资源简介

专题09 读后续写关爱动物类话题（讲义）解析版
目录
【关爱动物六年考情】 P1
【关爱动物话题解读】 P2
【读后续写常犯问题】 P2
【读后续写写作步骤】 P3
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料10类47句】 P4
【关爱动物话题情节构建】 P7
【关爱动物优秀片段欣赏】 P8
一、社交媒体助力：拯救深陷沙地的骆驼
二、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹
三、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱
【关爱动物话题高考真题调研】 P10
2025八省联考卷--机车党大闹影院？不，他们在守护动物
2024浙江1月卷--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏”
2023浙江1月卷--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢
2020浙江1月卷--Poppy 的欢乐派对：小狗从天而降
【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】 P19
调研1--绝境中，狗狗的忠诚吠叫成希望曙光
调研2--鸵鸟“越狱”堵路，警察巧用美食妙计化解
调研3--小松鼠斯奎特的成长蜕变：从依赖到独立
【关爱动物话题六年考情】
年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型
2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类
八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类
2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类
浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类
九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类
2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类
浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类
2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 校园生活类
浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类
浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类
2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类
浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类
浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类
2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类
浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类
浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类
【关爱动物话题解读】
人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。人与动物的互动常常超越了语言的限制，通过一举一动、无言的陪伴和默默的守护，传递出深厚的信任与依赖。这类故事不仅能呈现人与动物之间难以言喻的情感纽带，也能折射出主角在这个过程中逐渐实现的心灵蜕变。写作这种题材，可以唤起读者内心深处的温暖情感，同时引发对生命与自然的更深思考。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人鸟情未了：农场看到蜂鸟被困窗户叮嘱朋友修复，再次光顾农场与蜂鸟邂逅感恩（2024年1月浙江高考）人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）。
【读后续写常犯问题】
一、文本解读能力差，无法识别原作者的写作意图。
只看表象，不求深入。读不懂原作者的写作意图，挖不出故事背后的主旨大意，听不出人物对话的弦外之音，抓不住所给材料的内涵实质。这类考生常常缺乏高阶思维能力（HOT Skills），只看到了所给材料的浅层表面，就凭自己的主观臆断得出结论，写作时就事论事，绕来绕去都在一个思维层面上兜圈子。
对策：多预留时间充分阅读+重点研读材料后三段（有伏笔）。
二、因果链断裂，情节设计颠三倒四，前言不搭后语。
情节是按照因果逻辑组织起来的一系列事件。如果事件之间没有逻辑推理关系，阅卷教师就会质疑它的连贯性。情节是对人类生活的创造性模仿，如果其中的结果与理由互相印证，我们就会觉得它有意义；结果与理由相悖，就没有意义。
对策：学会根据两个段首句和文章线索快速提炼情节+研读三年高考真题揣摩情节把控。
三、内存不足，平时积累的存量知识太少，有话说不出。
要讲好一个故事，考生必须具备足量的好词好句和语法知识，背诵足量描绘典型人物和场面的美文段落。巧妇难为无米之炊，没有扎实的知识储备，再好的方法策略也是徒劳。
对策：加强“背”功（喜怒哀乐情感表达法）+提升高频句式模仿能力。
四、投机取巧，缺乏通盘规划，导致在主题知识存在盲区。
平时的训练存在投机取巧的押题心态，缺乏系统规划，知识框架有盲区。平时的作文训练“随机播放”，没有通盘安排，没有系统的教学计划；存在严重“押题”的投机取巧心态，缺乏稳扎稳打的认真态度，没有对所有的写作专题进行全覆盖，知识框架存在漏洞或盲区。
对策：重视考后“复盘”能力培养（情节+情感+词汇+结尾），学会rewrite（范文+讲评）。
五、不善挖掘隐含信息，缺乏“瞬间解码”的解题技巧。
在读后续写题的给定材料中，命题者往往直接阐明或若隐若现地给出文章的主旨大意，它是考生续写的方向、前提假设和已知条件。学生在审题时要读懂给定材料，快速解码其主旨大意，挖掘出隐藏信息，才能写出融合度高的故事来，否则就容易出现文不对题的偏题情况。
对策：考后和自己对话（分数扣在哪里）+和老师对话（提升点在哪里）。
六、训练方式不科学，迷信“偏方或怪招”，不肯下苦功夫。
有些学生闭门造车，对事半功倍的科学训练方法置之不理。有些学生蛮干苦干，对作文命题趋势没有精准的研判。有些学生不走大路，迷信“偏方或怪招”，对评分标准不熟悉。解题思路不科学，对考场应试作文的游戏规则不遵守。
对策：树立“久久为功”意识+重视词汇积累+提升句式模仿能力。
七、训练不足或时间分配不足导致卷面出现 “硬伤”。
这些硬伤具体表现有：写作烂尾因未写完导致分数很低；写作放在第一位，时间充足导致所给行数不够用出现“超限”，导致卷面严重受到影响；因为时间不足虽仓促完成但是书写质量严重下降导致“目不忍睹”；因为时间仓促审题不清造成跑题，偏题，导致分数很低。
对策：平时书写训练定时定量；后期使用标准答题卡写作卡时间、卡行数、卡审题。
【读后续写写作步骤】
第一步：提炼六个要素，把握材料要领。
读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。
第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化。
线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。
第三步：紧扣段落首句，精心谋划情节。
分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？
第四步：设计结尾情节，提升价值取向。
考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。
第五步：逻辑关键词汇，高频句式提炼。
设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。
第六步：升格词汇句式，誊写完善成文。
考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
一、好奇期待类
1. be filled with curiosity and excitement满怀好奇与兴奋
2. cautiously approach 小心靠近
3. with eyes full of wonder 满眼好奇
4. be drawn to it 被吸引陪伴守护类
二、陪伴守护类
1. always by one’s side 始终陪伴左右
2. a silent guardian 沉默的守护者
3. share an unspoken bond 共享无言的联系
4. offer a sense of comfort 带来慰藉危机救援类
三、危机救援类
1. rush to one’s rescue 迅速前来救援
2. protect…. from harm 护免受伤害
3. act out of instinct 本能地行动
四、不舍告别类
1. never abandon in times of need 从不在需要时离开不舍告别类
2. part with reluctance 依依不舍地告别
3. watch longingly 依依不舍地注视
4. a bittersweet farewell 苦乐参半的告别
5. remember with a grateful heart 怀着感激的心铭记成长感悟类
五、成长感悟类
1. be touched by the loyalty 被忠诚所感动
2. realize the preciousness of life 意识到生命的珍贵
3. understand the beauty of companionship 理解陪伴的美好
4. grateful for every moment spent together 感激每一个相处的瞬间
