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专题06 书面表达15篇（中考真题中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（浙江专用）
1．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs
注意：
（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to
注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us.
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3．善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以 “Work Together，Enjoy Teamwork ”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
Teamwork Activities
● take part in a ball match ● prepare for a party ● clean the classroom ● make a poster (海报) ● make a survey (调查) ● join in a relay race (接力赛) ● do social practice (社会实践) ● ...
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
（2）词数：90 110。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：
teamwork （团队合作） work with （与……合作）
team spirit （团队精神） make an effort to （努力去……）
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4．初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意： 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@ SUBJECT C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
6．丰富多彩的课间活动促进了学生的身心健康。假设你是李华，请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让到访的国际交流生了解你们学校的课间活动情况及你对课间活动的感受与收获。
Activities Feelings & Benefits
rest eyes, walk around, chat, … relaxed, improve friendship, …
注意：
(1) 短文必须包含表中所给的全部信息， 可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。
短文开头：
In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term.
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7．国家提出了将劳动教育（Labor Education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案。你校校报英语栏目 English World就此发起了征文，请你就学校如何开展劳动教育提供活动方案并阐述其开展的意义，写一篇短文参赛。
Activities Meaning
◆Offer classes ◆Organize competitions ◆… ◆Learn life skills ◆…
注意：
1. 文章中必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80 词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.
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8．假如你是张华，你的英国好友Alice想了解你校的“学雷锋月”活动。请根据以下相关信息，选择其中的一项活动，给她回一封邮件并说说你的感受。
I hear that March is the month of “Learning from Lei Feng” in your school.Can you tell me what you did in the month
At the nursing home★ clean up the rooms ★ talk with the old ★ put on a show ★ … In the community★ do some cleaning ★ take care of the kids ★ sort the rubbish ★ …
注意：
1.邮件需包含所选活动的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
9．假如你是张华，你的英国好友 Alan和家人暑假将来富阳旅游，请根据以下信息，写一封邮件，为他们推荐一处合适的富阳打卡点。
We love nature. We’re interested in Chinese history and culture. We also want to try some local food. Longmen Town ● Sun Quan, a famous emperor ● many kinds of local food ● ticket: 80 yuan each ● …
Huang Gongwang’s Retreat (隐居地) ● Huang Gongwang, a famous artist ● lots of local restaurants ● enter for free ● …
注意：
1. 邮件需包含所选地方至少3点信息。可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
Glad to know that you are coming to my city soon.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
10．“我命由我不由天”是中国年轻一代的信念。在初中的最后一个学期，你准备怎样为初中生活画上圆满的句号呢？请你根据自己的实际情况，制定一个切实可行的学习计划。
参考内容：
Plans Ways to achieve the goal
schoolwork *get better grades and get into senior high school *listen to the teacher more carefully * make good use of time
daily life *keep in good health * do sports every day * go to bed early
注意：
1. 表格内容为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80-100；首句已给出，不计入总词数。
How fast the time goes by! Junior high school days will be over soon. ______________
11．校英语报生活专栏发起了主题“如何度过一个有意义的生日”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下相关信息，写一篇短文，分享为自己或家人庆祝生日的经历。
注意：
1.短文可参考上面导图所给信息，适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右。
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12．用英语讲好中国故事！提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese traditional story”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My favorite Chinese traditional story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
提示：
1.描述故事内容。
2.故事带给你的影响和启发。
要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，字数80词左右。
My favorite Chinese traditional story
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13．为积极响应国家“体重管理年”计划 (2024~2027) ，你所在的英语社近期开展 “Healthy Weight，Healthy China” 主题活动。请根据社团提供的自检表，撰写一篇英语短文，向社员分享自己在体重管理方面的具体表现和下一步计划。
Weight Management Self-checklist
Do I… Always Usually Sometimes Never
eat and drink healthily
sleep for at least 8 hours a day
do exercise for at least 2 hours a day
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My weight management is ________ (good/ so-so/ poor) .
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14．宇树科技（Unitree Robotics）作为杭州六小龙之一已家喻户晓，其创始人王兴兴的成长经历激励着我们。请以“The Inspiring Story of Wang Xingxing”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在班会上作专题发言。
内容提示：
Experiences ◆take interest in robots ◆never give up ◆be famous for robot dogs
Learning ◆interest—the best teacher ◆be brave to face difficulties
注意：
（1）演讲稿必须包含上表中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The Inspiring Story of Wang Xingxing
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share a story about Wang Xingxing, the founder of Unitree Robotics.
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Thank you!
15．初中三年，时间匆匆流逝，相信你一定有不少难忘的经历吧。请分享一个特别值得铭记的高光时刻。那一刻，可能是你获得某项荣誉的瞬间，可能是你与同学们共同努力取得成果的刹那，也可能是你克服重重困难、实现自我突破的一刻。经历过这些，你对高中又有什么期待呢？……请以“A Shining Moment”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇文章向学校公众号“英语专栏”投稿。
(1) What was your shining moment How did you make it
(2) What have you learned from it
(3) What are you looking forward to in high school
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（2）词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Shining Moment
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. Looking back, a shining moment stands out.
