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广西南宁市2025届高中毕业班第三次适应性测试英语试题
注意事项：
1.满分150分, 考试时间120分钟。
2.考生作答时，请将答案答在答题卡。选择题每小题选出答案后，用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑；非选择题请用直径0.5毫米黑色墨水签字笔在答题卡上各题的答题区域内作答，超出答题区域书写的答案无效，在试题卷、草稿纸上作答无效。
3.考试结束后，将答题卡交回。
第一部分 听力(共两节，满分30分)
第一节 (共5 小题；每小题1.5分， 满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
例: How much is the shirt
A. 19.15. B. 9.18. C. 9.15.
答案是C。
1. What will the man do at 1:00 p. m.
A. Remind the woman to prepare dinner.
B. Have a meeting in the office.
C. Have lunch with Jack.
2. What helped Adrienne get the job according to the speakers
A. Her language skills. B. Her work experience. C. Her management skills.
3. How will the man get to London
A. By plane. B. By train. C. By car.
4. When did the woman eat a hamburger
A. At breakfast time. B. At lunchtime. C. At dinner time.
5. What are the speakers doing
A. Eating in a restaurant. B. Picking the fruits. C. Making a cake.
第二节 (共15 小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第6段材料， 回答第6、7题。
6. What does the woman show the man
A. A photo. B. A sweater. C. A pair of shoes.
7. Where does the conversation most likely take place
A. In a grocery store. B. In a clothing store. C. In a shoe store.
听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。
8. What might the woman be
A. An editor. B. A writer. C. A shop owner.
9. What is the woman's advice
A. Lengthen the original text.
B. Create a new character.
C. Change the names of some characters.
听第8段材料，回答第10至 12题。
10. What's the relationship between the speakers
A. Teacher and student. B. Politician and citizen. C. TV hostess and guest.
11. What are the speakers mainly talking about
A. Modern technology. B. Industrial development. C. Environmental problems.
12. What's the problem in Africa according to the man
A. The countries there need wood.
B. Farmland is turning into desert.
C. Air is polluted seriously by factories.
听第9段材料，回答第13 至16题。
13. Where does the woman work
A. At a restaurant. B. At a newspaper. C. At a sports club.
14. How does the woman change her appearance for work
A. She wears makeup. B. She wears glasses. C. She wears hats.
15. What is the woman worried about
A. Putting on weight.
B. Not having time to exercise.
C. Eating a light meal every night.
16. What does the man say about himself
A. He wants to work with the woman.
B. He dreams to live in New York City.
C. He won't get paid for watching sports.
听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。
17. When will this course begin
A. Today. B. Next week. C. Next month.
18. How did the speaker learn the strategy
A. From language teachers. B. From business people. C. From politicians.
19. What will all students do first
A. Write about their interests. B. Debate some topics. C. List their goals.
20. What topic interests the speaker most
A. Music. B. Sports. C. Art.
第二部分 阅读理解(共两节，满分50分)
第一节 (共15 小题,每小题2.5分, 满分37.5分)
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。
A
The Most Scenic Villages of Italy
Manarola
Manarola is among the oldest and most popular towns in the Ligurian Cinque Terre coastal region. Its12th-century houses in different colors look over the tiny bay from the top of the rocky cliff. You can walk down to the bay to enjoy the closer view, and even enjoy a host of recreational activities such as boating or swimming. Follow the footpath along the near cliff west from the bay and you' ll find the best viewpoint overlooking the whole town—— magical both by day and night.
Portofino
This fishing village dates to Ancient Roman times and its name means the“Port of Dolphins”.Nowadays, its bay area is dotted with rows of fishing boats gently floating over the calm waves, but it remains a scenic and quiet place to be. Overlooking the small bay is a charming cobbled square lined with small cafés and restaurants, and the Chiesa di San Martino is high up on the green hillside.
Matera
Matera stands out as a medieval(中世纪的)“stone city”— nicknamed“Sassi”(‘stones’ in Italian).It's picturesque from afar, with a series of stone buildings carved out of the rocky mountain. From up close,as you walk along the stone paths and stairways, you may come across stone towers— they' re actually chimneys of houses underneath your feet! While beautiful, this is a barren city. Living conditions were poor and it was finally evacuated in 1952.
