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2025年中考英语热点话题写作-青少年问题
1．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义。
写作要点：
1.对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
2.向他介绍你的学校：
（1）学生友好；
（2）老师优秀；
（3）有多种课外活动。
3.告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义 (make one’s junior high school life meaningful)。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ re coming to study in my school for 3 years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
2．（2024·四川乐山·一模）你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以“How to solve our stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入字数；语言表达准确规范，语句通顺连贯；提示内容必须用完。
提示：
1. 积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体；
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈，说出自己的烦恼；
3. 与人和睦相处，多听音乐，多看书；
4. 努力学习，勇敢面对；
5. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them _______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（23-24九年级上·陕西汉中·期末）假如你是某英语报 Problem & Advice栏目的编辑李华，你收到了读者 Lisa的来信，她向你寻求帮助。请你根据信的内容，用英语给 Lisa回一封信。
Dear Li Hua,
I have a serious problem now. It has been a month since I came to this new school, but I haven’t made any friends yet. It is not easy for me to get on with my classmates. What should I do to win their friendship Can you help me
Yours,
Lisa
参考词汇： be honest, communicate with, find common interests, help others, care about, in trouble,…
要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. I will give you some advice on how to solve the problem._____________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（24-25九年级上·辽宁沈阳·阶段练习）假设你是李辉，当你听说你的英国笔友 Tom因遇到一些家庭中的麻烦事而烦恼时，你决定给他写一封信，表达你的看法。
内容包括：
1. 列举 Tom 遇到的家庭麻烦事(一两件即可)；
2. 提供建议或帮助；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80~100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have met some trouble in your family.
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Yours,
Li Hui
5．（24-25九年级上·广东深圳·阶段练习）你是深圳中学学生李华，你发现很多初三学生不会安排时间，以至于作业写不完，或需要熬夜写作业等。校报邀请你给学弟学妹们写一封建议信，告诉学弟学妹们如何合理安排时间。要点已给出，可以自行发挥增加细节以充实文章。
要点：
1. 学会制定学习计划；
2. 远离手机等电子产品，专注学习；
3. 充分利用好周末时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为90左右；
2. 开头已给出，注意衔接。
How to manage time better
As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study...
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6．（24-25九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）假如你是李明，最近和父母的关系不太好，你向校心理医生王医生咨询，请根据王医生的信件给你的父母写一封信。
Dear Li Ming,
Sorry to hear your problem. Parents are those person who love you most in this world. However, sometimes you may disagree with each other about the family rules. The first step to solve it is to communicate with them. You need to let them know the rule you disagree with, your opinion about it, and the way you deal with it.
Yours,
Doctor Wang
要求：
（1）你的书信要包含信中提到的三个方面；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear parents,
I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
7．（24-25九年级上·四川巴中·阶段练习）如何减压让生活更美好？许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：
1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
2. 我的压力是什么；
3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（24-25九年级上·贵州黔南·阶段练习）处于青春期阶段的青少年，容易情绪波动，甚至敏感(sensitive)、叛逆(rebellious)，与父母沟通交流产生障碍。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，讲述一个你如何学会与父母化解矛盾、和睦相处的故事。
要求如下：
1. 短文须包含思维导图所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 重点谈谈你们是如何化解矛盾的；
3. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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9．（24-25九年级上·浙江衢州·期中）Teens Feelings是一个国际青少年网站，以下内容取自其贴吧。假如你是李华，请用英语回帖，帮Jim分析问题所在，并提出合理建议。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数：80词左右：回帖中开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Teen Feelings
I had an argument (争吵) with my mum. She was angry with me because I spent too much time on the mobile phone last weekend. But I need a rest from schoolwork. What should I do
Jim England
Hi, Jim,
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Li Hua China
10．（24-25九年级上·浙江温州·期中）校刊Just Ask (成长不烦恼) 收到了两封求助信，假如你是该栏目的负责人李华，请选择其中一封信，结合自身经验给出恰当的建议，帮助同学解决烦恼。
注意：1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 词数：80~100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
All of my classmates have smart phones, but I don’t. They can talk with others online, but I can’t. I wanted a smart phone, but my mother said that I would spend too much time on smart phone and fail my exam. What should I do Sarah Being a common and quiet student in my class, I feel like my teachers and classmates don’t care about me. I have friends,but they always seem to get closer to other people. What should I do Andy
Dear ___________,
Thank you for sharing your problem with us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)2025年中考英语热点话题写作-青少年问题
1．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义。
写作要点：
1.对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
2.向他介绍你的学校：
（1）学生友好；
（2）老师优秀；
（3）有多种课外活动。
3.告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义 (make one’s junior high school life meaningful)。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’ re coming to study in my school for 3 years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m glad that you’re coming to study in my school for 3 years. Our school is a wonderful place, and I believe you will like it very much. The students here are very friendly and always ready to help each other. Our teachers are excellent and dedicated to providing us with the best education. There are also various kinds of extracurricular activities you can join, such as sports, music, and art clubs.
