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专题08 书面表达15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（湖南专用）
1．（2025·湖南岳阳·一模）2025年被国家定为“体重管理年”，倡导全民关注健康生活。你所在的学校计划开展“健康生活宣传活动”，鼓励同学们改善饮食习惯并积极运动。作为活动的一部分，学校邀请同学们分享如何让健康生活变得有趣且有效的想法。假如你是李华，请你以“我的健康计划”为题，根据以下信息写一篇英语发言稿，内容包括：
1.描述你想要培养或改变的一个健康习惯；
2.解释这个习惯对体重管理和健康的重要性；
3.提出一个创意方法，让这个习惯变得有趣或更容易坚持。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
（3）发言稿中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my health plan with you. In the “Year of Weight Management”, I have decided to focus on developing a new habit of
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
2．（2025·湖南·模拟预测）英语是中学阶段的一门重要课程，但有的同学因方法不当而学习效果欠佳。为此，某校英语社团组织了以“How Can We Learn English Better”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据表格内容提示，结合自身实际，写一篇英语短文投稿。
How Can We Learn English Better
in class listen to the teacher; take notes; …
after class review in time; discuss with classmates; …
besides exercise; make good use of time; …
注意：
1.文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
2.写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How Can We Learn English Better
How can we learn English better Here are some suggestions.
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All in all, if you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will succeed.
3．（2025·湖南常德·一模）青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1,259名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息，以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表全部内容；
2.从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求:
1.词数不少于100词：
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Our school did a survey among 1,259 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results.
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4．（2025·湖南郴州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom在交朋友方面有困扰。请结合以下图片内容，用英文给他写一封邮件，谈谈你的观点和建议。
内容包括：
（1）真正的朋友是怎样的；
（2）如何交朋友。
注意：
（1） 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble making friends. In my opinion, a friend should be
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2025·湖南邵阳·一模）2024年12月4日，春节被列入联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。除春节外，我国的端午节、二十四节气和羌年也在此名录中。你还希望哪个传统节日被列人该名录呢？假如你们学校的英语角将于本周五下午讨论这个话题，请你根据内容提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你的看法。
内容提示：
1. Which traditional festival would you like to see on the Heritage List (遗产名录)
2. Why do you choose the festival (time, activities, meanings)
3. What do you think of traditional festivals being added to the Heritage List
写作要求：
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon, everyone! The traditional Chinese festival I would like to see on UNESCO’s Heritage List is
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Thank you for listening!
6．（2025·湖南湘潭·一模）为响应国家卫健委发布的《儿童青少年食养指南》号召，你校英文报社就“My Healthy Diet (饮食)”开设专栏进行征文。请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
要求：
1. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要点完备，并做适当拓展；
3. 文中不能出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
My Healthy Diet
A healthy diet means eating different kinds of food that help our body grow and stay strong.
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7．（2025·湖南·一模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办的“未来职业体验日”活动中，你和同学们尝试了不同工作(如医生、厨师、教师、工程师等)。请按提示要求写邮件给英国好友Brian，描述你的体验、感受和对未来职业的畅想。
要求：
(1)文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；
(2)词数为80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Brian,
How are you Last week, our school held a “Future Career Exploration Day”, and I want to share this exciting event with you!
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What about you Do schools in the UK organize similar activities I’d love to hear about your ideas!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
8．（2025·湖南岳阳·一模）教育应该培养终身运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者和优雅生活者。某英文网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为主题开展征文活动，请从中学生的角度写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的做法。内容包括：
健康生活（食物、运动、睡眠……） 不怕挑战（解决生活、学习中的问题……）
对人友善（乐于助人、和睦相处……） 牢记责任（照顾父母、帮助弱者……）
要求：
（1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with the idea. To be a better person, I think we should do the following things.
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9．（2025·湖南长沙·模拟预测）生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异，尤其是ChatGPT和最近DeepSeek的出现使人工智能AI (artificial intelligence) 一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处 (至少两点)，并举例说明；
3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 词数100词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society.