Pitigliano
Set on top of a stony cliff in Italy's Tuscany region, the medieval town of Pitigliano is an amazing sight. Most of its buildings and towers were built using the same rock from the cliff. Pitigliano has a longstanding Jewish community, and among its main sights are a series of ancient caves carved into the cliffside.
21. What can we know about Manarola
A. It is best to view the town at night. B. It offers few recreational activities.
C. It is the oldest and most popular town. D. It has colorful houses on a rocky cliff.
22. What can visitors do in Portofino
A. Experience lively nightlife at the bars. B. Visit ancient Roman ruins near the port.
C. Enjoy the view of fishing boats in the bay. D. Explore the crowded markets in the square.
23. What do Matera and Pitigliano have in common
A. Both were founded as religious centers. B. Both were empty for poor living conditions.
C. Both feature historic stone architecture. D. Both attract visitors mainly for ancient caves.
B
Horizons are strange. They define the scope(范围) of what we can see in the distance, but they are also always personal: Walk 10 miles to the west and your horizon line moves 10 miles to the west with you.
Remarkably, this local, personal character of horizons also extends to black holes, the most mysterious objects in the universe. Going beyond that horizon towards a new understanding of space, time and black holes is the principal goal of physicist Carlo Rovelli's wonderful new book White Holes.
“What happens at the center of a Black Hole ” It's the question that drives this book. Rovelli is unique among modern scientists who write for popular audiences in his ability to grasp the purest essence of his science with both precision and beauty. White Holes, like Rovelli's other works, is remarkably short— less than 200 pages. But the clarity of his explanations is unmatched. As a scientist who is also a popularizer,I often find myself amazed at his passages.
The science question at the heart of Rovelli's new book comes from his own research into the intersection of Einstein's General Theory of Relativity and Quantum Mechanics (量子力学). His answer to the question“What happens ” is that black holes eventually become white holes where everything that fell into“event horizon” emerges again. To demonstrate how this is possible, Rovelli takes the reader on a fascinating exploration of what a horizon means for time. As he writes“… if we approach the‘event horizon’ and go beyond it, our watches do not slow and nothing strange happens to the space around us,just as nothing unusual happens to a shi p when it crosses the line of the horizon and disappears from our view.”
I won't spoil the ending by telling you what Rovelli says happens when black holes turn into white holes. I will, however, tell you that taking the journey with Rovelli is more than worth the price of the book.
24. Why does the author illustrate“horizons” in paragraph 1
A. To introduce the topic. B. To define a difficult term.
C. To present a problem. D. To compare different views.
25. What is Rovelli's new book aimed at
A. Challenging existing black hole theories. B. Providing a new insight into black holes.
C. Offering tools for observing black holes. D. Teaching Einstein's Theory of Relativity.
26. What is the author's main praise for Rovelli's new book
A. Its detailed scientific analysis. B. Its clear and accurate explanations.
C. Its impressive lengthy discussion. D. Its vivid and creative imagination.
27. According to Rovelli, what happens when crossing the“event horizon”
A. Everything falls inwards rapidly. B. Matter begins to explode violently.
C. No noticeable changes are observed. D. A ship disappears due to extreme gravity.
C
From social relationships to work challenges, Chinese people are turning to DeepSeek to address different personal issues. They describe sharing their thoughts and receiving helpful feedback from the popular chatbot. As a rising trend on social media,AI therapy (疗法) is changing the way people seek mental health support. But can AI truly replace a human therapist
Globally,45 percent of people who needed mental health care in 2024 did not receive it, with barriers including cost and a lack of providers, according to Huntington Psychological Services. Daniel Lowd, an associate professor at the University of Oregon, believes AI could help solve the lack of therapy services.“If people can find some support and perspective by talking to ChatGPT or chatbot Claude, then I think that's wonderful,” Lowd told Newsweek.