六、初识动物类
1. Its gentle eyes seemed to speak, drawing him closer.
它温柔的眼神仿佛在诉说，吸引着他靠近。
2. Curiosity sparkled in her eyes as she reached out her hand tentatively.
她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。
3. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动。
4. He approached the animal cautiously, his heart racing with both excitement and uncertainty.
他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。
七、陪伴动物类
1. Through countless days and nights, it stood by him, a silent companion.
在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。
2. They shared an unspoken understanding, bound by loyalty and trust.
他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。
3. In its presence, he found solace, as if the world was a little kinder.
在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。
八、危机反应类
1. With a fierce loyalty, it stood between him and danger, unwavering.
它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。
2. In that critical moment, it was his silent protector, guarding him at all costs.
在那关键时刻，它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。
3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard.
我的妻子抓住我的衣服，手颤抖着，使劲吞着口水。
4. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright.
一想到狼的血淋淋的嘴，麦克吓得差点死了。
5. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly, screaming, “Help!”
看到它，艾莉疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着：“救命！”
6. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free.
我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开了链子，把狼放了出来。
7. When danger struck, the animal acted without hesitation, shielding him from harm.
危险来临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。
8. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf together with Brian.
从树桩中拔出巨大的尸体后，布莱恩清理了伤口，然后对他进行了仔细的治疗。贝基跪下来，和布莱恩一起照顾狼。
九、不舍告别类
1. As he bid farewell, he realized how deeply it had touched his life.
在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。
2. Their parting was bittersweet, leaving him grateful for every moment shared.
他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。
3. With a heavy heart, he watched it disappear into the horizon, memories flooding his mind.
他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。
十、主旨升华类
1. Cats may have nine lives, but they give us a lifetime of love.
猫可能有九条命，但它们给了我们一生的爱。
2. Cats are like little furry miracles that bring joy to our lives.
猫就像小小的毛茸茸的奇迹，给我们的生活带来欢乐。
3. A dog's happy face is a reminder of the simple joy in life.
狗快乐的脸是对生活中简单快乐的提醒。
4. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.
尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家里却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。
5. The rain that came that day was a miracle, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.
那天的雨是一个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一样。
6. It is through this silent companionship that he came to understand the depth of loyalty and devotion, a bond that went beyond words and gestures.
正是通过这种无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动的纽带。
7. The bond between human and animal revealed to him the profound, often unspoken, beauty of unconditional love, a connection resilient enough to withstand both time and trials.
人与动物之间的联系让他领悟到那种深邃却无言的无条件之爱，一种足以承受时间与考验的坚韧情感。
8. Not until the moment of parting did he grasp the intensity of the connection they shared, an attachment woven quietly into the fabric of his life.
直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。
9. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks. What a warm scene!
狼似乎感觉好多了，慢慢地抬起头，温柔地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在表示感谢。多么温暖的场景啊！
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
【关爱动物故事情节构建】
情节发展 情绪刻画 主题升华句
可爱型动物故事情节 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。 陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物故事情节 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊、蛇等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
【关爱动物主题优秀片段欣赏】
一、社交媒体助力：拯救深陷沙地的骆驼
Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. Angela gave Stucky water. I focused on digging out her back legs. When I tried to wipe the sweat from my eyes, I would get sand in them. An hour later, we still weren’t making much progress—whenever we nearly freed a leg, which took about 20 minutes, she would get sucked back into the sand. And the more she struggled to get free, the more stuck she became. We were worried it would get dark and the tide would come in.
Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus (装备). Someone saw posted photos of the camel rescue on social media. Word then quickly spread to the small farms a few kilometres away. They joined in and worked super-hard. Everyone was working on all four of the camel’s legs at the same time, using different techniques. When we finally got her out, Stucky’s legs were effectively dead. The the guys massaged her legs to get the blood flowing. It took about 20 minutes for her to stand. Then she turned, stretched and gave us a wink goodbye.
【范文译文】
克里斯汀拍摄了我的救援尝试，并在社交媒体上发布了照片。安吉拉给斯塔基喝水。我专注于挖出她的后腿。当我试图擦去眼睛上的汗水时，我会把沙子弄进去。一个小时后，我们仍然没有取得多大进展——每当我们几乎要松开一条腿时，大约需要20分钟，她就会被吸回沙子里。她越是挣扎着挣脱，就越是陷入困境。我们担心天黑了，潮水会涌来。
幸运的是，当时一辆皮卡车载着7名携带各种设备的男子抵达。有人在社交媒体上看到了骆驼救援的照片。消息很快传到几公里外的小农场。他们加入进来，非常努力地工作。每个人都在用不同的技术同时锻炼骆驼的四条腿。当我们最终把她救出来时，斯塔基的腿实际上已经死了。男人们按摩她的腿，让血液流动。她花了大约20分钟才站起来。然后她转过身，伸了个懒腰，向我们眨眼道别。
二、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹
While Dakota loved me and her new home, she still missed her kid. She would utter mournful howls whenever I took her out for walks in the woods. It seemed as if she was calling for her puppy to come back. The exact scene made me heart-broken, and I took action all at once, determined to reunite mother and pup. I called the TV station, asking for conditions about the little dog, only to be told that Indiana was receiving medical treatment for falling on the ground when jumping over the fence.
I decided to bring three-legged Indiana to my home. Instantly they got reunited, Dakota couldn't stop licking her puppy's face. Happy and excited, the two dogs were wagging their tails wildly. The heart-warming scene moved anyone on the spot. Dakota has since stopped her sorrowful howls while Indiana has never tried to jump over the fence. These once-separated dogs played together, chasing each other around the room and slept together with their noses resting on each other. If there is to be any devotion, it will come through any species.
【范文译文】
虽然达科他爱我和她的新家，但她仍然想念她的孩子。每当我带她到树林里散步时，她都会发出悲哀的嚎叫。似乎她在呼唤她的小狗回来。确切的场景让我心碎，我立刻采取行动，决心让母狗团聚。我打电话给电视台，询问这只小狗的情况，却被告知印第安纳州因跳过栅栏时摔倒在地正在接受治疗。
我决定把三足印第安纳带回我家。当他们重逢时，达科塔忍不住舔了舔她小狗的脸。两只狗既高兴又兴奋，疯狂地摇着尾巴。暖心的一幕感动了在场的每一个人。达科他从此停止了她悲伤的嚎叫，而印第安纳从未试图跳过栅栏。这些曾经分离的狗一起玩耍，在房间里互相追逐，一起睡觉，鼻子靠在一起。如果有任何奉献，它将来自任何物种。
三、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back, He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. Before he was put in at in tub, we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days -years - on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again.
【范文译文】
突然，灌木丛中传来一阵声响。这只被打得遍体鳞伤的狗突然飞到我父亲的怀里。蜘蛛以极大的力量和确定性跳过了网球场围栏。我父亲的眼睛闪闪发光，我和老太太站在那里，眼里含着泪水。他不停地舔我父亲的脸，发出令人窒息的声音。他闻起来很可怕。我们用一条旧毯子把他裹起来，在回家的路上我把他抱在腿上。我们开车回家时，他从未把目光从我父亲身上移开。每隔一段时间，我都会收到一点感激之情。
回家后，我们的任务是把他身上的刺都拔掉。在他被放进浴缸之前，我们用肥皂轻轻地把他洗干净。蜘蛛坚忍地站着，我父亲也检查了他的牙齿和耳朵。蜘蛛在前廊度过了他的余生——几年——心满意足，总是等着我和妹妹放学回家，在那里他会给我们很多舔舐，以确保我们没事。然后，他在车库门口等我父亲。我们再也没有把他单独留在任何地方。
【遇困脱险话题高考真题调研】
（2025八省联考卷）--机车党大闹影院？不，他们在守护动物
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。
②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。
2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize
②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at
③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate
情绪类：
①感动：moved/touched/affected
②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语)
（2024浙江1月卷）--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏”
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you. “Really How do you know that ” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It took me a long time to discover this secret, too. It’s not easy to follow Maya.”
