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专题09 书面表达 15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（广西专用）
1．（2025·广西河池·一模）花红柳绿，草长莺飞，春天是郊游踏青的好时节。假如你是李华，你班将组织一次春游活动。你的外籍老师Frank对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向他介绍此次活动的相关安排。
要点如下：
1.春游时间和地点；
2.计划开展的活动及注意事项；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：activity n. 活动 share v. 分享 view n. 风景 comfortable adj. 舒适的
Dear Frank,
How is everything going I’m really happy that you are interested in the coming spring outing. Now, let me tell you about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2025·广西南宁·模拟预测）《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》明确指出，劳动教育是中国特色社会主义教育体系的核心组成部分。目前，我国的中小学校已经广泛实施了劳动教育课程。假设你是李华，你的学校计划在劳动节前夕举办一场以“An Unforgettable Labor Experience”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下要点撰写一篇英文短文。
内容提示：
1. 劳动经历 (如做家务、志愿活动、种植蔬菜……)；
2. 劳动体验与感受；
3. 呼吁同学们积极参与劳动实践。
要求：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
3. 不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
4. 作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Labor Experience
With May Day around the corner, it reminds me of an unforgettable labor experience.
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3．（2025·广西南宁·一模）学校运动会中有许多美好的瞬间。校刊英语专栏正在筹备“A Beautiful Moment in the Sports Meeting”主题摄影作品展，请准备一张照片参展，并用英语介绍这张照片，内容包括：
1. 拍摄照片的时间、地点；
2. 照片的主要内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能透露个人信息。
参考词汇：sports field (运动场)，finishing line (终点线)，race (n. 赛跑)，final (n. 决赛)，cheer(v. 喝彩)
A Beautiful Moment in the Sports Meeting
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4．（2025·广西柳州·二模）你校英文报Youth在创刊十周年之际向同学们征稿，鼓励大家分享与Youth共同成长的故事。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你读Youth的经历（如：阅读的时间、感受及收获等）；
2. 你给Youth的建议；
3. 你对Youth的期望和祝福。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：relaxed（adj.放松的）， open one’s mind（开拓视野）， add（vt.增加）， new column（新栏目）
Youth and me
As Youth celebrates its 10th birthday, I want to share my story with it.
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5．（2025·广西玉林·二模）假如你是一名初中生Nancy，想加入学校的观鸟协会（Bird-watching Club），为协会做点事情，请根据以下内容提示，给协会写一封信，申请加入协会。
内容要点：
1．爱好：喜欢生物学科，对动植物感兴趣，尤其鸟类，……
2．特长：擅长拍照，会写报告，……
3．加入的目的：想学习更多鸟类知识，想做一些事来保护它们，……
4．承诺：按时参加协会的活动，……
要求：1．短文要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；2．80词左右。短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：write reports 写报告；learn more about… 想学习更多；take part in… 参加（活动）
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Nancy. I would like to join the Bird-watching Club.
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I will be happy if I can become a member of your club. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Nancy
6．（2025·广西·一模）中学生课后活动精彩纷呈，如绘画创作、篮球竞技、舞蹈展示、志愿服务等多种形式。哪项活动让你尤为倾心？假设你是李华，学校英文报正在举办以“A Wonderful After-school Activity”为主题的英语征文活动。请你撰写一篇英语短文，与同学分享你最喜欢的课后活动，并谈谈你的收获。
内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的课后活动；
2.你通常如何开展该项活动 (时间、地点……)；
3.你的收获 (能力提升……)。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：colourful (adj.多彩的) confident (adj.自信的) positive (adj.积极的) gain (v.收获) enrich (v.丰富)
A Wonderful After-school Activity
There are many after-school activities in our school. The one I like most is
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7．（2025·广西南宁·一模）转眼间，初中生活已经接近尾声，过去的三年时光犹如一本厚厚的书，承载了我们的喜怒哀乐。假如你是李华，你将作为初三毕业生代表在毕业晚会上做演讲，请根据以下流程图，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿请根据流程图自拟，语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数80左右，演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
参考词汇：encourage（鼓励 v.） stress（压力n.） thankful（感恩的adj.） excited（兴奋的adj.） achieve（实现v.）
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Good evening. It’s my honor to give a speech today. How time flies! Looking back on the past three years, we have experienced a lot together.
