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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项人教新目标（Go for it）版（2024）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是张明，你参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部”(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右，注意书信格式。
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.
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Yours,
Zhang Ming
2．假定你是李明，你得知在英国的朋友Bob得甲流生病了，请你写一封电子邮件叮嘱他生病后的一些注意事项。
内容包括：
(1) 表达关心 (我很抱歉听说你生病了)；
(2) 描述你出现健康问题的一次经历；
(3) 对如何保持健康提出至少两点建议。
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu.
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I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
3．健康是幸福生活的基石，尤其是青少年的健康更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全成员做一个有关“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。
要求：
1.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.所给提示仅供参考，需适当发挥；
3.文中不得使用真实的姓名与校名。
Dear Friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The importance and secrets of keeping healthy.”
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Thanks for listening.
4．1）话题分析
本单元以谈论“健康与急救 (Health and first aid)” 为话题，针对健康与安全等问题，利用本单元学习的情态动词should等提出简单的建议。
2）写作方法
“总—分—总”法对健康与急救提建议
总：总说健康的重要性；
分：针对如何拥有健康，分层次、具体地提出建议和方法；
总：总结概括以上提出的建议和方法，提出愿望。
3）写作任务
请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
要求：80词左右。
参考短语：a balanced diet均衡的饮食
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5．本单元以“志愿服务与慈善(Volunteering and charity)”为话题，讲述为别人提供帮助和参加公益活动的过程。
1）写作方法
“1＋ n”法介绍活动
首先，确定1个话题。
然后，围绕这个话题，介绍或描述n个活动。
最后，总结活动内容，描述活动感受。
2）写作任务
助人为乐是中华民族的美德，作为中学生我们应该乐于助人。请以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，与我们分享一下你做好人好事的感受。
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6．我国北方多地遭遇了洪水袭击，为了帮助受灾的人们，某国际学校打算发起一次捐赠活动。假设你是学校广播站的广播员， 请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文，将这次活动的相关事项及时通知大家。
一场捐赠活动
活动主题我们学校将举办一场捐赠活动 活动的内容1. 捐赠钱和衣物 2. …… 呼吁1. 呼吁学生们参与活动 2. ……
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
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7．参加志愿者服务活动可以帮助青少年学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“My Volunteer Work Plan”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
Volunteer Work
◎Help in the city library ◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hold a charity bazaar (义卖) ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital
◎Visit the old people’s home ◎…
要求：
1.可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80—100。
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8．助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，作为中学生，我们应该乐于做好人好事。请以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题，写一篇60—80词的短文，与大家分享一下你做好人好事的感受。
1．要点提示：(1)确定“助人为乐”这一主题；
(2)围绕这个主题，介绍或描述某一事例及感受；
(3)总结自己的观点。
2．时态： 一般现在时。
3．人称： I/we。
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9．作为一名中学生，帮助父母做家务是一件有趣而有意义的事。它可以丰富我们的生活，让我们学会劳动、学会理解……但它也会花费时间……
你认为呢？请以“My Opinion on Doing Housework”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
参考词汇：take out the trash, do the dishes, waste time, develop independence
要求：1. 请明确表明自己的观点，并简要说明其理由；
2. 文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名。
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10．假如你是李华，某英文报刊正在就“Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework ”这一话题展开征文活动，请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。
要点提示：
1. 你认为青少年应该帮助父母做家务吗？
2. 你的理由是什么？
写作要求：
1. 词数80词左右（文章格式已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加中学生英语演讲比赛。演讲的主题是“We should help parents do housework”，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
提示：1. 目前许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。
2. 你常做的家务活是整理床铺、浇花、打扫房间、倒垃圾等。
3. 你的体会和看法是什么。
参考词汇：lazy，chores，make the bed，water flowers，clean the room，take out the rubbish，relaxing，interesting，be proud，be pleased，duty
词数：80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
It’s my honor to give you a speech!