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10．（2025·湖南·一模）初中生活即将结束，回顾过去的三年，总有一些人让你印象深刻。请以“An Unforgettable Person”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 内容包括思维导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现考生人名和校名等真实信息；
3. 词数不少于80词。
An Unforgettable Person
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11．（2025·湖南·模拟预测）假定你是李平，是学校英语社团的成员。期末学校英语社团将为初三学生举办毕业派对，请你按提示用英语给外教老师Dora写一份邀请函。
Time and place 2:00 pm-5:00 pm, on June 27th, in the school music hall
Activities A speech given by the headmaster. A video about our school life. Some talent shows. Sending cards or gifts.
Things to bring Cards or gifts for the teachers and classmates.
For more information Email Li Ping at Lipingvip@
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Dear Dora,
I’m writing to tell you something about our party.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
12．（2025·湖南娄底·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“About Reading”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，想要参加这次征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿：
(1)简述当前初中生的阅读现状(如阅读时间、习惯等)；
(2)提出一至两条改进阅读习惯的建议；
(3)推荐一本你最喜欢的书并说明理由。
注意：
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名；
(2)写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
The present situation (现状) of reading ● spend little time reading ● read only for exams
Suggestions to improve the situation ● make reading plans ● choose classic books
Books to share ● A Journey to the West ●The Old Man and the Sea
About Reading
Nowadays, many junior school students.
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Let’s read more books and open our mind!
13．（2025·山东济南·一模）每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Point”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要点：
（1）讲述一个自己的故事；
（2）你的感悟；
要求：适当增加细节，行文连贯；文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
My Shining Point
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14．（2025·湖南·模拟预测）湘江之畔，我们的家乡大美湖南让人流连忘返。为了讲好湖南故事，深入了解丰富多彩的本土文化，你校上周五结合“湖南元素”开展了有关湖南文化的研学。假定你是李华，请根据下文的信息写一篇短文介绍你此次研学的经历。
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称；
2.注意书写工整、语句通顺、句意连贯；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Unforgettable Experience
Hunan enjoys great popularity across the country nowadays.
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15．（2025·湖南长沙·一模）你校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中英国人的空余生活后，发起了主题为 “How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful” 的征文，号召中学生合理利用空闲时间。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇作文投稿。提示：
◆帮助父母做家务；
◆可以培养兴趣爱好；
◆参与志愿活动，帮助他人。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右 (标题已给出，不计入总词数) ；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word bank: suggestion n. 建议；not only...but also...不但……而且……
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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《专题08 书面表达15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（湖南专用）》参考答案
1．例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my health plan with you. In the “Year of Weight Management”, I have decided to focus on developing a new habit of jogging in the morning.
Jogging not only burns calories but also strengthens my heart and lungs. By doing so, I can stay at a healthy weight and reduce the risk of illness. I believe this habit is the key to building endurance and staying active. To make it more fun, I’m going to start a “morning running club” with my friends. We’ll share our progress, hold mini‐races, and cheer each other on. This way, jogging becomes more enjoyable and easier to keep doing.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想要培养的一种习惯；
第二步，介绍培养这种习惯的重要性及创意方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①the risk of……的风险
②cheer each other on互相加油
③stay active保持积极
[高分句型]
①I believe this habit is the key to building endurance and staying active. (宾语从句)
②To make it more fun, I’m going to start a “morning running club” with my friends. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．例文
How Can We Learn English Better
How can we learn English better Here are some suggestions.
First, in class, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as listening to the teacher carefully and taking notes. Asking necessary questions is also important.
Second, after class, we can review what we have learned in time, discuss with our classmates and correct mistakes at any time.
Besides, it’s helpful to have a healthy body. So we should spend at least an hour in taking exercise every day. And we’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow.