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Hope we all become better. Thanks for your time.
8．（2025·广西柳州·模拟预测）初中生活转瞬即逝，在丰富的初中校园生活中，校内有精彩的学生活动，校外也有一些有意义的研学活动。假如学校英语社团以“An Unforgettable School Trip”为题征稿，请选择你印象最深刻的校外研学活动，讲述你的美好回忆，可从以下三个方面来分享：
1. 研学活动的时间、地点、内容；
2. 参加此次研学活动的收获；
3. 谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：take a lecture 听讲座; have a better understanding of更好的理解; enjoy oneself; work together
An Unforgettable School Trip
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9．（2025·广西贵港·一模）自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校英文报以“Know myself, Become a better myself”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.你对自己的评价（认真听课，经常运动……）；
2.你的计划：学会与父母沟通，乐于助人，……；
3.你对未来的期盼。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： manage v.管理 communicate v.沟通 pocket money 零花钱
Know myself, Become a better myself
Self-management is important to us.
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10．（2025·广西来宾·一模）假如你是李华，本周你校心理社与英语报社联合开展了以“Smile”为主题的健康周活动。请你根据以下提示，以“Smile, Please”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英语报社投稿。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
1. 微笑的益处（如自信，建立良好关系……）；
2. 你的亲身经历；
3. 你的感悟。
参考词汇：mood n.情绪，confidence n.自信，relationship n.人际关系，powerful adj.有力量的
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名。
Smile, Please
Smile not only when you are happy, but also when you are in trouble.
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11．（2025·广西玉林·一模）假如你是李华，你的外国网友Tom对中国学校的运动会很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你们学校即将举办的运动会。
内容包括：
1.运动会的基本信息（时间、项目等）；
2.你为运动会做的准备（训练、休息等）；
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：event（n.项目）, relay race（接力赛）, train（v.训练）, baton（n.接力棒）
To: Tom
From: Li Hua
Subject: My School Sports Meeting
Dear Tom,
How are you I’m excited to tell you about our school sports meeting.
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
12．（2025·广西柳州·一模）健康的生活对我们的学习和成长非常重要，你校正在开展以“How to live a healthy life”为主题的征文活动。请谈谈你对健康生活的看法和建议，并写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 健康生活的重要性；
2. 你的建议（如饮食、锻炼……）；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：timetable (n. 时间表)，exercise (n. 锻炼)，diet (n. 饮食)，regularly (adv. 有规律地)
How to live a healthy life
A healthy life is very important for us.
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13．（2025·广西来宾·一模）在我们的初中生活中，团队合作是非常重要的一部分。无论是在课堂上的小组讨论，还是在学校课外活动中的团队项目，团队合作都能帮助我们更好地学习和成长。你校英语社现向全体同学征集以“My teamwork activity”为主题的征文，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要点：
1．团队合作的重要性；
2．你在初中阶段参与团队合作活动的一次经历；
3．你的收获或感受。
写作要求：
1．内容完整，语言流畅，逻辑清晰；
2．词数80左右；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：solve v.解决 discuss v.讨论 opinion n.想法 分配任务：divide tasks
My teamwork activity
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14．（2025·广西河池·一模）2024 年12月4日，春节被列入联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产，这意味着中华文化穿越了国界，也吸引越来越多的外国友人了解中国生活。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom 给你写了一封信。在信中他提及想了解你的初中生活情况。请你根据下面的表格给Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍你丰富多彩的初中生活。
My Life in Middle School On school days My favourite place in school Why
My favourite subject Why
My favourite club Why
On weekends Activities: spend time with family; . . .
