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2025中考英语书面表达之建议信专项复习讲义
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书面表达之建议信 10年10考 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解决有关问题。建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1）开头：开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2）主体：说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3）结尾：对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
思维导图
方法探究
探究一 必背句式
【篇首句】说明写信目的。
1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I’m writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
1. I’d like to suggest that...我想要建议......
2. In my opinion,...在我看来,......
3. If I were you, I would...如果我是你,我会......
4. You’d better do.../not do...你最好/最好不......
5. It’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前,你 有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识,你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.首先,你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。
7. As is known to all,vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.众所周知,词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly. 还有,试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样,你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt. 最后但也是很重要的一点是,你应该养成记日记的习惯,这会帮助你提高英语写作,也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。
【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议,并祝福。
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
7. I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
8. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. I’m eager to see you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。很希望早点在北京见到你。提前祝你来北京之行愉快。
探究二 模版示例
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
探究三 建议信素材积累
首段
1. I feel quite concerned about... 对……我深感忧虑/关心。
2. I am writing this letter in the hope of... 我写此信希望……
3. I am writing to make some suggestions for... 我写这封信是想给……提一些建议。
4. I am writing in the hope that... 我写信希望……
5. I am writing this letter on behalf of...to make some suggestions about...
我代表……写这封信就……给出一些建议。
6. I am writing in reply to... 我写这封信是为了回复……
7. You have asked my advice about...and I will try to make some helpful suggestions.
你曾就……询问我的意见，我将努力给出一些有用的建议。
中间段
1. I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果您能……可能会更好。
2. I am ready for further discussion about this matter. 我已准备好就此事进行进一步的讨论。
3. In my opinion, you'd better... 我认为你最好……
4. I feel it my duty to suggest you... 我认为我有责任建议你……
5. I especially/particularly advise you to... 我尤其要建议你……
6. I must frankly tell you on this occasion that... 借这次机会，我得坦率地告诉你……
7. Don't let haste or impatience mar... 不要让匆忙或急躁破坏……
8. If I were you, I would...by all means. 如果我是你，我会想尽一切办法……
9. I seldom advise people what to do, but I feel I ought to let you know just what I think about this matter.
我很少劝人怎么做，但这次我想我应该让你知道我对此事的看法。
10.If you stop now..., I am afraid you will regret it in later years.
如果你现在停止……，恐怕你以后会后悔的。
11. I must say your idea is totally wrong. 我得说你的想法是完全错误的。
末段
1. It would be most helpful if... 如果……，将是……极大的帮助。
2. It is my sincere hope that you will take my advice into consideration.
我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议。
3. I believe you will take my advice seriously. 我想您会认真考虑我的建议。
4. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful. 我希望这些提议/建议对您有用。
5. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心。
5.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making.
希望我的建议能对您的决定有所帮助。
6.I believe I shall hear that you have decided to take my advice.
我相信会听到你已接受我建议的消息。
典型练习
1．假如你是李华，你收到你的英国朋友Harry给你的来信，询问学校将要开设的特色选修课相关事宜，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数80左右。
To: Lihua2023@ From: Harry@
Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that our school is planning to offer us some elective courses, including Chinese, designing, photography and some other interesting subjects. Many of my friends decide to choose Chinese. Do you think I should also take Chinese class Is it important for a foreigner to learn Chinese I hear that it’s really difficult to learn Chinese well. If I take it, can you give me some advice on how to learn it well Looking forward to hearing from you.
注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．成长过程中，总会有各种各样的烦恼。校英文电子报开设了Talk with Teenagers专栏，倾听青少年的心声，帮助青少年解决烦恼。以下是几位青少年的近来烦恼，他们向专栏积极反映，寻求建议。假如你是Sunny，请你仔细阅读他们的问题，从中选择一位同学，用英语写一封回信，提出你的中肯建议。
要求：
1. 称呼栏需补充完整；
2. 词数：80—100（正文开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
e-newspaper
Teenagers Worries
Tom Everyday I do my homework slowly and stay up too late. I am weak in many subjects. I want to improve my study. What should I do
Anna My parents are often busy and they have no time to stay with me. Also, I don’t have any close friends. I feel very lonely. What should I do
Daniel I’m too fat. I want to lose some weight healthily. Do you know any good ways
Dear __________,
I’m sorry to know that you have problems. I’m glad to help you.
