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2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文（十一）
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《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档：中考英语写作备考的专业之选。
精准贴合考纲：深度剖析中考英语写作考纲要求，涵盖记叙文、议论文、应用文等全题型，精准匹配考试场景，助力考生有的放矢地备考。
专业范文引领：由资深英语教育专家精心编撰范文，语言地道、结构严谨，词汇与句式丰富多样，为考生提供高质量的写作范例，引领写作方向。
深度写作指导：深入解析写作思路，精准点拨要点，标注亮点词汇与高分句型，助力考生领悟写作精髓，提升语言运用与表达能力。
高效背诵积累：考前冲刺必备，篇幅精炼，便于考生快速背诵，积累实用词汇与句式，灵活运用到考试写作中，提高答题效率与质量。
专业打造，助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出，轻松斩获高分。
一、书面表达
1．马上毕业的你对即将到来的暑假一定有很多规划吧？假如你是李华，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向你校英语广播站投稿，分享你的暑假计划。
内容包括：
1.合理规划时间
2.妥善处理学习物品（旧书、笔记本……）
3.……
要求：
1.词数100左右：
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯：
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】范文
As graduation approaches, I’ve made a detailed plan for my summer vacation.
First, I’ll manage my time wisely. I plan to create a daily schedule balancing study and relaxation. Mornings will be for reviewing weak subjects, while afternoons are for hobbies like reading and painting. Evenings will be family time or outdoor activities. Second, I’ll organize my study materials. I’ll donate useful textbooks to younger students and recycle old notebooks. Important notes will be kept neatly for future reference. Additionally, I want to learn new skills, such as basic cooking and photography. I’ll also volunteer at the local library to get experience.
This summer will be both interesting and meaningful. I hope everyone enjoys their vacation too!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：作文需要完整包含时间规划、学习物品处理、技能学习三个要点，可适当发挥；
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明制定暑假计划；
第二步：分三点详细说明具体计划内容；
第三步：总结展望，表达美好期待。
[亮点词汇]
① manage time wisely 明智地管理时间
② balance study and relaxation 平衡学习和放松
③ get experience 获取经验
④ both interesting and meaningful 既有趣又有意义
[高分句型]
Important notes will be kept neatly for future reference. (被动语态的使用)
2．回顾学习生涯，我们一定上过许多精彩纷呈的课程。也许是一场妙趣横生的科学实验(science experiment)，也许是一次别开生面的话剧表演(drama performance)，又或许是一场激情澎湃的辩论赛(debate)……这些课堂，都给我们留下了深刻的印象。请你结合下面图示信息，以“An UnusualClassroom Lesson”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
要求：1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
An Unusual Classroom Lesson
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【答案】例文
An Unusual Classroom Lesson
I attended an unusual classroom lesson at my school last winter. Instead of being in a typical classroom, we had the lesson in the school library.
The lesson was about storytelling and creative writing. Our teacher wanted us to explore different ways to tell stories, so she encouraged us to pick a book and create our own version of it. We worked in small groups, discussing our ideas and writing our stories together.
What made this lesson special was the focus on creativity and teamwork. I learned how to think outside the box and how to express my ideas through writing. This experience sparked my love for storytelling and helped me become more confident in my writing skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据写作要点讲述自己从课程中得到的收获，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，讲述这节课的时间和地点；
第二步，阐述这节课的内容；
第三步，阐述自己学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①become confident in在……方面变得自信
②focus on集中
③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
④instead of代替
[高分句型]
①What made this lesson special was the focus on creativity and teamwork.（what引导主语从句）
②Our teacher wanted us to explore different ways to tell stories, so she encouraged us to pick a book and create our own version of it.（so引导结果状语从句）
3．三年的初中生活，你一定高兴过，也伤心过，经历过失败的痛苦，也感受过成功的喜悦，在初中生活即将结束之际，你一定有很多心里话想对大家说，请根据以下的内容提示和要求，以“My Words to You All”为题写一篇英语短文。
内容提示：1.感谢老师教会我如何学习和做人；
2.感谢同学们的帮助，怀念和同学们在一起相处的日子；
3.感谢父母……(至少写两个句子)
注意：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺；
2.词数：80-100 词(短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、学校及地点。
My Words to You All
How time flies! Our junior high school days are coming to an end and I’d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me.
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【答案】例文
My Words to You All
How time flies! Our junior high school days are coming to an end and I’d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me.
Firstly, I’d like to thank my great teachers. They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man. Though they look strict and serious, they are always kind to me. Secondly, I want to thank my friendly classmates. As long as I have trouble, they are always around me. I miss the happy days when we stay with each other. I love all of you. Finally, I’m going to thank my parents. They always look after me very well to keep me healthy. And they often encourage me to work hard at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题——对帮助过我们和和我们待在一起的人表达谢意；
第二步，具体阐述对老师、父母和同学的谢意及原因；
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to sb对某人友好
②keep us healthy保持我们的健康
[高分句型]
①As long as I have trouble, they are always around me. (条件状语从句)
②I miss the happy days when we stay with each other. (时间状语从句)
4．假设你是王华，你的英语老师布置了一篇以“A Gift from the World”为题的短文写作。请结合你的亲身经历，写一篇作文。
内容包括：
1. 描述世界赠予你的“礼物”，如一次难忘的经历、一个陌生人的善意、大自然的启示、某种文化的熏陶等。
2. 谈一谈这份“礼物”如何改变了你。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】范文：
A Gift from the World Last year, I got a special gift from the world—a hiking trip to a beautiful mountain. I went there during the summer vacation with my family. At first, I felt tired and wanted to give up halfway. But then I saw the breathtaking view at the top—the clear sky, the green trees, and the singing birds. I realized how powerful and peaceful nature can be.
