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Unit 5 Amazing nature
单元话题（神奇的大自然）写作满分范文15篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．假设你是李明，你的英国笔友 Tom 对地球上的不同景观很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍一种你喜欢的景观（如河流、沙漠、海洋、森林），包括它的特点、重要性以及我们应该如何保护它。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，逻辑清晰；
2. 80 词左右。
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【答案】参考例文
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favorite landscape. I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍最喜欢的自然景观，并谈谈它的特点、重要性以及我们应如何保护它；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的景观是什么，它的特点及重要性；
第二步，谈谈我们该如何保护这类景观。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②a great deal of 大量
③cut down 砍倒
④take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.（祈使句）
2．英语课上，老师让学生们把收集到的关于亚马孙热带雨林和撒哈拉沙漠的资料进行整理讨论。请你根据他们搜集的资料，用英语写一篇介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的短文，分享给同学们。
Name Amazon Rainforest Sahara Desert
Location (位置) in South America in the north of Africa
Climate hot and wet hot and dry
Plants over 80,000 kinds, such as bananas and hot lips About 500 kinds, such as desert roses and olive trees (橄榄树)
Animals monkeys, snakes, birds... camels, desert foxes...
写作要求：
词数不少于 60个。
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【答案】例文
Amazon Rainforest
The Amazon Rainforest is in South America. It’s hot and wet. It is home to many plants and animals. The plants grow fast and well. The kinds of plants are over 80,000, such as bananas and hot lips. They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on.
Sahara Desert
The Sahara Desert is in the north of Africa. It’s big. The climate of the Sahara Desert is very hot. It’s also very dry and rains little. There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. There you can see animals like camels, desert foxes and so on. Do you want to go and see them
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠；
第二步，具体阐述亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的位置、气候、植被、动物等；
第三步，书写结语，表达对马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的美丽自然风光的向往。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②different kinds of不同种类的
③want to do sth.想要去做某事
[高分句型]
①They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on. (结果状语从句)
②There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. (There be句型)
3．保护大自然是每个人应尽的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上，也能做出自己的贡献。你将参加学校英文报举办的“Protecting Mother Nature”主题征文活动，请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇文章，谈谈你是如何保护大自然的。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 不得透露任何个人信息。
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【答案】例文
Protecting Mother Nature
Mother Nature is very important to us. We should take action to protect her.
First, we should reduce pollution. Walking or riding bicycles to school is an environmentally friendly choice for us. Second, we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. Additionally, we should save water, as water is the source of life and we should not waste it. Third, we should not litter; instead, we should put rubbish in the bin. Fourth, we should plant more trees, as trees can clean the air and prevent soil erosion.
Let’s work together to protect Mother Nature and make our Earth a better place to live in.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：提出文章核心观点，强调大自然对人类的重要性，并呼吁人们采取行动保护大自然，为下文具体阐述保护措施做铺垫。
第二步，从多个日常生活角度详细阐述保护大自然的具体行动；
第三步，总结全文，再次呼吁大家共同努力保护大自然。
[亮点词汇]
①take action 采取行动
②work together 携手共进
[高分句型]
①Walking or riding bicycles to school is an environmentally friendly choice for us. (动名词作主语)
②Second, we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite mountain/ river”. Decide to write about your favourite mountain/ river.
作文需包含以下内容：1. What is your favourite mountain/ river
2. List at least two reasons why you like it.
3. How do you feel about it
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【答案】例文
My favorite river is the Yangtze River. It is the longest river in China and one of the most important rivers in the world.
I like the Yangtze River for several reasons. Firstly, it has a rich history and culture. Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history. Secondly, the scenery along the Yangtze River is breathtaking. From the majestic Three Gorges to the vast plains, every part of it shows the beauty of nature.