Li Yong, a doctor at the Jiangsu Province Hospital, agreed with Lowd, saying that AI meets people's needs for emotional support to some extent. By using basic knowledge of psychotherapy, DeepSeek can help with minor mental issues through comforting responses, Li told Shanghai Observer.
However, he points out that AI cannot completely replace professionals due to the human touch that is important for therapeutic services. Therapists develop a deeper understanding of people's emotions and needs through communication, which allows them to offer more tailored treatment plans, ShanghaiObserver reported.
The use of AI in psychotherapy also raises concerns over the reliability of responses. “AI chatbots will respond as therapists if asked, without any of the inspection, training or responsibility of a human counselor or even a specialized and tested piece of software,” Richard Lachman, an associate professor atToronto Metropolitan University, told Newsweek.
Experts believe the key to effective AI therapy lies in proper government regulation. Wysa, for example, is a mental health app that offers therapeutic conversations with an AI chatbot. In 2022, it worked with the UK's National Health Service, following a list of strict standards. As AI becomes more a part of our lives, understanding its effects on human psychology means finding a balance between what's helpful and what's dangerous.
28. How could AI help us according to Daniel Lowd
A. By improving the quality of therapy. B. By reducing the cost of therapy.
C. By providing more psychological aids. D. By curing human of mental issues.
29. What is Li Yong's attitude towards AI therapy
A. Pessimistic. B. Optimistic.
C. Objective. D. Ambiguous.
30. Why is a human counselor mentioned in paragraph 5
A. To question the reliability of AI therapy.
B. To praise human's insight into mental issues.
C. To prove the necessity of professional training.
D. To stress the responsibility of human therapists.
31. What does the example in the last paragraph show us
A. The need for suitable state control.
B. The importance of developing more advanced AI.
C. The dangerous effects of AI on human psychology.
D. The popularization of AI across nations.
D
In 2024, the term“brain rot” gained popularity on social media as it reflected concerns about the overconsumption of low-quality online content. The widespread use of the term highlighted the harmful effects of Internet addiction, driving a travel trend known as“digital detox”.
In fact, digital detox isn't a new concept. Brown University defines it as a set period during which people avoid using electronic devices that have become a big part of daily life. Due to growing interest in taking a break from technology while on vacation, tour operators are now offering digital detox trips,where travelers choose an Internet-free environment. When such a trip begins, travelers lock their devices in a storage box and only get them back at the end.
Travelers who have joined digital detox trips confirm the various benefits of going phone-free.“Without that distraction, the experience feels so much richer because you' re just absorbed in it,”Tara Cappel, founder of travel company FTLO Travel, told Travel + Leisure Magazine. However, she acknowledges that tech-free travel hasn't yet become popular, as many people are still concerned about shutting off their devices completely.
That concern makes sense. In an age where life and technology are more connected than ever, a full digital detox may not be realistic for most people. “Technology is very much a part of us now. We bank with an app, read restaurant menus on phones and even sweat with exercise instructors through a screen,”consultant Emily Cherkin told the BBC. While a digital detox is meant to reduce stress, shutting down devices may actually cause more anxiety due to our close relationship with technology.
Rather than avoiding phones altogether, experts suggest a more realistic way to address Internet addiction.Sina Joneidy, a senior teacher at Teesside University, UK, advocates practicing digital awareness. “I make sure my use of technology is purposeful,” he told the BBC. For those who can't completely step away from screens, using screen-time tracking apps may help encourage more mindful phone habits. Ultimately,our focus should be on improving our long-term relationship with technology rather than depending on the digital detox industry as a short-term solution.
