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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项牛津上海版（试用本）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．作为一名中学生，我们既为悠久的历史、灿烂的文化感到骄傲，也为日趋恶化的生存环境而忧心忡忡。假如你是李明，为配合“创建文明城市”活动，请以“What can we do to protect our environment ”为题，面向全校师生写一个倡议书，内容提示如表：
Problems Air
Water
…
Suggestions Save things
Reduce pollution
Hope …
要求：
1. 文章要包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What can we do to protect our environment
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2．水资源匮乏是世界上最大的难题之一，世界上的很多国家和地区都缺水。生活中有很多人不注意，污染了水源，使可用水变得更少。因此，如果我们不节约用水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。请以 “It’s our duty to save water” 为题，写一篇100词左右的文章。文章的开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：natural resource（资源）,less and less, care about, pour dirty water, seriously polluted, in this way
It’s our duty to save water
The lack of water is one of the biggest problems in the world. As we all know,
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3．请根据以下内容提示，写一篇题目为“Saving the Environment”的英语短文。
要点：
1. 在过去的几年里许多地方变化很大。带来了不少收益(brought many benefits)，但是也导致了很多严重的问题(caused a lot of serious problems)
2. 空气污染：工厂不加处理排放废气(waste gas without doing anything)，空气质量差
3. 水污染：人们直接(directly)把废水倒进河流和湖泊里，水变脏
4. 噪音污染，乱伐树木，乱扔垃圾等……
要求：
1. 包括以上要点，不需要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，提出自己的合理化建议(至少2条)。
2. 表达清楚，语法正确。
3. 词数80左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Saving the Environment
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4．某英文报举办以“家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请你根据表格中的内容提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇介绍家乡变化的小短文。
过去 现在 将来
1. 生活贫困，房屋破旧； 2. 污染严重，垃圾遍地； 3. 交通不便游客很少。 1. 生活：住房宽敞、明亮，许多人有自己的汽车，交通方便（convenient）； 2. 环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝； 3. 旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。 ……
注意：
（1）语句通顺，无语法错误，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
（2）词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life.
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5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Let’s Be Friends of the Earth”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题，以“我们来做地球的朋友”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1) Why should we be friends of the earth
(2) What are we doing to the earth
(3) How can we be friends of the earth
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6．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Water is of great importance”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“水很重要”为题，写一篇短文不少于60个词，标点符号不占格）
（1） Do you think water is important
（2） What can we use water for
（3） How can we save water
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7．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules in our Life” (以“我们生活中的消防守则”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. Why is the fire dangerous
2. Is it important to remember and obey fire rules
3. What should we do and shouldn’t do in the fire (Give at least two examples)
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8．今年3月28日是第27个中国中小学生安全教育日，教育部会同公安部治安管理局印发《关于开展全国中小学生安全教育日活动的通知》，请你就安全问题写一封倡议书。从交通、饮食、运动、防溺水等方面向全校同学发出安全倡议。提示词：traffic rules，healthy food，hurt，swim alone
要求：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
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9．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇演讲稿。
1、慎重交友； 2、遇险报警；3、安全饮食；4、其他（1—2点）
注意：1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不记入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, online, danger, call... for, healthily and safely
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe
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10．期待已久的暑假就要来临，同学们一定制订了许多假期活动，假如你是王磊，请根据以下提示，给即将开始假期的同学们写一封信，提醒他们增强安全意识和自我保护意识。词数不少于80词。
内容提示：1．make friends carefully 2．eat safely 3．ask for help when in…
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11．学校近期鼓励各年级积极组织远足活动，增强学生的身体素质。校英文广播站就此开展关于“远足安全”的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇文章向广播站投稿。
1.参加远足活动时的注意事项（带上必备物品，不要单独行动）；
2.发生事故后如何急救；
3. ……
WORD BANK
hiking n. 远足
a first aid kit一套急救用品
dress the wound包扎伤口
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Hiking can help us relax and keep fit, but we need to pay attention to our safety too. Here is some advice
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12．每年都有很多人在交通事故中受伤或失去生命，因此确保交通安全极为重要。请根据图示，写一篇短文，介绍如何确保交通安全。词数80左右。
注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents.