Feelings (感受)
要求：
1. 内容包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Tom.
I’d like to share something about my life in middle school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2025·广西贵港·一模）为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良传统美德，学校英语社团准备举办以“尊师重教”为主题的英语写作征文竞赛。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1. 你尊敬的老师及尊敬的理由；
2. 你向老师表达敬意的具体做法；
3. 号召大家一起尊师重教。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当补充细节，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：patient adj. 耐心的 knowledge n. 知识
Respect Teachers and Value Education
Respecting teachers and valuing education has always been a cherished tradition in China.
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《专题09 书面表达 15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（广西专用）》参考答案
1．例文
Dear Frank,
How is everything going I’m really happy that you are interested in the coming spring outing. Now, let me tell you about it.
Our school intends to organize an outing for us students next Sunday. We will start from our school, walk along the Qingyijiang and finally reach our destination—the Sculpture Park. It is an interesting and meaningful activity. When we are tired of working or studying, we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air and relax ourselves. In addition, it also offers us a good chance to make new friends. As we will do a lot of walking, you’d better wear strong shoes. Make sure to take some water and food with you for we will have a picnic at noon.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己很高兴对方对此次活动感兴趣，表示很愿意分享此次活动；
第二步，具体介绍活动信息及注意事项；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①walk along沿着……走
②meaningful有意义的
③are tired of厌烦
④In addition此外
[高分句型]
①When we are tired of working or studying, we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air and relax ourselves. (状语从句)
②Make sure to take some water and food with you for we will have a picnic at noon. (祈使句)
2．例文
An Unforgettable Labor Experience
With May Day around the corner, it reminds me of an unforgettable labor experience.
Last autumn, I joined a volunteer activity about cleaning the city park. My task was to pick up litter along the paths and in the flower beds. At first, the terrible smell of the bin almost made me give up. The weather was hot, and my back was sore because of bending over for so long. However, as I kept working and saw the park gradually become cleaner, a strong sense of achievement sprang up within me. Every piece of trash that I picked up was a step towards a more beautiful environment. I realized that even small actions can lead to big changes.
Dear classmates, let’s actively involve ourselves in labor. Labor enriches our lives and shapes our character. Let’s take action and contribute to making our world a better place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出回忆；
第二步，详细叙述去年秋天参加清理城市公园志愿者活动的过程和感受；
第三步，向同学们发出积极参与劳动的呼吁，升华文章主题。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起了某事
②take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Every piece of trash that I picked up was a step towards a more beautiful environment. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②I realized that even small actions can lead to big changes. (宾语从句)
3．例文
A Beautiful Moment in the Sports Meeting
I took a photo of a beautiful moment in the sports meeting last Friday. It was at the end of the 400-meter race in the sports field. In the picture, two players are running side by side. They are trying their best to cross the finishing line first. The students around them are shouting and cheering loudly. Everyone looks excited.
This photo makes me really moved. It shows me the power of sports. It’s not only about winning, but also about the spirit of not giving up and always trying hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为摄影作品介绍；
② 时态：时态以一般过去时为主，描述照片内容时用一般现在时；
③ 提示：根据要求介绍照片的拍摄时间、地点、内容及个人感受，词数80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代照片拍摄的时间和地点；
第二步，描述照片中的主要内容；
第三步，表达个人感受和照片的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① sports field 运动场
② finishing line 终点线
③ cheer loudly 大声喝彩
④ not give up 不放弃
[高分句型]
① They are trying their best to cross the finishing line first. （动词不定式表目的）
② It’s not only about winning, but also about the spirit of not giving up and always trying hard. （not only…but also…句型）
4．例文：
Youth and me
As Youth celebrates its 10th birthday, I want to share my story with it.
I started reading Youth two years ago. Whenever I read it, I’m deeply attracted by the wonderful articles, which not only offer me knowledge but also bring me a lot of fun. It broadens my horizons and makes me more confident in English.