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12．哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。
提示：
Opinions Pros：develop our independence; take care of ourselves；…
Cons: a waste of time; no need to；…
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I
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13．我们在这个世界上最亲的人是父母，他们给予了我们生命，含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据以下提示以“Care for our parents”为题，联系实际，适当发挥，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育；希望父母锻炼身体，保持健康；主动帮助父母做家务。
提示词：offer…to… 为……提供……
Care for our parents
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14．在生活中，每个人都难免会做错一些事，这些事总会让人感到遗憾或后悔。每当回想起这样的事情，你的内心会有什么样的感受和触动呢？你是否曾用适当的方式向你的家人、老师、同学和朋友表达过歉意呢？请以“I Should Say Sorry to…”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你亲身经历的一件小事，以表达你的真实情感。
I Should Say Sorry to ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．你将代表学校参加市中学生英语演讲比赛，请你就“Learning to get along with our parents”这一话题用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下:
现象 经常对父母发火，甚至几天不跟父母说话
原因 父母过分关注分数，我们……
建议（不少于三点） 我们应该和父母沟通，我们……
要求：1. 词数: 80左右（演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 必须包括以上全部信息，可适当发挥；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
Today my speech topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
16．假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容给他发一份电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
内容包括：
1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；
2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼；
3. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通；
4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
要求：
1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．现在，中学生周末的活动也安排得很满。下面表格中是Mary的周末活动安排。在下列时间段你正在做什么？请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文，描述自己的活动安排。
9:00—9:30 read English
10:00—11:00 do math homework
12:00—13:00 have lunch with Dad
14:00—15:30 have a piano lesson
16:00—17:00 visit her friends
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18．假如你是李磊，今天英语老师让大家分组讲述各自的周末生活，你被小组成员推选为代表。请你根据以下表格，用英文向同学们描述一下你们组的成员在昨天的以下时间里在做什么。
Time ActivityName 9:00 a. m. 2:00 p.m. 6:00 p.m.
Linda Reading Doing her homework Cooking dinner
Paul Playing football Studying math Taking a shower
Zhang Xin Listening to music Washing clothes Having dinner
要求：
（1）语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
（2）不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a. m. yesterday.
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19．假如你是一名警察，昨晚11点住在Blue Sky旅馆208房间的李先生外出时，他的一些财物被偷了。你询问了入住其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面提示写一则调查报告。
注意：
（1）以警察的身份来写；
（2）可以适当发挥，时态以过去进行时为主；
（3）不少于80词。
Room 102 Miss Liu chat online with friends
Room 205 Mr. Huang take a shower
Room 227 Ms. Li read newspapers
Room 308 Mr. Luo watch TV
Room 115 old Tommy sleep
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20．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, we organized a volunteer activity and it was really meaningful.
We started by putting up posters and handing out advertisements to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Then, we cleaned the streets and the park. We picked up litter and made the places look much neater.
I think volunteer work is very important. It not only helps make our environment better but also lets us learn to care for others and our community. I feel happy to be a part of it.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件，用于向笔友介绍参加的志愿者活动及个人看法；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，用于描述上周六发生的活动；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括介绍“环保俱乐部”组织的志愿者活动的内容（张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园）以及个人对志愿者工作的看法，考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖，并适当添加细节以丰富内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明身份及写作意图。通过“I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.”引出接下来要介绍的志愿者活动；
第二步，具体阐述活动情况。详细描述上周六参加的志愿者活动，包括“张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园”等具体内容，可以简要提及活动的氛围、参与者的感受等；
第三步，书写结语。在邮件结尾处加上一些友好的结束语，如希望下次能一起参加活动等。
[亮点词汇]
①volunteer 志愿者
②organized 组织
③meaningful 有意义的
[高分句型]
①I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. (介词短语作定语)
②It not only helps make our environment better but also lets us learn to care for others and our community. (not only...but also...句型，表示“不仅……而且……”)
2．例文
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu. I also caught a cold last month. I had a high fever and coughed. I drank a lot of water and took some medicine. I realized the importance of health. So it is necessary for us to know how to keep healthy.
First, it’s necessary for us to keep a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins and less fat. We should also try to eat less meat. What’s more, keeping a positive attitude to our life is good for our health. Last but not least, take proper exercise every day.
I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，对朋友表达关心；
第二步，介绍自己出现健康问题的一次经历；
第三步，提出如何保持健康的一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②the importance of……的重要性
③keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食
④what’s more更重要的是
⑤last but not least最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu. (that引导的宾语从句)
②We should eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins and less fat. (which引导的定语从句)
3．例文:
Dear Friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.