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13．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校开展了 以“How to keep us safe from danger”为主题的英语演讲比赛请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项：
1.词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名，校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
How to keep us safe from danger
Road safety Fire safety Food safety ...
watch the traffic lights carefully... not play with fire... not eat the food that has gone bad... ...
How to keep us safe from danger
Hello, everyone. To us, safety is very important. We should know how to keep us safe from danger.
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14．安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的作文。
内容包括：
1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯……
2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品……
3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳……
1. obey the traffic rule, cross the street, keep to the right
2.junk food, instead of, less meat and candy
3. hurt ourselves, swim in the river alone, without permission.
4. feeling (感想)
作文要求：
1.短文必须包括给出的全部信息，条理清楚；
2.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
3.词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are flowers of our country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all.
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15．“崇尚英雄才会产生英雄，争做英雄才能英雄辈出。”——习近平。
英语杂志社正在开展以“My Great Hero”为题的征文活动。请根据下面的要点提示，从人物事迹和对你的影响等方面写一篇征文稿。
要点提示：
1. Who is your hero in your heart
2. What made him/her a hero
3. How has he/she changed you in your life
4. Share more ideas about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Great Hero
Everyone has a hero and the hero in my heart is
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16．人们常说，榜样的力量是无穷的。如果你拥有一个优秀的榜样，那么你会特别喜欢他（或她），并努力地和他（或她）靠齐，想要变得和他（或她）一样优秀。假如你是李华。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你最喜欢的人，即你的榜样，可以是你的父母，老师，同学，科学家，歌手，演员，等等。内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的人是谁；
2. 你最喜欢的人的简单经历和成就；
3. 你喜欢他（或她）的原因；
4. 你的感想（决心）。
要求：
1. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 包含以上所有信息, 可根据需要作适当的发挥。
2. 80词左右。
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17．学校决定开展英文演讲活动，号召学生们向谷爱凌学习。请你按照下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿，先简单介绍下谷爱凌的个人信息，再谈谈你感受到的她的优秀品质(personality)，最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
写作要点 具体内容
1.Personal information Age: 20 Birthplace: America Hobby: running, riding horses, playing football…
2.Personality ...
3.Your plans 1) ______________ 2) _____________ 3) …
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce a sports star—Gu Ailing.
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Thank you!
18．请以My Favorite Writer或者My Favorite Singer为题，根据以下提示和要求写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1.Who is the writer/singer
2.How did you find out about him/her
3.How do you feel about his/her books/music
4.Have you introduced him/her to others What do they think about him/her
要求：
1.紧扣主题，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2.不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处。
3.不得透露考生姓名、学校、教师等信息。
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19．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
我们一生中会经历许多比赛，一定有一次比赛令你至今难忘，可能是准备过程的艰辛，可能是获胜带来的喜悦，也可能是失败后的反思……。假如你是初二学生李华，你们学校英语公众号正在开展主题为“An Unforgettable Competition”的征文活动。请回顾你参加过的最难忘的一次比赛，写一篇征文给公众号投稿，内容为你参加过的比赛是什么、赛前或赛中你做了什么，以及这次比赛令你难忘的原因。
提示问题：
1. What is the most unforgettable competition you’ve entered
2. What did you do
3. Why is it unforgettable for you
提示词：speaking, singing, practice, try, improve
An Unforgettable Competition
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20．梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南于无声世界，坚持自己的梦想，用奋斗发声。请你根据以下表格，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍江梦南的故事。
内容须包括以下所有要点：
Name Jiang Mengnan
Year of birth 1992
Experience 1. deaf (聋的) when she was little; 2. learn to read lips; 3. study hard; dream to study medicine; 4. become a Doctor of pharmacy ...
Your feelings ... ...
参考词汇：聋的deaf； 读唇语read lips； 药学博士Doctor of pharmacy；意志力will
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运).