All in all, if you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍课后的英语学习建议，包括课后及时复习、与同学讨论以及随时纠错；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①necessary必要的
②make good use of好好利用
③put off推迟
[高分句型]
①Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. (宾语从句）
②Second, after class, we can review what we have learned in time, discuss with our classmates and correct mistakes at any time. (and连接并列成分)
3．例文
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,259 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. According to the chart, 47% of students believe they are good at offering help to others, 86% feel confident in facing challenges, and 53% think they are being positive in daily life. These numbers show that teenagers are learning to value their strengths.
I want to talk about facing challenges. Last term, I joined a math competition even though I was nervous about difficult problems. At first, I made many mistakes and felt like giving up. However, I told myself, “Every challenge is a chance to grow.” I spent extra time practicing and asked my teacher for help. Finally, I won third place! This experience taught me that challenges can push me to improve.
Now, I always try to face difficulties bravely. Whether it’s solving a math problem or speaking in public, I remind myself to stay calm and keep trying. This attitude has made me stronger and more confident.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕学校关于“我发现自己真的很棒”的调查结果展开，并分享了作者自己面对挑战的经历。
②时态：文章主要使用了一般过去时和一般现在时。
③提示：先呈现学校调查结果，然后通过自身面对挑战的具体事例阐述挑战对自身成长的意义，最后表明自己现在面对困难的积极态度。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍学校针对“我发现自己真的很棒”这一主题对1259名学生做了调查并给出结果，体现青少年对自身优点的重视。
第二步，中间以自己参加数学竞赛的经历为例，讲述自己从最初想放弃到最终获奖的过程，说明挑战能促使自己进步。
第三步，结尾表明自己现在总是勇敢面对困难，强调这种态度让自己变得更强更自信。
[亮点词汇]
①survey调查
②confident自信的
③positive积极的
④strength优点；长处
⑤extra额外的
[高分句型]
①According to the chart, 47% of students believe they are good at offering help to others, 86% feel confident in facing challenges, and 53% think they are being positive in daily life.（使用并列结构，清晰地呈现了调查的各项结果。）
②However, I told myself, “Every challenge is a chance to grow.”（使用直接引语，生动地展现了作者当时自我鼓励的情景。）
4．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble making friends. In my opinion, a friend should be someone you can trust and share joys and sorrows with. True friends are always there for you, ready to offer a hand when you’re in trouble.
To make friends, you should first be friendly and open. Smile at others and start conversations. Also, show your interest in others by listening carefully. Moreover, joining clubs or taking part in group activities is a great way to meet people who share your hobbies.
I hope these suggestions will help you make more good friends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件，属于应用文体。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：需围绕真正朋友的特质以及如何交朋友这两个要点展开，结合给定图片内容进行创作，需涵盖所有要点，可适当补充细节使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明对Tom困扰的关切。
第二步，阐述对真正朋友的看法，并对如何交朋友给出具体建议。
第三步，书写结语，表达对建议能帮助到Tom的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①trust 信任
②offer a hand 提供帮助
③take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, a friend should be someone you can trust and share joys and sorrows with.（定语从句）
②Also, show your interest in others by listening carefully.（“by + 动名词”结构作方式状语）
5．例文
Good afternoon, everyone! The traditional Chinese festival I would like to see on UNESCO's Heritage List is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
As one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It is a time when families get together. During the festival, people carry on the traditions of eating mooncakes, admiring the full moon, and lighting lanterns. The festival not only brings joy but also reminds people of the importance of family, unity, and cultural heritage.