It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What’s more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, if we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, which is good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿，主题是“保持健康的重要性和秘诀”；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目要求，需要包含健康的重要性、保持健康的秘诀等内容，并适当发挥，确保文章内容丰富、逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，简要说明健康的重要性；
第二步，提出保持健康的建议，如适量运动、规律生活和均衡饮食；
第三步，总结健康的重要性，并鼓励大家尽力过上健康的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①source of energy能量来源
②lead a happy life过上快乐的生活
③build up one’s body强健体魄
④keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①It is well known that health is the source of our energy.(it作形式主语，that引导的从句作真正的主语)
②In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)
4．例文
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us. So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy.　
We should have a balanced diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. They are good for health. Don’t eat too much. And we should exercise a lot every day to keep strong. Also we should sleep for about 8 hours at night and never work too hard. Remember, it’s not good to stay up too late.　
If we follow these ways, I am sure we can keep healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，总说健康的重要性；
第二步，针对如何拥有健康，分层次、具体地提出建议和方法；
第三步，书写结尾，总结概括以上提出的建议和方法，提出愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of大量的
②be good for对……有好处
③too much太多
[高分句型]
①If we follow these ways, I am sure we can keep healthy.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
We all know that everyone needs help. So help is necessary to every one of us. As for me, I often help to clean up the classroom to keep it clean. When I sit in the tidy classroom, I feel comfortable. In my neighborhood, I usually help old people carry heavy things while walking together with them. I really feel happy when they say thanks to me. 　
I want to do more for people around me. I think if people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love. 　
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题，介绍自己做的一些好人好事，并表达自己的感受，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表达每个人都需要帮助，所以帮助是很必要的；
第二步，介绍自己做的一些好事；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②help each other互相帮助
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①When I sit in the tidy classroom, I feel comfortable. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think if people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love. (宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句)
6．例文：
Boys and girls, a big flood happened in some areas in the north of China. Our school is going to hold a donation activity to help the people who lost their homes.
The activity will be held on the school playground from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. this Friday. You can give away some money and clothes. But you shouldn’t bring food because it isn’t easy to keep fresh. What’s more, you can also give away some school things to the students there so that they can continue to study and do their homework. This is very helpful.
A small act of kindness can make a big difference. I hope that everyone can join in this activity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍捐赠活动举办的原因；
第二步，介绍活动的内容；
第三步，呼吁同学们积极参与活动。
[亮点词汇]
①give away 捐赠
②so that 以便
③make a big difference 产生重大变化
[高分句型]
①Our school is going to hold a donation activity to help the people who lost their homes.（who引导的定语从句）
②What’s more, you can also give away some school things to the students there so that they can continue to study and do their homework.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
7．One possible version：
My Volunteer Work Plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself during the summer holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，写出假期计划是做志愿工作；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“在城市图书馆帮忙”、“举办一个慈善义卖活动”、“去养老院”等展开，适当补充，丰富细节；
第三步，书写结语，表达做志愿工作的收获和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do sth 打算做某事
②help to do sth 帮助做某事
③clean up 打扫
④ask sb to do sth 叫某人去做某事
⑤call up 召集
⑥pick up 捡起
⑦enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事
⑧get along with sb 和某人相处
⑨Not only…but laso…不仅……而且……
⑩enjoy oneself 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I hope our city will be more beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do.(倒装句和宾语从句)
8．例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
We all know that everyone needs help. So it is necessary for every one of us to help others.
As for me, I often help to clean up the classroom. When I sit in the nice and clean classroom, I feel comfortable. In my neighborhood, I usually help the old hold heavy things while walking together with them. I really feel happy when they say thanks to me.
I want to do more for people around. I think if people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题；
第二步，介绍自己做过的好人好事，并表达自己的感受；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①as for关于
②clean up打扫
③say thanks to sb向某人道谢
[高分句型]
①We all know that everyone needs help.（that引导宾语从句）
②When I sit in the nice and clean classroom, I feel comfortable./ I really feel happy when they say thanks to me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I think if people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
My Opinion on Doing Housework
Different students have different opinions about doing housework.