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
What can we do to protect our environment
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, our hometown is trying to build a civilized city. However, the environment problems are becoming more and more serious. The air and the water become worse and they have caused many problems for all the living things. The noise pollution makes it difficult for people to rest.
There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment. First, we can save things in order to save the energy. We can also reduce pollution by traveling by bike or public transportation. Last but not least, we should learn to recycle things. We must get into the habit of sorting rubbish.
If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应该根据“怎样保护环境”进行合理阐述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍日趋恶化的生存环境，根据题干表格中的提示，描述空气污染和水污染；
第二步，根据题干表格的提示，介绍相关建议；
第三步，发出号召，要求每个人都积极去保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越
②in order to为了
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment.（there be句型）
②If everyone does his part, all of us will live in a better environment.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文：
It’s our duty to save water
The lack of water is one of the biggest problems in the world. As we all know, the water is the most important natural resource on earth. We can’t live without water. The water for use is becoming less and less because of the water pollution. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. We must do something to stop pollution. We can call on everyone to stop polluting water. At the same time, we need to save water through different ways. For example, we can turn off the shower when we wash hair. Only in this way can we live happily.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“节约用水是我们的责任”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“水资源的重要性、水资源被污染、如何节约水资源”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①seriously严重地
②the lack of缺乏；匮乏
③natural resource自然资源
[高分句型]
①For example, we can turn off the shower when we wash hair. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only in this way can we live happily.（only位于句首的倒装句）
3．例文：
Saving the Environment
Great changes have taken place in many places during the past few years. The changes have brought many benefits, and have also caused a lot of serious problems.
There is air pollution everywhere. Factories let out their waste gas without doing anything to it. The air is not clean any more. Some people pour the waste water into the rivers and lakes directly and the water is dirty now. Besides, people cut down too many trees and leave rubbish here and there.
What shall we do to save the environment My suggestion is that we must stop people from dumping the waste into the air and the water. And also we should plant more trees. We can ride bikes instead of driving cars. Everyone should do something to protect the environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求以“Saving the Environment”为题，根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意需要提出自己的合理化建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达过去几年里，许多地方发生了很大变化，这些变化带来了收益但同时也造成了严重污染问题；
第二步，具体介绍变化所带来的污染；
第三步，提出拯救环境的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①let out释放
②cut down砍倒
③pour sth into把……倒入……里
④stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
My suggestion is that we must stop people from dumping the waste into the air and the water. (that引导表语从句)
4．参考范文：
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has improved a lot. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. So it’s more convenient to travel around. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
In the future, I believe my hometown will be more beautiful. People’s lives will be better and better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，按照表中提示的要点说明过去的生活是什么样子的；
第二步，按照表中提示的要点说明现在生活中的变化，包括生活、环境和旅游等方面的变化，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达对未来生活的展望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①live a better life过上更好的生活
②take action采取行动
③people from all over the world来自世界各地的人们
④better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere.（there be句型）
②So it’s more convenient to travel around.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
5．例文
Let’s Be Friends of the Earth
The earth is the only place for people to live. If we don’t protect the land, there will be no land to grow crops. If we don’t protect the sea, we’ll get nothing from it in the future—no fish or other sea food. So we must be friendly to the earth.
We should protect the air, the water and all the animals and plants around the earth. We should also use less paper and plastic bags. Besides, we should take public transportation instead of private cars.
Only when we take the earth as our friend, will it provide good conditions for us to live. So let’s be friends of the earth.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中为什么我们是地球的朋友，我们能为地球做什么，怎样才能成为地球的朋友，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“地球是人们生活的唯一地方。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我们成为地球朋友的原因；我们能为地球做的事情；要成为地球的朋友我们要怎样做”几方面重点介绍我们做地球朋友的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“让我们成为地球朋友吧！”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① in the future将来
② be friendly to对……友好
[高分句型]
① If we don’t protect the land, there will be no land to grow crops.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② Besides, we should take public transportation instead of private cars.（besides表示“而且，此外”包含后面的事物；instead of表示“而不是，相反的”）
6．例文
Water is of great importance
As we all know, water is of great importance because we can use it to do a lot of things. We can’t live without water.
