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专题04 书面表达15篇（中考真题 中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（深圳专用）
1．（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：
1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；
2. 选择这张照片的原因；
3. 参赛感受。
Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
2．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，昨天你的英国朋友Tony发来邮件：“听说2024年12月中国春节申遗成功了，我非常好奇你家是如何度过第一个非遗春节的，可以和我分享一下吗？”请根据以下提示内容，给Tony写一封回信。
提示内容：
1. 介绍一下你家今年过春节的活动；（至少三点）
2. 谈谈你对春节申遗成功的看法；（至今两点）
3. 邀请Tony明年来中国和你一起过春节。
注意事项：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
提示词：the Intangible Cultural Heritage非物质文化遗产 add to the list 列入名单 reunion团聚
Dear Tony.
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．（2025·广东深圳·二模）在学习生活中，我们经常需要与人合作。假如你是学生李华，你的英国好友Mike想了解你们学校的学生如何合作学习，请你写一封邮件和他分享一次你与同学合作的经历，并谈谈你的感想与收获。
参考词汇：团队合作 teamwork
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的传统剪纸手工作品正在你学校的艺术展览会上展出，并且得到了学校师生的一致好评。请你为你的作品写一篇英文介绍。内容包括：
1. 作品名称； 2. 作品描述 (材料、内容)；3. 作品意义 4. 创作意图。
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5．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假设你是李华，你的好朋友Simon发来邮件说他即将参加4月底由学校举办的5公里长跑比赛，但由于他是第一次参赛，深感焦虑，不知道这一个月该如何准备。请你给他回复一封邮件，安慰他，分享一些有用的建议，并给他支持与祝福。
要求：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：5-kilometer race
Dear Simon,
I’m glad to receive your email.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2025·广东深圳·一模）2024年12月，中国进一步优化并实施了过境免签政策——即240小时过境免签停留，来华旅游的外籍游客人数显著增加。深圳作为一座现代化都市，也吸引着许多国际友人。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex计划暑期来深。请你给他写一封邮件，为他推荐去处，并说明推荐原因。
注意：1、词数为80字左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4、信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I’m glad to know that you’re planning to visit Shenzhen during the summer holiday. Thanks to the latest 240-hour visa-free policy, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2025·广东深圳·一模）积极的心态可以帮助我们更好地应对生活中的压力和挫折。学校的英文校刊正在以“The power of positive thinking”为题进行征文。请你根据以下写作要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。
写作要点：
1.积极的心态对你的帮助（具体事例）；
2.你对如何调整心态的建议。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
The power of positive thinking
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8．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假定你是李明，你的手工作品正在你校“中华文化长廊”展出。为让下周到你校参观的新西兰姊妹学校师生更好了解你的作品，请你为你的作品写一篇英文介绍。
内容包括：
1.作品名称；
2.作品描述（材料、内容）；
3.作品解释（文化意涵）；
4.创作意图。
要求：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4.80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
This artwork is called.
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9．（2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）2024年12月4日，中国春节被联合国教科文组织列入非物质文化遗产代表作名录，这是每一个中国人的骄傲。新学期开学之初， 班会课上请以“My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake”为题，与老师和同学们分享你的蛇年春节，内容包括你的2025年蛇年春节相关的活动、意义、愿望等。字数80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
联合国教科文组织：UNESCO
人类非物质文化遗产: the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity
My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake
Dear teacher and classmates,
Happy new year to you! On December 4th, 2024, our Spring Festival was listed by UNESCO as part of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假如你是学生李华，为了迎接即将到来的世界气象日，你所在的班级举办了题目为“How to become greener”的英文征文活动，倡导绿色环保生活，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：1. 不环保现象，浪费、污染等（至少两点）；
2. 你的做法；
3. 倡议。
要求：1. 词数80左右（已给出部分不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
How to become greener
Our planet is in trouble.