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Catherine thought to herself, this is really a clever dolphin. And she said to Hilda, “Well, Maya loves treats, so we’ll work together, and you’ll secretly help her collect a few things and put them in the filter at the back of the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Good idea, let’s do it.” From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony. Maya’s performance in front of the audience is getting better and better.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。
②由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。
2.续写线索：训练海豚——发现秘密——分析秘密——互相协商——共同配合——良好结果
3.词汇激活
行为类
①密密地：secretly/in private
②收集：collect/gather
③隐藏：hid/conceal
情绪类
①惊讶地：in surprise/in amazement
②笑：laugh/smile
【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. (运用了that引导的表语从句和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
（2023浙江1月卷）--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。
2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to
②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to
③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at
情绪类
①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句)
（2020浙江1月卷）Poppy 的欢乐派对：小狗从天而降
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see you back home in a month, okay？"His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog. Then two fluffy paws. Next the box tipped over sideways, and out tumbled a mass of wiggly golden silliness. Poppy was amazed. She wagged furiously. She barked with joy. She smiled, her tongue lolling out as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog. “That didn’t take long,” remarked Mom, as both dogs went roaring around the house in an impromptu game of chase. Dad laughed.
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and was looking forward to seeing her. When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too. “Oh my gosh, who is this ” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy!”
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass of，with joy，look forward to等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog.；时间状语从句When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too.等高级句式。
【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】
【调研1】（24-25高三下·山东·开学考试）--绝境中，狗狗的忠诚吠叫成希望曙光
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grga Brkie never expected that a mountain-climbing trip would put him in such a desperate situation. That Sunday, while climbing the highest peak of the Velebit mountain range, which was about 5,800 feet above coastline, he accidentally slipped and fell nearly 500 feet down a snowy slope (斜坡). The fall caused his leg to be severely broken and he couldn’t move at all. He was filled with fear, knowing clearly that if no one came to rescue him, he might die of the freezing temperature in this snowy place.
Fortunately, two nearby hikers spotted Brke and his eight-month-old Alaskan malamute (阿拉斯加犬), North, at the bottom of the slope. However, they couldn’t reach them safely. After a brief discussion, they knew they had no choice but to rush off in search of professional rescuers. Before they left, they dropped some necessary supplies to the bottom of the slope so that Brkic could keep his strength and energy. In spite of that, Brkic couldn’t help being shivering (颤抖) in the snow with the temperature getting lower and lower.
At this critical moment, North, sensing its master’s great danger, immediately sprang into action. It circled around Brkic a few times, as if assessing the best way to help. Then, with a gentle yet determined motion, it slowly and carefully laid itself over Brkie’s body, making sure to cover as much of him as possible. As an Alaskan malamute, North are naturally resistant to cold, whose waterproof double coats can keep it warm even in temperatures as low as -20°F. Now it was like a warm little sun, tightly guarding Brkie. North remained perfectly still, and was alert to any signs of approaching help or potential danger, as if it had taken on the great responsibility of being Brkie’s guardian and protecting his master from any possible danger.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before Brkic lost consciousness (意识), he heard North barking loudly.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Finally, the rescuers managed to save and rush Brkie to the hospital with North.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Before Brkic lost consciousness, he heard North barking loudly. The barking was a signal of hope which echoed through the mountains, leading the rescuers to find them. When they found Brkic, they were surprised to find that North was still warming his master without any movement until it realized that they were here to help. The rescuers quickly launched the rescue operation. They carefully fixed Brkic's broken leg with a splint, then gently lifted him onto a stretcher. During the whole process, North refused to be separated from its owner and watched patiently.
Finally, there rescuers managed to save and rush Brkic to the hospital with North. In the hospital, Brkic underwent an emergency operation while North was unharmed. The moment Brkic regained consciousness, he thanked those kind people and searched for North, who was also looking at him with those warm and loyal eyes. Brkic reached out his hand weakly to pet North, with his voice choked with emotion as he whispered words of love and thanks. In face of the emergency, it was loyalty and kindness that cross all boundaries and brought hope of survival.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Grga Brkie带着阿拉斯加犬North爬山时不小心摔倒，从雪坡上滑下来受伤，无法动弹，幸好附近的两名徒步旅行者在斜坡底部发现了他们，但是他们无法到达那里，只能赶紧去寻找专业的救援人员，随着气温越来越低，Brkic忍不住在雪地里打哆嗦，North觉察到主人的危险情况，温柔地躺在Brkie身上为他保暖，并保持着警惕，保护他的主人免受任何可能的危险。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在Brkie失去知觉之前，他听到North在大声吠叫。”可知，第一段可描写North的叫声引导救援人员找到他们并展开救援。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，救援人员设法救出了Brkic，并将其与North一起送往医院。”可知，第二段可描写Brkic经过手术后恢复知觉，感激那些善良的人和忠诚的North。
2. 续写线索：救援人员发现Brkic和North——展开救援——送到医院——恢复知觉——感激
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①带领：lead/direct
②意识到：realize/be aware
③寻找：search for/look for
情绪类
①惊讶：surprised/astonished
②感谢：thanks/appreciation
【点睛】【高分句型1】The barking was a signal of hope which echoed through the mountains, leading the rescuers to find them.（运用了关系代词which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】The moment Brkic regained consciousness, he thanked those kind people and searched for North, who was also looking at him with those warm and loyal eyes.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句和关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Brkic reached out his hand weakly to pet North, with his voice choked with emotion as he whispered words of love and thanks.（运用了独立主格结构以及从属连词as引导的时间状语从句）
【调研2】（24-25高三下·河北·开学考试）鸵鸟 “越狱” 堵路，警察巧用美食妙计化解
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Have you ever seen a real ostrich (鸵鸟) The adult ostrich will reach 2.5 meters tall and the male ostrich’s weight will reach 150 kilograms. Although it is regarded as the largest bird in the world, it can’t fly. Its feeding habits are very diverse, but the leaves and fruits of plants are the main ones.
