing Haipeng. _______________________________________
5．书面表达
假如你们学校正在举办以Life on Mars为题的英语作文比赛，请你根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文，参加这次比赛。
提示：1. 工作日；2. 周末；3. 假期
Life on Mars
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6．根据所给提示，以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇短文，70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
(1) 杰克逊 (Jackson)，英国人，40岁，1.72米高，中等身材，短而卷的金色头发，大鼻子；
(2) 爱穿比较酷的衣服，在学校很受欢迎，是同学们的好朋友；
(3) 喜爱游泳、踢足球等，擅长讲故事，总是逗得同学们开怀大笑。
My English Teacher
Jackson is my English teacher.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
7．在你的人生道路上，有不同的人在不同时段陪伴着你走着人生路。在你的心目中，此时对你来说最重要的人是谁？请以“The Most Important Person in My Life”为题写一篇短文，短文必须包括以下提示要点，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
1、简述此人的外貌；
2、简述你们一起做过的一到两件有意义的事情；
3、简述与其他人相比，他/她为何对你来说最重要。
要求：
1、语句通顺、语法正确、句式多样；
2、80词左右。
The Most Important Person in My Life
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8．进入初中已经一年多了，在这段时间里你有哪些变化？请根据自己的实际情况，从外貌和性格的变化、生活习惯及学校生活等方面介绍一下你的情况和你对初中生活的感受。
要求：
1. 所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥;
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.100词左右。
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9．你班下周要开一次以“My experience”为主题的英语班会, 请你准备一篇80个词左右的发言稿。主要内容包括以下几点
1. 你曾去过什么地方
2. 给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里 为什么
3. 你没去过而又很想去的地方是哪里 打算什么时候去
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10．人生中，我们曾有过很多个第一次：第一次走进学校；第一次上英语课；第一次外出郊游等等。你经历过的“第一次”一定很多，请就其中的一次谈谈当时的情景和你的感受。
要求：1. 词数为80～100。2. 语句通顺、规范，意思连贯，字迹工整。
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11．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。
请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。
An Exciting Trip
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12．由于新型冠状病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的爆发，几个月来我们不得不待在家里。正因如此，这次疫情教会了我们重新审视自己的习惯，更好地生活。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈保持健康的秘诀。短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示：1. 多锻炼，多喝水，均衡膳食(have a balanced diet)；
2. 早睡早起，保持充足的睡眠；
3. 多吃蔬菜和水果，健康饮食；
4. ……
Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．书面表达
健康的生活方式对于成长中的我们来说非常重要。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是什么样子的？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下健康的生活习惯。
提示：1.健康饮食；
2．早睡早起，不熬夜；
3．参加运动，强身健体。
要求：1.把握要点，适当发挥；
2．词数：80词左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
I think healthy habits are very important to us.
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14．去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。不久，钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。请你写一篇90词左右的英语短文，叙述这件事，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意：
1.短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译。
2.短文已给出的部分不计入总词数。
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：抗击疫情anti-epidemic
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15．书面表达
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jill给你发来电子邮件，说她最近总是头疼，看过医生但是并未好转。请你根据以下提示，给她回复邮件。
提示：1.描述Jill的病情；2.分析病因；3.给出建议：保证充足的睡眠并做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条)
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jill,
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Hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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（北京）股份有限公司
（北京）股份有限公司
参考答案：
1．My trip to Beijing
Have you ever been to Beijing I’ve been there once.I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.
I visited many famous places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.I took a lot of photos with my camera.On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English.I told them there’s an old saying.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.They liked the saying very much and they told me that they were true men at that time.We all laughed happily.I ate Beijing roast duck.It was very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was happy.I look forward to visiting Beijing again.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。题目是“My trip to ”，记叙你的一次旅行。给出了提示要点。提示要点是本文的写作提纲要点。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的青岛之行
去年暑假，我和家人去了青岛。我们乘火车去了那里，住在海边的一家大旅馆里。我们在那里呆了三天。
第一天，我们沿着海边散步。之后，我们去游泳，在那里拍了很多照片。第二天，我们在一个著名的市场买了许多纪念品。最后一天，我们在海边野餐。当地人表演了很多节目，这让我们很高兴。我们都很开心。这是难忘的。
青岛是游览的好地方。如果我有机会，我会再去那里。
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：On the first day, /The next day / The last day, /We all enjoyed ourselves./ Qingdao is a good place to visit. If I have a chance, I will go there again.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
2．An unforgettable trip
I have been to many places in China,and Hainan is my favourite.