That moment changed me. I became more patient and stronger. I also started to care more about nature and tried to protect the environment in daily life. This gift—nature’s beauty and lesson—will always stay in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述一次“世界给予的礼物”；
② 时态：以一般过去时为主，结合现在时表达感受；
③ 内容：描述事件+表达改变；
④ 主题：突出“礼物”的意义及其对自身的影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步：交代“礼物”是什么，发生的背景与过程；
第二步：描写细节，让“礼物”生动感人；
第三步：说明这份“礼物”如何改变了你，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① at first 首先
② give up 放弃
③ care about 关注
[高分句型]
I realized how powerful and peaceful nature can be.（宾语从句）
5．假定你是王鹏，以下是你的笔友George发给你的一封电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给George回一封邮件，词数80左右。
Subject: Talking too much
From: George
To: Wang Peng
Dear Wang Peng,
One of my classmates doesn’t like me because I talk too much. I used to see it as an advantage. I thought it would help, so people wouldn’t feel bored. I also actively answer teachers’ questions. People should like me, but now I see that my talking might be a problem. What should I do
Yours,
George
Subject: Talking too much
From: Wang Peng
To: George
Dear George,
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Yours,
Wang Peng
【答案】例文
Dear George,
I think we shouldn’t worry too much about what people think of us. Conversation is a kind of art. If you are good at keeping a conversation going, that’s a very important skill.
However, I don’t know how much you talk and what kind of things you say. So, I can’t say whether your classmate is right. Your classmate might be completely wrong. I think you had better ask her for some examples. Tell her that she might be right, but you want to know how to do better.
Maybe you will decide that you are not the problem. Maybe the real problem is that your classmate is not humorous and bad at conversation.
Yours,
Wang Peng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需针对George的困扰提出具体建议，语气友好。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先对George的沟通交流能力给予肯定；
第二步，归因问题并给出具体的解决方法。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担心
②had better do sth.最好做某事
③ask for请求
[高分句型]
①If you are good at keeping a conversation going, that’s a very important skill.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I can’t say whether your classmate is right.（whether引导的宾语从句）
③Maybe the real problem is that your classmate is not humorous and bad at conversation.（that引导的表语从句）
6．随着现代化社会的高度发展，团队合作成为新时代人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通是团队合作中重要的品质。请你结合自己团队合作的一次经历，分享自己的收获和感悟。
要求：
1.词数80-100；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. When we meet difficulties, we can overcome them successfully by pulling together or through teamwork.
I like playing basketball very much. And it’s my dream to become a famous basketball player like Yao Ming. However, last term, my team lost an important game because of me. I lost a goal and let the whole team down. My mistake made me angry and disappointed. I even wanted to give up playing basketball.
Thanks to my teammates, they told me not to be too hard on myself because I was not the only reason my team lost. Everyone was responsible for the result. As a result, we cheered up and learned from our mistakes. During the following month, we worked so hard that we won the next game together. I felt lucky because I was on a winning team.
Through my own experience, I realize when we work in a team, we should support each other and learn to work together. Teamwork is powerful and we can benefit a lot from teamwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要交代团队合作的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍自己团队合作的一次经历；
第三步，总结自己团队合作的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②thanks to幸亏
③be responsible for对……负责
[高分句型]
①When we meet difficulties, we can overcome them successfully by pulling together or through teamwork. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Thanks to my teammates, they told me not to be too hard on myself because I was not the only reason my team lost. (because引导原因状语从句)
7．人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）正飞速发展，逐渐融入我们生活的方方面面。它通过计算机模拟人的思维和行为，在诸多领域发挥着重要作用。请你根据以下要点提示，根据思维导图内容，并以“The Impact of AI on Our Future Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈AI 对未来生活的影响。
要求：
1.涵盖要点提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯。
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4.严禁在文中出现真实的地名、人名、校名。
The Impact of AI on Our Future Lives
In the not-so-distant future, artificial intelligence (AI) will surely become an integral part of our daily lives._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】示例1：
The Impact of AI on Our Future Lives
In the not-so-distant future, artificial intelligence (AI) will surely become an integral part of our daily lives.
AI will have many useful applications. For example, smart homes can anticipate our needs. When we’re on the way home, the smart system can turn on the air-conditioner and adjust the temperature to a comfortable level. Self-driving cars will also be common. They can avoid accidents by reacting quickly to dangerous situations.?