In Sioux Falls at noon on Tuesday, a small truck was carrying a roughly 7-foot-tall ostrich and a container with the leaves and fruits of plants. Just as the driver was driving on a busy four-lane (四车道) road, he parked his truck in the roadside and wanted to find a restaurant to eat.
When the driver left, the ostrich began to feel anxious, making some noise and pressing the truck’s door with its body.
Just at that moment, the door was pushed open, and the ostrich escaped from the truck and walked around, feeling like looking for something. And then it walked into the busy four- lane road, which brought traffic to a stop.
In order to make the road smooth, all drivers tried to carefully attract and lead the towering bird off the busy four-lane road, but in vain.
Drivers called Sioux Falls police and explained what had happened.
As soon as the police came, they also tried to carefully attract the ostrich off the busy road, but still in vain. Luckily, the ostrich didn’t run around.
“We can find out the driver’s phone number and call him. He must know how to solve it,” one of the policemen said.
“Good idea! If the ostrich stays on the road all the time, it will be very dangerous,” a driver said.
On the one hand, the police immediately started to find the driver’s phone number by the truck’s information; on the other hand, they continued to keep the safety of both the bird and the traffic. All the drivers were excited when the police found out the driver’s phone number.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The police contacted the driver immediately.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Feeling awkward, the driver thought of the leaves and fruits in the container.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
The police contacted the driver immediately. The driver was shocked when he learned that his ostrich had escaped and caused a traffic jam. He quickly told the police that the ostrich was usually very tame but might be frightened and hungry. He said he would rush back as soon as possible. The police informed him of the current situation and asked if he had any suggestions to deal with the ostrich.
Feeling awkward, the driver thought of the leaves and fruits in the container. He told the police that the ostrich loved to eat those. So the police asked the driver to describe the location of the container. Then they carefully brought the container closer to the ostrich. As expected, the ostrich smelled the familiar food and walked towards the container. The police slowly led the ostrich and the container to a safer area beside the road. Finally, the traffic went back to normal smoothly and the ostrich was safely back in the truck. The driver was extremely grateful to the police and the kind-hearted drivers for their help.
【导语】文章围绕一只从运输卡车上逃脱并进入繁忙道路的鸵鸟展开，讲述了鸵鸟逃脱的缘由、造成交通堵塞的状况，以及司机、警察和其他司机为解决这一突发情况所采取的行动，包括报警、寻找司机联系方式等，为后续故事发展做了铺垫。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“警察立即联系了司机。”可知，第一段可描写警察联系司机后，司机对鸵鸟逃脱并引发交通堵塞一事的反应，如震惊、着急等，同时向警察说明鸵鸟的习性及自己会尽快返回，并与警察交流处理办法。
②由第二段首句内容“司机感到很尴尬，他想到了容器里的叶子和果实。”可知，第二段可描写司机想到容器里的食物后告知警察，警察据此行动，将容器移近鸵鸟，鸵鸟受食物吸引，警察借机将其引至路边安全区域，使交通恢复正常，鸵鸟被安全带回卡车，司机对各方表达感激。
2. 续写线索：警察致电司机 —— 司机回应并说明 —— 司机提议食物引鸵鸟 —— 警察挪动容器 —— 鸵鸟被引走 —— 交通恢复与司机感恩
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①逃脱：escape/flee
②联系：contact/reach
③告知：inform/notify
情绪类
①震惊：shocked/astonished
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型 1] The driver was shocked when he learned that his ostrich had escaped and caused a traffic jam. (运用了when引导时间状语从句，其中包含that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] He quickly told the police that the ostrich was usually very tame but might be frightened and hungry. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题09 读后续写关爱动物类话题（讲义）解析版
目录
【关爱动物六年考情】 P1
【关爱动物话题解读】 P2
【读后续写常犯问题】 P2
【读后续写写作步骤】 P3
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料10类47句】 P4