Last summer holiday,my father and I went there.We went there by plane.The sea was wonderful.The sky was blue and the sea was blue,too.First we went to swim in the sea.Then we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun.Next we tried some seafood.It was delicious.We also took lots of photos there.It was a nice trip.I felt very relaxed.I will never forget this experience.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述一次让你难忘的经历。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如by plane, wonderful, First, Then, Next, take photos等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．例文：
I went to the Fuyun Hill near my city in summer holiday. But I had never been there before. I went there with my friends by bike. First we climbed the hill. At about 11 o'clock we got to the top. I could see the whole city from the top of the hill. It was so beautiful. At noon we had a picnic on the grass.
In the afternoon we met some students from other schools. We played games together and they also told interesting stories to us. We chatted and laughed happily. We had a great day.
That day is interesting and meaningful for me. I'll never forget it.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求介绍自己假期中有意义的一段经历，可以是旅行，也可以是参加的活动等；写作时注意叙述经历的内容及个人感悟。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般过去时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时可按照时间发展顺序记叙经历内容；注意文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
4．My space hero
My space hero is Jing Haipeng. Jing was born in Yuncheng, Shanxi in 1966. Jing has done many exciting things. He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. He has been to space three times. In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. In June 2012 he took the Shenzhou-9 spaceship into space with Liu Wang and Liu Yang. On 17th October 2016, Jing took the Shenzhou-11 spaceship into space for the third time. He and Chen Dong stayed in space for thirty-three days.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下我的太空英雄。所提供的材料中列举了你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。根据所给的景海鹏的资料，主要从1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务；3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。这四个方面去介绍。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. 他已安全地在空中飞行了1200多小时。more than=over超过。本句话的语感较好。
【高分句型二】
In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. 2008年9月，他和翟志刚、刘伯明一起将神舟7号宇宙飞船送入太空。
句子In September 2008在句子中做时间状语。
5．Life on Mars
In the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.
What will life be like on Mars Just like they’re on the earth, people will be busy with working and studying on weekdays. At weekends, they will relax by going to the park. During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends.
Life on Mars will be very interesting
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下火星上的生活。所提供的材料中列举了工作日；周末；假期。主要从工作日；周末；假期这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时，人称为第二人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
In the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in because people will produce enough air and water on Mars. 在未来，火星将是人们居住的好地方，因为人们将在火星上生产足够的空气和水。
句子because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends. 在长假期间，他们将乘宇宙飞船返回地球去探望他们的家人和朋友。During a long holiday是时间状语从句。
6．例文
My English Teacher
Jackson is my English teacher. He is an Englishman. He is 40 years old. He is 1.72 meters tall and of medium build. He has short curly fair hair. He has a big nose. He likes wearing cool clothes. He is popular in the school. He is very friendly so he is the students' friend. He loves swimming and playing football. He’s good at telling stories，and he always makes us laugh. The students all like him very much.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My English Teacher”为题，介绍英语老师的情况，属于话题写作。在写作时应承接开头，紧紧围绕提示信息展开叙述，必要时可进行适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文介绍的是英语老师的情况，需以第三人称作文；时态采用一般现在时；可按照要点提示的顺序进行写作，最后再简单表达一下对老师的喜爱情感，做到叙述条理，表达流畅。
7．One possible version
The Most Important Person in My Life
There are many important people around me in my life. There is only one person that influences me the most and he is the most important person for me. He is my father.
My father is a farmer, but he is different from other farmers because he reads more books than other farmers. When I was young, he told me that life is not easy. No matter what difficulties you face, you must be brave and keep on going. From then on whenever I think the life is unfair or hard for me, I will never give up and try my best.
My father not only gives me life but also gives me the confidence I should have. He is the most important person in my life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。第一段叙述谁是自己生命中重要的人；第二段叙述他为什么在自己的生命中如此重要；第三段叙述这个生命中最重要的人给自己产生的影响。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；叙述他在自己生命中最为重要的理由要充分，感情要真挚，内容要饱满；最后总结他对自己产生的影响，紧扣主题，情感升华。
8．例文
It has been more than a year since I entered junior high school. And I have changed a lot during these years.
I used to be short. Now I am tall. I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I was too weak to do much exercise in the past. But with the help of the teachers and classmates, I do exercise whenever I am free. Besides, I used to stay up late, but now I’m used to going to bed early and getting up early. I didn’t study hard in the past. But now I get good grades in all subjects. I wasn’t good at learning English at first. Soon I made great progress and became interested in English.