When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride. It’s not just a river, but a symbol of our nation’s spirit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先引出主题，介绍自己最喜欢的山或河；
第二步，介绍喜欢它的原因；
第三步，书写结束语，表达对于它的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the Yangtze River 长江
②historical sites 历史遗迹
③scenery 风景
④breathtaking 惊人的，壮观的
⑤Three Gorges 三峡
⑥a symbol of ……的象征
[高分句型]
①Along the river, there are many ancient cities and historical sites, which tell the story of China’s long history.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②When I think about the Yangtze River, I feel a deep sense of pride.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．无论我们离家多么远，家乡在我们心中都难以割舍。假如你叫李明，请你结合下图，根据写作要求，以“My hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数50左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My hometown
Everyone has their hometowns. My hometown is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My hometown
Everyone has their hometowns. My hometown is a small village. It’s in the southwest of Henan Province in China. The weather is hot in summer and cold in winter. And it’s warm in spring and cool in autumn. There aren’t many wild animals in my hometown. But we have cows, pigs, chickens, sheep and so on. There are many trees and other plants in my village. I know we can’t live without animals or plants. So we should protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置；
第二步，介绍家乡的气候和动植物；
第三步，介绍家乡的其他方面。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②without没有
[高分句型]
①I know we can’t live without animals or plants.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．请以 “How to Protect Water” 为题写一篇短文，词数80—120左右。应包括以下信息点：
1. 水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水。
2. 目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少。
3. 我们应如何保护水资源
(1) 不要浪费水； (2) 循环利用水； (3) ……
How to Protect Water
As we all know, water is important to us.
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【答案】例文
How to Protect Water
As we all know, water is important to us. We use water to wash things, cook food and make machines. People can’t live without water. But some people don’t seem to care about it. Therefore, water pollution is getting more and more serious. There is less and less drinkable water on Earth.
So we should do something to protect water. First, don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water. Second, try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. Third, we can have a shower instead of a bath.
I believe if everyone try to save water, the world will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作时要包含所给出的写作要点，必要时可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水对人类的重要性和目前的水污染情况；
第二步，介绍我们应如何保护水资源；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①use...to do 用……去做某事
②care about 在乎
③less and less 越来越少
④try to do 尽力做某事
⑤instead of 代替
[高分句型]
①So we should do something to protect water. (to do不定式作目的状语)
②When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. (when引导时间状语从句)
③I believe if everyone try to save water, the world will be better and better. (if引导条件状语从句)
7．黄河是中华民族的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴和永续发展的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。
要求：1.需包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear students,
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The English School Newspaper
【答案】例文：
Dear students,
The Yellow River is known as China’s “mother river”. It’s 5,464 kilometres long. It is the second longest river in our country and runs through many cities.
However, the Yellow River is in a poor situation. The water and soil loss is very serious. The water is dirty. So it’s important for us to protect it.
First of all, we should stop fishing. Second, our government must do something to protect our mother river. Third, we should plant more trees on both sides of the river. And we should never throw rubbish into the river.
Let’s work together and protect our beautiful “mother river”!
The English School Newspaper
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“黄河被称为是母亲河”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“现实、现况、方式”几个方面详细的描写。
第三步，书写结语。表达“让我们共同努力保护我们的母亲”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①second第二
②water and soil loss水土流失
③serious严重的
[高分句型]
①So it’s important for us to protect it. ( It is+形容词for sb. to do sth.句型)
8．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。
内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks
筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树
Trees are very important to people and animals.
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【答案】例文
Trees are very important to people and animals. They provide wood for people. They are home to animals and they also provide food for animals. Trees are also important to the environment and the climate. But in some places, people cut down too many trees. That’s too bad. We must protect trees. We should not use one-off cups or chopsticks. We should not waste paper. And we should plant more trees and look after trees well. If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：仔细审题，不要遗漏要点，并进一步做出补充，并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名主题，阐述树木的重要性；
第二步，列举保护树木的原因，即树木对我们非常重要，进而列举保护树木的建议；
第三步，进行总结，鼓励大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②provide sth. for sb.向某人提供某物
③cut down砍倒
[亮点句型]
If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
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【答案】例文
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when they go shopping. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Fourth but not last, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the right dustbin every day.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先说保护环境的重要性。
第二步，再具体写出保护环境的措施。
第三步，最后总结和呼吁大家保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①environment pollution环境污染
②take the bus乘坐公共汽
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when they go shopping.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②How important it is for us to protect the environment!（感叹句）
10．每个人所居住的地方都有本地的天气和气候特点。请你以“The weather in my city”为题，并结合如下问题写一篇文章，介绍你所居住的城市的天气特点。
提示词语：weather, season, enjoyable
提示问题：●What’s the weather like in your city
●Which season do you like best Why Give at least two reasons.
The weather in my city
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【答案】One possible version:
The weather in my city
I live in Haikou. It is the capital of Hainan Province. There are four seasons in a year, but the seasons here are different from those in other Chinese cities. In winter, it’s not cold. The lowest temperature is about 15℃. Cold days only last for a few weeks. It’s very hot in summer. The weather in spring and autumn is enjoyable.