AI brings us lots of advantages. It can save our time and energy. We don’t need to do some boring housework or spend much time on traffic jams. Our lives will be more convenient and efficient.?
However, AI also causes some problems. Our privacy may be in danger. AI systems might collect and use our personal information. And there are ethical problems. Sometimes, it’s hard to tell if the decisions made by AI are right or wrong.?
To solve these problems, we should make rules to protect our privacy. And we need to guide AI to develop in a proper way.
示例2：
The Impact of AI on Our Future Lives
In the not-so-distant future, artificial intelligence (AI) will surely become an integral part of our daily lives.
AI will be widely used. Smart homes will know when we get up and prepare breakfast for us. Self-driving cars can take us to school or work safely. They can also find the best routes to save time.?
AI makes our lives easier. We can use it to do difficult math problems or search for information quickly. It helps us learn better and faster.?
But AI also has some issues. Our private information might be leaked. And when AI makes decisions in some important matters, we may not know if they are fair.?
To make AI better for us, we should set rules to control it. And we must learn to use AI in a good way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述AI在生活中的应用及其带来的便利；
第二步，讨论AI可能引发的问题；
第三步，提出解决问题的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① integral part 不可或缺的部分
② anticipate our needs 预测我们的需求
③ self-driving cars 自动驾驶汽车
④ ethical problems 伦理问题
⑤ protect our privacy 保护我们的隐私
[高分句型]
① When we’re on the way home, the smart system can turn on the air-conditioner and adjust the temperature to a comfortable level.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ To solve these problems, we should make rules to protect our privacy and guide AI to develop in a proper way.（不定式短语作目的状语）
8．生活中有一些人对你很重要。这个人可能是你的父母、老师或朋友。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈对你很重要的人是谁，为什么他（她）对你很重要，以及你想为他（她）做些什么。
提示问题：
Who is very important to you
Why is he/she so important
What are you going to do for him/her
要求：
1. 内容必须包含以上问题，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 词数不少于60词。
3. 文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
My mother is very important to me and I love her.
She is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but she gets up early every morning to make breakfast for me. What’s more, she often helps me and encourages me to solve problems by myself when I’m in trouble. With her help, I made great progress in my study. She respects my choices and never checks my mobile phone.
I always want to do something for my mom. Mother’s Day is coming. I’m going to make a surprise breakfast for her on that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文 ，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：围绕提示问题介绍对自己最重要的人是谁以及原因，并介绍自己打算为对方做什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。开篇表明母亲对自己的重要性以及自己对母亲的爱；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍母亲为自己做的事，像早起做早餐、帮助和鼓励自己解决问题、尊重自己选择等，体现母亲的关爱；
第三步，结尾说明母亲节即将来临，表达自己要为母亲做惊喜早餐的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①important重要的
②encourage鼓励
③solve解决
④respect尊重
[高分句型]
①She is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but she gets up early every morning to make breakfast for me.（but表示转折）
②What’s more, she often helps me and encourages me to solve problems by myself when I’m in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
9．请你以“Take care of yourself”为题写一篇英语作文。
内容包括：
1. 照顾好自己的重要性；
2. 具体应该如何做（身体健康、心理健康）；
3. 你对照顾好自己的看法。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100左右，标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Take Care of Yourself
In today’s fast-paced (快节奏的) world, taking care of ourselves is important.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文1
Take Care of Yourself
In today’s fast-paced (快节奏的) world, taking care of ourselves is important. Having a healthy body and mind enables us to enjoy life to the fullest and achieve our goals.
Firstly, we need to pay attention to our physical health. If we want to keep in good health, taking regular exercise and having enough sleep are necessary. They are great ways for us to be full of energy. Secondly, we are supposed to take care of our mental health. Learning to deal with stress is the key to maintaining mental happiness. It is quite important for us to build positive relationships with friends and family, which provide support and a sense of belonging for us.
In conclusion, by paying attention to both physical health and mental health, we can lead a happier and healthier life.
范文2
Take Care of Yourself
In today’s fast-paced (快节奏的) world, taking care of ourselves is important. Having a healthy body and mind lets us enjoy our lives and reach our goals.
Our physical health is important. To stay healthy, regular exercise and enough sleep are needed. They make us energetic. We should also keep a balanced diet, including fruit, vegetables and whole grains. Of course, taking care of our mental health is important. By having a positive attitude and learning to deal with stress, we can maintain mental happiness. Talking with our friends and family gives us support and a sense of belonging.
Taking care of ourselves requires us to keep physically and mentally healthy. A healthy body can be helpful for us to lead a happier and healthier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。照顾好自己很重要；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从身体健康、心理健康两个方面具体介绍如何照顾好自己；
第三步，书写结语。介绍照顾好自己的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②be full of充满
③take care of照顾
④deal with处理，应对
⑤in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Having a healthy body and mind enables us to enjoy life to the fullest and achieve our goals.（动名词作主语）
②If we want to keep in good health, taking regular exercise and having enough sleep are necessary.（if引导条件状语从句）
③It is quite important for us to build positive relationships with friends and family, which provide support and a sense of belonging for us.（it固定句型；which引导非限制性定语从句）
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