话题11 安全与救护 2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全(含解析)

资源下载
  1. 二一教育资源

话题11 安全与救护 2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全(含解析)

资源简介

2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全
话题11 安全与救护
话题解读
本话题通常围绕考生熟悉的安全问题进行设题,内容主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等问题,要求学生对校规、家规、交通规则以及生活中的普通行为规范等进行描写。此类话题通常利用要点提示的方式进行考查。
话题词汇
safety安全 dangerous 危险的 harmful 有害的 earthquake 地震
first aid 急救 in trouble / danger处于困境/危险中 call for medical help 求医
话题句式
1. If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can ……如果我们有危险,我们必须报警求助,这样我们才能 (提分点:If引导的条件状语从句)
2. I don't think students who are only 16 years old should be allowed to drive. 我认为只有16岁的学生不应该被允许开车。(提分点:who引导的定语从句)
3. There is no doubt that keeping safe is very ... for us. 毫无疑问,保证安全对我们来说是非常……的。(提分点: There is no doubt that 毫无疑问)
经典范例
树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,请根据手册内容,写一篇文章。
About traffic rules: run the red light (X), cross the zebra walk ( );
About food: eat fruit and vegetables ( ); eat fast food (X)
3. About making friends: meet strangers alone (X); help each other( ); 4.…
要点提示:1.说明自我保护的重要性。2.分享自我保护的经历和想法(至少3点)。
要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。2.词数:80左右;开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self- protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do we protect ourselves and grow up healthily Now let me share my experience and ideas with you.___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
写作方法指导
开头:要点1:说明自我保护的重要性;
Self- protection is one of the most important___________________________________________ 主体:要点2:分享自我保护的经历和想法;
First,____________________________________________________________________________
Second,__________________________________________________________________________
Third,___________________________________________________________________________
结尾:遵守规则,保护自己。
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will ____________________________
范文:
Self- protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do we protect ourselves and grow up healthily Now let me share my experience and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. I always cross the zebra walk because it's safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It's important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone. I make some friends on the Internet, but I never meet them. What's more, I'd like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming. It's dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or rivers. So don't do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
实战演练
1.(2017·黑龙江·中考真题)近几年来,校园欺凌(school bullies)事件时有发生,学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力,我们应该珍惜生命,注意自己的人身安全,做好自我保护。请以How Can We Protect Ourselves为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self﹣protection)。
提示:
1. 不单独游泳;
2. 谨慎交友;
3. 遇到危险报警或向老师求助;
4. 饮食及交通安全等…
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2024·湖南长沙·三模)为了增强同学们的安全意识,你校英语报正在以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文章必须包括表格中所有要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life. _______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2024·甘肃天水·三模)为进一步增强中小学生的安全意识,提高自我保护的能力, 学校将举行以“安全”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe ”的英语短文。
要点 内容
饮食安全 不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品。
交友安全 网上慎重交友,不和陌生人交谈。
旅行安全 照看好私人物品,遇险及时报警。
游泳安全 不独自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳。
…… ……
提示词:be careful, go bad
要求:
(1)必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
(3)词数:80—100词。
How can we make ourselves safe
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2024·山东聊城·三模)根据下面提示,以“What to do in an earthquake”为题用英语写一篇文章。众所周知,近来地震频发。虽然现在我们可以采取一些措施来警告人们关于地震的事情。但是我觉得孩子们应该了解更多关于在地震中该怎么做的事情。下面就是我的一些建议:
如果你在室内:
1、不要跳下高楼。躲在桌下,远离窗户和大家具。
2、当停止震动时,快速离开楼房,但不要用电梯。
如果你在室外:
1、不要站在路灯和电线下面。
2、在山里,小心落石;在海边,快速转移到高地。
总之,遵循以上建议,并且保持镇静。你会安全并且你还可以帮助挽救他人。
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)
What to do in an earthquake
As we all know, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Although we can do something to warn people about them. __________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2024·甘肃兰州·二模)你校英文报就“ 网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
要求:
1. 80 词左右;
2. 须全面反映图文信息;
3. 文中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Stay Safe Online
The Internet environment isn’t safe any longer and we teenagers are possibly be in great danger._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)同学们,生命是美好的,生活是多姿多彩的,而要拥有这一切的前提是安全,因此我们一定要加强安全意识,努力增强自我防范能力,关爱生命健康成长。请以“How to Keep Safe”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语小短文。
内容提示:
1. 交通安全,遵守交通规则,如不在马路上踢球等。
2. 食物安全,吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品。
3. 活动安全,进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳。
4. 交友安全,谨慎交友,尤其是网友;和同学们友好相处,不打架。
5. 不要伤害自己,也不要伤害别人,懂得如何求助。
写作要求:
1. 词数:70词左右;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 写作要点供参考,可适当发挥;开头词汇不计入总数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:traffic rules交通规则 net friend网友 especially尤其是
How to Keep Safe
There is no doubt that safety is very important to us. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions._____________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文:
1.