My favorite season is autumn. There are two reasons why I like it. First, the weather is warm and I can go swimming every day. Second, I can enjoy all kinds of delicious fruits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍作者所在的城市；
第二步，具体阐述作者的城市的天气；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的季节及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are two reasons why I like it. (why引导的定语从句)
②There are four seasons in a year, but the seasons here are different from those in other Chinese cities.（there be句型）
能力综合实践5篇
11．根据下面表格中的信息，以“Different Places, Different Weather”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。
Name Place Weather Activity
Jim Moscow snowy and cold watching TV
Mary Beijing sunny and warm cooking
Joe Boston rainy and windy playing the guitar
Different Places, Different Weather
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【答案】例文
Different Places, Different Weather
　　I have three friends. They live in different places now. My friend Jim is in Moscow. The weather there is snowy, so it is very cold outside. He has to stay at home and watch TV. But Mary is lucky. She is in Beijing and the weather in Beijing is sunny and warm. Now she is cooking in the kitchen happily. Joe is in Boston, and he is playing the guitar. He always plays the guitar when it is raining. Oh! It is rainy and windy right now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍三个朋友；
第二步，依据要点，从地方、天气和各自的活动进行介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①snowy下雪的
②stay at home待在家
③playing the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
He always plays the guitar when it is raining（时间状语从句）
12．假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals—giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写篇短文。内容包括：
1.你为什么喜欢它们(cute, fiendly)，它们来自哪里(China)；
2.它们有哪些特征(white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵)；
3.特点和爱好(lazy, bamboo，爬树)；
4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护(protect)它们；
5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world,
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【答案】One possible version:
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but I like pandas best. They are from China. I like pandas because they are cute and friendly. They have white and black fur. And they have big eyes and round ears. They look a little lazy but very cute. They like eating bamboo. They also like climbing trees. So they are lovey.
Giant pandas are China’s national treasure. They are the symbol of friendship. There are only about 2,000 pandas now. We must try our best to protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍自己最喜欢的动物——大熊猫，包括它们的外貌、特点、爱好，以及目前的状况等，最后表达对熊猫的保护。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍熊猫的外貌、特点、爱好，以及目前的状况；
第三步，最后表达对熊猫的保护。
[亮点词汇]
①like...best 最喜欢……
②the symbol of ……的象征
③try one’s best 尽某人最大努力
[高分句型]
①I like pandas because they are cute and friendly.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are only about 2,000 pandas now.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
13．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。
The plant club
时间 每周六上午八点半
活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆……
益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
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【答案】One possible version:
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
We meet at 8:30 a. m. every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself!
In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time.
Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍植物俱乐部的时间和各项活动；
第二步，介绍参加植物俱乐部的益处；
第三步，对加入俱乐部表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to接近，靠近
②have a good time玩得开心
③the joy of ……的快乐
[高分句型]
There are lots of different activities in the club. （there be句型）
14．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物、植物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要举行以“Let’s protect nature”为主题的英语作文竞赛。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。
提示：
1.What should we protect (an animal/environment/forests/…, 任选其一)
2. Why should we protect it/them
①Give some information about it/them, eg. looks/abilities/habits/…
②Is it important /Are they important Why
3. What should we do to protect it/them
注意：词数70左右。
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【答案】例文
Let’s protect wild animals
We should protect the wild animals.
Protecting wild animals is very important for our natural environment. If we don’t protect the wild animals, we are likely to get sick and the natural environment will be worse. Wild animals are our friends, so we should live in harmony with them.
We are not alone in the world. We humans could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take action to keep plants and animals from dying out. If each of us can plant a tree or build a bird house, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，呼吁保护野生动物；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头直接点明主题，提出我们应该保护野生动物；
第二步，中间论述保护野生动物对自然环境的重要性，指出不保护的后果，强调野生动物是朋友，应和谐相处，还说明人类生存离不开动植物，必须采取行动防止物种灭绝；
第三步，结尾提出具体行动建议，如种树、建鸟屋，说明行动虽简单但有用。
[亮点词汇]
①natural environment自然环境
②be likely to有可能
③in harmony with与……和谐相处
④die out灭绝
[高分句型]
①Protecting wild animals is very important for our natural environment.（动名词作主语）
②If we don’t protect the wild animals, we are likely to get sick and the natural environment will be worse.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite mountain or river attraction. (围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as a reference.