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11．（2025·广东深圳·一模）中国的春节是中国人最重要的传统节日，我们为之骄傲！随着时代的发展，春节的庆祝方式发生了许多变化。在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍春节庆祝方式的变化，以及你自己喜欢的过春节方式和理由。
方式 优点 不足
Traditional—stay at home, visit relatives Get together with family members, accompany the old… Too much housework, be busy with preparing for the big meals, feel tired…
Modern—travel or go abroad Comfortable, relaxed, free… Too expensive…
要求：
1、80词左右，文章开头不计入总词数；
2、文中不出现真实的个人信息；
3、适当增加细节，语句通顺、条理清晰、语意连贯。
Dear friends,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
12．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Jack即将参加社区举办的“自然公园一日游”活动，发来邮件邀请你参加并询问你的建议。
Nature Park Day TourPlace: Green Valley Park Time: 8 a. m.—3 p. m., Saturday, June 17th Activities: Hiking, Bird-watching, Picnicking... DON’T MISS IT!
请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 接受邀请；
2. 提出建议；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2025·广东深圳·一模）假定你是鹏城中学的学生李华，你的外国笔友Kevin在你生日时寄给你一份特别的礼物——一张手绘的明信片，这让你感到非常惊喜和感动。请你写一封回信给Kevin，表达你的感激之情。要点包括：
1.表达感谢；
2.礼物对你的意义；
3.希望和期待。
写作要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：手绘明信片hand-painted postcard
Dear Kevin,
I hope this letter finds you well. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you again, Kevin. Your thoughtful gift has truly made my day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
14．（2025·广东深圳·一模）2025年以”文化+科技”为核心的深圳文博会(Shenzhen International Cultural Industry Fair)将于5月22日开幕。此次文博会包含非物质文化遗产展区、艺术与设计展区、人工智能展区等。假如你是新华中学的李华，请你给组委会负责英文志愿者招募的Mr Kevin写一封自荐信，阐述你的优势并表达参与这场国际盛会的决心。
要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：申请(apply)
Dear Mr Kevin,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
15．（2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）一次传统文化体验
为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合“深圳元素”在今年5月19日 (中国旅游日) 开展了丰富多彩的文化活动。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。要点提示：
When What I did What I learned
in the morning visit Shenzhen Museum the history of the city
at noon make Shenzhen Tangyuan a symbol of a family get-together
in the afternoon 请补充一项活动……
feelings 请补充活动的意义……
写作要求：
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数80-100；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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《专题04 书面表达15篇（中考真题 中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（深圳专用）》参考答案
1．例文：
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That’s all! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；
第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；
第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；
最后，表达自己的参赛感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③harmony和谐
④take part in参加
⑤realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句）
②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句）
③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句）
2．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d love to share how we celebrated this special Spring Festival with you.
This year, we had a wonderful Spring Festival. On New Year’s Eve, when our family gathered for the reunion dinner, dumplings were the star dish. We also decorated our house with traditional red lanterns and Spring Festival couplets. In the evening, we watched the CCTV Spring Festival Gala together.
I’m extremely delighted that the Spring Festival was added to the Intangible Cultural Heritage list. It not only preserves our traditions but also promotes Chinese culture globally.
I warmly invite you to experience this joyful festival with me in China next year!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表达收到邮件的喜悦，并表明乐意分享自家如何庆祝春节的意愿，引出下文；
第二步，详细陈述庆祝春节的活动；
第三步，表达对春节申遗成功的看法；
第四步，发出诚挚邀请，希望托尼来年能到中国与自己共度春节。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
[高分句型]
①On New Year’s Eve, when our family gathered for the reunion dinner, dumplings were the star dish. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I’m extremely delighted that the Spring Festival was added to the Intangible Cultural Heritage list. (宾语从句)
3．例文
Dear Mike,
Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to share with you one of my experiences.
Last month, I cooperated with my classmates to give a report on an English novel. First, we had a discussion to decide on the book. We chose The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which features attractive characters and interesting plots. Then, we were separated into different teams. We met after class every day to exchange ideas. Sometimes we had different opinions, but we always listened to each other patiently and tried to reach an agreement.