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《专题06 书面表达15篇（中考真题中考模拟）-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（浙江专用）》参考答案
1．例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析] （以例文①为例）
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向她推荐一个学校；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句)
2．例文
Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life.
In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；
第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①the sense of……的感觉
②have to不得不
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）
3．例文
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life. I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children’s social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，讲述自己的经历和从中学到了什么；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②in fact事实上
③take part in参加
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school.（动词不定式作定语）
② I remembered that I took part in a football match last month.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
5．例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. （so引导并列句）
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6． In our school, we have a lot of activities between classes this term.
Some students choose to rest their eyes by looking at the green trees outside the windows, which helps them relax. Others walk around the playground. There are also students who chat with their friends, during which they share interesting things and improve their friendship.
My favorite activity between classes is meditation, because it allows my brain to rest, enabling me to better attend the next class.
These activities are really beneficial to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明学校有很多种不同的课间活动，引出下文；
第二步，介绍常见的几种课间活动，注意细节充分，行文流畅；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢的课间活动，以及感受和收获，注意用词准确，三观正确；
第四步，说明这些课间活动的重要性，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①chat with sb. 和某人聊天
②enable sb. to do sth. 使某人能够做某事
③be beneficial to sb. 对某人有益
[高分句型]
①Some students choose to rest their eyes by looking at the green trees outside the windows, which helps them relax.（定语从句）
②My favorite activity between classes is meditation, because it allows my brain to rest, enabling me to better attend the next class.（原因状语从句）
7．例文
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools. I think our school can carry out it in the following ways.
First, our school can offer classes on different types of labor, such as cooking, gardening and housework. Students can learn useful life skills in these classes. Second, our school should organize labor competitions regularly, like a sewing competition or a DIY handcraft competition. These activities not only encourage teamwork but also develop students’ creativity. Besides, schools can set up a “Labor Day” each semester, where students can volunteer to clean the campus or help with community service.
In conclusion, labor education helps students learn practical skills, build up confidence, and understand the value of hard work. It’s a great way to prepare students for their future life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明劳动教育的意义；
第二步，具体阐述校内劳动教育课程的建议；
第三步，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out实行；贯彻
②such as例如
③set up设立
[高分句型]
①First, our school can offer classes on different types of labor, such as cooking, gardening and housework.（and连接并列成分）
②Besides, schools can set up a “Labor Day” each semester, where students can volunteer to clean the campus or help with community service. （where引导定语从句）
8．Possible version 1:
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities. In March, we visited a nursing home to help the elderly.
As soon as we got there, we started cleaning. We swept the floor, wiped the windows and cleaned up the rooms. Then, we talked with the old people there. We listened to their stories about the past, and they were really happy to share. We even put on a show and sang some old songs for them.
The visit made me understand that helping others can bring so much joy. It is a great way to show respect to Lei Feng and show our love as well.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities. In March, we did a lot of things in the community.
First, we did some cleaning. We picked up the trash in the park and on the streets, making the places tidy and clean. Then, we took care of the kids. We played games with them and helped them with their homework. Also, we taught people how to sort rubbish and told them why it was important.
Doing community service made me feel good. I’ve learned that even small actions can make a difference. It is a wonderful experience of following Lei Feng’s spirit.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；回忆过去的活动时，要写得全面。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和意图。说明去了哪里；
第二步，回顾细节，写出做过的事情；
第三步，总结并表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②put on a show演剧
③as well也，还
[高分句型]
①As soon as we got there, we started cleaning.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
②The visit made me understand that helping others can bring so much joy.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．例文：
Dear Alan,
Glad to know that you are coming to our city soon.
I know you’re interested in Chinese history and culture. So I think Longmen Town is a good choice for you. You can learn a lot about Sun Quan, a famous emperor in ancient China who played an important role in Chinese history. Also, it’s a wonderful place with beautiful and quiet environment. As for local food, there are many different kinds. For example, you can enjoy Longmen beef which was loved by Sun Quan. But if you want to go there, you need to buy tickets. They’re 80 yuan each.
Hope you can have a good time in Fuyang!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引入主题；
第二步，详细介绍其中一个景点的特色；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色
③as for至于
④have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①You can learn a lot about Sun Quan, a famous emperor in ancient China who played an important role in Chinese history. (定语从句)
②But if you want to go there, you need to buy tickets. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．例文：
How fast the time goes by! Junior high school days will be over soon. To finish this meaningful chapter perfectly, I’ve made a practical plan with the spirit of “My fate is in my hands”.
For schoolwork, my goal is to achieve better grades for senior high school admission. I’ll listen to teachers more attentively in class and take organized notes. Two hours of daily after-school review will be dedicated to solving math problems and memorizing English vocabulary. I’ll also ask teachers questions immediately when confused.
