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易错点18 应用文写作
目 录
01 易错陷阱（3大陷阱）
02 举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误，汉式英语易混易错点
03 易错题通关
易错陷阱1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，。
易错陷阱2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了，自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
【易错点提醒一】 体裁格式、结构易混易错点
【例1】（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）你校上周日举办了一场“非物质文化遗产（Intangible Cultural Heritage）进校园”活动。请你给校英语报写一篇报道，介绍此次活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
2. 活动意义。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：传承人 inheritor
Last Sunday, our school launched the “Intangible Cultural Heritage into the Campus” activity.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
易错分析：思维固化，总是以书信格式开头或结尾易错，内容要点易忽略。
【变式1】（24-25高三上·江苏徐州·阶段练习）假如你是李华，某武术协会计划举办一场大型的国际武术表演，正在招聘英语志愿者。请你给武术协会的负责人写封邮件，应征该职位，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．应征原因及你的优势；
3．你的期望。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Guangming Senior High School.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【变式2】（24-25高三上·四川·阶段练习）你校将举行“用英语讲述中因故事”为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 人物事迹；2. 意义；3. 启示。
注意： （1）100词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【变式3】（24-25高三上·江苏盐城·阶段练习）假定你是学生会主席李华，国庆节将至，为了向在校留学生展示国庆节，你校将举办一场以“我和我的祖国”为主题的摄影作品比赛。请你用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的要求；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
【易错点提醒二】 语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、笼统的表达，根据语境使用具体生动的词。
So good do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
→So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
【变式1】为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，尽量用高年级阶段学到的高级词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。Eventually, I want to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
→Eventually, I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式2】用短语代替不仅会使文章增加亮点，而且如果关键时刻思维短路，用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。
形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词
Furthermore, guzheng is very significant to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.
→Furthermore, guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式3】运用谚语
·As the famous saying goes ...
正如名言所说……
As we all know, our friends lend us a helping hand when we need help and they help us get through difficult situations.
众所周知，在我们需要帮助的时候，我们的朋友会伸出援手，并且他们会帮助我们渡过困境。
【易错点提醒三】 句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】He want to come to China for a visit.他想要来中国参观。
易错分析：基础知识和词汇掌握不牢。主谓一致不熟悉。
低级语法错误和单词拼写错误是文章扣分的一大因素。这些基础词汇和语法的熟练运用需要积累大量知识。
【变式1】 I am writting to...我给你写信......;
【变式2】 I am looking forward to hear from you.
1．（2025·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（24-25高三上·山东青岛·阶段练习）假设你是李华，你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游，需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他，要点如下：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 介绍李明的优势；
3. 希望安排面试。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（24-25高三上·新疆乌鲁木齐·阶段练习）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会给学习、健康、人际关系等带来不好的影响，并提出一些建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：网瘾 Internet addiction
Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（24-25高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）在育才中学某班的英语课堂上，张老师用英语带领学生们了解月饼的历史并制作月饼。请你就此写一则英语帖子发表在某网站英语论坛上。内容包括：
1. 课堂简介；
2. 你的观点。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（24-25高三上·吉林·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校将举行建校74周年庆典，请代表校学生会向你校的英国留学生Chris发出这邀请。内容包括：
1. 庆典时间、地点；
2. 庆典活动安排；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1、词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：建校 the founding of the school 周年庆典 anniversary celebration
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．（24-25高三上·四川成都·阶段练习）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，请你以学生会名义发一则英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。包含以下内容：
1. 活动目的及时间地点；
2. 主要环节；
3. 注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students Union
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)易错点18 应用文写作
目 录
01 易错陷阱（3大陷阱）
02 举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误，汉式英语易混易错点
03 易错题通关
易错陷阱1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁。
易错陷阱2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
【易错点提醒一】 体裁格式、结构易混易错点
【例1】（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）你校上周日举办了一场“非物质文化遗产（Intangible Cultural Heritage）进校园”活动。请你给校英语报写一篇报道，介绍此次活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
2. 活动意义。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：传承人 inheritor
Last Sunday, our school launched the “Intangible Cultural Heritage into the Campus” activity.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
易错分析：思维固化，总是以书信格式开头或结尾易错，内容要点易忽略。
【答案】
Last Sunday, our school launched the “Intangible Cultural Heritage into the Campus” activity. This activity aims to integrate intangible cultural heritage into school education, so that students can feel the charm of traditional culture.
At the event, the school invited inheritors of intangible cultural heritage to demonstrate their skills and interact with students. Some related practical activities, such as handicraft making, were also organized to let students have a better understanding of intangible cultural heritage through hands- on practice.
This activity is not only an opportunity for cultural inheritance, but also a touching and enlightening experience for students.