Through this task, I have improved my communication skills and learned how to work well in a team. It was a valuable experience for me. Have you ever worked with others
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：需包含内容提示的要点，通过详细描述合作过程、遇到的情况及自身收获突出了合作这一重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作意图，开篇点明知道对方对自己学校生活中的团队合作感兴趣，很高兴与之分享一次经历；
第二步，详细介绍经历过程，包括选择书籍、分组以及课后交流想法、处理分歧等细节；
第三步，通过总结此次经历的收获，再次强调这次团队合作经历的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①cooperate with与……合作
②separate into分成
③exchange ideas交流想法
[高分句型]
①We chose The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which features attractive characters and interesting plots.(which引导的定语从句)
4．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua, and I’m honored to introduce my paper-cutting work—the Blessing of Spring.
This artwork is made of red paper, symbolizing good luck in Chinese culture. It features two dragons dancing around a large Chinese character “fu” (meaning “fortune”), surrounded by clouds and flowers. Every detail was carefully cut by hand using scissors and a craft knife. Paper-cutting is an important part of Chinese tradition. The dragons represent power and protection, while “fu” brings wishes for happiness. Through this piece, I wanted to share the beauty of our cultural heritage. I created this work to celebrate the coming of spring and to encourage more students to learn about traditional arts. I hope it inspires everyone to appreciate our culture!
Thank you for your support!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
时态：一般现在时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，为“我”的传统剪纸手工作品写一篇英文介绍。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容包括：作品描述(材料、内容)；作品意义 ；创作意图。
第三步，书写结语，谢谢大家的大力支持。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of 由……制成的
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I hope it inspires everyone to appreciate our culture! （that引导的宾语从句）
5．例文
Dear Simon,
I’m glad to receive your email. I feel sorry because you’re worried about the coming 5-kilometer race. Don’t be afraid! It’s very normal to be nervous before your first race. If you prepare well, you will do a good job!
Here are some tips to help you. First, you need to practice running often. Begin with short distances and then make them longer little by little. This can make you stronger and more confident. Second, eat healthy food and sleep well. Fruits and vegetables are good for you. Enough sleep can make you full of energy and help you focus. Also, don’t forget to do some warm-up exercises before running and cool down after that. This can keep you from getting hurt.
Simon, I believe you can make it! Cheer up! Be positive. I’m sure you will do really well in the race. Good luck! I’m looking forward to hearing your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达收到西蒙邮件的喜悦，理解他对比赛的紧张情绪，并安慰他这是正常现象，鼓励他积极面对；
第二步，提供具体实用的建议；
第三步，传递信任，相信西蒙能成功完成比赛，鼓励他保持积极心态并祝好运。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer up 振作起来
②be good for 对……有好处
[高分句型]
①If you prepare well, you will do a good job! (if引导条件状语从句)
②I’m sure you will do really well in the race. (宾语从句)
6．例文
Dear Alex,
I’m glad to know that you’re planning to visit Shenzhen during the summer holiday. Thanks to the latest 240-hour visa-free policy, you can explore this modern city more conveniently. Here are my recommendations: Firstly, visit Shenzhen’s landmark—Ping An Finance Centre. From its observation deck, you’ll enjoy a breathtaking city view. Secondly, head to OCT-LOFT Creative Culture Park. It’s perfect for experiencing local art and trendy cafes. Finally, don’t miss Dameisha Beach to relax by the sea. Shenzhen mixes modernity with nature. You’ll love it!
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴了解你打算在暑假期间来深圳旅行。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——推荐的地方和原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks to多亏了
②a breathtaking city view令人叹为观止的城市景观
③by the sea在海边
[高分句型]
①Finally, don’t miss Dameisha Beach to relax by the sea. (祈使句）
7．例文
The power of positive thinking
Positive thinking has always been a powerful tool in our life. It helped me during a challenging math exam. I was so nervous that I thought I would fail. But then I thought about the good things. I remembered how much I studied and that I can do hard things. This made me feel better and I tried my best. Guess what I did much better than I thought!
To be positive, try to be happy about small things. Spend time with friends who make you feel good. Thank people who help you. These things can help you feel positive.
