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七年级下册 Unit 5 "Here and Now" 写作课学案（教师版）
一、写作指导
（一）写作话题
主题： 描述你或他人 正在进行的活动（如家庭、学校、公园等场景）。
时态要求： 现在进行时（am/is/are + V-ing）。
常用句型：
I am... / He/She is... / We/They are...
Look! ... is V-ing...
Right now, ... are V-ing...
（二）写作素材
1. 家庭场景
活动： 做饭、看电视、打扫、玩游戏等。
例句：
It's Sunday evening. My mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen. My father is watching the news on the sofa. I am doing my homework, and my little sister is playing with her toys.
2. 学校场景
活动： 上课、运动、午餐时间等。
例句：
It's 10 a.m. We are having an English class. The teacher is writing on the blackboard. Some students are taking notes, and others are asking questions.
3. 户外场景（公园/操场）
活动： 散步、运动、野餐等。
例句：
The sun is shining. Many people are jogging in the park. A group of children are flying kites, and two old men are playing chess under a tree.
（三）写作模板
开头： 交代时间、地点、天气等背景。
中间： 分句描述不同人物/群体的活动（用现在进行时）。
结尾： 总结感受或场景氛围。
例文：
A Busy Afternoon in Our School
It's 4:30 p.m., and our school is full of energy! On the playground, some students are playing football. Others are running around the track. In the library, a few quiet kids are reading books. The music room is noisy because the band is practicing a new song. Everyone is enjoying their time here!
（四）易错点：
1. 漏掉be动词：
She playing basketball.
She is playing basketball.
2. 动词未加-ing：
They are play games.
They are playing games.
3. 混淆现在进行时和一般现在时：
He usually is watching TV.（一般现在时表习惯）
He is watching TV now.
二、综合训练
（一）基础翻译练习（单句）将以下句子翻译成英语，注意现在进行时的结构（am/is/are + V-ing）。
1. 我妈妈正在厨房做饭。
→ My mother is cooking in the kitchen.
2. 看！那些男孩在操场上踢足球。
→ Look! Those boys are playing football on the playground.
3. 现在是晚上7点，我爸爸在看电视。
→ It’s 7 p.m. now. My father is watching TV.
4. 不要吵，我的妹妹正在写作业。
→ Don’t make noise. My sister is doing her homework.
5. 公园里，一些老人在下棋，孩子们在放风筝。
→ In the park, some old men are playing chess, and the children are flying kites.
（二）进阶翻译练习（复合句）翻译时需注意时间状语、地点状语和并列动作。
1. 现在是周末，我和朋友们在商场购物，我的弟弟在家打游戏。
→ It’s the weekend. My friends and I are shopping at the mall, and my brother is playing games at home.
2. 教室里，老师正在黑板上写字，学生们在记笔记。
→ In the classroom, the teacher is writing on the blackboard, and the students are taking notes.
3. 天气很好，许多人在海滩上晒太阳，还有一些人在游泳。
→ The weather is nice. Many people are sunbathing on the beach, and some are swimming.
4. 午餐时间到了，同学们在食堂排队，有的在聊天，有的在看手机。
→ It’s lunchtime. The students are lining up in the canteen. Some are chatting, and others are looking at their phones.
（三）纠错与解析：以下翻译有错误，请改正并说明原因。
1. She is listen to music now.
She is listening to music now.
→ 动词 listen 必须加 -ing（规则：去 e 加 ing）。
2. They are play basketball after school.
They are playing basketball after school.
→ 现在进行时需用 playing（直接加 -ing）。
3. Look! The bird sing in the tree.
Look! The bird is singing in the tree.
→ 缺少 be动词，且 sing 需变 singing。
（四）场景速写翻译（小段落）：根据中文提示，用现在进行时写一段话（50词左右）。
场景： 周末的动物园，游客们正在观看动物，有的拍照，有的喂食。
参考范文：
It’s Sunday morning. Many visitors are at the zoo. Some are taking photos of the lions, and others are feeding the monkeys. The children are laughing happily. Everyone is having a great time!
（五）作文题目（三选一）
1. 《A Busy Morning in My Home》（描述家人早晨的活动）
2. 《What Are We Doing in the Classroom 》（描写课堂上同学们正在做的事情）
3. 《A Happy Afternoon in the Park》（描述公园里人们的活动）
要求：
使用 现在进行时（am/is/are + V-ing）
包含 时间、地点、天气 等背景信息
至少 5-8 个句子，60-80 词左右
范文 1：《A Busy Morning in My Home》
(描述家人早晨的活动)
It is 7:30 a.m. on a sunny Monday morning. My family is very busy. My mother is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. My father is reading the newspaper and drinking coffee. My little brother is brushing his teeth in the bathroom. I am packing my schoolbag because I don’t want to be late. Everyone is in a hurry, but we are happy!