To make your junior high school life meaningful, I suggest you actively participate in these activities and try to make new friends. Don’t be afraid to seek help from teachers and classmates if you face any difficulties. Also, managing your time well and setting specific goals for yourself can greatly help you. Remember to balance your studies with relaxation and hobbies. I believe you will have a fulfilling and enjoyable time here.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎并告诉他相信他会喜欢这个学校；
第二步，介绍学校的一些情况；
第三步，给出如何让初中生活过得有意义的建议；
第四步，书写结语，预祝他在新的学校生活愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
②actively participate积极参与
③make new friends结交新朋友
④seek help from sb.寻求某人的帮助
⑤balance A with B 平衡A与B
[高分句型]
①To make your junior high school life meaningful, I suggest you actively participate in these activities and try to make new friends.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe you will have a fulfilling and enjoyable time here.（宾语从句）
2．（2024·四川乐山·一模）你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以“How to solve our stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入字数；语言表达准确规范，语句通顺连贯；提示内容必须用完。
提示：
1. 积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体；
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈，说出自己的烦恼；
3. 与人和睦相处，多听音乐，多看书；
4. 努力学习，勇敢面对；
5. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them _______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them
I think we should take some exercise, so we can keep healthy. We should often communicate with our parents, teachers and friends by telling them about our problems or stress. We should try to get along well with people around us. We need to relax ourselves, so we can listen to music, do some reading and so on. We must try our best to study hard and be brave to face our grades. Do something that interests us. It will make us feel much better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图——如何缓解压力；
第二步，介绍具体缓解压力的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康；
②communicate with与……交流；
③get along well with与……相处融洽。
[高分句型]
①I think we should take some exercise, so we can keep healthy. (宾语从句)
②Do something that interests us. (定语从句)
3．（23-24九年级上·陕西汉中·期末）假如你是某英语报 Problem & Advice栏目的编辑李华，你收到了读者 Lisa的来信，她向你寻求帮助。请你根据信的内容，用英语给 Lisa回一封信。
Dear Li Hua,
I have a serious problem now. It has been a month since I came to this new school, but I haven’t made any friends yet. It is not easy for me to get on with my classmates. What should I do to win their friendship Can you help me
Yours,
Lisa
参考词汇： be honest, communicate with, find common interests, help others, care about, in trouble,…
要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. I will give you some advice on how to solve the problem._____________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. I will give you some advice on how to solve the problem. It’s normal to feel lonely in a new school. Here are some tips to help you make friends.
First, be honest and friendly. Smile at your classmates and say hello to them. This will make them feel comfortable around you. Second, try to communicate with your classmates more often. Find common interests and talk about them. You can also join clubs or take part in some activities that you are interested in. This will give you a chance to meet new people and make friends. Third, help others when they are in trouble. Show that you care about them. Finally, be patient. Making friends takes time. Don’t be afraid to take the first step.
I hope these suggestions are useful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文。
第二步，介绍给丽萨的一些建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①smile at对……微笑
②talk about谈论
③be afraid to do害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①Third, help others when they are in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope these suggestions are useful to you. (省略that的宾语从句)
4．（24-25九年级上·辽宁沈阳·阶段练习）假设你是李辉，当你听说你的英国笔友 Tom因遇到一些家庭中的麻烦事而烦恼时，你决定给他写一封信，表达你的看法。
内容包括：
1. 列举 Tom 遇到的家庭麻烦事(一两件即可)；
2. 提供建议或帮助；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80~100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have met some trouble in your family.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have met some trouble in your family. You said your parents always argue about chores and it makes you feel upset. It must be really difficult for you. Here are some suggestions. First, you can sit them down and have an honest talk. Let them know how you feel and how their arguments affect you. Second, you could offer to help with the chores more often. Maybe when they see you start to do something, they won’t quarrel so easily. Also, try to plan some family activities on weekends. For example, going for a picnic or watching a movie together. Shared happy times can bring your family closer. I hope things will get better soon. Remember, I’m always here to support you if you need to talk.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：涵盖题目所给要点，针对汤姆家中父母因家务争吵这一麻烦事，依次给出坐下来坦诚交流、主动帮忙做家务、周末策划家庭活动等切实可行的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写信目的，即表达对汤姆遇到家庭麻烦的关心，让对方感受到被重视，引出下文的建议内容；
第二步，详细给出解决问题的办法，针对父母争吵问题，从沟通层面建议坦诚交流让父母了解自己感受，从行动层面提议主动做家务减少矛盾导火索，还从增进家庭氛围角度策划周末活动，多维度帮助朋友化解难题；
第三步，结尾总结，真诚地表达希望事情变好的愿望，同时强调自己随时可供倾诉的支持态度，给予朋友情感慰藉，使书信完整且温暖。
[亮点词汇]
①argue about就……争吵
②offer to提出
③bring closer使更亲近
[高分句型]
①You said your parents always argue about chores and it makes you feel upset. (宾语从句)
②Maybe when they see you start to do something, they won’t quarrel so easily. (when引导时间状语从句)
5．（24-25九年级上·广东深圳·阶段练习）你是深圳中学学生李华，你发现很多初三学生不会安排时间，以至于作业写不完，或需要熬夜写作业等。校报邀请你给学弟学妹们写一封建议信，告诉学弟学妹们如何合理安排时间。要点已给出，可以自行发挥增加细节以充实文章。
要点：
1. 学会制定学习计划；
2. 远离手机等电子产品，专注学习；
3. 充分利用好周末时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为90左右；
2. 开头已给出，注意衔接。
How to manage time better
As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study...