Let’s use positive thinking to make our lives happier and more successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明积极心态的好处；
第二步，具体举例说明积极心态对你的帮助；
第三步，分享如何调整心态的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① much better好得多
② Guess what猜猜看
③ challenging有挑战性的
[高分句型]
① I was so nervous that I thought I would fail. (that引导结果状语从句)
② I remembered how much I studied and that I can do hard things. (how much和that引导宾语从句)
③ Spend time with friends who make you feel good. Thank people who help you. (who引导定语从句)
8．例文
This artwork is called “The Harmony of Nature”. It is made of bamboo and silk, featuring a beautiful landscape with mountains, rivers, and trees. The artwork symbolizes the traditional Chinese belief in the harmony between humans and nature. I created this piece to share the beauty of Chinese culture and its deep respect for nature. I hope that through this artwork, visitors can appreciate the values of balance and peace that are central to Chinese philosophy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍作品名称；
第二步，描述作品的材料和内容；
第三步，解释作品的文化意涵；
第四步，阐述创作意图。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制作
②deep respect for nature对自然的深切尊重
③Chinese philosophy中国哲学
[高分句型]
I hope that through this artwork, visitors can appreciate the values of balance and peace that are central to Chinese philosophy.（宾语从句）
9．例文
My Spring Festival of the Year of the Snake
Dear teacher and classmates,
Happy new year to you! On December 4th, 2024, our Spring Festival was listed by UNESCO as part of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity.
This recognition makes me feel proud to celebrate the Year of the Snake. During this Spring Festival, my family and I engaged in various traditional activities such as cleaning the house, and preparing special dishes for the reunion dinner. We also visited relatives and participated in dragon and lion dances. The festival not only brought us joy but also deepened my understanding of cultural heritage.
In the Year of the Snake, I hope for happiness, prosperity, and health for my family and friends. Let’s cherish and promote our rich traditions! Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“这种认可使我为庆祝蛇年感到自豪。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人经历的习俗活动、节日的意义以及新年的愿望等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②participate in参加
③deepen my understanding of cultural heritage加深我对文化遗产的理解
[高分句型]
①The festival not only brought us joy but also deepened my understanding of cultural heritage. (not only...but also...的用法）
②Let’s cherish and promote our rich traditions! (祈使句)
10．例文
How to become greener
Our planet is in trouble. We can see pollution in the air and water. And the excessive use and disposal of plastic products have led to a significant environmental problem.
To become greener, I always turn off the lights when I leave a room and avoid using plastic bags. I also try to walk or cycle instead of taking a car. I suggest everyone to plant more trees and save water. We should all work together to reduce waste and protect our environment.
Let’s make small changes in our daily lives to make a big difference for our planet. It’s important for everyone to do their part to live greener.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，介绍不环保的现象；
第二步，介绍保护环境的做法；
第三步，呼吁大家一起保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off the lights关灯
②avoid using plastic bags避免使用塑料袋
③make a big difference产生重大变化
[高分句型]
①To become greener, I always turn off the lights when I leave a room and avoid using plastic bags. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②It’s important for everyone to do their part to live greener. (“It is+形容词+for sb to do sth”结构)
11．例文
Dear friends,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. The Spring Festival is our proud tradition, but its celebrations have changed.
In the past, people stayed home to visit relatives. This kept families close and respected elders, but caused heavy housework. Also people always felt tired by preparing for the big meals. Now some choose to travel or go abroad. They feel comfortable, relaxed and free by staying away from the crowd. But the travelling is often expensive.
Personally, I prefer a mix of both. I use video calls to greet relatives, which saves time, and then I go on short trips with my parents. This keeps traditions alive while enjoying new experiences. That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍过去庆祝春节的方式；
第二步，介绍现在的庆祝方式；
第三步，发表自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①staying away from远离
②mix混合
[高分句型]
I use video calls to greet relatives, which saves time, and then I go on short trips with my parents.（定语从句）
12．例文
Dear Jack,
Thank you for inviting me to the Nature Park Day Tour! I’m excited to join you this Saturday. The activities sound wonderful. I especially look forward to bird-watching, hiking and picnicking.
