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2024人教七下英语写作
Unit 6 Rain or Shine
单元话题分析
【课标话题】
人与社会---社会服务与人际沟通（良好的人际关系与人际交往）,除此之外，本单元主题还涉及到了人与自然范畴的自然生态。
本单元以“天气和活动”为话题，要求写一篇短文，让同学们向他人介绍在不同天气情况下人们的不同活动。在写作的过程中主要涉及与天气和活动相关的表达。
【写作题目】
根据下面表格中的信息，以“Different Places, Different Weather”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。
Name Place Weather Activity
Jim Moscow snowy and cold watching TV
Mary Beijing sunny and warm cooking
Joe Boston rainy and windy playing the guitar
Different Places, Different Weather
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写作思路
【审题】
审主题、审体裁：主题为“天气与活动”；体裁为应用文；
审人称、审时态：通常以第一人称为主，若以他人视角写作，则用对应的第三人称；时态以一般现在时态为主；（本题以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时态和现在进行时态为主）
审要点：题目要求介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。通过观察表格，文中需要描述三个不同人物在不同城市，不同天气下所做的活动。除了题目中要求的具备点之外，可进行适当补充。
【写作过程】
开头部分：引入主题。
主体部分：介绍Tim，Mary和Joe在各自城市不同天气下正在进行的活动。
结尾部分：回归主题，说明different places，different weather，different activities。
【实用表达】
介绍天气：
What’s the weather like in /How’s the weather in
It’s .(跟表示天气的形容词）
It’s raining heavily. 雨下得很大。
The temperature is about . 温度大约...度。
The sun is shining through the clouds. 阳光透过云层照耀着。
The rain is pouring down. 雨倾盆而下。
介绍活动：
Now I’m . 现在我正在...
At the moment, he/she is . 此时此刻，她/他正在...
【词汇储备】
介绍天气
sunny 晴天的 cloudy 多云的 rainy 下雨的
windy 有风的 snowy 下雪的 stormy 暴风雨的
foggy 有雾的 warm 暖和的 dry 干燥的
wet 潮湿的 hot 炎热的 cold 冷的
freezing 极冷的 strong wind 强风 heavy rain 大雨
heavy fog 浓雾 pour down 下大雨
介绍室内活动：
watch TV 看电视 watch movies看电影 do homework 做作业
do housework 做家务 cook 做饭 play the guitar 弹吉他
play the piano 弹钢琴 play the violin 拉小提琴 draw pictures画画
do yoga 做瑜伽 read books 读书
介绍室外活动：
play sports 做运动 swim 游泳 fly kites 放风筝
play basketball/football/volleyball/ping-pong/badminton/tennis/baseball
go for a walk 去散步 make a snowman堆雪人 go hiking 去徒步
climb a mountain 爬山 go on a picnic 去野餐 go camping 去露营
go fishing 去钓鱼 ride a bike 骑自行车
【小试牛刀】
我有三个好朋友，他们住在不同的城市。
I have three good friends. They live in .
不同城市的天气也不同。
The weather in their cities is different .
Jim住在莫斯科，那里下着雪，天气极冷。
Jim Moscow. The weather there is and .
Jim现在正在看电视。
Jim is now.
Mary住在北京。那里天气晴朗且很暖和。
Mary Beijing. It’s and there.
此时此刻，Mary正在厨房做饭。
，Mary is in the kitchen.
Joe住在波士顿。那里现在下着雨并且刮风。
Joe Boston. It’s and .
他正在卧室弹吉他。
He is in his bedroom.
他总是在下雨天弹吉他。
He always plays the guitar when it’s outside.
他们今天都很开心。
They all .
【答案解析】
I have three good friends. They live in different places.
The weather in their cities is different as well.
Jim lives in Moscow. The weather there is snowy and freezing cold.
Jim is watching TV now.
Mary lives in Beijing. It’s sunny and warm there.
At the moment, Mary is cooking in the kitchen.
Joe lives in Boston. It’s rainy and windy.
He is playing the guitar in his bedroom.
He always plays the guitar when it’s raining.
They all enjoy themselves.
写作范例
根据下面表格中的信息，以“Different Places, Different Weather”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。
Name Place Weather Activity
Jim Moscow snowy and cold watching TV
Mary Beijing sunny and warm cooking
Joe Boston rainy and windy playing the guitar
Different Places, Different Weather
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Different places, Different weather
I have three good friends. They come from different places. The weather in their cities is different as well. Now I’d like to tell you something about the weather in their cities.
Jim lives in Moscow, the captain of Russia. The weather there is snowy, so it’s freezing outside. He is staying at home and watch TV with his family. Mary is in Beijing. It’s sunny and warm there. At the moment, she is cooking happily in the kitchen. It seems that she really enjoys cooking in such a sunny day. Joe lives in Boston. It rains heavily and the wind blows strongly. He is playing the guitar in his bedroom. He always plays the guitar when it’s raining.
They all enjoy themselves no matter how the weather is.
【亮点词汇】
as well 也
the captain of... ....的首都
freezing 极冷的
at the moment 此时此刻
such a sunny day如此晴朗的一天
enjoy oneself 玩的开心
【高分句型】
It seems that she really enjoys cooking in such a sunny day.
她似乎很享受在如此晴朗的天气下做饭。
It rains heavily and the wind blows strongly.
雨下的很大，风刮得很猛烈。
He always plays the guitar when it’s raining.
他总是在下雨的时候弹吉他。
They all enjoy themselves no matter how the weather is.
无论天气怎么样，他们都很享受这一天。
写作练习
假如你是Bob，今天天气晴朗，你和家人到公园野餐。现在是下午两点，一家人正享受着惬意的午后时光。请你根据下面的图文提示，以“My Happy Family Time”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍你和家人各自正在做的事情。
要求：
(1)短文须包含图文所有信息，可适当拓展；
(2)不得出现真实的个人信息。
My Happy Family Time
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参考范文：
My Happy Family Time
I’m Bob. It’s sunny today. I go to the park for a picnic with my family. The scenery is beautiful there. It’s two o’clock in the afternoon. Look! My mum is reading a book carefully. It must be very interesting. My sister Lisa is jumping rope. She is very good at it. My brother is jogging on the road. He wants to keep fit. What am I doing I’m playing the guitar. Where’s my father He’s taking photos of us. He says it’ s a good way to record the best moments in our lives.
We’re all having a good time. How I wish time could stop at this moment!

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