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【答案】例文
How to manage time better
As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study so that we have trouble in managing our time, resulting in unfinished homework or having to stay up late. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we are supposed to learn to make a study plan, outline what tasks need to be done each day and allocate specific time slots for different subjects, from which we can be more organized. Moreover, it is helpful for us to keep away from mobile phones and other electronic products when studying, because they are major distractions. Therefore, staying focused on our study materials is also necessary. Last but not least, we can also need to make good use of weekends. Besides finishing homework, we can review what we’ve learned during the week and preview new knowledge.
Above all, time management is crucial for your study. I hope these suggestions can be helpful to you and you can do better in your study!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封建议信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写作意图，提出现在学生们面临的时间安排问题；
第二步，具体阐述如何合理安排时间，从制定学习计划、远离电子产品、充分利用周末时间等方面进行阐述；
第三步，书写结语，表达对同学们合理安排自己时间，取得进步的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with sth.忙于做某事
②stay up late熬夜
③keep away from远离
④focus on专注于
[高分句型]
①As students in Grade 9, we are always busy with our study so that we have trouble in managing our time, resulting in unfinished homework or having to stay up late.（结果状语从句）
②Moreover, it is helpful for us to keep away from mobile phones and other electronic products when studying, because they are major distractions.（it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型、原因状语从句）
6．（24-25九年级上·湖北十堰·期末）假如你是李明，最近和父母的关系不太好，你向校心理医生王医生咨询，请根据王医生的信件给你的父母写一封信。
Dear Li Ming,
Sorry to hear your problem. Parents are those person who love you most in this world. However, sometimes you may disagree with each other about the family rules. The first step to solve it is to communicate with them. You need to let them know the rule you disagree with, your opinion about it, and the way you deal with it.
Yours,
Doctor Wang
要求：
（1）你的书信要包含信中提到的三个方面；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear parents,
I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear parents,
I know you love me most and family rules can help me grow best, but I still have some disagreement about it. First, I think the rule that I have to go home before 8 p.m. is too strict. I think I should be allowed to come home a little later, like 9 p.m., because sometimes I need to study with my classmates or attend some after-school activities. Second, I don’t think I should be forbidden to watch TV or play computer games. I believe it’s good for me to relax in this way after a day’s hard work. Finally, I hope you can trust me more and give me more freedom. I promise I will manage my time well and be responsible for my own actions.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍对家规的看法；
第二步，具体说明自己的观点及理由；
第三步，提出希望许下承诺。
[亮点词汇]
①should be allowed to do sth.应该被允许做某事
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①I think the rule that I have to go home before 8 p.m. is too strict.（宾语从句）
②I think I should be allowed to come home a little later, like 9 p.m., because sometimes I need to study with my classmates or attend some after-school activities. （宾语从句，原因状语从句）
7．（24-25九年级上·四川巴中·阶段练习）如何减压让生活更美好？许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：
1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
2. 我的压力是什么；
3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Less Pressure, Better Life
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes on weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍同学们普遍存在的压力是什么；
第二步，介绍自己的压力；
第三步，介绍自己是怎么缓解压力的。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with与……相处融洽
②worry about担心
③all kinds of各种各样的
④have a talk with与……交谈
[高分句型]
①Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. (while表对比)
②So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. (宾语从句)
8．（24-25九年级上·贵州黔南·阶段练习）处于青春期阶段的青少年，容易情绪波动，甚至敏感(sensitive)、叛逆(rebellious)，与父母沟通交流产生障碍。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，讲述一个你如何学会与父母化解矛盾、和睦相处的故事。
要求如下：
1. 短文须包含思维导图所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 重点谈谈你们是如何化解矛盾的；
3. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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【答案】例文
I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents
During my adolescence, I had some problems with my parents. I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. This was the problem between us.