At home, we use water to wash clothes, cook food, have showers and so on. We must drink water every day. At work, people use water to make things in factories.
However, we don’t have enough drinking water on the earth. So how can we save water First, we should use less water when we don’t need too much water. Second, try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. At last, we can take a shorter shower. If we can do these things, we can save a lot of water.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示问题，以“水很重要”为题，写一篇短文不少于60个词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明水很重要，强调水的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述水的作用；
第三步，引出水资源缺乏，我们应该节约用水，并具体描述如何节约水。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多，大量
②live without water离开水生存
③at last最后
[高分句型]
①As we all know, water is of great importance because we can use it to do a lot of things. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③If we can do these things, we can save a lot of water.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文：
Fire Rules in our Life
Fire is dangerous because it can burn forests and destroy many tall buildings. If some people can’t run away from fire, it can kill them. So it is important for us to remember and obey fire rules.
There are some fire rules for you to follow when there is a fire. First of all, judge if you can put out the fire, if not, find as much water as you can, and wet your clothes or a towel. Then, use the wet clothes to cover your mouth and nose, and bend your body to escape. Meanwhile, keep calm and find the safety exit as soon as possible. If you can’t find an exit, stay in place and wait for rescue.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给问题需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述火灾的危险性，并引出遵守消防守则的重要性；
第二步，详细阐述火灾中我们的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①run away 逃走；逃避
②first of all首先
③put out扑灭
④as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①Fire is dangerous because it can burn forests and destroy many tall buildings.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are some fire rules for you to follow when there is a fire.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文：
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Besides, we should be careful when we make fiends online. Don’t tell our personal information to strangers. If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming alone without permission.
In short, safety must come first! It’s important to remember these for us all.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍保持安全的必要性；
第二步，从交通安全、食品安全、网络交友、防溺水等方面展开阐述如何保持安全；
第三步，阐述你的感想，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
②personal information 个人信息
③in danger 有危险
④without permission 未经允许
[高分句型]
①Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. (祈使句；when引导时间状语从句)
②If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述安全的重要性，并提起下文；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍中学生应如何保证自己的安全；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends 交友
②in danger 处于危险中
③in time 及时
④do harm to 对……有害
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Hello, everyone,
As we all know, safety is very important for us students. But how can we keep safe Here is some advice.
First of all, we should make friends carefully. Don’t believe strangers easily, especially the people online. Secondly, we must eat clean and fresh food. When we meet danger, try to keep calm. We can call the police or ask people around us for help. Last but not least, we must keep away from danger. We can’t swim in the river alone and we can't play with fire. These can lead to really bad results.
All in all, we should protect ourselves and keep safe all the time.
Yours
Wang Lei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干介绍同学们暑期应如何做以保证自己的安全；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，即本文是关于如何保证安全的建议；
第二步，分点进行具体阐述；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends 交朋友
②keep calm 保持冷静
③ask sb. for help 向某人求助
④all the time 一直
[高分句型]
①When we meet danger, try to keep calm. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We can’t swim in the river alone and we can't play with fire. (and连接的并列句)
11．例文
Hiking can help us relax and keep fit, but we need to pay attention to our safety too. Here is some advice.
First, bring food, water, a smartphone and a first aid kit before setting off. Second, don’t go hiking alone. Do it with our friends, classmates or family members and try to protect ourselves.
We should know how to give first aid when an accident happens. For example, if someone falls when climbing up rocks, let the person lie down and dress the wound in time. Also, call for help when necessary.
Remember, safety always comes first. Keeping cool can save our life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕提示展开作文，注意适当发挥，使文章语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍远足活动的注意事项，包括带上必备物品、不要单独行动；并说明发生事故时应该如何急救。
第三步，书写结尾，表达安全第一。
[亮点词汇]
①set off 出发
②alone 单独
③lie down 躺下
④come first 第一
[高分句型]
①For example, if someone falls when climbing up rocks, let the person lie down and dress the wound in time (if引导条件状语从句)
②Keeping cool can save our life. (动名词短语作主语)
12．例文
Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. It’s very important to keep safe on the street. Here’s some advice.
