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2025长春市中考英语书面表达预测
一、【2021—2024长春市中考和模拟】书面表达题型集锦
1.(2024·吉林长春·中考真题)每个人都有自己的闪光点,请以“My Shining Point”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求:
(1)讲述一个自己的故事;
(2)你的感悟;
(3)适当增加细节,行文连贯;
(4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
2.(2023·吉林长春·中考真题)某报正在以“Challenge”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。
要求:1.写一个自身或其他人的故事;
2.适当增加细节,行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
3.(2022·吉林长春·中考真题)疫情(the COVID-19 pandemic)期间,总有些特别的事使你心存感恩。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情故事”为主题的征文活动,请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿,讲述一段疫情期间的故事(人与人的互助或自身的成长等),写出你的感受与收获。
要求:1.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
4.(2021·吉林长春·中考真题)神舟十二号载人飞船于北京时间2021 年6月17日9时 22分成功发射,自此中国人首次进入自己的空间站。假如你是张华,请给宇航员写一封信,表述你在成长中关于梦想、奋斗、责任等方面的想法。
要求:
1 无须翻译作文材料;
2 适当联系生活实际∶
3 表达真情实感;
4 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
5 不少于80词。(文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)
参考词汇∶
1. Shenzhou XII manned spaceship 神舟十二号载人飞船
2 launch v&n 发射
Dear Astronauts,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
5.(2020·吉林长春·中考真题)请以"A Speech at the National Flag Raising Ceremony"为题,根据以下要点与要求,用英语写一篇国旗下的发言稿。
要点:
1.讲述一件事;
2.写出你的感受。
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.不少于80词。(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
_______________________________________________________________________________
6.(2024·吉林长春·一模)(B)中国自古是礼仪之邦。礼貌让我们的社会更文明,生活更美好。某英文网站正在进行关于“Politeness”的征文活动,请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。
要点:1.描述与礼貌有关的事件;
2.谈谈你对于礼貌的理解与感悟。
要求: 1. 不少于80词;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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7.(2023·吉林长春·一模)劳动 (labor) 技能是当代青少年必备的能力之一。某英文网站正在开展以“A Skill I’ve Got”为主题的征文活动,请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此活动。
要求:1. 讲述你是如何掌握某项技能的;
2. 谈一谈你的感悟;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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8.(2022·吉林长春·一模)健康是人生最大的资本和最珍贵的财富。现校园英语报正在征文,请结合生活实际,谈谈你对健康的理解。
要求:
1. 讲述一件事;
2. 表达真情实感;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
4. 不少于80词。
二、长春市中考英语作文命题规律
主题聚焦三大领域
(1)个人成长与价值观(占比60%):如“My Shining Point”(2024)、“Challenge”(2023)、“A Skill I’ve Got”(2023模拟)等,强调自我认知、技能习得与克服困难的经历。
(2)社会责任与热点事件(占比30%):如疫情互助故事(2022)、航天精神(2021)、礼貌与社会文明(2024模拟),体现家国情怀与时代精神。
(3)健康与生活技能(占比10%):如健康主题(2022模拟)、劳动技能(2023模拟),关注青少年身心发展与实践能力。
2. 写作形式以“故事+感悟”为主
所有题目均要求结合具体事例展开,通过叙事引出观点(如“讲述一个故事,写出感受”),注重真实性与情感表达,体现“立德树人”的教育导向。
语言风格贴近学生生活
题目多从学生视角出发,如校园生活、家庭互动、社会实践等,避免抽象话题,便于考生发挥。
三、2025年长春中考作文命题趋势预测
结合全国中考趋势及长春本地特色,2025年可能聚焦以下方向:
1. 高频主题预测
(1)个人成长类
可能性40%:如“The Power of Persistence”(坚持的力量)、“A Lesson from Failure”(失败的启示),延续“挑战—成长—感悟”模式。
新趋势:可能融入心理健康主题,如“How I Deal with Stress”(应对压力的方法)。
(2)科技与环保类
可能性30%:如“Technology in My Life”(科技改变生活)、“My Green Action”(我的环保行动),呼应国家“双碳”目标及AI技术普及。