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Sunny
3．假如你是李华，你的好友Mike写信告诉你，他的父母不准他在爱好上花费太多的时间，也不允许他和朋友逛街超过晚上九点。最近他和父母难以沟通，他为此很伤心。请你给他回一封信，就如何与父母相处给出你的建议。
写作要点：
1）表示对Mike的理解；
2）就他的问题展开分析；
3）给Mike提供一些与父母相处的建议。
写作要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3）字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰；
4）100词左右。
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4．校园广播节目是同学们获取校园资讯的途径之一。假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语广播节目拟开设听众来信专栏，请你给该专栏投稿。
内容包括：
(1)你喜欢该节目的哪一位主持人，请就其工作谈两点原因；
(2)你对英语节目的两点建议；
(3)你对节目的祝愿。
参考词汇：host男主持， hostess 女主持
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，语意连贯；
4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
温馨提示：抄写原文者不得分。
Dear editors,
I am a big fan of the English programs of our school radio stations.
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Yours,
Li Ming
5．下面是九年级学生王云在你校“英语学习网”留言板发布的一条求助信息。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
I’m poor in English writing and I want to improve it. First, I don’t know what to write about. Second, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in my writing. Could you please give me some advice Many thanks. Wang Yun Class 3 Grade 9
要点提示：
1.多阅读，扩大词汇量；
2.养成写作的习惯；
3.……
要求：
1.内容须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：vocabulary词汇
Dear Wang Yun,
To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice.
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I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是学生张磊，刚刚收到笔友 Joe的求助信。请你根据来信内容给他提供一些帮助和建议。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I get into a new school and meet some problems. Can you help me
I’m too shy to make new friends. When I have difficulty with my homework, I don’t know who I can ask for help. What should I do
Joe
提示词： outgoing, friendly, help others
要求：
1. 语句通顺， 意思连贯， 书写工整；
2. 文章不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
3. 词数： 60词左右。(开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数)
Dear Joe,
I’m happy that you talk to me about your problems. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Zhang Lei
7．要想保持健康，良好的生活方式必不可少。父母忙于工作而很少顾及自己的健康，身体都处于“亚健康”状态。请你给父母提一些改善健康状况的建议，并向他们表达你的关心。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 词数100左右。
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8．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
我校英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是负责该栏目的Henry。近日，你收到一封署名为Mr. Worried的求助信，信的内容大致如下：面对快节奏的初三学习生活，他感到压力很大，偶尔还会失眠。最近，他发现自己常常稀里糊涂，似乎记忆力也出现了问题，为此感到十分焦虑。请给他写一封回信，针对他遇到的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议。
注意：
●短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
●照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Worried,
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Sincerely,
Henry
9．假设你是Mike，你朋友Jack在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到紧张和郁闷。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信，给他提一些建议，帮助他克服困难，轻松愉快地学习和生活。
提示：
1. 每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候；
2. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通；
3. 关于如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活提一至两条建议。
要求：
1. 不得在作文中出现学校和自己的真实名字；
2. 语句连贯、通顺，60-70词。已给出部分，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries.
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Yours,
Mike
10．假定你是李华，你校交换生 Ethan 在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难，因此他正通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴(reading buddy)，请你根据以下内容提示，用英文写一封自荐信，表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴，并为他提出相关建议。词数 80 左右。
Able to do recite lots of ancient Chinese poems
Advise to do ①watch Chinese TV programs ②learn Chinese songs ③read… ④…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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11．为更好地开展社团活动，红星学校学生会围绕“New Clubs, More Fun”这一主题征集意见稿。假如你是李华，请你参考问卷内容写一封信给学生会。
要求：
（1）包含所有提示信息，可适当扩展，所给提示语供选择使用；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
（3）词数60 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示语：
expect (期望) develop our interest in...show our talents (展示才能) be close to nature
Questionnaire (问卷)
Dear studentsWe’d like to know your ideas about school clubs. Please complete the questionnaire and return it to us. Students’ Union
1.What is your hobby □ Reading books □ Taking photos □ Playing basketball □ Others_______ 2. What club do you want to join □Music club □ Sports club □ Reading club □ Others_______ 3.What is your advice (建议) on club activities □ Go hiking □ Act out stories □ Play musical instruments □ Others 4.The reasons for your advice. _________________________________________________________
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs.