In my opinion, it is an interesting and meaningful thing for us to help our parents do some housework. We can learn some skills by doing housework. On the other hand, doing housework can make our life more colorful and help us understand our parents better. What’s more, it provides us with the opportunity to develop independence. Besides, it’s easy for us to do some housework. For example, we can take out the trash, do the dishes and so on. I don’t think it wastes our time.
I believe doing housework is of great benefit to us middle school students.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。表示不同的人对于做家务有不同的观点，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述。表明你对做家务的观点，并说明理由。
第三步，书写结语。总结观点，呼吁大家帮助父母做家务。
[亮点词汇]
① in one’s opinion 在某人看来
② on the other hand 另一方面
③ what’s more 此外
④ for example 例如
[高分句型]
① In my opinion, it is an interesting and meaningful thing for us to help our parents do some housework. (it作形式主语)
② I believe doing housework is of great benefit to us middle school students. (省略that的宾语从句)
10．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that teenagers like me should help their parents with housework.
First, doing housework makes us independent. We can’t depend on our parents all the time. So we should learn how to take care of ourselves now. Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise. It helps us stay healthy and strong. Third, since we live in a house with our parents, it’s fair for us to work together and make the house clean and comfortable.
In my opinion, doing housework helps us learn life skills and understand the idea of fairness. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing chores with their parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明观点，青少年应该帮助父母做家务；
第二步，详细阐述自己觉得应该这样做的理由；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人某事
②depend on依靠
③take care of关心
④stay healthy 保持健康
⑤in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①I think that teenagers like me should help their parents with housework. (宾语从句)
②In my opinion, doing housework helps us learn life skills and understand the idea of fairness. (动名词作主语)
11．例文：
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
It’s my honor to give you a speech! I’m Wang Ming. My topic is “We should help parents do housework”.
Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work.
I often help my parents do chores. In the morning, I always make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting. In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the rubbish. When I see the tidy room, I feel proud of myself and my parents are pleased with me. I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores. What’s more, doing chores can help us develop our independence.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍目前许多学生的现状；
第二步，介绍自己经常做的家务活；
第三步，介绍自己的体会和看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do housework做家务
②too…to太……而不能
③be busy with忙于
④do chores做家务
⑤be pleased with sb.对某人感到满意
⑥independence独立
[高分句型]
But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work.(省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句)
12．例文：
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I usually sweep the floor, take out the rubbish, wash my clothes and do the dishes at home.
Different people have different opinions about this. Some people say that there is no need to do housework. They think it’s a waste of time. In my opinion, it’s quite important for children to do some housework. Firstly, it can develop our independence. Children depend on their parents too much. If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. Secondly, it’s not just parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home. Everyone should play a part in doing housework.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意表明自己的观点，材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己平时做的家务活；
第二步，自己的看法；
［亮点词汇］
① a waste of time浪费时间
② In my opinion 以我的观点
［高分句型］
① If we learn to do housework, we can take care of ourselves when we get older in the future. （条件状语从句）
13．例文：
Care for our parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you, our parents.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中主要帮助父母做家务，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明父母很爱我们，我们应该关心父母；
第二步，具体介绍如何关心父母以及我们能为父母做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达我们爱我们的父母。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②keep healthy保持健康
③get on well with sb.与某人友好相处
④worry about担心
[高分句型]
①You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. （so that引导状语从句）
②Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.（动名词短语作主语；what引导表语从句）
14．例文
I Should Say Sorry to My Mother
Everyone has different kinds of experiences in life. Some make us enjoyable, some make us moved, some make us regretful…I always feel sorry for a thing in my heart.
One Sunday afternoon, my mother asked me to help her with the housework. I refused her. I told her I was busy studying for a math test and I needed money to buy a book. She gave me 20 yuan at once. Then I left home, but I didn’t buy the book. I spent all the money playing computer games in an Internet bar. When I got back home, my mother had cooked delicious food for me. I couldn’t say anything, with tears in my eyes.
When I think of it, I’m always so sorry, my heart is full of regret. I should say sorry to my mother. I should sincerely say, “Sorry, Mom!”