【关爱动物话题情节构建】 P7
【关爱动物优秀片段欣赏】 P8
一、社交媒体助力：拯救深陷沙地的骆驼
二、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹
三、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱
【关爱动物话题高考真题调研】 P10
2025八省联考卷--机车党大闹影院？不，他们在守护动物
2024浙江1月卷--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏”
2023浙江1月卷--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢
2020浙江1月卷--Poppy 的欢乐派对：小狗从天而降
【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】 P19
调研1--绝境中，狗狗的忠诚吠叫成希望曙光
调研2--鸵鸟“越狱”堵路，警察巧用美食妙计化解
调研3--小松鼠斯奎特的成长蜕变：从依赖到独立
【关爱动物话题六年考情】
年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型
2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类
八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类
2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类
浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类
九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类
2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类
浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类
2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 校园生活类
浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类
浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类
2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类
浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类
浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类
2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类
浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类
浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类
【关爱动物话题解读】
人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。人与动物的互动常常超越了语言的限制，通过一举一动、无言的陪伴和默默的守护，传递出深厚的信任与依赖。这类故事不仅能呈现人与动物之间难以言喻的情感纽带，也能折射出主角在这个过程中逐渐实现的心灵蜕变。写作这种题材，可以唤起读者内心深处的温暖情感，同时引发对生命与自然的更深思考。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人鸟情未了：农场看到蜂鸟被困窗户叮嘱朋友修复，再次光顾农场与蜂鸟邂逅感恩（2024年1月浙江高考）人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）。
【读后续写常犯问题】
一、文本解读能力差，无法识别原作者的写作意图。
只看表象，不求深入。读不懂原作者的写作意图，挖不出故事背后的主旨大意，听不出人物对话的弦外之音，抓不住所给材料的内涵实质。这类考生常常缺乏高阶思维能力（HOT Skills），只看到了所给材料的浅层表面，就凭自己的主观臆断得出结论，写作时就事论事，绕来绕去都在一个思维层面上兜圈子。
对策：多预留时间充分阅读+重点研读材料后三段（有伏笔）。
二、因果链断裂，情节设计颠三倒四，前言不搭后语。
情节是按照因果逻辑组织起来的一系列事件。如果事件之间没有逻辑推理关系，阅卷教师就会质疑它的连贯性。情节是对人类生活的创造性模仿，如果其中的结果与理由互相印证，我们就会觉得它有意义；结果与理由相悖，就没有意义。
对策：学会根据两个段首句和文章线索快速提炼情节+研读三年高考真题揣摩情节把控。
三、内存不足，平时积累的存量知识太少，有话说不出。
要讲好一个故事，考生必须具备足量的好词好句和语法知识，背诵足量描绘典型人物和场面的美文段落。巧妇难为无米之炊，没有扎实的知识储备，再好的方法策略也是徒劳。
对策：加强“背”功（喜怒哀乐情感表达法）+提升高频句式模仿能力。
四、投机取巧，缺乏通盘规划，导致在主题知识存在盲区。
平时的训练存在投机取巧的押题心态，缺乏系统规划，知识框架有盲区。平时的作文训练“随机播放”，没有通盘安排，没有系统的教学计划；存在严重“押题”的投机取巧心态，缺乏稳扎稳打的认真态度，没有对所有的写作专题进行全覆盖，知识框架存在漏洞或盲区。
对策：重视考后“复盘”能力培养（情节+情感+词汇+结尾），学会rewrite（范文+讲评）。
五、不善挖掘隐含信息，缺乏“瞬间解码”的解题技巧。
在读后续写题的给定材料中，命题者往往直接阐明或若隐若现地给出文章的主旨大意，它是考生续写的方向、前提假设和已知条件。学生在审题时要读懂给定材料，快速解码其主旨大意，挖掘出隐藏信息，才能写出融合度高的故事来，否则就容易出现文不对题的偏题情况。
对策：考后和自己对话（分数扣在哪里）+和老师对话（提升点在哪里）。
六、训练方式不科学，迷信“偏方或怪招”，不肯下苦功夫。
有些学生闭门造车，对事半功倍的科学训练方法置之不理。有些学生蛮干苦干，对作文命题趋势没有精准的研判。有些学生不走大路，迷信“偏方或怪招”，对评分标准不熟悉。解题思路不科学，对考场应试作文的游戏规则不遵守。
对策：树立“久久为功”意识+重视词汇积累+提升句式模仿能力。
七、训练不足或时间分配不足导致卷面出现 “硬伤”。
这些硬伤具体表现有：写作烂尾因未写完导致分数很低；写作放在第一位，时间充足导致所给行数不够用出现“超限”，导致卷面严重受到影响；因为时间不足虽仓促完成但是书写质量严重下降导致“目不忍睹”；因为时间仓促审题不清造成跑题，偏题，导致分数很低。
对策：平时书写训练定时定量；后期使用标准答题卡写作卡时间、卡行数、卡审题。
【读后续写写作步骤】
第一步：提炼六个要素，把握材料要领。
读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。
第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化。
线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。
第三步：紧扣段落首句，精心谋划情节。
分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？
第四步：设计结尾情节，提升价值取向。
考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。
第五步：逻辑关键词汇，高频句式提炼。
设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。
第六步：升格词汇句式，誊写完善成文。
考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。
【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
一、好奇期待类
1. 满怀好奇与兴奋
2. 小心靠近
3. 满眼好奇
4. 被吸引陪伴守护类
二、陪伴守护类
1. 始终陪伴左右
2. 沉默的守护者
3. 共享无言的联系
4. 带来慰藉危机救援类
三、危机救援类
1. 迅速前来救援
2. 护免受伤害
3. 本能地行动
四、不舍告别类
1. 从不在需要时离开不舍告别类
2. 依依不舍地告别
3. 依依不舍地注视
4. 苦乐参半的告别
5. 怀着感激的心铭记成长感悟类
五、成长感悟类
1. 被忠诚所感动
2. 意识到生命的珍贵
3. 理解陪伴的美好
4. 感激每一个相处的瞬间
六、初识动物类
1.