First, we must obey traffic rules. We should wear helmets when riding bikes. Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. Second, we must never play on the street or we may have an accident. Third, it’s good to help children and old people cross the street. Last, in case of an accident, we should know how to give first aid.
In short, the best way to be safe is to be careful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何确保交通安全，可适当发挥，注意条理清晰，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，通过表达在街上保持安全是很重要的来引出确保交通安全的建议；
第二步，具体介绍确保交通安全的建议；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in case of以防
②in short简言之
③first aid急救
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to keep safe on the street. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
②Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. (when引导时间状语从句)
13．例文
How to keep us safe from danger Hello, everyone. To us, safety is very important. We should know how to keep us safe from danger.
When walking or riding on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. It’s important to watch the traffic lights carefully and walk or ride on the right of the road.
We eat food every day, so we should pay attention to food safety. We mustn’t eat the food that has gone bad. And we mustn’t eat the food that can’t reach the required standard, either.
Moreover, we shouldn’t play with fire. If our house is on fire, we should know how to escape and save ourselves. We should also be careful when we go swimming in summer. We shouldn’t swim alone or swim in deep rivers. We’d better go with our parents or friends who swim very well and swim in the indoor swimming pool.
We should learn to keep us safe from danger. After all, life safety is the most important.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意文章要包含道路安全、消防安全和食品安全，缺一不可，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体阐述如何让我们远离危险；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“道路安全、消防安全、食品安全”等方面阐述如何远离危险；
第三步，书写结语。说明生命安全最为重要。
[亮点词汇]
①obey遵守
②pay attention to注意
③moreover而且
④after all毕竟
[高分句型]
①We mustn’t eat the food that has gone bad. And we mustn’t eat the food that can’t reach the required standard, either.（that引导的定语从句）
②If our house is on fire, we should know how to escape and save ourselves.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③We should also be careful when we go swimming in summer.（when引导的时间状语从句）
14．例文
Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are flowers of our country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street.
Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Eat less meat and candy. Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are playing. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river without permission.
In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍交通安全；
第二步，介绍食品安全；
第三步，介绍活动安全；
第四步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①obey the traffic rule遵守交通规则
②cross the street过马路
③keep to the right靠右
④junk food垃圾食品
⑤hurt ourselves伤害我们自己
[高分句型]
①First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red.（否定祈使句）
③It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river without permission.（It+be+形容词+to do sth做某事是……的，it为形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式）
15．例文：
My Great Hero
Everyone has a hero and the hero in my heart is Qian Xuesen, one of the most famous scientists in China. When he was young, he was very hard-working and studied in many famous universities in the world. He was persecuted by the U.S. government for more than five years before being deported to his homeland. He won many big prizes and made many famous discoveries. He is known as the “Father of Space Technology” and “King of Rocketry”. I will learn from him and work hard to make a good contribution to our motherland.
He was one of the greatest persons who made our country stronger and stronger. Everyone in China will never forget him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我心中的英雄是谁”来引出下文中对钱学森的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“事迹和影响”两方面入手，重点介绍钱学森的伟大之处；
③第三步，书写结语。要向他学习，报效祖国。
[亮点词汇]
①more than 超过
②be known as 被称为
③learn from sb 向某人学习
④make contribution to 为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①When he was young, he was very hard-working and studied in many famous universities in the world.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He was one of the greatest persons who made our country stronger and stronger.（who引导的定语从句）
16．例文
My favorite person is Yuan Longping, who is known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Yuan Longping was born in Beijing. After graduating from college, he became a teacher in an agricultural school. There he began his research of hybrid rice. Yuan Longping is the pioneer of hybrid rice in China. He is a contemporary Shennong. He was not afraid of difficulties, and he was willing to give. He engaged in the research of hybrid rice for half a century. He made a great contribution to solving the problem of Chinese people’s eating. His great achievements not only belong to China, but also affect the world. Yuan Longping loved our motherland. He is a model for us to learn from.