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Li Hua
12．假如你是Susan，你的朋友Leo最近心情不好，他觉得自己很努力在学习，成绩却不理想，另外，他还觉得孤独缺少朋友，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，针对他的问题提出你的建议。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
2.语句通顺，符合逻辑，内容可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实人名或班级。
Dear Leo,
I’m sorry to hear that
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Yours,
Susan
参考答案
1．假如你是李华，你收到你的英国朋友Harry给你的来信，询问学校将要开设的特色选修课相关事宜，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数80左右。
To: Lihua2023@ From: Harry@
Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that our school is planning to offer us some elective courses, including Chinese, designing, photography and some other interesting subjects. Many of my friends decide to choose Chinese. Do you think I should also take Chinese class Is it important for a foreigner to learn Chinese I hear that it’s really difficult to learn Chinese well. If I take it, can you give me some advice on how to learn it well Looking forward to hearing from you.
注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Harry,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture. As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will get something new.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文，写作时需要注意用信件格式作答。
②时态：时态使用一般现在时。
③提示：针对Harry是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，语句通顺，书写规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写明自己观点，建议Harry选择汉语课程以及选择的原因。
第二步，结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①have an interest in...对……感兴趣
②more and more popular越来越受欢迎
③share with sb.和某人分享
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose Chinese course.(宾语从句)
②It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs.(it作形式主语)
2．成长过程中，总会有各种各样的烦恼。校英文电子报开设了Talk with Teenagers专栏，倾听青少年的心声，帮助青少年解决烦恼。以下是几位青少年的近来烦恼，他们向专栏积极反映，寻求建议。假如你是Sunny，请你仔细阅读他们的问题，从中选择一位同学，用英语写一封回信，提出你的中肯建议。
要求：
1. 称呼栏需补充完整；
2. 词数：80—100（正文开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
e-newspaper
Teenagers Worries
Tom Everyday I do my homework slowly and stay up too late. I am weak in many subjects. I want to improve my study. What should I do
Anna My parents are often busy and they have no time to stay with me. Also, I don’t have any close friends. I feel very lonely. What should I do
Daniel I’m too fat. I want to lose some weight healthily. Do you know any good ways
Dear __________,
I’m sorry to know that you have problems. I’m glad to help you.
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Sunny
【答案】例文
Dear Anna,
I’m sorry to know that you have problems. I’m glad to help you. I’m writing to give you some advice.
Firstly, you should be active. Try to overcome your shyness and communicate with your parents and your classmates. In this way, they can better know you. Secondly, be more confident and outgoing. People around you will notice you. When you are full of passion, it’s much easier for you to draw others’ attention. Lastly, joining some clubs and activities also helps a lot. You may make some good friends by discussing and working with others.
To sum up, I hope that my advice can be useful to you. I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Sunny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：从表格中选择一位同学，针对其提出的问题进行回复，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补充称呼，对安娜遇到的问题表示遗憾，并表明可以给其提供一些建议。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。针对安娜遇到的问题提出三点建议。
第三步，书写结语。希望这些建议能够帮助到安娜。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth.努力做某事
②be full of充满
③to sum up总之
[高分句型]
①Try to overcome your shyness and communicate with your parents and your classmates.（祈使句肯定形式）
②When you are full of passion, it’s much easier for you to draw others’ attention.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．假如你是李华，你的好友Mike写信告诉你，他的父母不准他在爱好上花费太多的时间，也不允许他和朋友逛街超过晚上九点。最近他和父母难以沟通，他为此很伤心。请你给他回一封信，就如何与父母相处给出你的建议。
写作要点：
1）表示对Mike的理解；
2）就他的问题展开分析；
3）给Mike提供一些与父母相处的建议。
写作要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3）字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰；
4）100词左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents, which lets you down. I see that your parents didn’t allow you to spend too much time on hobbies, and they also didn’t allow you to go shopping with your friends beyond 9 p.m. At present, learning is the most important for you. We should listen to our parents. We also need appropriate relaxation, such as running, painting or listening to music.