创新方向:可能结合图表描述(如环保数据报告)或应用文(倡议书)。
(3)社会责任与文化类
可能性20%:如“Volunteering Experience”(志愿服务经历)、“Cultural Exchange”(文化交流故事),强调青少年社会参与及文化自信。
潜在热点:可能关联2025年重大事件(如“一带一路”十周年)。
(4)健康与劳动教育类
可能性10%:如“A Healthy Habit”(健康习惯养成)、“Learning to Cook”(学做饭的劳动故事),贴合新课标对劳动教育的重视。
2. 题型与要求变化
延续“故事+观点”结构:要求通过具体事例(如个人经历、社会见闻)引出感悟,避免纯议论。
可能新增混合题型:如“书信+倡议”(如给社区写环保建议信)或“图表+叙事”(如结合健康数据谈自身经历)。
四、2025长春市英语书面表达备考建议
1. 素材积累
建立“个人成长”“社会热点”“文化科技”三类素材库,每类准备2-3个真实故事(如一次比赛、一次环保活动)。
关注2024-2025年社会热点(如AI应用、杭州亚运会遗产),关联自身经历。
语言强化
掌握环保(recycle, carbon footprint)、科技(AI, digital life)、心理(stress management)等高频主题词汇。
熟练使用“叙事+观点”句型(如“Not only did I..., but I also learned...”)。
模拟训练
针对预测主题进行限时写作,例如:
题目:“An Unforgettable Cultural Activity”(文化交流类)
结构:事件(参加国际学生交流会)→ 冲突(语言障碍)→ 解决(互助学习)→ 感悟(尊重文化差异)。
How I deal with stress
While stress often feels like a storm cloud hanging over teenagers, I’ve discovered an unexpected anchor: running, which turns my restless energy into purposeful motion.
Last year, as final exams approached, anxiety gripped me. One midnight, I stared at math formulas until tears smudged the pages. The next dawn, I laced up my sneakers and sprinted to the park. Initially, my lungs burned and legs trembled, but gradually, the rhythmic pounding of footsteps synchronized with my heartbeat. One chilly morning, I pushed through fatigue, watching frost melt under sunlight as I ran. With every lap, worries dissolved like morning mist. By exam week, running wasn’t just exercise—it became my daily mental reset button, sharpening focus and rebuilding courage.
Now, when stress strikes, I run toward solutions, not away from problems, step by determined step.
But slowly, the regular sound of footsteps matched the beat of my heart.
尽管压力常常像一片乌云笼罩着青少年,但我发现了一个意想不到的依靠:跑步,它将我焦躁不安的能量转化为有目标的行动。
去年,随着期末考试临近,焦虑紧紧攫住了我。一天午夜,我盯着数学公式,直到泪水模糊了纸页。第二天黎明,我系紧运动鞋,冲向公园。起初,我的肺部灼烧,双腿颤抖,但渐渐地,有节奏的脚步声与心跳同步起来。一个寒冷的早晨,我克服疲惫坚持跑步,看着阳光下霜花融化。每跑一圈,烦恼就像晨雾般消散。到了考试周,跑步已不只是锻炼——它成了我每天的精神重启键,让我更加专注,重拾勇气。
如今,压力来袭时,我坚定地一步步跑向解决办法,而非逃避问题。
Technology in My Life
Technology, when used wisely, is like a friendly guidebook in my study journey—it never writes the answers but lights up my path.
Last month, our English teacher assigned a group presentation about environmental protection. My task was to design slides, but I felt stuck. Remembering Mom’s suggestion, I opened PowerPoint’s "Design Ideas" feature. As I typed "plastic pollution," the AI suggested layouts with ocean-themed templates automatically! I chose one where a sad turtle swam through trash, adding shocking statistics. Later, I used a translation tool to check difficult words, but carefully compared results with my textbook. During rehearsals, we filmed a short video using my phone’s AI editor, which added subtitles magically. Our presentation won applause, proving technology works best when we control it, not the other way.
Now I see technology as a ladder—each step helps me climb higher, but my own feet must do the walking.