32. What does the underlined term“digital detox” in paragraph 1 refer to
A. A trend of using technology more efficiently.
B. A practice of keeping away from digital devices.
C. A method of improving the quality of online content.
D. A way to reduce the anxiety of using electronic devices.
33. What can we learn about digital detox according to paragraph 4
A. It can bring about worry.
B. It makes sense for most people.
C. It is unnecessary in modern life.
D. It is the best way to reduce pressure.
34. What do experts think is a more practical way to deal with Internet addiction
A. Avoiding phones altogether.
B. Upgrading time tracing tools.
C. Taking more digital detox trips.
D. Being more intentional with technology.
35. Which of the following can be the suitable title of the text
A. Suffer from“Brain Rot” B. Keep Track of Our Screen Time
C. Benefit from Digital Detox D. Set Free from Internet Addiction
第二节 (共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分)
根据下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Strategies to Make Reading a Novel Easy
As there are important keys to reading any type of literary genre (体裁), reading a novel is no different. Consider these tips for reading a novel effectively.
●Read for comprehension
36 . As fundamental as that seems to education, don't ignore it. It's easy to get mentally distracted, breeze through a page or two, and suddenly find yourself in a new scene with no idea how you got there. If you' re lost, it's a good idea to back up and figure out what you' re reading. An even better idea when reading a novel is to comprehend it as you go. Here's a quick tip on that. 37 . It tends to help you stay more engaged as you read.
●Pay attention to repetition
Novelists generally tend to be highly focused on details when writing. When they repeat something,they mean to. 38 . Repetition can take a thousand forms, like certain settings or characters. If something feels familiar when you' re reading, pay attention— the author wants to make a point.
● 39
Plot, setting, characters, foreshadowing, imagery, etc. They' re highly important. We understand that knowing all these can be somewhat less-than-fun. But they' re the building blocks upon which novelists make their points. Big ideas come in story format, so knowing how story elements work together is vital.
●Watch for interpretations
Sometimes novelists make it easy for you: they interpret a passage for you. When you come across any interpretation by an author, it's time to take notes. If you want to know how to read a novel effectively and you miss this, it will be easy to misinterpret the entire book. Don't miss the author's own interpretations. 40 .
A. Read with themes in mind
B. Know your literary elements
C. When certain things show up again, be mindful
D. You can use an index card to cover the part you' ve read
E. Honestly, they matter much more than mine or yours do
F. Understanding is always the goal when we read anything
G. Another method is to write down your own short summary
第三部分 语言运用 (共两节，满分30分)
第一节 (共15 小题，每小题1分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
When my family moved from New Orleans to Chicago, the freezing February wind made me miss our sunny balcony garden. The city was vast and impersonal, with its towering buildings and 41 faces. Everything felt 42 until Mom joined a community garden project.
On the first Saturday, I paced slowly behind her, 43 my shoes, feeling like an outsider who didn't belong. The garden was full of people—a Mexican grandmother teaching kids to plant chili seeds, aPolish couple arguing about fertilizer ratios(比例). Mrs. Rodriguez handed me a shovel(铲子), her smile 44 the language barrier.
I froze when 45 to work with Mr. Petrov, a serious Russian man. He pointed at sunflower sprouts, 46 “Solntse! Solntse!” Seeing my 47 , he drew a 48 in the soil: ⊙. “Ah, sun!” Inodded. His eyes lit up-our first 49 .
Weeks later, my sunflowers 50 taller than anyone’ s. I kept tending them 51 every afternoon. At the harvest festival, Mr. Petrov gave me a jar of seeds, whispering “Med... for your hardworking 52 .” I realized he'd noticed my planting efforts. Mom smiled warmly at me, “You 53 more than fruits.”
Now, when neighbors 54 gardening tips, I see roots connecting beneath the soil. We' re all sowing seeds of understanding, waiting for the 55 of shared laughter to help them grow.
41. A. unconfident B. unfamiliar C. impolite D. imperfect
42. A. strange B. calm C. safe D. dangerous
43. A. searched for B. looked into C. stared at D. took off
44. A. creating B. bridging C. enlarging D. building
45. A. assigned B. honored C. permitted D. warned
46. A. whistling B. shouting C.complaining D. announcing
47. A. curiosity B. anxiety C. hesitation D. confusion
48. A. symbol B. number C. letter D. map
49. A. contradiction B. celebration C. correction D. connection
50. A. remained B. hung C. stood D. lay
51. A. causally B. simply C. attentively D. carelessly
52. A. hands B. eyes C. legs D. minds
53. A. plant B. water C. store D. harvest
54. A. criticize B. hide C. invent D. exchange
55. A. rainbow B. sunshine C. moonlight D. snowfall
第二节 (共10个小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Every year, the Pantone Color Institute picks a color that shows the global mood and attitude. InDecember,2024, Mocha Mousse(摩卡慕斯色) 56 (choose) for 2025.