I suggest adding a column on English learning tips to help the students who are weak in English.
I hope Youth will always be an excellent platform where we can learn and grow. May it have a prosperous future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“我想和它分享我的故事。”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。表达阅读经历、建议以及对Youth的祝福。
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望青春永远是一个让我们学习和成长的优秀平台。愿它有一个繁荣的未来！”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①deeply深深地
②offer提供
③suggest建议
[高分句型]
①Whenever I read it, I’m deeply attracted by the wonderful articles, which not only offer me knowledge but also bring me a lot of fun. (whenever引导的状语从句，which引导的定语从句)
5．范文：
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Nancy. I would like to join the Bird-watching Club. I’m a middle school student. My favourite subject is biology. I love nature and I’m interested in plants and animals, especially all kinds of birds. I am a kind and patient girl. I am good at taking photos. I can write reports. I want to have more chances to learn knowledge about birds. Also, I hope to do something to protect them. For example, I will tell the people around to love birds. I promise to take part in the club activities on time. I will try my best to do something for the club.
I will be happy if I can become a member of your club. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息写一封申请信介绍自己的相关信息，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示想要参加观鸟协会；
第二步，根据题干中的提示介绍自己的爱好、特长、加入的目的以及承诺；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②For example例如
[高分句型]
①I love nature and I’m interested in plants and animals, especially all kinds of birds. (and连接的并列句)
②I will be happy if I can become a member of your club.(if引导条件状语从句)
6．例文
A Wonderful After-school Activity
There are many after-school activities in our school. The one I like most is playing basketball. Let me tell you something about it.
As a member of the basketball team, my classmates and I often head to the school basketball court every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon. We get together and practice shooting repeatedly. Sometimes we have group matches—running, passing balls, and trying to score. On the weekends, I usually go to the gym to play friendly matches with my teammates. Our coach will also give us some advice about training.
Through this activity, I become stronger and healthier. I also improve my basketball skills. More importantly, I understand the value of teamwork. Only by cooperating with others can we win games. Basketball brings me joy and enriches my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的课后活动；
第二步，介绍自己平时如何开展这项课后活动；
第三步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①a member of……的一员
②give sb sth给某人某物
③cooperate with sb和某人合作
[高分句型]
Only by cooperating with others can we win games.(倒装句)
7．
Dear teachers and follow students,
Good evening. It’s my honor to give a speech today. How time flies! Looking back on the past three years, we have experienced a lot together.
One unforgettable experience shines brightly in my memory. Last winter, our class organized a charity sale to help children in need. We worked together day and night, designing posters and preparing items. Finally, we raised 2,000! This taught me the power of teamwork.
Now, as we say goodbye, my heart is filled with gratitude. Thank you, dear teachers, for your patience, and dear friends, for your laughter. Every moment here will be treasured forever. In the future, I will keep working hard to achieve my dreams. Though we may go to different high schools, let’s promise to stay connected and cheer for each other!
Hope we all become better. Thanks for your time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，和大家打招呼，引出演讲的主题；
第二步，具体描述初中阶段一次难忘经历及表达毕业时的情感；
第三步，书写结束语，表达未来目标并表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①worked together 一起工作
②be filled with 充满……
③in the future 在将来
[高分句型]
①We worked together day and night, designing posters and preparing items. (现在分词短语表伴随状况)
②Though we may go to different high schools, let’s promise to stay connected and cheer for each other! (Though引导的让步状语从句)
8．例文
An Unforgettable School Trip
Last autumn, our school organized a wonderful trip to a science museum. We took a lecture about space exploration and tried some interesting experiments.
Through this trip, I learned a lot about modern technology. I also had a better understanding of teamwork because we worked together to complete tasks.