For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do Firstly, we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them. It’s not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.
I hope these suggestions will help you. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示对Mike的理解并对他的问题进行分析；
第二步，给对方一些如何与父母相处的建议；
第三步，书写结语，希望建议对对方有用。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
②get on with sb与某人相处
③spend too much time on在某事上花太多时间
[高分句型]
①we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. (定语从句)
②I hope these suggestions will help you. (宾语从句)
4．校园广播节目是同学们获取校园资讯的途径之一。假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语广播节目拟开设听众来信专栏，请你给该专栏投稿。
内容包括：
(1)你喜欢该节目的哪一位主持人，请就其工作谈两点原因；
(2)你对英语节目的两点建议；
(3)你对节目的祝愿。
参考词汇：host男主持， hostess 女主持
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，语意连贯；
4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
温馨提示：抄写原文者不得分。
Dear editors,
I am a big fan of the English programs of our school radio stations.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear editors,
I am a big fan of the English programs of our school radio stations.
The hostess I like best is named Alice. On the one hand, her voice sounds very sweet. Whenever I hear her program, I feel very relaxing and comfortable. On the other hand, her English pronunciation is very good. We are easy to understand. However, I’d like to give you two suggestions. First, the English news isn’t always the latest. Second, you should share some ways of studying English on programs to improve our English.
All in all, I hope the English programs will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己最喜欢哪一位主持人及两点原因；
第二步、介绍自己对英语节目的两点建议；
第三步、表达对节目的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand一方面
②on the other hand另一方面
③would like to想要
④all in all总而言之
⑤better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①Whenever I hear her program, I feel very relaxing and comfortable.(whenever引导时间状语从句)
5．下面是九年级学生王云在你校“英语学习网”留言板发布的一条求助信息。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
I’m poor in English writing and I want to improve it. First, I don’t know what to write about. Second, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in my writing. Could you please give me some advice Many thanks. Wang Yun Class 3 Grade 9
要点提示：
1.多阅读，扩大词汇量；
2.养成写作的习惯；
3.……
要求：
1.内容须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：vocabulary词汇
Dear Wang Yun,
To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice.
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I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Hi, Wang Yun,
To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice.
To begin with, you don’t know what to write about. I think you should read more. By reading you can increase your vocabulary. If you have a large vocabulary, it is easier to express yourself in writing. Also reading is a great way to help you experience different kinds of writing. What’s more, why don’t you fall into the habit of writing Write something every day. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” You could begin by writing short ones about everything you’re interested in.
Then, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in your writing. Don’t worry about it. I advise you to do lots of grammar exercises in your free time. By doing so, you’ll improve your grammar.
I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文。
②时态：主要使用一般现在时。
③提示：作文需要包含三个要点，其中两个已给出（多阅读，扩大词汇量；养成写作的习惯），还需要补充一个要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出话题；
第二步，中间部分详细阐述每个建议，并适当增加细节；
第三步，结尾总结，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a large vocabulary 丰富的词汇量
②fall into the habit of 养成……的习惯
③in your free time 在你的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①If you have a large vocabulary, it is easier to express yourself in writing.（条件状语从句）
②As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”（引用谚语，增强了文章的说服力）
③By doing so, you’ll improve your grammar.（介词短语作方式状语）
6．假设你是学生张磊，刚刚收到笔友 Joe的求助信。请你根据来信内容给他提供一些帮助和建议。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I get into a new school and meet some problems. Can you help me
I’m too shy to make new friends. When I have difficulty with my homework, I don’t know who I can ask for help. What should I do
Joe
提示词： outgoing, friendly, help others
要求：
1. 语句通顺， 意思连贯， 书写工整；
2. 文章不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
3. 词数： 60词左右。(开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数)
Dear Joe,
I’m happy that you talk to me about your problems. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Zhang Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear Joe,
I’m happy that you talk to me about your problems. Here is my advice.
