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专题06 书面表达15篇（中考真题 中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（广东专用）
1．（2024·广东广州·中考真题）你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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2．（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：
1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；
2. 选择这张照片的原因；
3. 参赛感受。
Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
3．（2023·广东广州·中考真题）你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2025·广东广州·模拟预测）时光荏苒，三年的初中生活即将结束。学期初，你校社团课负责人邀请九年级学生为七年级新生介绍你曾经参加过的一些社团，以帮助他们选择适合自己的社团。请你根据以下提示，写一篇相关的发言稿。
社团名称 社团活动 收获与感受
生存大挑战 (Survival Explorers) 通过看电影和读书，了解历史上著名的探险家； 学习野外生存技能，例如野外生火和获取食物。 (请补充)
环保小卫士 (Environmental Volunteers) 环保小调查，例如就如何减少校园垃圾问题，收集学生们的建议； “变废为宝”小实验(Up-cycling Project)，例如如何循环利用废旧书本及纸张。 (请补充)
Dear fellow students,
It’s a great honor to be here and share my wonderful club experiences with you.
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Thank you!
5．（2025·陕西西安·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开设的新专栏Take Care of Yourself正在以“A Little Life Skill Helps a Lot”为题进行征文。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
A Little Life Skill Helps a Lot What life skill do you want to learn Why do you want to learn this kill How do you plan to learn this skill
参考词汇：swimming/cooking/fixing/cleaning, basic skill, ask...for help, learn from, online classes, ...
要求：1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
A Little Life Skill Helps a Lot
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To better take care of ourselves, we are supposed to learn some life skills.
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6．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，昨天你的英国朋友Tony发来邮件：“听说2024年12月中国春节申遗成功了，我非常好奇你家是如何度过第一个非遗春节的，可以和我分享一下吗？”请根据以下提示内容，给Tony写一封回信。
提示内容：
1. 介绍一下你家今年过春节的活动；（至少三点）
2. 谈谈你对春节申遗成功的看法；（至今两点）
3. 邀请Tony明年来中国和你一起过春节。
注意事项：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
提示词：the Intangible Cultural Heritage非物质文化遗产 add to the list 列入名单 reunion团聚
Dear Tony.
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（2025·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，三月份是你们学校的“学雷锋”活动月，请你根据以下提示写一篇报告，介绍活动月的情况，并呼吁所有同学继续弘扬雷锋精神。
参加人员 全校师生
内容 目的
活动 1、讲座 宣扬雷锋精神
2、…… ……
3、…… ……
你的感受 ……
注意：
1. 字数：80词以上；
2. 开头部分已给出，不计入词数
3. 参考单词：宣扬propagate
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you something about the “Learning from Lei Feng” Activity Month in our school.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
8．（2025·广东·模拟预测）你所在的中学正在开展“做一名新时代的合格中学生”活动。假如你是学生会的主席，请根据以下要点，用英语向全校同学写一篇倡议书。
基本品格 爱国，爱家，守信，友好； 关心环境 热爱大自然，保护环境，与动物和谐相处
学习方面 努力学习，实现梦想 参加活动 ……(自己发挥一至两点)
身体方面 体育锻炼，身心健康 　 　
参考词汇：守信 keep one’s promise
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2025·广东·一模）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将短文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
假设你叫李明，你校交换生Ethan在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难，他通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴。请你根据以下思维导图的提示， 用英文写一封邮件， 表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴，并提供帮助。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出， 不计入总词数， 也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
10．（2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）2024年12月4日，中国春节被联合国教科文组织列入非物质文化遗产代表作名录，这是每一个中国人的骄傲。新学期开学之初， 班会课上请以“My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake”为题，与老师和同学们分享你的蛇年春节，内容包括你的2025年蛇年春节相关的活动、意义、愿望等。字数80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
联合国教科文组织：UNESCO
人类非物质文化遗产: the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity
My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake
Dear teacher and classmates,
Happy new year to you! On December 4th, 2024, our Spring Festival was listed by UNESCO as part of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2025·广东·模拟预测）假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。
要求：
(1)内容要点齐全，可适当发挥；
(2)语言表达要准确，语篇要连贯；
(3)词数100左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Summer Vacation Trip
My family and I went on vacation this summer. We went
to______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2025·广东·模拟预测）神话故事作为中国传统文化的一部分，对于学生了解民族文化及历史具有一定意义。请你以“A Story I Know”为题，根据以下要求，介绍一则神话故事及自己的读后感受。
作文要求：
1、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2、文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
3、词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)
参考词汇：legend (n.传说)；national (adj.民族的)。
A Story I Know
As an important part of traditional Chinese culture, legends are of great importance for students to know about national culture and history.