In daily life, health is equally important. I recognize that a sound mind resides in a sound body. I plan to jog for 20 minutes every morning to stay energetic. A balanced diet with more vegetables and less junk food will be maintained. To ensure enough rest, I’ll go to bed before 10:30 PM instead of playing mobile games late.
By following this plan strictly, I believe I can end my junior high life with both academic success and personal growth. After all, my fate is in my hands!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接题目给出的开头句，引出个人计划；
第二步，分模块制定具体、可执行的计划，内容兼顾两点：第一是学业方面：提高成绩、听课方法以及时间管理；第二是日常生活方面：运动、作息及饮食；
第三步，结尾段总结目标，呼应励志主题。
[亮点词汇]
①the spirit of……的精神
②take notes记笔记
③be dedicated to致力于……
[高分句型]
①I recognize that a sound mind resides in a sound body.（that引导的宾语从句）
②I plan to jog for 20 minutes every morning to stay energetic.（to do不定式作目的状语）
11．例文：
Celebrating My Mother’s Birthday
Last month was my mother’s birthday, which is one of the most important days for our family.
I celebrated it with my father. A week before her birthday, I started to prepare. I ordered a beautiful bouquet of her favorite flowers online and secretly bought a nice scarf. On that day, we went to a restaurant near our home. We enjoyed a delicious dinner. Then, I gave her the gifts. She hugged me tightly and said that it was the most memorable birthday she had ever had. Seeing the big smile on her face, I felt extremely happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明妈妈生日的重要性；
第二步，介绍准备过程和庆祝当天的活动；
第三步，最后表达自己的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①one of……之一
②the most important最重要的
③a delicious dinner一顿美味的晚餐
[高分句型]
①Last month was my mother’s birthday, which is one of the most important days for our family. (which引导的定语从句)
②She hugged me tightly and said that it was the most memorable birthday she had ever had. (that引导的宾语从句)
12．例文
My favorite Chinese traditional story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like YuGong moves the mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. YuGong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：描述故事内容时采用一般过去时，表达感想时采用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出主题，简洁明了；
第二步：叙述故事内容；
第三步：陈述哲理启发。
[亮点词汇]
①so...that... 如此……以至于……
②give up 放弃
[高分句型]
They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side.（“so...that...”引导结果状语从句）
13．例文：
My weight management is just okay. I try to eat and drink healthily, but I sometimes snack on junk food. I usually sleep for about eight hours a day, which helps me feel energetic. However, I seldom do exercise for two hours daily.
I plan to join a basketball club to improve my fitness. Also, I will reduce sugary drinks and choose more fruits and vegetables. Next, I will go jogging in the park every weekend.
I believe these changes will help me control my weight better.
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时及一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己在体重管理方面的表现；
第二步，具体阐述自己如何管理体重；
第三步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①snack on junk food吃垃圾食品
②plan to do计划做某事
③go jogging慢跑
[高分句型]
①I believe these changes will help me control my weight better. （宾语从句）
14．例文
The Inspiring Story of Wang Xingxing
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share a story about Wang Xingxing, the founder of Unitree Robotics.
When he was young, he took interest in robots. He always wanted to make a robot that could move freely like an animal. So he spent much time trying different ways to make robots. He never gave up when facing many difficulties. Finally, he succeeded in making a robot dog. His company is now famous for its robot dogs.
We can learn that interest is the best teacher. If we’re interested in something, we will be willing to learn and try. We should also be brave to face difficulties. If we keep working hard, we will achieve our dreams.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍王兴兴及其公司宇树科技，引出主题。
第二步，详细描述王兴兴的成长经历，包括他对机器人的兴趣、坚持不懈的精神以及因机器狗成名的经历。
第三步，总结王兴兴的故事带来的启示，强调兴趣是最好的老师，并鼓励大家勇敢面对困难。
[亮点词汇]
①take interest in 对……产生兴趣
②give up 放弃
③be famous for 因……而闻名
[高分句型]
①So he spent much time trying different ways to make robots.(spend句型)
②He never gave up when facing many difficulties.(when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文
A Shining Moment
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. Looking back, a shining moment stands out.
Last year, I won the second prize in an English speech contest. To prepare the contest, I practiced daily, recorded my voice, and asked teachers for advice. Though nervous, I spoke confidently on stage. When my name was announced, my heart raced with joy.
This experience taught me that effort leads to growth. Even small progress builds courage. Now I realize challenges are opportunities to shine.
In high school, I look forward to joining more activities. Every challenge will be a chance to create new shining moments.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的高光时刻以及自己是如何做到的；
第三步，介绍自己的收获以及在高中期待什么。
[亮点词汇]
①look back回顾过去
②English speech contest英语演讲比赛
③ask…for help请求……帮助
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
When my name was announced, my heart raced with joy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
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