First, to be more outgoing, you should find groups that are close to your interests. In this way, you’ll meet the students who are like you. Second, be kind and friendly to them and try your best to help them when they’re in trouble. If you do so, you will have no problem making friends with them. When you have difficulty in doing homework, they will be glad to help.
I really hope you can solve the problems and get on well with the students in your new school.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据材料所给信件内容提出合理化建议，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系表达。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明信件主题，引出下文；
第二步，详细介绍具体的建议；
第三步，表达祝愿，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be close to接近
②try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
③in trouble在困境中
[高分句型]
①Second, be kind and friendly to them and try your best to help them when they’re in trouble.（时间状语从句）
②If you do so, you will have no problem making friends with them. （条件状语从句）
7．要想保持健康，良好的生活方式必不可少。父母忙于工作而很少顾及自己的健康，身体都处于“亚健康”状态。请你给父母提一些改善健康状况的建议，并向他们表达你的关心。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 词数100左右。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Dad and Mom,
I hope you are both well. I know you are very busy with your work and may not have much time to take care of your health. I am worried about your “sub-health” state, so I want to give you some suggestions to improve your health.
First, try to have a balanced diet. Eat more fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, and reduce the intake of junk food and sugary drinks. Second, make sure to get enough sleep. Go to bed early and get up at a regular time. Third, do more exercise. You can take a walk, jog, or do some other physical activities to keep your body active.
Also, try to reduce stress. Find some ways to relax, such as listening to music, reading books, or spending time with family and friends. Don’t forget to take breaks during work and avoid overworking.
I hope you can take my suggestions seriously and take good care of your health. I love you both and want you to be healthy and happy.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文主要是给父母提一些改善健康状况的建议，并向他们表达你的关心，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，给父母提供一些改善健康状况的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of 照顾
②be worried about 担心
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Go to bed early and get up at a regular time. (祈使句)
②I hope you can take my suggestions seriously and take good care of your health. (宾语从句)
8．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
我校英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是负责该栏目的Henry。近日，你收到一封署名为Mr. Worried的求助信，信的内容大致如下：面对快节奏的初三学习生活，他感到压力很大，偶尔还会失眠。最近，他发现自己常常稀里糊涂，似乎记忆力也出现了问题，为此感到十分焦虑。请给他写一封回信，针对他遇到的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议。
注意：
●短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
●照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Worried,
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Sincerely,
Henry
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Worried,
I’ve received your letter and understand your concerns about the stress and challenges of junior high life. It’s normal to feel this way. Here is my advice.
First of all, you should balance study and rest. Make sure you have a schedule that includes time for both studying and relaxing. Taking breaks can actually improve your focus and memory. What’s more, it’s a good idea to stay active. Physical activity can help reduce stress and improve sleep. Try to do some exercise in your daily routine.
Hope my advice can be helpful to you.
Sincerely,
Henry
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是针对求助信中的问题谈谈你的看法并给出两条合理的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，针对他遇到的问题，谈谈自己的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②make sure确保
③stay active保持活跃
[高分句型]
Make sure you have a schedule that includes time for both studying and relaxing. (that引导的定语从句)
9．假设你是Mike，你朋友Jack在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到紧张和郁闷。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信，给他提一些建议，帮助他克服困难，轻松愉快地学习和生活。
提示：
1. 每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候；
2. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通；
3. 关于如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活提一至两条建议。
要求：
1. 不得在作文中出现学校和自己的真实名字；
2. 语句连贯、通顺，60-70词。已给出部分，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries.