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇短文,介绍自我保护的方法。根据要点提示,文章可从饮食、交通、出行、紧急避险等方面展开。
2.写作指导:文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时按照要点分段叙述,可使用First、Second等增强文章的条理性。
2.
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life. We should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First, we should go along the right side when we walk or ride a bike on the street. Second, we should be careful when making friends and don’t meet net-friends alone. Third, never eat the food that has gone bad. The bad food is bad for our bodies. Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports.
In a word, we should always keep safety in mind and keep us safe. I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明安全意识的重要性;
第二步,具体从四个方面介绍如何保持安全,交通安全,交友安全,食品安全以及补充一条安全事项;
第三步,最后再次呼吁同学们要保持安全。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sth in mind把某事记在心里
②be bad for对……有坏处
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports.(时间状语从句)
②I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind.(宾语从句)
3.
How can we make ourselves safe
As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, in order to eat healthily and safely, we’d better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad. Besides, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring unnecessary trouble. Don’t talk to strangers. What’s more, we should take good care of our personal things when travelling. If we are in danger, call the police for help in time. In addition, remember not to go swimming alone in the river or lake to avoid putting ourselves into dangerous situations. Finally, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we shouldn’t crowd each other.
In a word, safety is of great importance and all of us need to know how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍作为青少年学习如何使自己安全是特别重要的,并引出下文;
第二步,根据提示具体描述如何做;
第三步,最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了
② be supposed to do应该做
③ what’s more而且
④ in addition此外
[高分句型]
①Besides, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring unnecessary trouble.(时间状语从句,定语从句)
②If we are in danger, call the police for help in time.(条件状语从句)
4.
What to do in an earthquake
As we all know, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Although we can do something to warn people about them. I think children should know more about what to do in the earthquake. Here’s some of my advice:
When you’re inside, don’t jump out of the tall buildings. Hide under a desk and stay away from the windows and big furniture. Leave the building when the ground stops shaking. But don’t use the lift. When you’re outside, remember not to stand under the street lights and power lines. If you’re in the mountain, be careful of the falling stones. And if you’re near the sea, move quickly to the higher ground.
In short, follow the above advice and keep calm, you’ll be safe and you can also help save others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“地震时如何做”的话题;
第二步,介绍在室内和室外分别怎么做;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① recently最近
② stay away from远离
③ keep calm保持冷静
[高分句型]
①When you’re outside, remember not to stand under the street lights and power lines. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②And if you’re near the sea, move quickly to the higher ground. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5. Stay Safe Online
The Internet environment isn’t safe any longer and we teenagers are possibly be in great danger. There are also hidden dangers that we can’t see through. Then what should we do to stay safe online
First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give away your personal information like name or address. Second, don’t click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss. Third, never see strangers you meet online. Finally, always be polite in the virtual world. Try not to be a target for a cyberbully.
Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出我们面对的安全问题;
第二步,对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议;
第三步,书写结语。表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
give away泄露
harmonious和谐的
click on点击
[高分句型]
① Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world. (倒装句)
6.
How to Keep Safe
There is no doubt that safety is very important to us. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We must obey the rules. Don’t play football on the road. We should pay attention to the food safety. We should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Don’t hurt yourself when doing physical exercise. Don’t swim in the river without permission. Besides, we should be careful to make friends, especially net friends. Learn to get along well with our classmates and don’t fight. What’s more, don’t hurt others and don’t hurt yourself. It’s very important to know how to ask for help.
In short, safety must come first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文;
②时态:时态应用一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时不可遗漏,学生还可适当进行拓展,提升文章内容丰富度。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出如何保证安全这一话题;
第二步,给出如何保证安全的建议;
第三步,文章收尾,再次强调安全的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②get along well with和……友好相处
[高分句型]
①Don’t hurt yourself when doing physical exercise(when doing sth.结构)
②It’s very important to know how to ask for help.(it作形式主语)

展开更多......

收起↑

资源预览