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高考英语书信写作高分学案（附万能模板+句型）
一、书信格式规范（含4大类型）
1. 正式书信（如申请信、建议信）
结构模板：
发件人地址（右上角）
日期（月日，年，如April 20, 2025）
收件人地址（左上角）
Dear Sir/Madam,
正文（三段式）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 半正式书信（如推荐信、感谢信）
结构模板：
Subject: Application for Internship
Dear Mr. Smith,
正文（简洁明确，适当使用礼貌用语）
Best regards,
Li Hua
3. 非正式书信（如给朋友的信）
结构模板：
Hi Tom,
正文（口语化表达，可使用缩写）
Take care,
Li Hua
4. 电子邮件（高频考点）
结构模板：
From: lihua@
To: admission@university.edu
Subject: Inquiry about Scholarship
Dear Professor Johnson,
正文（分点论述，避免冗长）
Looking forward to your reply,
Li Hua
二、高分句型分类突破（附替换表达）
1. 开头句（迅速切入主题）
（1）申请/咨询类
I am writing to apply for the position of... advertised on your website.
替换：the scholarship/the internship/the volunteer program
I am writing to inquire about the details of...
拓展：application process/course schedule/accommodation arrangements
（2）感谢/道歉类
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for...
强化：your guidance during my internship/your timely help
I am writing to sincerely apologize for...
补充：the delay in submitting my report/my absence from the meeting
（3）建议/邀请类
I am writing to share some constructive suggestions regarding...
场景：campus safety/environmental protection
I would like to invite you to be our guest speaker at...
活动：graduation ceremony/academic seminar
2. 主体句（逻辑清晰，细节支撑）
（1）阐述原因
The primary reason for my application is that...
拓展：I have a strong passion for.../I possess relevant experience in...
What motivates me is...
例句：What motivates me is the opportunity to contribute to your team’s mission.
（2）举例论证
For instance, during my internship at..., I successfully...
结构：案例+成果（e.g., reduced costs by 20%/organized a major event）
Take... as an example, which demonstrates...
例句：Take the campus recycling program as an example, which has raised awareness about sustainability.
（3）提出建议
I suggest that... would be beneficial, as it can...
模板：I suggest that holding regular workshops would be beneficial, as it can foster communication among students.
It would be advisable to...
替换：recommend/suggest/recommend
3. 结尾句（礼貌有力，重申目的）
I would greatly appreciate it if you could...
适用：consider my application/provide further information
I look forward to your favorable reply.
强化：positive response/early reply
Once again, thank you for your kindness and support.
适用于感谢信，可补充：I will never forget your help.
三、常考书信类型模板（含真题改编案例）
1. 申请信（奖学金/实习/留学）
开头：
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Beijing No.4 High School. I am writing to apply for the Global Youth Scholarship.
主体：
学术能力：I have maintained a top 5 ranking in my class and won the National English Speech Contest.
实践经历：As president of the Environmental Club, I led a project that reduced campus waste by 30%.
匹配度：This scholarship aligns perfectly with my goal of studying environmental science at your university.
结尾：
Enclosed is my resume and recommendation letters. I hope to have the opportunity to contribute to your academic community.
2. 建议信（校园设施/活动改进）
开头：
I am writing to share some suggestions about improving the campus library service, which I believe can enhance students’ learning experience.
主体：
问题1+建议1：Many students struggle to find quiet study areas. I suggest setting up silent zones on the upper floors.
问题2+建议2：The outdated computer lab needs upgrading. Investing in new equipment would better support research projects.
结尾：
Thank you for considering my proposals. I am willing to discuss them further if needed.
3. 感谢信（导师/朋友/机构）
开头：
I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for your guidance during my participation in the International Science Fair.
主体：
具体帮助：Your advice on experiment design and presentation skills was invaluable. Thanks to your support, I won the first prize.
情感影响：Your patience and expertise have inspired me to pursue a career in scientific research.
结尾：
Please accept my sincere thanks. I hope to keep in touch and make you proud in the future.
四、高分策略与避坑指南
1. 结构黄金法则：三段式+逻辑词
第一段：明确目的（用I am writing to...）
第二段：分点论述（用First,... Second,... Finally,...）
第三段：礼貌收尾（用Therefore,... In conclusion,...）
2. 语法亮点提升
复合句：Although the task was challenging, we managed to complete it ahead of schedule.（让步状语从句）
非谓语动词：To improve my leadership skills, I joined the student union.（不定式作目的状语）
被动语态：The event will be hosted by the Student Council on Friday.
3. 避坑提醒
格式错误：正式书信需写发件人地址，电子邮件需写主题
语气不当：正式书信避免口语化（如wanna/gonna），非正式书信可适当使用缩写（如I’m/Don’t）
信息遗漏：申请信需附简历（resume），邀请信需写具体时间地点
五、实战演练（附范文赏析）
题目：
假设你是李华，你所在的国际学校将举办“文化之夜”活动，邀请各国学生展示本国文化。请给外教Mr. Smith写一封信，邀请他担任评委。内容包括：
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动内容（如传统表演、美食展等）；
3. 表达期待。
范文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to serve as a judge for our school’s “Culture Night” event, which will be held in the school auditorium on May 15th, starting at 6:30 PM.
The event will feature diverse cultural displays from students around the world. There will be traditional dance performances, live music shows, and a food fair showcasing authentic dishes from different countries. Students will also give short speeches about their cultural heritage, making it a great opportunity to celebrate global diversity.
Your expertise in cross-cultural communication would be invaluable in evaluating the presentations. We would be honored to have you join us. Please let me know if you are available, and I will send you a detailed schedule.
Looking forward to your positive response!
Best regards,
Li Hua
六、备考资源与计划
1. 模板背诵：每天背诵1类书信的开头/结尾句，周末默写完整模板
2. 替换训练：用同义词改写经典句型（如use→utilize, important→crucial）
3. 真题仿写：选取近5年高考真题，用模板进行仿写，对比参考答案修正逻辑
关键提醒：书信写作评分重点为“信息完整度+语言准确度+格式规范性”，建议每次练习后对照评分标准（如内容要点、语法错误、词数）自我批改，逐步提升精准度。
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