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Yours,
Mike
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. But I think talking to someone helps a lot. First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it. Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Last, it’s best to smile at yourself and never keep problems to yourself.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明每个人都有紧张和苦恼的时候；
第二步，就面对的问题或烦恼给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb. 与某人交流
②cut ... in half 把……切成两半
③take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①First, if you have problems with study or life, you should communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Then, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.（动名词作主语）
10．假定你是李华，你校交换生 Ethan 在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难，因此他正通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴(reading buddy)，请你根据以下内容提示，用英文写一封自荐信，表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴，并为他提出相关建议。词数 80 左右。
Able to do recite lots of ancient Chinese poems
Advise to do ①watch Chinese TV programs ②learn Chinese songs ③read… ④…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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【答案】例文
Dear Ethan,
I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy. I would be delighted to be a partner with you. I have a strong passion for ancient Chinese poetry and have spent considerable time studying their meanings and contexts. Additionally, I am good at both English and Chinese, which can help us communicate with each other well. As for our reading plan, I suggest we meet twice a week in the library to discuss and interpret poems together.
This will not only enhance our understanding but also make the learning process enjoyable.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括自我介绍、表达愿意成为共读伙伴的意愿、提出相关建议等。考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的信息，并适当添加细节以增强信件的连贯性和说服力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头部分，直接回应Ethan的广播请求，表明自己愿意成为他的共读伙伴；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，书写结语。作者以期待Ethan回复的方式作为结语，表达了对未来共读合作的积极期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in 在……方面有困难
②be delighted to 很高兴做某事
③have a strong passion for 对……有强烈的热情
④enhance 提高，增强
[高分句型]
I suggest we meet twice a week in the library to discuss and interpret poems together.（宾语从句，“suggest+宾语从句”结构）
11．为更好地开展社团活动，红星学校学生会围绕“New Clubs, More Fun”这一主题征集意见稿。假如你是李华，请你参考问卷内容写一封信给学生会。
要求：
（1）包含所有提示信息，可适当扩展，所给提示语供选择使用；
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
（3）词数60 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示语：
expect (期望) develop our interest in...show our talents (展示才能) be close to nature
Questionnaire (问卷)
Dear studentsWe’d like to know your ideas about school clubs. Please complete the questionnaire and return it to us. Students’ Union
1.What is your hobby □ Reading books □ Taking photos □ Playing basketball □ Others_______ 2. What club do you want to join □Music club □ Sports club □ Reading club □ Others_______ 3.What is your advice (建议) on club activities □ Go hiking □ Act out stories □ Play musical instruments □ Others 4.The reasons for your advice. _________________________________________________________
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs.
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Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs. As for me, playing the piano is my favourite thing to do in my free time. So I would really like to join the Music Club at school.
For club activities, I suggest we have regular classes to learn more knowledge about different kinds of music. We could also organize music concerts to show our talents. I believe these activities will help us improve our musical skills, build our stage confidence, and also make new friends with those who have similar interests.
I’m really looking forward to joining the Music Club! And I hope my ideas do help and work!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好以及想加入哪个俱乐部；
第二步，给出对活动的建议和理由；
第三步，最后表达期待和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②different kinds of不同种类的
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
I believe these activities will help us improve our musical skills, build our stage confidence, and also make new friends with those who have similar interests.（宾语从句，定语从句）
12．假如你是Susan，你的朋友Leo最近心情不好，他觉得自己很努力在学习，成绩却不理想，另外，他还觉得孤独缺少朋友，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写一封信，针对他的问题提出你的建议。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
2.语句通顺，符合逻辑，内容可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实人名或班级。
Dear Leo,
I’m sorry to hear that
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Yours,
Susan
【答案】例文：
Dear Leo,
I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling down. About your study, you should remember that hard work often pays off, so don’t give up. Maybe you can change a better learning method. For example, try to review what you’ve learned regularly and seek help from teachers or classmates if needed. As for feeling lonely, join school clubs or activities where you can meet people with similar interests. Making friends takes time, but you will find people who care about you. Stay positive and keep reaching out. I’m here for you.
Yours,
Susan
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干中Leo提到的问题给出建议，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表达对对方的苦恼很遗憾；
第二步，从“学习，交友”等方面给出建议；
第三步，最后再次表达支持。
[亮点词汇]
① hard work努力工作
② give up放弃
③ pay off得到回报
④ care about关心
[高分句型]
① About your study, you should remember that hard work often pays off, so don’t give up.（宾语从句）
② Making friends takes time, but you will find people who care about you.（定语从句）

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