【变式1】（24-25高三上·江苏徐州·阶段练习）假如你是李华，某武术协会计划举办一场大型的国际武术表演，正在招聘英语志愿者。请你给武术协会的负责人写封邮件，应征该职位，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．应征原因及你的优势；
3．你的期望。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Guangming Senior High School.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Guangming Senior High School. Learning that you’re looking for volunteers that are good at oral English for a coming grand martial arts performance, I’m writing to be one of them.
The reason why I’m applying for this position is that I want to help spread this traditional culture. I speak fluent English, so it won’t be a problem for me to communicate with foreigners. Besides, I once volunteered for the International Traditional Wushu Competition held in our city.
I’m sure I can perfectly live up to your expectations. And I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【变式2】（24-25高三上·四川·阶段练习）你校将举行“用英语讲述中因故事”为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 人物事迹；2. 意义；3. 启示。
注意： （1）100词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【变式3】（24-25高三上·江苏盐城·阶段练习）假定你是学生会主席李华，国庆节将至，为了向在校留学生展示国庆节，你校将举办一场以“我和我的祖国”为主题的摄影作品比赛。请你用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的要求；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
The National Day is drawing near. Our school will hold a photograph competition themed “My country and I” to show students the celebrations of our national day. You are welcome to join in it!
This competition is scheduled on October 8th. Please send your photos to the Students’ Union before October 5th. Make sure all items entered for the competition are suitable, clear and positive. Not only will the competition give international students a glimpse of this nationwide festival, but it will also enable them to learn more about our great achievements.
Looking forward to your photography works.
Students’ Union
【易错点提醒二】 语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、笼统的表达，根据语境使用具体生动的词。
So good do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
→So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
【变式1】为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，尽量用高年级阶段学到的高级词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。
Eventually, I want to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
→Eventually, I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式2】用短语代替不仅会使文章增加亮点，而且如果关键时刻思维短路，用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。
形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词
Furthermore, guzheng is very significant to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.
→Furthermore, guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式3】运用谚语
·As the famous saying goes ...
正如名言所说……
As we all know, our friends lend us a helping hand when we need help and they help us get through difficult situations.
众所周知，在我们需要帮助的时候，我们的朋友会伸出援手，并且他们会帮助我们渡过困境。
【易错点提醒三】 句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】He want to come to China for a visit.他想要来中国参观。
易错分析：基础知识和词汇掌握不牢。主谓一致不熟悉。
【详解】低级语法错误和单词拼写错误是文章扣分的一大因素。这些基础词汇和语法的熟练运用需要积累大量知识。
【变式1】 I am writting to...我给你写信......;
【详解】write过去式wrote; 过去分词written; 现在分词writing。
【变式2】 I am looking forward to hear from you.
【详解】下列短语中，to是介词，后面需要跟动词的ing形式。
1．（2025·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank,
As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it.
First of all, it’s crucial to decide on priorities. This way, you can make your schedule well- organized. You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. Don’t forget to engage in extracurricular activities to refresh yourself and relieve your pressure.
All in all, academic pressure is a common challenge, but with proper organization, support and self- care, you can deal with it effectively and stay on track.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：pressure → stress
首先：first of all → to begin with
重要的：crucial → vital
处理：deal with → cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other.
拓展句：It is also advisable that you should join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. (运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2．（24-25高三上·山东青岛·阶段练习）假设你是李华，你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游，需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他，要点如下：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 介绍李明的优势；
3. 希望安排面试。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mr. Williams,
I’m writing to recommend my friend Li Ming as your guide for your summer travels in China.
Li Ming, a keen traveler, speaks fluent English and has extensive knowledge of Chinese culture and history. His previous experience as a part-time tour guide has equipped him with the skills to handle any situation that may arise during the trip. He’s passionate, reliable, and always ready to help.
I kindly request you to consider arranging an interview with Li Ming. I’m confident he’ll be an excellent companion for your journey.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于推荐信。要求考生就外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游，需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游这一需求，向Williams推荐自己的朋友李明，并说明推荐理由及希望安排面试。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend → suggest/introduce
配备：equip → arm
处理：handle → deal with
热情：passionate → enthusiastic/zealous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Li Ming, a keen traveler, speaks fluent English and has extensive knowledge of Chinese culture and history.
拓展句：Li Ming, who is a keen traveler, speaks fluent English and has extensive knowledge of Chinese culture and history.
【点睛】[高分句型1] His previous experience as a part-time tour guide has equipped him with the skills to handle any situation that may arise during the trip. (运用了关系代词that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m confident he’ll be an excellent companion for your journey. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
3．（24-25高三上·新疆乌鲁木齐·阶段练习）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会给学习、健康、人际关系等带来不好的影响，并提出一些建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：网瘾 Internet addiction
Dear Mike, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to the Internet and have difficulty controlling it. Internet addiction can have bad effects on your study, health and relationships.