亮点分析：
时间、天气背景清晰（7:30 a.m., sunny Monday）
使用 is cooking / is reading / is brushing / am packing 等现在进行时
结尾表达感受（happy）
范文 2：《What Are We Doing in the Classroom 》
(描写课堂上同学们的活动)
It’s 9:00 a.m., and we are having an English class. Our teacher, Ms. Li, is writing new words on the blackboard. Some students are taking notes carefully. Two boys are whispering, but the teacher asks them to stop. I am listening to the teacher and trying to understand everything. Learning English is fun!
亮点分析：
课堂场景生动（whispering, taking notes）
使用 is writing / are taking / are whispering / am listening 等现在进行时
结尾表达观点（Learning English is fun!）
范文 3：《A Happy Afternoon in the Park》
(描述公园里人们的活动)
It’s a warm Sunday afternoon, and the park is full of people. Some children are running and laughing. A few old men are playing chess under a big tree. A young couple is taking photos near the flowers. My friends and I are sitting on the grass and eating ice cream. Everyone is enjoying the sunshine!
亮点分析：
天气、地点明确（warm Sunday afternoon, park）
使用 are running / are playing / is taking / are sitting 等现在进行时
结尾总结氛围（enjoying the sunshine）
写作技巧总结
1. 开头：交代时间、地点、天气（It’s... / Today is...）。
2. 中间：用 现在进行时 描述不同人物/群体的活动。
3. 结尾：表达感受或总结场景（happy / fun / enjoying）。
4. 注意：
◆不要漏掉 be动词（am/is/are）。
◆动词记得加 -ing（如 playing, eating）。七年级下册 Unit 5 "Here and Now" 写作课学案（学生版）
一、写作指导
（一）写作话题
主题： 描述你或他人 正在进行的活动（如家庭、学校、公园等场景）。
时态要求： 现在进行时（am/is/are + V-ing）。
常用句型：
I am... / He/She is... / We/They are...
Look! ... is V-ing...
Right now, ... are V-ing...
（二）写作素材
1. 家庭场景
活动： 做饭、看电视、打扫、玩游戏等。
例句：
It's Sunday evening. My mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen. My father is watching the news on the sofa. I am doing my homework, and my little sister is playing with her toys.
2. 学校场景
活动： 上课、运动、午餐时间等。
例句：
It's 10 a.m. We are having an English class. The teacher is writing on the blackboard. Some students are taking notes, and others are asking questions.
3. 户外场景（公园/操场）
活动： 散步、运动、野餐等。
例句：
The sun is shining. Many people are jogging in the park. A group of children are flying kites, and two old men are playing chess under a tree.
（三）写作模板
开头： 交代时间、地点、天气等背景。
中间： 分句描述不同人物/群体的活动（用现在进行时）。
结尾： 总结感受或场景氛围。
例文：
A Busy Afternoon in Our School
It's 4:30 p.m., and our school is full of energy! On the playground, some students are playing football. Others are running around the track. In the library, a few quiet kids are reading books. The music room is noisy because the band is practicing a new song. Everyone is enjoying their time here!
（四）易错点：
1. 漏掉be动词：
She playing basketball.
She is playing basketball.
2. 动词未加-ing：
They are play games.
They are playing games.
3. 混淆现在进行时和一般现在时：
He usually is watching TV.（一般现在时表习惯）
He is watching TV now.
二、综合训练
（一）基础翻译练习（单句）将以下句子翻译成英语，注意现在进行时的结构（am/is/are + V-ing）。
1. 我妈妈正在厨房做饭。
2. 看！那些男孩在操场上踢足球。
3. 现在是晚上7点，我爸爸在看电视。
4. 不要吵，我的妹妹正在写作业。
5. 公园里，一些老人在下棋，孩子们在放风筝。
（二）进阶翻译练习（复合句）翻译时需注意时间状语、地点状语和并列动作。
1. 现在是周末，我和朋友们在商场购物，我的弟弟在家打游戏。
2. 教室里，老师正在黑板上写字，学生们在记笔记。
3. 天气很好，许多人在海滩上晒太阳，还有一些人在游泳。
4. 午餐时间到了，同学们在食堂排队，有的在聊天，有的在看手机。
（三）纠错与解析：以下翻译有错误，请改正并说明原因。
1. She is listen to music now.
正确的句子：
错误的原因：
2. They are play basketball after school.
正确的句子：
错误的原因： 。
3. Look! The bird sing in the tree.
正确的句子：
错误的原因： （四）场
（四）景速写翻译（小段落）：根据中文提示，用现在进行时写一段话（50词左右）。
场景： 周末的动物园，游客们正在观看动物，有的拍照，有的喂食。
（五）作文题目（三选一）
1. 《A Busy Morning in My Home》（描述家人早晨的活动）
2. 《What Are We Doing in the Classroom 》（描写课堂上同学们正在做的事情）
3. 《A Happy Afternoon in the Park》（描述公园里人们的活动）
要求：
使用 现在进行时（am/is/are + V-ing）
包含 时间、地点、天气 等背景信息
至少 5-8 个句子，60-80 词左右
【审清题目】
内容：
文体：
写作的主要人称：
写作的意图（感悟）：
主要的时态及形式：
分段：
重要的句子：
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