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13．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是晨光中学学生李华。你校英文报开设了 “经典阅读”专栏，将举办主题为“Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．阅读经典作品的人越来越少的原因；
2．阅读经典作品的好处；
3．你的建议。
注意：
1．词数不少于100词；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated
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14．（2025·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括：
1.你的人生规划；
2.解释原因；
3.请他提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.注意书信格式。
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15．（2025·广东东莞·二模）传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇 80-120词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：( virtuen. 美德) ( raisev. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.
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《专题06 书面表达15篇（中考真题 中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（广东专用）》参考答案
1．例文
An unforgettable school trip
Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together.
We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing!
At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容，不得遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物；
第二步，具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么；
第三步，表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take a lecture听讲座
②A variety of各种各样的
③have a better understanding of更好地理解……
④make a contribution to对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句)
2．例文：
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That’s all! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；
第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；
第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；
最后，表达自己的参赛感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③harmony和谐
④take part in参加
⑤realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句）
②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句）
③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句）
3．例文
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，介绍活动的目的并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②from...to...从……到……
③different kinds of各种不同的
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句）
②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语）
4．范文：
Dear fellow students,
It’s a great honor to be here and share my wonderful club experiences with you.
I joined Survival Explorers, where we watched movies about famous explorers and learned survival skills like making fires and finding food. It taught me courage and teamwork. I also participated in Environmental Volunteers. We did surveys on reducing waste and up-cycled old books into creative crafts. This club made me realize how small actions can protect our planet.
Both clubs were fun and meaningful. Choose one that matches your interests!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容提示介绍自己加入的社团和社团活动；
第二步，介绍对于社团的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①courage and teamwork勇气和团队合作
②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
I joined Survival Explorers, where we watched movies about famous explorers and learned survival skills like making fires and finding food.（定语从句）
5．参考范文：
A Little Life Skill Helps a Lot
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To better take care of ourselves, we are supposed to learn some life skills.
As for me, I would like to choose cooking. It is a basic skill in our daily life and it’s wonderful to create my own dishes. I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish.
In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online.
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏思维导图提示的内容，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出“学习一些生活技能”的主题；
第二步，说明自己选择烹饪的原因、学习方法和具体途径；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家开始学习生活技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应当
②create one’s own dishes自创菜品
③in order to为了
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①To better take care of ourselves, we are supposed to learn some life skills.（不定式表目的）
②I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d love to share how we celebrated this special Spring Festival with you.
This year, we had a wonderful Spring Festival. On New Year’s Eve, when our family gathered for the reunion dinner, dumplings were the star dish. We also decorated our house with traditional red lanterns and Spring Festival couplets. In the evening, we watched the CCTV Spring Festival Gala together.
I’m extremely delighted that the Spring Festival was added to the Intangible Cultural Heritage list. It not only preserves our traditions but also promotes Chinese culture globally.
I warmly invite you to experience this joyful festival with me in China next year!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表达收到邮件的喜悦，并表明乐意分享自家如何庆祝春节的意愿，引出下文；
第二步，详细陈述庆祝春节的活动；
第三步，表达对春节申遗成功的看法；
第四步，发出诚挚邀请，希望托尼来年能到中国与自己共度春节。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
[高分句型]
①On New Year’s Eve, when our family gathered for the reunion dinner, dumplings were the star dish. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I’m extremely delighted that the Spring Festival was added to the Intangible Cultural Heritage list. (宾语从句)
7．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you something about the “Learning from Lei Feng” Activity Month in our school.