Here are two suggestions: First, let’s wear comfortable sneakers as we will be hiking. The trails might be uneven. Also, why not bring me homemade sandwiches Sharing food during the picnic would make it more fun. Don’t forget sunscreen and a reusable water bottle too! I can’t wait to explore Green Vallery Park together. It will be a perfect chance to enjoy nature and practice our observation skills. See you at 8 a.m. at the park entrance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“感谢您邀请我参加自然公园日之旅！”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——接受邀请、提出建议和表达期待等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to sth.期望某事
②can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
③enjoy nature享受自然
[高分句型]
①First, let’s wear comfortable sneakers as we will be hiking. (as引导的原因状语从句）
②Sharing food during the picnic would make it more fun. (动名词作主语)
13．例文：
Dear Kevin,
I hope this letter finds you well.
Thank you so much for the beautiful hand-painted postcard you sent me for my birthday. It was such a delightful surprise! The effort and creativity you put into it mean a lot to me. Every time I look at it, I am reminded of our friendship and the special bond we share. I hope we can continue to stay in touch and share more wonderful moments. Maybe one day, we can even meet in person!
Thank you again, Kevin. Your thoughtful gift has truly made my day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：书信作文
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
提示：根据题目要求，写一封回信表达对Kevin的感谢，说明礼物的意义，并表达对未来的期待。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇希望对方一切都好。
第二步，表达对Kevin的感谢，提到手绘明信片并说明礼物对你的意义，强调友谊和情感。
第三步，表达对未来的希望和期待。
第四步，收尾
[亮点词汇]
① hand-painted postcard 手绘明信片
② delightful surprise 令人愉快的惊喜
③ special bond 特殊的纽带
[高分句型]
① Thank you so much for the beautiful hand-painted postcard you sent me for my birthday.（定语从句）
② Every time I look at it, I am reminded of our friendship and the special bond we share.（every time引导时间状语从句）
③ I hope we can continue to stay in touch and share more wonderful moments.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．例文
Dear Mr Kevin,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I would like to apply to be a volunteer for 2025 Shenzhen International Cultural Industry Fair. The following are my advantages. Firstly, I am outgoing, responsible and cooperative, so I’m always ready to help others and good at working with people. Additionally, my spoken English is so good that I can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. Finally, with a deep interest in exploring different cultures to gain some creative ideas, I am sure that I’m suitable for serving this fair. I promise I’II try my best to make contributions to the fair. And I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信，用于申请成为深圳文博会的英文志愿者。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于描述个人优势和申请意愿。
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括个人优势、英语能力、对文化的兴趣以及参与决心。考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。可以通过“I would like to apply to be a volunteer for 2025 Shenzhen International Cultural Industry Fair”等表述来引出接下来要介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍个人性格优势，如外向、负责和合作；然后强调英语口语能力，能够与外国人流利交流；接着表达对探索不同文化的兴趣；最后，表达参与决心和贡献意愿；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达“期待早日回复”的愿望，作为信件的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②communicate with沟通
③cooperative合作的
④fluently流利地
⑤creative ideas创意
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I am outgoing, responsible and cooperative, so I’m always ready to help others and good at working with people.（并列句）
②Additionally, my spoken English is so good that I can communicate with foreigners fluently in English.（结果状语从句）
③Finally, with a deep interest in exploring different cultures to gain some creative ideas, I am sure that I’m suitable for serving this fair.（介词短语作状语）
④I promise I’II try my best to make contributions to the fair.（宾语从句）
15．例文
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In the morning, I visited Shenzhen Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone was excited to learn about the history of the city. At noon, we made Shenzhen Tangyuan. We learned it was a symbol of a family get-together. In the afternoon, we read many stories of the city’s development and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city.
These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示：按照要点提示写作，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，点明学校组织了很多传统文化活动；
第二步，详细介绍文化活动的内容，包括参观深圳博物馆、制作汤圆以及读故事等；
第三步，介绍活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②have a better understanding of更好地理解
③left a lasting influence on给……留下持久的影响
[高分句型]
①We learned it was a symbol of a family get-together. (省略that的宾语从句)
②These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. (not only…but also…结构)
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