(以下内容仅供参考)
1. 最喜欢的山川或者河流的名称；
2. 景色介绍。
(以下词汇可供参考)
● Li River 漓江
● bamboo 竹子
● natural 自然的
● beyond description 超越描述
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【答案】例文:
The Li River
The Li River, or Li Jiang, is one of the most famous tourist attractions in Guilin. Along the riverside, you can see green hills and green bamboos. The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise. The natural beauty of the Li River is beyond description, so you should be there to see with your own eyes and to feel with your own heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意介绍对象为山川或河流，自拟题目完成文章。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明需要介绍的景点名称；
第二步，详细介绍漓江的自然风光、游览方式等。
[亮点词汇]
①take a boat cruise乘船游览
②natural beauty天然美；自然美
③beyond description难以描述；无法形容
[高分句型]
①The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. （并列复合句）
②The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise.（不定式作定语、作表语）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit 5 Amazing nature
单元话题（神奇的大自然）写作满分范文15篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．假设你是李明，你的英国笔友 Tom 对地球上的不同景观很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍一种你喜欢的景观（如河流、沙漠、海洋、森林），包括它的特点、重要性以及我们应该如何保护它。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，逻辑清晰；
2. 80 词左右。
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2．英语课上，老师让学生们把收集到的关于亚马孙热带雨林和撒哈拉沙漠的资料进行整理讨论。请你根据他们搜集的资料，用英语写一篇介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的短文，分享给同学们。
Name Amazon Rainforest Sahara Desert
Location (位置) in South America in the north of Africa
Climate hot and wet hot and dry
Plants over 80,000 kinds, such as bananas and hot lips About 500 kinds, such as desert roses and olive trees (橄榄树)
Animals monkeys, snakes, birds... camels, desert foxes...
写作要求：
词数不少于 60个。
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3．保护大自然是每个人应尽的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上，也能做出自己的贡献。你将参加学校英文报举办的“Protecting Mother Nature”主题征文活动，请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇文章，谈谈你是如何保护大自然的。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 不得透露任何个人信息。
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4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite mountain/ river”. Decide to write about your favourite mountain/ river.
作文需包含以下内容：1. What is your favourite mountain/ river
2. List at least two reasons why you like it.
3. How do you feel about it
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5．无论我们离家多么远，家乡在我们心中都难以割舍。假如你叫李明，请你结合下图，根据写作要求，以“My hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数50左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My hometown
Everyone has their hometowns. My hometown is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．请以 “How to Protect Water” 为题写一篇短文，词数80—120左右。应包括以下信息点：
1. 水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水。
2. 目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少。
3. 我们应如何保护水资源
(1) 不要浪费水； (2) 循环利用水； (3) ……
How to Protect Water
As we all know, water is important to us.
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7．黄河是中华民族的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴和永续发展的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。
要求：1.需包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear students,
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The English School Newspaper
8．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。
内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks
筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树
Trees are very important to people and animals.
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9．“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
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10．每个人所居住的地方都有本地的天气和气候特点。请你以“The weather in my city”为题，并结合如下问题写一篇文章，介绍你所居住的城市的天气特点。
提示词语：weather, season, enjoyable
提示问题：●What’s the weather like in your city
●Which season do you like best Why Give at least two reasons.
The weather in my city
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能力综合实践5篇
11．根据下面表格中的信息，以“Different Places, Different Weather”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。
Name Place Weather Activity
Jim Moscow snowy and cold watching TV
Mary Beijing sunny and warm cooking
Joe Boston rainy and windy playing the guitar
Different Places, Different Weather
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12．假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals—giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写篇短文。内容包括：
1.你为什么喜欢它们(cute, fiendly)，它们来自哪里(China)；
2.它们有哪些特征(white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵)；
3.特点和爱好(lazy, bamboo，爬树)；
4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护(protect)它们；
5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world,
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13．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。
The plant club
时间 每周六上午八点半
活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆……
益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
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14．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物、植物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要举行以“Let’s protect nature”为主题的英语作文竞赛。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。
提示：
1.What should we protect (an animal/environment/forests/…, 任选其一)
2. Why should we protect it/them
①Give some information about it/them, eg. looks/abilities/habits/…
②Is it important /Are they important Why
3. What should we do to protect it/them
注意：词数70左右。
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15．Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite mountain or river attraction. (围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as a reference.
(以下内容仅供参考)
1. 最喜欢的山川或者河流的名称；
2. 景色介绍。
(以下词汇可供参考)
● Li River 漓江
● bamboo 竹子
● natural 自然的
● beyond description 超越描述
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