它温柔的眼神仿佛在诉说，吸引着他靠近。
2.
她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。
3.
被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动。
4.
他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。
七、陪伴动物类
1.
在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。
2.
他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。
3.
在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。
八、危机反应类
1.
它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。
2.
在那关键时刻，它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。
3.
我的妻子抓住我的衣服，手颤抖着，使劲吞着口水。
4.
一想到狼的血淋淋的嘴，麦克吓得差点死了。
5.
看到它，艾莉疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着：“救命！”
6.
我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开了链子，把狼放了出来。
7.
危险来临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。
8.
从树桩中拔出巨大的尸体后，布莱恩清理了伤口，然后对他进行了仔细的治疗。贝基跪下来，和布莱恩一起照顾狼。
九、不舍告别类
1.
在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。
2.
他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。
3.
他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。
十、主旨升华类
1.
猫可能有九条命，但它们给了我们一生的爱。
2.
猫就像小小的毛茸茸的奇迹，给我们的生活带来欢乐。
3.
狗快乐的脸是对生活中简单快乐的提醒。
4.
尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家里却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。
5.
那天的雨是一个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一样。
6.
正是通过这种无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动的纽带。
7.
人与动物之间的联系让他领悟到那种深邃却无言的无条件之爱，一种足以承受时间与考验的坚韧情感。
8.
直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。
9.
狼似乎感觉好多了，慢慢地抬起头，温柔地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在表示感谢。多么温暖的场景啊！21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
【关爱动物故事情节构建】
情节发展 情绪刻画 主题升华句
可爱型动物故事情节 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。 陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物故事情节 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊、蛇等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
【关爱动物主题优秀片段欣赏】
一、社交媒体助力：拯救深陷沙地的骆驼
Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. Angela gave Stucky water. I focused on digging out her back legs. When I tried to wipe the sweat from my eyes, I would get sand in them. An hour later, we still weren’t making much progress—whenever we nearly freed a leg, which took about 20 minutes, she would get sucked back into the sand. And the more she struggled to get free, the more stuck she became. We were worried it would get dark and the tide would come in.
Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus (装备). Someone saw posted photos of the camel rescue on social media. Word then quickly spread to the small farms a few kilometres away. They joined in and worked super-hard. Everyone was working on all four of the camel’s legs at the same time, using different techniques. When we finally got her out, Stucky’s legs were effectively dead. The the guys massaged her legs to get the blood flowing. It took about 20 minutes for her to stand. Then she turned, stretched and gave us a wink goodbye.
【范文译文】
克里斯汀拍摄了我的救援尝试，并在社交媒体上发布了照片。安吉拉给斯塔基喝水。我专注于挖出她的后腿。当我试图擦去眼睛上的汗水时，我会把沙子弄进去。一个小时后，我们仍然没有取得多大进展——每当我们几乎要松开一条腿时，大约需要20分钟，她就会被吸回沙子里。她越是挣扎着挣脱，就越是陷入困境。我们担心天黑了，潮水会涌来。
幸运的是，当时一辆皮卡车载着7名携带各种设备的男子抵达。有人在社交媒体上看到了骆驼救援的照片。消息很快传到几公里外的小农场。他们加入进来，非常努力地工作。每个人都在用不同的技术同时锻炼骆驼的四条腿。当我们最终把她救出来时，斯塔基的腿实际上已经死了。男人们按摩她的腿，让血液流动。她花了大约20分钟才站起来。然后她转过身，伸了个懒腰，向我们眨眼道别。
二、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹
While Dakota loved me and her new home, she still missed her kid. She would utter mournful howls whenever I took her out for walks in the woods. It seemed as if she was calling for her puppy to come back. The exact scene made me heart-broken, and I took action all at once, determined to reunite mother and pup. I called the TV station, asking for conditions about the little dog, only to be told that Indiana was receiving medical treatment for falling on the ground when jumping over the fence.
I decided to bring three-legged Indiana to my home. Instantly they got reunited, Dakota couldn't stop licking her puppy's face. Happy and excited, the two dogs were wagging their tails wildly. The heart-warming scene moved anyone on the spot. Dakota has since stopped her sorrowful howls while Indiana has never tried to jump over the fence. These once-separated dogs played together, chasing each other around the room and slept together with their noses resting on each other. If there is to be any devotion, it will come through any species.
【范文译文】
虽然达科他爱我和她的新家，但她仍然想念她的孩子。每当我带她到树林里散步时，她都会发出悲哀的嚎叫。似乎她在呼唤她的小狗回来。确切的场景让我心碎，我立刻采取行动，决心让母狗团聚。我打电话给电视台，询问这只小狗的情况，却被告知印第安纳州因跳过栅栏时摔倒在地正在接受治疗。
我决定把三足印第安纳带回我家。当他们重逢时，达科塔忍不住舔了舔她小狗的脸。两只狗既高兴又兴奋，疯狂地摇着尾巴。暖心的一幕感动了在场的每一个人。达科他从此停止了她悲伤的嚎叫，而印第安纳从未试图跳过栅栏。这些曾经分离的狗一起玩耍，在房间里互相追逐，一起睡觉，鼻子靠在一起。如果有任何奉献，它将来自任何物种。
三、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back, He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. Before he was put in at in tub, we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days -years - on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again.