As we all know, knowledge is power. So, I’ve made up my mind to work hard at all my subjects and learn more so that I can do what I can to make our country more and more beautiful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山地介绍自己的榜样是谁；
第二步，介绍榜样的简单经历、成就以及喜欢他的原因；
第三步，表达自己的感想或决心。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as 被认为是
②be willing to 乐于
③make a contribution to 作出贡献
④make up one’s mind 下定决心
[高分句型]
①I’ve made up my mind to work hard at all my subjects and learn more so that I can do what I can to make our country more and more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
17．例文
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce a sports star—Gu Ailing.
Gu Ailing is a 20-year-old freeskier who was born and grew up in the USA. She is not only crazy about skiing, but also running, riding horses and playing football.
As far as we know, she has chosen to compete for China, so she is proud of China and loves our motherland very much. To achieve her dream, she always challenges the difficulties in training and schoolwork. Most importantly, she never gives up.
Gu is an example to us all. In the future, I will work for my country like her. I will do sports every day to have a strong body. Also, I’m going to make a weekly plan and study hard to improve myself. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I will stick to my dream!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，题干已给出。
第二步，介绍谷爱凌的个人信息和性格品质。
第三步，表达自己打算如何向她学习。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②As far as we know据我们所知
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①Gu Ailing is a 20-year-old freeskier who was born and grew up in the USA. (who引导的定语从句)
②To achieve her dream, she always challenges the difficulties in training and schoolwork. (动词不定式表目的)
18．例文
My Favorite Writer
My favorite writer is J.K. Rowling.
I know her from TV. J.K. Rowling is the writer of the Harry Potter series, which is now one of the best-sellers in the world. She was born in Britain in 1965. When she was young, her father often read bedtime stories to her. She especially loved stories about the magical world. Rowling wrote her first story at the age of six. In 1992, Rowling began to write the first Harry Potter book for young readers. The book was a great success and the first film about Harry Potter came out in 2001. Now Harry Potter series is very popular with people of all ages. She says she will go on writing children’s books.
I used to introduce her work to my friends. They also think her books are great.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：紧扣主题，围绕提示展开作文并适当发挥，使文章语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的作家或歌手；
第二步，介绍你是怎么了解他/她，以及你认为他/她的书/音乐怎么样；
第三步，最后描述你是否把他/她介绍给别人了以及他们如何看他/她。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②begin to do开始做
③go on继续
[高分句型]
①J.K. Rowling is the writer of the Harry Potter series, which is now one of the best-sellers in the world.（定语从句）
②When she was young, her father often read bedtime stories to her. （时间状语从句）
19．例文
An Unforgettable Competition
During the past year at junior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was when our class prepared for a group singing competition.
During the last week before the competition, my classmates and I practiced singing in our free time. Although we also had lots of homework, every one of us took it seriously and did our best. Thanks to our hard work, we won first prize. All of us were so excited. When we got the prize, I thought of an old saying — No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but we developed our friendship, confidence as well as understanding during the preparation.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己参加过的比赛是什么；
第二步，介绍赛前自己做的事情；
第三步，最后介绍这次比赛令自己难忘的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① take sth seriously 认真对待
② thanks to 多亏
③ as well as 以及
[高分句型]
①Although we also had lots of homework, every one of us took it seriously and did our best.（让步状语从句）
②When we got the prize, I thought of an old saying — No pains, no gains. （时间状语从句）
20．例文
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运).
Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of difficulties, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people, so she learned to read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.
I admire Jiang Mengnan very much. Her strong will made her become successful. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude. Now I study harder and focus on the process. In our life, every step is so important that we must keep fighting against the fate.
This is Jiang Mengnan, the hero in my heart! I want to be the person like her.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感受及做法；
第三步，总结全文，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②realize one’s dream实现梦想
③Thanks to感谢，多亏了
④fight against the fate与命运抗争
[高分句型]
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导时间状语从句）
②In our life, every step is so important that we must keep fighting against the fate.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
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