To solve this problem, we sat down and talked calmly. I told my parents how much I wanted to go and promised to call them when I arrived at the party and come back home on time. My parents listened to me patiently. They said they were just worried about my safety.
Now, we get on well with each other. We respect each other’s opinions. I always tell them my plans in advance, and they give me reasonable advice. From this experience, I learned that communication is the key to getting along with parents. We should understand and respect each other.
In a word, through proper communication, teenagers can avoid many conflicts with their parents and have a good relationship with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己青春期和父母之间的一次矛盾；
第二步，介绍自己是如何化解矛盾的；
第三步，介绍现在和父母相处的情况以及自己从这次矛盾中得到的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②on time准时
③be worried about担心
④in advance提前
⑤get along with sb.与某人友好相处
⑥in a word总之
[高分句型]
I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. (省略引导词that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
9．（24-25九年级上·浙江衢州·期中）Teens Feelings是一个国际青少年网站，以下内容取自其贴吧。假如你是李华，请用英语回帖，帮Jim分析问题所在，并提出合理建议。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数：80词左右：回帖中开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Teen Feelings
I had an argument (争吵) with my mum. She was angry with me because I spent too much time on the mobile phone last weekend. But I need a rest from schoolwork. What should I do
Jim England
Hi, Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua China
【答案】例文
Hi, Jim,
It sounds like you and your mom have different views on how to spend your free time. Here’s what I suggest. First, have a calm conversation with her to explain why you need some time to relax. It’s important to find a balance between schoolwork and leisure. Try to set limits on your mobile phone usage by scheduling specific times for it, showing your mom that you’re responsible. Additionally, consider engaging in offline activities that you both enjoy, improving your relationship.
I hope this helps!
Li Hua China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍要给出自己的建议；
第二步，根据对方描述的具体问题，详细描述自己的建议；
第三步，表示希望自己的建议有用，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①engaging in参与
②have different views on对……有不同的观点
[高分句型]
①It’s important to find a balance between schoolwork and leisure.（it is adj to do sth固定句型）
②I hope this helps!（宾语从句）
10．（24-25九年级上·浙江温州·期中）校刊Just Ask (成长不烦恼) 收到了两封求助信，假如你是该栏目的负责人李华，请选择其中一封信，结合自身经验给出恰当的建议，帮助同学解决烦恼。
注意：1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 词数：80~100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
All of my classmates have smart phones, but I don’t. They can talk with others online, but I can’t. I wanted a smart phone, but my mother said that I would spend too much time on smart phone and fail my exam. What should I do Sarah Being a common and quiet student in my class, I feel like my teachers and classmates don’t care about me. I have friends,but they always seem to get closer to other people. What should I do Andy
Dear ___________,
Thank you for sharing your problem with us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文一：
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for sharing your problem with us. It’s common that your mother worries about your studies. Here are my suggestions.
Why not have a conversation with your mother You can point out the benefits of having a smartphone, like staying connected with friends for school projects or using some helpful apps. You’d better make a deal with your mother, setting some rules together, such as limiting screen time during weekdays. I advise you to show your responsibility by promising to keep good grades.
Following these suggestions, I firmly believe you can find a balance that satisfies both your needs and your mother’s concerns.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考例文二：
Dear Andy,
Thank you for sharing your problem with us. It’s normal to feel lonely in a large class or group sometimes. Here is my advice.
First of all, it’s a good idea to start conversations or ask questions in class to communicate with your teachers and classmates. How about joining clubs or activities that interest you This is a great way to meet people who have the same hobbies as you and form deeper connections. Besides, they might not realize how you feel, so don’t be afraid to express your feelings to your friends. Lastly, I suggest you should focus on improving yourself. When you feel confident and make progress, others will naturally get closer to you.
In a word, be active and patient. It takes time to build good relationships.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向提供一些建议，帮助解决问题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍建议内容，如：和妈妈谈一谈，讲讲有手机的好处，同时约法三章，解决妈妈的顾虑；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①common常见的
②point out指出
③benefit好处
④limit限制
⑤responsibility责任
[高分句型]
①Following these suggestions, I firmly believe you can find a balance that satisfies both your needs and your mother’s concerns. (宾语从句)
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