《我生活中的科技》
技术若运用得当,就如同我求学路上的一本友好指南——它从不代笔作答,却照亮了我的前行之路。
上个月,我们的英语老师布置了一个关于环境保护的小组展示任务。我的任务是设计幻灯片,但我感到很棘手。想起妈妈的建议,我打开了 PowerPoint 的“设计灵感”功能。当我输入“塑料污染”时,人工智能自动推荐了以海洋为主题的模板布局!我选了一个一只悲伤的海龟在垃圾中游弋的模板,并添加了一些令人震惊的数据。后来,我用翻译工具检查了难词,但仔细对照了课本上的内容。在排练期间,我们用我的手机 AI 编辑器拍摄了一段短视频,它神奇地添加了字幕。我们的展示赢得了掌声,证明了只有我们掌控技术,技术才能发挥最佳效果,而不是反过来。
如今我视技术为一架梯子——每一级都助我攀得更高,但还得靠我自己的双脚去攀登。
五、万能句式套用
根据长春中考作文的命题规律(个人成长、社会热点、科技环保等主题,注重“故事+感悟”结构),结合搜索结果中高频万能句式和学困生实际需求,整理以下分段万能句式及使用技巧:
第一段:点明主题(30词左右)
核心目标:引出话题,明确观点,可灵活套用比喻、现象描述或名言引入。
万能句式:
1. 现象引入:
- "In our daily life, [主题词] has become a mirror reflecting both challenges and opportunities for teenagers like me."
(例:Technology/Stress/Friendship)
2. 比喻定义:
- "[主题词] is like a double-edged sword—it can cut through confusion but also leave scars if mishandled."
(例:Technology/Competition)
3. 名言改编:
- "As the saying goes, 'A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.' My journey with [主题词] started with..."
(例:Learning to cook/Overcoming fear)
使用技巧:
- 替换方括号中的主题词(如Stress→Technology),确保与题目直接相关。
- 加入简单情感词(confusion, hope)增强代入感。
第二段:叙述故事(80词左右)
核心目标:通过时间顺序或问题解决结构,加入细节描写。
万能句式:
1. 时间线叙事:
"Last [时间], when I [遇到的困难], [感官细节描写]. For example, [具体动作]. At first, [心理描写], but then [转折动作]. Finally, [结果]."
(例:Last winter, when I struggled with math, my hands trembled as I erased wrong answers repeatedly...)
2. 问题解决模式:
- "Faced with [问题], I felt [情感]. One day, [触发事件]. With [工具/帮助], I [具体行动]. Surprisingly, [细节变化] made me realize [感悟]."
(例:Faced with loneliness, I decided to join a volunteer group...)
3. 对比描写:
- "Before [事件], I used to [旧状态]. However, after [关键经历], everything changed. [细节对比]. Now, I understand [道理]."
(例:Before the speech contest, I avoided eye contact...)
使用技巧:
- 感官细节:用“tears blurred my textbooks”(视觉)、“my heart pounded like a drum”(听觉)等增强画面感。
- 动作具体化:避免笼统描述,如“studied hard”改为“highlighted key points until the paper turned colorful”。
第三段:升华感悟(20词左右)
核心目标:总结成长,联系社会或未来,避免口号式结尾。
万能句式:
1. 个人成长式:
- "Now, [主题词] is no longer a burden—it’s a ladder helping me climb toward my dreams, step by step."
2. 社会价值式:
- "If everyone plants a seed of [主题词], our world will grow into a forest of hope." (例:kindness/courage)
3. 未来行动式:
- "I’ll carry this lesson forward: [道理]. After all, the best way to predict the future is to create it."
使用技巧:
- 比喻升级:将主题词比作“ladder”“seed”等,增强文学性。
- 引用改编:化用名言“The best way to predict the future is to create it”,避免直接抄袭。
综合应用示例(题目:How I Overcame Fear)*
第一段:
"Fear used to be a shadow following me everywhere—until I learned to face it with courage."
第二段:
"Last month, our teacher announced a class debate. My hands turned icy when my name was called. That night, I practiced in front of a mirror, stumbling over words. Suddenly, Mom suggested recording myself. Watching the video, I noticed my trembling voice and stiff gestures. Slowly, I adjusted my posture and spoke louder. On the debate day, though my heart raced, I remembered Mom’s advice: 'Focus on your ideas, not their eyes.'"