It was truly an amazing experience! I enjoyed myself and made new friends. This trip not only broadened my knowledge but also made me more interested in science. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：详细介绍研学活动，包括时间和地点等；
第二步：介绍自己通过此次活动学到了什么；
第三步：介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learned a lot about关于……学到很多
②enjoyed myself玩得开心
③made new friends交新朋友
[高分句型]
①I also had a better understanding of teamwork because we worked together to complete tasks. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②This trip not only broadened my knowledge but also made me more interested in science. (“not only…but also…”结构)
9．例文
Know myself, Become a better myself
Self-management is important to us. It means managing ourselves, such as our time, our feelings and so on. In the future, we will soon graduate and become a college student. So we should first learn to manage our time in order to make full use of it. For example, I will try my best to listen to the teacher carefully. What’s more, I will also learn to manage my money. I should wisely spend the pocket money given by my parents.
As for the plan, I will learn how to communicate with my parents. When I disagree with them, I’ll try my best to understand them. Besides, I’ll take part in some after-school activities and work as a volunteer to gain more social experience.
In a word, I believe I will be a better me in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明自我管理的重要性（已给出开头）；
第二步，从学习态度、生活习惯等方面进行自我评价；
第三步，具体阐述改进计划；
第四步，表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② make full use of充分利用
③ communicate with sb和某人沟通
④ In a word总之
[高分句型]
① When I disagree with them, I’ll try my best to understand them.（时间状语从句）
② In a word, I believe I will be a better me in the future.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Smile, Please
Smile not only when you are happy, but also when you are in trouble.
A smile can bring us a good mood. And it helps us build our confidence. Also, it helps develop a good relationship with others. When I was 11, I moved to a new city so that I had few friends. I felt so lonely. One day, a girl called Nancy smiled at me and talked to me. She shared something interesting with me. Her smile made me feel warm. With her help, I made many friends.
A smile is so powerful. So, smile, please.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不用遗漏要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍微笑的好处；
第二步，介绍自己的亲身经历；
第三步，谈谈自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③with one’s help在某人的帮助下
[高分句型]
①When I was 11, I moved to a new city so that I had few friends.(时间状语从句；目的状语从句)
11．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you I’m excited to tell you about our school sports meeting. It will be held on the playground next Friday, starting at 8:30 a. m. We have many events like 100-meter races, long jump, and my favorite event is the relay race.
To prepare for the relay race, I’ve been training with my teammates after school every day. We practice passing the baton smoothly and improving our speed. Besides training, I make sure to get enough sleep and eat healthily to stay energetic.
I’m really looking forward to the sports meeting! Not only do I hope to win a medal, but I also want to enjoy the teamwork and cheer for my classmates. I’ll share more photos with you after the sports meeting!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍运动会基本信息（时间、项目）；
第二步：描述个人准备工作（训练、休息）；
第三步：表达对运动会的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① prepare for为……准备
② practice doing sth练习做某事
③ make sure确保
[高分句型]
To prepare for the relay race, I’ve been training with my teammates after school every day.（不定式表目的）
12．例文
How to live a healthy life
A healthy life is very important for us. It’s not only good for our health but also for our study.
In order to live a healthy life, I have some advice for you. First, you’d better have a balanced diet. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables, and less junk food. Second, it’s a good idea to do exercise regularly, such as running, playing basketball, or just taking a walk for 30 minutes in a day. Third, I suggest you get 8 hours’ sleep every day. Don’t stay up too late, or you will feel tired next day.
I hope everyone can follow these suggestions and stay healthy. A healthy body will help us study better and enjoy life more!
【详解】[总体分析]
①体材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写的时候不要遗漏任何要点，并适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：第一段用简洁有力的文字说明健康的重要性；
第二步：第二段针对如何过健康生活给出具体建议；
第三步：第三段对所有人表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…, but also…不仅……，而且……
②in order to为了
③had better do sth最好做某事
④try to do sth设法做某事
⑤such as例如
⑥help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
[高分句型]
①Third, I suggest you get 8 hours’ sleep every day. (宾语从句)
②Don’t stay up too late, or you will feel tired next day. (祈使句)
13．例文
My teamwork activity
Teamwork helps us talk, solve problems, and work together. These skills are useful everywhere.