You should limit your time online. You can also do more outdoor activities like sports or going for a walk. Besides, try to focus on your studies and set goals for yourself.
I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful to you and that you can get out of this difficult situation soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike写封信，就其最近沉迷于电脑难以控制一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做……有困难：have difficulty doing→ have trouble doing
影响：effect→ influence/impact
此外：besides→ what’s more
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Internet addiction can have bad effects on your study, health and relationships.
拓展句：If you are addicted to the Internet, it can have bad effects on your study, health and relationships.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to the Internet and have difficulty controlling it.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful to you and that you can get out of this difficult situation soon.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
4．（24-25高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）在育才中学某班的英语课堂上，张老师用英语带领学生们了解月饼的历史并制作月饼。请你就此写一则英语帖子发表在某网站英语论坛上。内容包括：
1. 课堂简介；
2. 你的观点。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Miss Zhang, an English teacher from Yucai HighSchool, helped the students be well-informed about the history of mooncakes in English and asked students to discuss the origins and the symbolic meaning behind mooncakes. Then, Miss Zhang guided them in making mooncakes.
I personally think this is a very creative way of teaching. By doing so, students not only improve their English, but also gain a deeper understanding of Chinese traditions. Also, this hands-on experience helps students develop practical skills, making the learning more engaging and meaningful. Furthermore, this approach develops better communication and cooperation skills, thus promoting students’ global perspective. In conclusion, such methods should be encouraged in more classrooms to inspire students’ interest in learning and cultural exploration.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一则关于育才中学的张老师在课堂上用英语带领学生们了解月饼的历史并制作月饼的英语帖子。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：thus→therefore
总之：in conclusion→in short
提高：improve→promote
激发……在某方面的兴趣：inspire one’s interest in→arouse one’s interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In conclusion, such methods should be encouraged in more classrooms to inspire students’ interest in learning and cultural exploration.
拓展句：In conclusion, I think such methods should be encouraged in more classrooms to inspire students’ interest in learning and cultural exploration.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Also, this hands-on experience helps students develop practical skills, making the learning more engaging and meaningful.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I personally think this is a very creative way of teaching.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
5．（24-25高三上·吉林·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校将举行建校74周年庆典，请代表校学生会向你校的英国留学生Chris发出这邀请。内容包括：
1. 庆典时间、地点；
2. 庆典活动安排；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1、词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：建校 the founding of the school 周年庆典 anniversary celebration
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua, on behalf of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to invite you to our school’s 74th anniversary celebration.
The celebration will be held in our school stadium at 9 a.m. on October 1st. There will be various activities. For example, there will be at least 10 wonderful performances, including singing, dancing, and magic shows. Also, an exhibition of the school’s history and achievements will be presented, featuring over 50 precious photos and documents.
We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy this special occasion with us.
Looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生代表校学生会向学校的英国留学生Chris发出这邀请，邀请其参加学校建校74周年庆典。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
举行：hold→ host
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
宝贵的： precious→ valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Also, an exhibition of the school’s history and achievements will be presented, featuring over 50 precious photos and documents.
拓展句：Also, an exhibition of the school’s history and achievements will be presented, which features over 50 precious photos and documents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Also, an exhibition of the school’s history and achievements will be presented, featuring over 50 precious photos and documents.（运用了现在分词featuring 作状语）
【高分句型2】We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy this special occasion with us.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作hope 的宾语）
6．（24-25高三上·四川成都·阶段练习）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，请你以学生会名义发一则英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。包含以下内容：
1. 活动目的及时间地点；
2. 主要环节；
3. 注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
Notice
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The Students Union
【答案】Notice
With the graduation season approaching, our school will hold a Coming-of age Ceremony with an aim to celebrate Senior 3 students’ stepping into adulthood and remind them of the responsibility they are supposed to shoulder as adults. All members on campus are warmly welcome to attend.
Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively. Then every Senior 3 student will be presented with a booklet of constitution, after which they’ll be conducted to make a vow to follow the items and try to become a qualified citizen and a better individual. Ultimately, the ceremony will end with some entertaining activities.
Given that the ceremony will be held on the playground, keep in mind that some precautions against intense sunlight are necessary. Besides, don’t litter casually. Make sure you leave nothing but your cheers at the venue.
Thanks for your attention. Looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”，要求考生以学生会名义发一则英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
最后：ultimately→finally
活动：activity→event
除此之外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively.
拓展句：Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches which are delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Then every Senior 3 student will be presented with a booklet of constitution, after which they’ll be conducted to make a vow to follow the items and try to become a qualified citizen and a better individual.（运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】With the graduation season approaching, our school will hold a Coming-of age Ceremony with an aim to celebrate Senior 3 students’ stepping into adulthood and remind them of the responsibility they are supposed to shoulder as adults.（运用了that或which引导的限定性定语从句，且that或which在从句中作宾语，被省略）
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