第三段:
"Now, fear is just a reminder to prepare better. After all, courage isn’t the absence of fear, but the triumph over it."
学困生提分策略
1. 分类记忆:按主题整理句式(如“挑战类”“科技类”),每类背熟1-2套。
2. 细节替换训练:
- 将模板中的“debate”替换为“sports meet”“science project”等,保持结构不变。
3. 限时仿写:用20分钟套用句式写不同主题作文,培养灵活应用能力。
通过以上句式组合,即使无法完全套用范文,学生也能快速构建符合长春中考要求的作文框架,显著提升得分潜力。
六、《长春市历年中考大作文》参考答案
1.例文
My Shining Point
I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I think I don’t like to complain. I find it important to have a positive attitude.
Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
2.例文:
Challenge
Life is full of ups and downs. No one can lead a life without any challenges. However, I believe challenges make a better me. I was poor in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot. Then I made up my mind to learn English well. From then on I got up early to memorize new words and useful sentence patterns. Besides, I did many English exercises. Indeed it was not an easy job to catch up with my classmates, but I kept going and never gave up. At last, my hard work paid off, and I made great progress in English.
This taught me a lesson: Don’t be afraid of challenges, because they come hand in hand with achievements.
3.例文
Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home. During the COVID-19 pandemic, there were many helpful persons around us.
When we stayed at home, we had little food to eat. Ordering food online was very difficult at first. At that time, my neighbor Mr Huang knew everything happened to my family. He sent many vegetables and fruit to me. Our family were moved by what he had done. We also realized that we should pass this love one by one. Small actions can make a big difference.
From this experience, I realize that we should help others in need. Helping others is helping yourself.
4.例文
Dear Astronauts,
I know Shenzhou XII manned spaceship was launched successfully on 17th June, 2021. This was the first time that Chinese astronauts entered their own space station. I am proud of them.
I was interested in space when I was young. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. I know it is not easy to become an astronaut. It not only needs strong health, but also much knowledge about space. So I must study hard, and develop a good habit. I want to explore space like you in the future.
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
5.例文
A Speech at the National Flag Raising Ceremony
Hello everyone,
I am honorable to give the speech at the national flag raising ceremony. I watched the national flag raising ceremony on the morning, marking the 68th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China. I was so excited and proud that I almost cried. Watching the national flag raising ceremony at the Tian’anmen Square on the country's birthday has been a way of Chinese celebrating the National Day. Some joined the gathering for sight-seeing, and others came to express the feeling of patriotism. At that moment, I took pride in myself as a Chinese and was surprised at the rapid development of our country.
Thanks for your listening.
6.参考范文:
Politeness can reflect a person’s good manners and qualities, which is important for everyone.
It was a sunny day, I decided to see a film to relax myself. The cinema was close to my home so it was a best way to get there on foot. At first, in order to go across the street safely, I had to stop to wait for the rushing cars to pass. Surprisingly, when they saw me, all the cars stopped immediately and let walkers go first. I was grateful to their kindness and showed my gratitude to them through a bow instead.
A little effort towards being polite to people you meet can have great rewards. Remember, being polite is the way of making our society more peaceful and beautiful.
7.例文:
A Skill I’ve Got
Labor skill is one of the necessary abilities in our daily life.
As for me, I always help my parents do housework. When I was a little kid, my parents were so busy with their work that they had little time to look after me. Therefore, I had to learn to take care of myself. I learned to wash clothes by myself. At first, I asked my mother for help and she taught me how to wash clothes. Then I often wash clothes and I can do it better now.
I think washing clothes is an enjoyable experience. And I really feel proud of myself, because I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn labor skills.
8.例文:
Health
Health is the guarantee of our life. But the harm of it can also be a big deal. We are supposed to protect it meticulously, or it will punish you somehow.
It was a night three years ago, and I had already decided to travel the next day. However, I had a serious stomachache and felt like a huge stone in it. For the sake of my safety, my mom drove me to the hospital and the doctor asked me to have an examination. The result turned out that I had a bad illness and I had to put off my journey. The doctor said the cause was my irregular and unhealthy diet.
After that, I began to adjust my diet and never eat hot food. Health problems may get in our way sometimes, so never treat our body casually. Never fail to dominate it.
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