Last year, my class made a poster about environmental protection. At first, we argued about the design. But we listened to each other, and divided tasks. For example, I drew pictures, while others wrote words after school. Finally, our colorful poster won the first prize in the school competition!
Now I know: teamwork means sharing ideas and helping friends. Even small jobs are important. When we work together, we can do amazing things!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先提出观点，强调团队合作的重要性；
第二步，接着具体阐述自己在初中阶段参与团队合作活动的一次经历；
第三步，最后谈谈自己的收获或感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②each other彼此
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①I drew pictures, while others wrote words after school. (while引导的时间状语从句)
②When we work together, we can do amazing things! (when引导的时间状语从句)
14．例文
Dear Tom,
I’d like to share something about my life in middle school.
On school days, my favourite place in school is the library because it’s quiet and I can read many different books. My favourite subject is science because it is very interesting and helps me understand how the world works. I also enjoy being part of the music club because I love playing instruments and performing. On weekends, I spend time with my family and we often go hiking or visit museums.
My school life is fulfilling and enjoyable. What about yours Can you tell me more about your school life
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件 。用于向英国笔友介绍自己的初中生活，属于书信类交流文体。
时态：主要时态为 “一般现在时” ，用于描述日常的学校生活和周末活动。
提示：写作要点已在表格中给出，考生需涵盖“在校时最喜欢的地方、科目、俱乐部及原因，周末活动和感受”这些要点，可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏要点，且词数控制在80词左右（开头结尾不计入）。
[写作步骤]
第一步、表明写作意图：开头已给出“I’d like to share something about my life in middle school.” ，直接引出下文对初中生活的介绍。
第二步、具体阐述写作内容
（1）在校情况：从表格中“On school days”对应的三方面（最喜欢的地方、科目、俱乐部）进行介绍。例如，可仿照例文，说明最喜欢学校图书馆是因其安静且能读很多书；最喜欢科学课是因其有趣且能帮助理解世界运行原理；喜欢音乐俱乐部是因为热爱乐器演奏和表演等。
（2）周末情况：依据表格“On weekends”的内容，介绍和家人共度时光，常进行徒步或参观博物馆等活动。
第三步、书写结语：结尾已给出“My school life is fulfilling and enjoyable. What about yours Can you tell me more about your school life ”，表达对自身初中生活的感受，并询问对方学校生活情况，自然结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜爱，可用于替换 like，enjoy，如“I'm fond of the library in my school.”
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，文中“helps me understand how the world works”体现该用法，可用于描述科目带来的作用。
③spend time with sb.和某人共度时光 ，用于描述周末和家人的活动，如“I spend time with my family on weekends.”。
[高分句型]
①because引导的原因状语从句：文中多处使用，如“My favourite place in school is the library because it's quiet and I can read many different books.”，通过原因状语从句丰富句子内容，体现逻辑关系。
②What about...句型：用于结尾询问对方情况，如“What about yours ”，自然引出对对方学校生活的询问，使交流更具互动性。
15．例文
Respect Teachers and Value Education Respecting teachers and valuing education has always been a cherished tradition in China.
The teacher I respect most is my English teacher Ms. Wang. She is not only patient in explaining difficult grammar but also full of knowledge. When I failed an exam, she encouraged me with warm smiles instead of blaming.
To show my respect, I always listen carefully in her class and finish homework on time. Last Teachers’ Day, I made a thank-you card with all classmates’ signatures.
Let’s take action together! Remember, respecting teachers means valuing our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己尊敬的老师及尊敬的理由；
第二步、介绍自己向老师表达敬意的具体做法；
第三步、号召大家一起尊师重教。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②full of充满
③instead of而不是
④on time按时
[高分句型]
①When I failed an exam, she encouraged me with warm smiles instead of blaming.(when引导时间状语从句)
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