I believe that adding traditional Chinese festivals to the Heritage List is meaningful. It helps share our rich cultural customs with the world. At the same time, it encourages cultural exchange and understanding among the different countries. So, I hope the Mid-Autumn Festival will appear on the Heritage List soon.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在我的童年里，有很多奇妙的事情。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你所喜欢的传统节日、选择它的原因及对传统的节日被添加到遗产名单的看法等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get together聚在一起
②not only...but also不仅……而且……
③At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①So, I hope the Mid-Autumn Festival will appear on the Heritage List soon. (宾语从句)
6．例文
My Healthy Diet
A healthy diet means eating different kinds of food that help our body grow and stay strong. For breakfast, I usually have a bowl of oatmeal with some fresh fruits like bananas and strawberries. Oatmeal gives me energy, and fruits provide vitamins. For lunch, I often have rice, some stir-fried vegetables, and a little bit of lean meat. It’s a balanced meal. For dinner, I prefer soup and steamed buns. To improve my diet, I will try to eat more fish because it is rich in protein and good for my brain. Also, I will drink more water instead of sugary drinks. I think my diet is mostly healthy, but there is still room for improvement. I believe a healthy diet is the key to a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的饮食习惯；
第二步，介绍为了改善饮食自己的计划；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①provide提供
②balanced平衡的
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①To improve my diet, I will try to eat more fish because it is rich in protein and good for my brain. （原因状语从句）
②I think my diet is mostly healthy, but there is still room for improvement.（宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Brian,
How are you Last week, our school held a “Future Career Exploration Day”, and I want to share this exciting event with you!
Firstly, we tried doctor roles using toy patients. Then, I became a chef in the cooking corner, making pizza dough. Most surprisingly, the engineer workshop taught me basic robotics! Through role-playing, I learned communication skills in customer service.
This experience opened my eyes to various career paths. I felt more confident about choosing my future major. I dream of becoming an AI engineer, so I will study programming seriously now.
What about you Do schools in the UK organize similar activities I’d love to hear about your ideas!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和 “一般现在时”；
③提示：向朋友分享学校举办的“未来职业探索日”活动，并询问对方学校是否有类似活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头问候朋友并引出要分享的“未来职业探索日”活动。
第二步，中间详细描述自己在活动中体验各种职业的经历，包括具体做了什么、感受如何以及此次经历带来的感悟。
第三步，结尾询问对方英国学校是否有类似活动，表达期待对方分享想法。
[亮点词汇]
①various各种各样的
②career path职业路径
③confident自信的
[高分句型]
I dream of becoming an AI engineer, so I will study programming seriously now.(so引导的并列句)
8．参考例文
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with the idea. To be a better person, I think we should do the following things.
First, we should live healthily. I always eat vegetables and fruits. I exercise at least one hour every day. I like running and playing basketball. I sleep 8 hours to stay energetic. Second, we should face challenges bravely. When I have problems, I try to solve them step by step instead of giving up. Third, we should be kind to everyone. I often help the people who are in trouble. I get on well with my classmates. Finally, we should remember responsibilities. I help my parents with chores and support those in need by donating clothes and books.
Let’s work together to make the world better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，结合要点提示，谈谈具体的做法；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①at least 至少
②instead of 代替，而不是
③get on well with 与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①When I have problems, I try to solve them step by step instead of giving up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I often help the people who are in trouble.（定语从句）
9．例文：
The invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI.
There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has many advantages. First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to do the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. It improves the accuracy of data and helps scientists to do research.
In my opinion, AI is a trend of the world. We will live happily and more conveniently with the help of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，直接表明人们不必过度担忧人工智能发展，强调其不会完全取代人类，接着从三个方面列举优势；
第三步，表达自己对人工智能的总体看法，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①the development of……的发展
②first of all首先
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
If people don’t want to do the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．例文
An Unforgettable Person
In my three years of junior high school, there is one person who stands out the most in my mind. She is my English teacher, Ms. Li.
Ms. Li is tall and has short hair. She is nice and kind, always encouraging us to do our best. I think she is the warmest and most caring teacher. She always goes out of her way to help us with our studies and personal problems. I remember once when I was struggling with English, she helped me with English and encouraged me to understand the grammar and vocabulary. Her patience and determination to see us succeed is something that has stayed with me.