Teachers and students took an active part. We had a lecture to spread Lei Feng’s spirit. Also, we did community service, like visiting a nursing home to care for the elderly. There was a “Good Deed Competition”, too. Students helped classmates and picked up litter.
I was really moved. The spirit of Lei Feng shows us the way to be kind. Let’s keep it alive in daily life and make the world warmer.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：向大家介绍学校“学习雷锋”活动月的相关情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明身份并引出要介绍学校“学习雷锋”活动月。
第二步，中间具体介绍活动月里开展的活动，如举办讲座、进行社区服务、开展“做好事竞赛”等。
第三步，结尾表达自己的感受，呼吁大家在日常生活中传承雷锋精神。
[亮点词汇]
①take an active part积极参与
②spread传播
③community service社区服务
④be moved被感动
⑤keep...alive使……延续
[高分句型]
We had a lecture to spread Lei Feng’s spirit.（不定式作目的状语）
8．例文
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. Here are many things we can do.
First of all, we must love our country and our home. It is very important to everyone. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should take an active part in all kinds of activities. We can tidy up the classroom so we can have a clean environment. When we are at home, we can help our parents with housework. We can wash the dishes and wash our own clothes.
We hope that everyone can follow my advice and become good students.
Come on! I believe we can make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书。
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时，用于陈述成为好学生的各种行为。
③提示：介绍成为好学生可以做的事情。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明身份和活动主题。
第二步，中间从多个方面详细阐述成为好学生的具体行为，如爱国爱家、诚实守信、友善待人、努力学习、锻炼身体、爱护自然、与动物友好相处、积极参加活动、做家务等。
第三步，结尾表达希望大家都能成为好学生的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①promise承诺
②duty责任
③achieve实现
④environment环境
[高分句型]
Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. （“it’s one’s duty to do sth.”的句型）
9．例文
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy. I believe I’m the buddy you want, as I have read many ancient Chinese poems and I have a deep understanding of them. I love ancient Chinese poems, and I am able to explain them in English. Also, I was born with a radio voice, so I can help you read the poems aloud correctly and beautifully.
If you agree to pair up with me, we could meet every Friday afternoon in the school garden. Perhaps we can finish reading ten poems a month.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我从学校广播节目中学到的是，你很难阅读中国诗歌，需要阅读伙伴。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——共读意愿、个人优势及共读计划等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in doing sth.在做某事方面有困难
②be able to do sth.有能力做某事
③look forward to sth.期望某事
[高分句型]
①If you agree to pair up with me, we could meet every Friday afternoon in the school garden. (If引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe I’m the buddy you want, as I have read many ancient Chinese poems and I have a deep understanding of them. (as引导的原因状语从句)
10．例文
My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake
Dear teacher and classmates,
Happy new year to you! On December 4th, 2024, our Spring Festival was listed by UNESCO as part of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity.
This recognition makes me feel proud to celebrate the Year of the Snake. During this Spring Festival, my family and I engaged in various traditional activities such as cleaning the house, and preparing special dishes for the reunion dinner. We also visited relatives and participated in dragon and lion dances. The festival not only brought us joy but also deepened my understanding of cultural heritage.