【范文译文】
突然，灌木丛中传来一阵声响。这只被打得遍体鳞伤的狗突然飞到我父亲的怀里。蜘蛛以极大的力量和确定性跳过了网球场围栏。我父亲的眼睛闪闪发光，我和老太太站在那里，眼里含着泪水。他不停地舔我父亲的脸，发出令人窒息的声音。他闻起来很可怕。我们用一条旧毯子把他裹起来，在回家的路上我把他抱在腿上。我们开车回家时，他从未把目光从我父亲身上移开。每隔一段时间，我都会收到一点感激之情。
回家后，我们的任务是把他身上的刺都拔掉。在他被放进浴缸之前，我们用肥皂轻轻地把他洗干净。蜘蛛坚忍地站着，我父亲也检查了他的牙齿和耳朵。蜘蛛在前廊度过了他的余生——几年——心满意足，总是等着我和妹妹放学回家，在那里他会给我们很多舔舐，以确保我们没事。然后，他在车库门口等我父亲。我们再也没有把他单独留在任何地方。
【遇困脱险话题高考真题调研】
（2025八省联考卷）--机车党大闹影院？不，他们在守护动物
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024浙江1月卷）--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏”
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2023浙江1月卷）--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2020浙江1月卷）Poppy 的欢乐派对：小狗从天而降
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see you back home in a month, okay？"His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】
【调研1】（24-25高三下·山东·开学考试）--绝境中，狗狗的忠诚吠叫成希望曙光
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grga Brkie never expected that a mountain-climbing trip would put him in such a desperate situation. That Sunday, while climbing the highest peak of the Velebit mountain range, which was about 5,800 feet above coastline, he accidentally slipped and fell nearly 500 feet down a snowy slope (斜坡). The fall caused his leg to be severely broken and he couldn’t move at all. He was filled with fear, knowing clearly that if no one came to rescue him, he might die of the freezing temperature in this snowy place.
Fortunately, two nearby hikers spotted Brke and his eight-month-old Alaskan malamute (阿拉斯加犬), North, at the bottom of the slope. However, they couldn’t reach them safely. After a brief discussion, they knew they had no choice but to rush off in search of professional rescuers. Before they left, they dropped some necessary supplies to the bottom of the slope so that Brkic could keep his strength and energy. In spite of that, Brkic couldn’t help being shivering (颤抖) in the snow with the temperature getting lower and lower.
At this critical moment, North, sensing its master’s great danger, immediately sprang into action. It circled around Brkic a few times, as if assessing the best way to help. Then, with a gentle yet determined motion, it slowly and carefully laid itself over Brkie’s body, making sure to cover as much of him as possible. As an Alaskan malamute, North are naturally resistant to cold, whose waterproof double coats can keep it warm even in temperatures as low as -20°F. Now it was like a warm little sun, tightly guarding Brkie. North remained perfectly still, and was alert to any signs of approaching help or potential danger, as if it had taken on the great responsibility of being Brkie’s guardian and protecting his master from any possible danger.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before Brkic lost consciousness (意识), he heard North barking loudly.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Finally, the rescuers managed to save and rush Brkie to the hospital with North.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【调研2】（24-25高三下·河北·开学考试）鸵鸟 “越狱” 堵路，警察巧用美食妙计化解
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Have you ever seen a real ostrich (鸵鸟) The adult ostrich will reach 2.5 meters tall and the male ostrich’s weight will reach 150 kilograms. Although it is regarded as the largest bird in the world, it can’t fly. Its feeding habits are very diverse, but the leaves and fruits of plants are the main ones.
In Sioux Falls at noon on Tuesday, a small truck was carrying a roughly 7-foot-tall ostrich and a container with the leaves and fruits of plants. Just as the driver was driving on a busy four-lane (四车道) road, he parked his truck in the roadside and wanted to find a restaurant to eat.
When the driver left, the ostrich began to feel anxious, making some noise and pressing the truck’s door with its body.
Just at that moment, the door was pushed open, and the ostrich escaped from the truck and walked around, feeling like looking for something. And then it walked into the busy four- lane road, which brought traffic to a stop.
In order to make the road smooth, all drivers tried to carefully attract and lead the towering bird off the busy four-lane road, but in vain.
Drivers called Sioux Falls police and explained what had happened.
As soon as the police came, they also tried to carefully attract the ostrich off the busy road, but still in vain. Luckily, the ostrich didn’t run around.
“We can find out the driver’s phone number and call him. He must know how to solve it,” one of the policemen said.
“Good idea! If the ostrich stays on the road all the time, it will be very dangerous,” a driver said.
On the one hand, the police immediately started to find the driver’s phone number by the truck’s information; on the other hand, they continued to keep the safety of both the bird and the traffic. All the drivers were excited when the police found out the driver’s phone number.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The police contacted the driver immediately.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Feeling awkward, the driver thought of the leaves and fruits in the container.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)

展开更多......

收起↑