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：先补充完整题目，确定主题，结合自身经历的一件小事来表达自己的真实感受。注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用“每个人在生活中都有不同的经历”来引出要介绍的“感到抱歉的一件事”；
第二步，详细介绍这件事的经过；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愧疚之感。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb to do要求某人做某事
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③be busy doing sth忙于做某事
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Some make us enjoyable, some make us moved, some make us regretful...（排比句）
②When I think of it, I’m always so sorry, my heart is full of regret.（When引导的时间状语从句）
15．Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
Today my speech topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents.We often get angry with our parents and even don’ t talk to them for several days.
Here are some of the reasons. First, our parents care about our marks too much and it makes us stressed. Second, we don’ t want to communicate with them. It’ s time for us to change. First, we should communicate with our parents by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then, we can help do some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’ t feel worried about us.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①　题材：本文属于演讲稿；
②　时态：时态主要以“一般现在时”为主；
③　提示：人称以第一人称为主；写作要点表中已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点内容。可以适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，揭示现象；
第二步，分析原因；
第三步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①　get angry with对某人生气
②　talk to和某人谈话
③　communicate with与某人交流
④　between ...and...在……和……之间（两者）
[高分句型]
①　 It’ s time for us to change.( It’ s time for sb.to do固定句型）
②　Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’ t feel worried about us.（so that引导目的状语从句）
16．One possible version:
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily.
Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.
Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.
Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter what difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥”；注意条理清晰、逻辑连贯、无拼写和语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍问题和困难在生活中是在所难免的，遇到问题需学会向他人求助；
第二步，介绍如何让自己更放松、如何快乐地学习和积极地生活；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① communicate with sb. 与某人交流
② in trouble 处于困难中
③ take part in 参加
④ in the end 最后
[高分句型]
① It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble.（不定式作主语；when引导的时间状语从句）
② No matter what difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
17．One possible version:
While Mary was reading English, I was listening to English tapes. At 10:00, while she was doing math homework, I was watching TV. Because my favorite program was on at that time. After that I had lunch with my parents. From 14:00 to 15:30, I had a piano lesson with Mary. Both of us like playing the piano. But at 16:00 while Mary was visiting her friends, I was doing my homework.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“过去进行时”为主；
③提示：写作要点在表格中已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍玛丽在各个时间点做的事；
第二步，介绍自己在上述时间点做的事。
[亮点词汇]
①listening to English tapes听英语磁带
②had a piano lesson上钢琴课
[高分句型]
①While Mary was reading English, I was listening to English tapes.（“While”引导时间状语从句）
②Because my favorite program was on at that time.（“Because”引导原因状语从句）
18．例文：
All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a.m. yesterday. Paul was playing football in the playground and Zhang Xin was listening to music at that moment. At 2:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was doing her homework while Paul was studying math. What was Zhang Xin doing then She was washing clothes. At 6:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was cooking dinner, but Zhang Xin was having dinner. She had dinner earlier than Linda. Where was Paul He was taking a shower in the bathroom.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“过去进行时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昨天上午九点时三个人的活动；
第二步，介绍下午两点和六点时三个人的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①at that moment在那时
②earlier than早于
[高分句型]
Linda was doing her homework while Paul was studying math.（while引导的时间状语从句）
19．例文
Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out. We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here are the results.
Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Huang in Room 205 was taking a shower. Ms. Li in Room 227 was reading newspapers. Mr. Luo in Room 308 said he was watching TV. Old Tommy in Room 115 said he was sleeping.
We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为调查报告；
②时态：时态为“过去进行时”；
③提示：注意以警察的身份来写；不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据所给的材料，以警察的身份写一则调查报告；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先交代调查的背景；其次具体介绍调查的内容；
第三步：书写结语。表示“我们将继续做一些其他调查，试图找到小偷。”
[亮点词汇]
①be out不在家
②take a shower洗个淋浴
③at that time在那时
[高分句型]
①Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文
October 6th, Saturday Fine
There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.
The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要求”中的具体信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、大致情况等。可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容要求，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和大致情况；
第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认知以及自己的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be sent to被送到
②be careful小心；当心
③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
④wait for等候
[高分句型]
①When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. （there be句型）
②The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. （that引导的宾语从句）
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