Mocha Mousse is a warming, brown color filled with richness. Pantone's website describes the color as“surrounding us 57 the pleasant qualities of chocolate and coffee, answering our desire for comfort.”
This choice comes during a time of major political unrest worldwide. The Global Peace Index 2024shows there are 56 conflicts globally, 58 is the highest number since World War II. MochaMousse, associated with stability, 59 (reflect) our harmony-seeking nature. It gives a sense of satisfaction, inspiring inner peace, calm and balance, and enabling us 60 (stay) together with our surroundings.
Closely 61 (tie) to nature, the color also shows a connection to the land, as brown is linked to earth and harvest. With its natural feel, Mocha Mousse respects and honors the physical environment,positively 62 (affect) mental well-being.
Besides its deep 63 (meaning), Mocha Mousse is widely used in daily life. It's said to suit home and work spaces, reducing stress, improving moods and creating 64 calm atmosphere.Whether warming up spaces or adding luxury to clothes, its broad appeal makes it 65 (undoubted)a popular design choice, bringing relaxed elegance to any setting.
第四部分 写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
假设你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Eric想学习太极拳，发邮件向你求教。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.推荐学习途径和资源。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric, Gla d to know that you want to learn Chinese Tai Chi. _____
Yours,Li Hua
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There is no failure except in no longer trying. It was my brother John, a theater king, who insisted Itry out for the musical. “It's fun,” he said. “You just need to smile and act confidently.” Though I could do both, facing fifty people remained terrifying.
I picked the song Goodbye's to remember my mom. I trained my breathing, focused on emotions and adjusted my posture. I sang again and again. But when the audition day(试唱选拔日) came, seeing the choir director on the stage, I felt my heart nearly stopped. Everyone there all sang with such ease, so relaxed and calm. I held my sheet music tightly, watching until only a few of us remained.
Then I stood and walked out. John caught me trembling in the hallway. “I can't do this,” I announced,tears already coming out of my eyes.
“Stay right here! Sing for me!” John told me. I shook my head violently. But he looked at me calmly.“If you don't sing well, I' ll tell you. But if you quit today, you' ll regret it in the future. Everyone up there is nervous. But you can do this. Now, practice. Pretend I am the choir director.” I nodded slowly.
We both knew I was too shy to open my heart after our mom passed away. John crossed his arms, and said quietly, “You' ve got our mom's voice.” My breath caught— Mom's lullabies (摇篮曲) had died with her five years ago. “Now sing like she’ s listening,” he said. The first note cracked and he instantly demanded I restart. My second attempt trembled less. He nodded, “Better. Now it's time to get back there.”
When we reentered the auditorium(礼堂), the director glanced at her watch. “Ten minutes left.” My sheet music shook as I approached the stage. I looked back, absolutely terrified, but my brother caught my eye and winked. I wasn't as afraid then.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, I stepped onto the stage.
The next day, I checked the list on the door of the auditorium and found my name on it.
南宁市2025届高中毕业班第三次适应性测试
英语科参考答案及评分细则
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21—23DCC 24—27ABBC 28—31 CCAA 32—35 BADD 36—40FDCBE
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56. was chosen 57. with 58. which 59. reflects 60. to stay
61. tied 62. affecting 63. meanings 64. a 65. undoubtedly
第三部分 第二节 语法填空评分细则
1.按照参考答案给分。
2.单词一定要拼写正确才得分。
3.字母书写要规范并能辨别清楚才得分。
4.要区分单词首字母的大小写。
5.如果因扫描试卷的原因，导致试卷画面模糊，部分i字母上少了一个点，可给分。
6. 评分以第一印象为准。
第四部分 第一节 应用文写作
一、参考范文
Dear Eric,
Glad to know that you want to learn Chinese Tai Chi. It's a fantastic choice! Tai Chi not only improves physical balance but also helps reduce stress. I'm willing to offer you some help.