Thanks to the teachers and classmates, I have learnt so much! I will never forget the valuable middle school life.
【解析】
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1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己在过去和现在的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时。从外貌和性格的变化、生活习惯及学校生活等方面介绍；最后表达自己的感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone!
I’m very happy to tell you my experiences. I have been to many places, such as Suzhou, Xi’an and Beijing. I think Beijing is my favourite city, because it is our capital and there are many places of interest. Our country held the 2008 Olympic Games there. I haven’t been to Hainan. And I want to go there because I hear the beaches in Sanya are very excellent. I hope I can go there soon. What about your experiences Where have you ever been Don’t forget to tell us.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】
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题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以My experience为题，介绍自己的一个经历。题目中给出了几个问题，学生们可以这几个问题为指导，介绍自己曾经去过的一个给你印象比较深刻的地方；然后介绍一个自己没有去过但是很想去的地方，并阐述理由。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文可能用到不同的时态，学生们应根据表达的需要，使用正确的时态，变化单词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式结构的特点，写完整的句子。以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构的使用。同时注意上下文的衔接，使行文连贯。
10．例文：
I have been to many places with my parents. But I remember my first travel with my classmates and teachers all the time. On a day of May, 2020, my classmates, teachers and I went out for a trip together and helped the farmers to pick apples. On our way to the farm, we talked and laughed. On the farm, all of us worked hard and helped the farmers pick many apples. They were so heavy that we had to work together. When we had a rest, we sang and danced. Our teacher took a lot of funny photos of us. What a happy day! I'll never forget that day.
【解析】
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1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍自己经历过的第一次，内容可以根据自身情况适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称和第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己经历的第一次旅行，包括旅行时做了哪些具体的事情，有何感受等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
11．例文：
An Exciting Trip
Today is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.
We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing.
After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.
Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars.
The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon.
【解析】
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1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
12．参考范文
Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. Here are some tips to keep healthy.
First, we should do more exercise and have a balanced diet. Drink more water every day. Second, we’d better go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. Third, why not eat more vegetables and fruit every day As we know, they are good for our health. What’s more, to be healthy, we can’t play too much computer games. We can read more books about health.
In a word, there are many ways to make us healthy. You can find some and try them.
【解析】
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题干解读：题目要求写一篇关于保持健康的秘诀的英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
写作指导：时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称。文章可使用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，引出下文；第二段：描述保持健康的秘诀；第三段：总结全文，保持健康的秘诀很多。
13．[例文]
I think healthy habits are very important to us. Good habits can help us keep in good health. If we want to be healthier, we should eat more healthy food and less junk food. Fruit and vegetables are good for us, so we should try to eat lots of them. And we should drink milk every day. To keep healthy, we should go to bed early and get up early. Don’t stay up. Besides, we’d better take more exercise. Exercise can help us be active and strong. Health is the most important thing in our life, so let’s look after ourselves well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来写关于健康的重要性，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。
14．例文
Zhong Nanshan is a famous doctor. He led the experts in their battle with Covid-19 and saved many lives. He received the Medal of the Republic. Last summer vacation, a primary school student in our city wrote a letter to academician Zhong Nanshan, expressing his gratitude, respect and good wishes to Grandpa Zhong. Soon, academician Zhong Nanshan replied in his busy schedule. We can see his concern for young people. We wish him healthier and healthier.
【解析】
【分析】
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1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。去年暑假，我市一名小学生给钟南山院士写了一封信，表达了对钟爷爷的感激之情、敬重之意和美好祝福。钟南山院士给他回了一封既暖心又励志的信。要求就这件事情写一篇短文，谈谈自己的感想。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
15．Dear Jill,
I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days. You said you went to the doctor, but you didn’t feel better. From what you told me, I think it is because you’re too tired.
Here is my advice. First, you should get enough sleep every day. And you should do sports. Second, you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third, try putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed.
Hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
【解析】
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题。回复电子邮件时，作者第一句I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days.开门见山，对于听说经常头疼的消息表示抱歉。然后把出现的情况原因说明一下。描述一下：看医生，但是感觉不好。接着给出几条建议：首先，保证睡眠充足；其次多吃水果和蔬菜，尽量少吃肉。再者，睡觉前用热水泡脚。最后祝福对方早点好起来。
【点睛】
电子邮件是书信的一种，对于对方的不好事情，先表明感觉难过。给对方提建议时，要有条理：先重后轻，依次讲明。最后送上祝愿早日康复。答案第1页，共2页
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