For Ms. Li, my feeling is one of deep gratitude. She has not only taught me English but also taught me how to be a kind and caring person. She is truly an unforgettable person in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：介绍自己初中生活中最难忘的人，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己最难忘的人是英语老师，引出下文；
第二步，介绍李老师的外貌，性格，以及让你难忘原因，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，表达自己对李老师的感情，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do 鼓励某人做某事
②struggle with 与……作斗争，在……方面努力、挣扎
③not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In my three years of junior high school, there is one person who stands out the most in my mind.（定语从句）
②I think she is the warmest and most caring teacher.（宾语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Dora,
I’m writing to tell you something about our party. It will be held from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm on June 27th in the school music hall. There will be a speech by our headmaster, a video about school life, some talent shows, and a card or gift exchange. Please bring cards or gifts for teachers and classmates. In the end, we will sing a song and take photos together. For more details, email me at Lipingvip@. Can you come to the party I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写信目的；
②第二步，分点说明时间地点、活动安排、需要带的东西；
③第三步，提供更多信息的联系方式，希望对方参加。
[亮点词汇]
①in the end 最后
②take photos拍照
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be held from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm on June 27th in the school music hall.（一般将来时的被动语态）
12．例文
Nowadays, many middle school students spend little time reading due to heavy homework. Some even read only for exams.
To improve this situation, here are my suggestions. First, set a daily reading goal like 20 minutes before bedtime. Second, choose books that match your interests, not just bestsellers. My favorite book is Wonder by R.J. Palacio. It tells the story of a boy with a facial difference, teaching us kindness and courage. Every time I read it, I feel inspired to be a better person.
Let’s read more books and open our minds!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述当前初中生的阅读现状；
第二步，讲述改善阅读习惯的建议；
第三步，推荐自己最爱的书籍以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①improve this situation改善情况
②set a daily reading goal设定日常阅读目标
[高分句型]
①Every time I read it, I feel inspired to be a better person.（every time引导的时间状语从句）
②It tells the story of a boy with a facial difference, teaching us kindness and courage.（非谓语作状语）
13．例文
My Shining Point I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I find it important to have a positive attitude.
Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，有一个积极的态度很重要；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，书写结语，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②regard…as把……视为
③make an effort做出努力
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句)
14．例文
My Unforgettable Experience
Hunan enjoys great popularity across the country nowadays.
Last Friday, our school conducted a study trip on Hunan culture. The main purpose is to tell the story of Hunan and gain an in depth understanding of the rich and colorful local culture. I visited Lei Feng’s former residence and learned about the story and spirit of Lei Feng. What’s more, I learned how to make chopped pepper. I also have a deeper understanding of Hunan people’s eating habits.
This experience made me feel very fulfilled and my love for Hunan has become deeper and deeper.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点题研学之旅及其目的；
第二步，介绍参加的活动及学到的东西；
第三步，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learned about了解
②what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①This experience made me feel very fulfilled and my love for Hunan has become deeper and deeper.（and并列结构）
15．
例文：
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
As students, we often have spare time after school or on weekends. To make this time more meaningful, I have some suggestions.
First, we can help our parents with housework. Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. For example, doing the dishes or cleaning the room can be a good start. Second, developing hobbies is a great way to spend our free time. Whether it’s painting, playing a musical instrument, or reading, hobbies can enrich our lives and help us relax. Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. Helping others, such as tutoring younger students or assisting in community events, can bring us a sense of fulfillment and make a positive impact on society.
In conclusion, by helping at home, pursuing hobbies, and volunteering, we can make our spare time both enjoyable and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明空闲时间的重要性，并提出使其更有意义的建议。
第二步，分别详细描述如何通过帮助父母做家务、培养兴趣爱好和参与志愿活动来充实空闲时间。
第三步，总结并鼓励大家积极行动。
[亮点词汇]
①lighten one’s burden减轻某人的负担
②responsibility责任
③enrich使丰富
[高分句型]
①Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. (动名词作主语)
②Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. (就近原则)
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