For beginners, I recommend watching online lessons on platforms like YouTube or Bilibili.Channels like“Tai Chi for Beginners” offer step-by-step guidance. Additionally, it would be advisable to join local Tai Chi classes in community centers, where personalized coaching is often provided. Many parks in our city even host free morning sessions— perfect for practicing in a group!
Practice regularly, and don't hesitate to ask me for tips. You' ll master it in no time!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、评分原则
1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
(1)内容：内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)词汇语法：使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)篇章结构：上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4. 评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度给予考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
(3)如书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求
应用文各档次的给分范围和要求
档 次 描 述
第五档 (13-15分) ● 覆盖所有内容要点，表述清楚、合理。 ● 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。 ● 有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。 ● 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档 (10-12分) ● 覆盖所有内容要点，表达比较清楚、合理。 ● 使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。 ● 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。● 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档 (7-9分) ● 覆盖了大部分内容要点，少数内容表达不够清楚、合理。 ● 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当指出，但基本不影响理解。 ● 基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。● 基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档 (4-6分) ● 漏掉或未描述清楚一些内容要点，或一些内容与写作目的不相关。 ● 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。 ● 几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。
第一档 (1-3分) ● 遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相干。 ● 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。 ● 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不连贯。
0分 ● 未作答。 ● 所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判。 ● 所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
四、应用文具体评分细则
1.简要地提及支持。
2.具体地推荐学习途径和资源及推荐理由。
3.运用多样且准确恰当的词汇、语法结构和句式。
4.书写卷面。
注意：如果作文时态不恰当，酌情降档扣分。
第四部分第二节读后续写
一、参考范文
Finally, I stepped onto the stage. The spotlight felt blinding, and my hands trembled as Ihanded my sheet music to the pianist. Taking a deep breath, I closed my eyes for a second,imagining Mom's face. The first note came out shaky, but I pushed through, remembering John's advice: Sing like she's listening. My voice steadied, filling the room with the emotions I'd practiced so hard to convey. The fear melted away, replaced by something stronger—— determination. By the final note, my heart was pounding, but not from terror. It was pride.
The next day, I checked the list on the door of the auditorium and found my name on it. Icouldn't believe my eyes—I'd made it! My whole body shook with excitement. John came up behind me and patted me on the shoulder. “Mom would be proud,” he whispered. Choked with gratitude,I turned around and hugged him tightly, knowing that I couldn't have done it without him.In that moment, I realized John was right: the only true failure was giving up. And now, with my name on that list, I knew I'd chosen courage over regret.
二、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
(1)创造内容的质量，续写的完整性及与原文语境的融洽度。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4. 评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于120的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可以接受。
(3)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描 述
第五档 (21-25分) ● 创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。 ● 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。 ● 有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。
第四档 ●创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融
(16-20分) 洽度较高。 ● 使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。 ● 比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第三档 (11-15分) ●创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。 ● 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。 ● 基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第二档 (6-10分) ● 内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。 ● 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。 ● 未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。
第一档 (1-5分) ●内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。 ● 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。 ● 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
0分 ● 未作答。 ● 所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判。 ● 所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
四、读后续写具体评分细则
(一)内容
第一段：
要点1：描述作者上台时的表现 (心理活动、动作等)。
要点2：作者克服困难，顺利完成了表演。
第二段：
要点1：作者得知自己入选后的反应。
要点2：作者哥哥 John得知消息后的反应。
要点3：作者的反思和总结。
(二)衔接
全文内容衔接、连贯自然。
(三)语言
运用丰富的词汇、语法结构、丰富的句式和恰当得体的语言。
(四)书写卷面
注意：1.文章要求语义连接，前后文衔接自然，故事发展符合逻辑，体现文章主题。
2.续写内容应紧接所给开头句，另起一行写的考生本次评卷不扣分，但是教师在讲评试卷时要和学生强调规范答题。

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