In the Year of the Snake, I hope for happiness, prosperity, and health for my family and friends. Let’s cherish and promote our rich traditions! Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“这种认可使我为庆祝蛇年感到自豪。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人经历的习俗活动、节日的意义以及新年的愿望等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②participate in参加
③deepen my understanding of cultural heritage加深我对文化遗产的理解
[高分句型]
①The festival not only brought us joy but also deepened my understanding of cultural heritage. (not only...but also...的用法）
②Let’s cherish and promote our rich traditions! (祈使句)
11．例文
My Summer Vacation Trip
My family and I went on vacation this summer. We went to Beijing by plane on August 1st. Beijing is really a big city. We were very tired when we got there, so the first day we rested in the hotel. On the second day, we visited many places, such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. We also tasted Beijing Duck. It was more delicious than we had thought. We also bought a lot of presents for friends. We stayed in Beijing for seven days in total. People there are very friendly. We were very tired but happy. If there is a chance in the future, I would like to go to Beijing again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，介绍夏季的旅行经历；
第三步，分享自己的感悟并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②in total总共
[高分句型]
①We were very tired when we got there, so the first day we rested in the hotel.（时间状语从句）
②If there is a chance in the future, I would like to go to Beijing again.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文
A Story I Know
As an important part of traditional Chinese culture, legends are of great importance for students to know about national culture and history. Recently, I read a famous story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain.
Once upon a time, Yu Gong decided to move the mountain because it blocked people’s way. One day, a man told Yu Gong that he was too weak to move the mountain. After the man finished talking, Yu Gong continued moving the mountain instead of caring about the man’s words. For a long time, many people laughed at Yu Gong and thought he was silly. However, to their surprise, Yu Gong and his family moved the mountain at last.
This story reminds me that we should never give up when we meet difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点提示和开头已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明要介绍的故事；
第二步，具体介绍故事的内容；
第三步，表达感悟和启发。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time很久以前
②block阻挡
③instead of代替
④care about关心，在乎
⑤to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
⑥remind提醒，使想起
[高分句型]
①Once upon a time, Yu Gong decided to move the mountain because it blocked people’s way. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②This story reminds me that we should never give up when we meet difficulties. (that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
13．
例文：
Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated
Nowadays, many people, especially the young, are unwilling to spend time reading classics. Some reasons account for this phenomenon. For one thing, people tend to do fragmented reading, which brings them fast information without deep thinking. For another, some people feel it no use reading classics since they are outdated and disconnected with their current life.
There is no denying that we can benefit a great deal from reading classics. To start with, it is significant for readers to learn about society by reading great works about history and culture, thus enriching our knowledge in many aspects. Additionally, classics provide a chance for us to enhance our aesthetic taste with their beautiful and unique language styles.
From my perspective, classics are a precious spiritual treasure of all human beings, which we should value and inherit. Therefore, I advocate all of us reading classics and absorbing the essence of great literature.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍阅读经典作品的人数越来越少的原因、阅读经典作品的好处以及你的建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be unwilling to do sth. 不愿意做某事
②account for说明……
③benefit from从……中受益
④to start with首先
[高分句型]
①From my perspective, classics are a precious spiritual treasure of all human beings, which we should value and inherit. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
14．Dear Jackson,
I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, in my opinion, working for a newspaper and reporting news globally would be really exciting. What’s more, journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.
What do you think of my life plan Any suggestions are welcome.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍你的人生规划的具体详情、解释原因并请他提出建议。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某事
②first of all首先
③communicate with与……交流
④try to do sth努力做某事
[高分句型]
When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. (When引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文：
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Since I was born, my grandparents have always helped to look after me and my family. They raised me and played with me. When I grew older and became a student, they sent me to school and welcomed me home every day. Thanks to their help, my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with chores as possible as we can. Spending time communicating with them is also important so that they won’t feel lonely. When it comes to their birthdays, we can send them a small present like cooking a bowl of long noodles for them to show our love and care. It’s also a good idea to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In a word, as everyone will grow old one day, respecting the elders is respecting our future selves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，通过讲述自己的经历引出应该孝敬长辈的原因；
第二步，介绍可以做哪些事情来关爱和孝敬长辈；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①Thanks to由于
②focus on专注于
③as possible as we can尽可能地
④such as例如
⑤in a word总之
[高分句型]
①Since I was born, my grandparents have always helped to look after me and my family. (Since引导时间状语从句)
②Spending time communicating with them is also important so that they won’t feel lonely. (动名词作主语；so that引导结果状语从句)
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