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(共27张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Unit 1
Learning objectives：
1.Memorize some words and expressions about offering advice;
记住关于提供建议的单词和表达；
2. To know the structrue and language features of a letter of advice;
了解建议信的结构和语言特征；
3. To learn how to write a letter of advice.
学会写建议信。
书信的种类
投诉信
（letter of complaint）
咨询信
（letter of inquiry）
申请信
（letter of application）
介绍信
（letter of introduction）
感谢信
（letter of thanks）
邀请信
（letter of invitation）
道歉信
（letter of apology）
推荐信
（letter of recommendation）
建议信
（letter of advice）
建议信的目的
Q: Why do we need to write a letter of advice
A: Because one of your（李华的） friends has trouble/facing a problem and he/she needs your help/advice.
Task 1 预习检测
recommend vt.　 建议　　　　　 unhealthy adj.　　不健康的
encourage vt. 鼓励 useful adj. 有用的
advice vt. 忠告，建议 situation n. 情况
look forward to 盼望，期望 be worried about 对…… 担心
be attracted to 喜爱 be addicted to 对……上瘾
concentrate on 集中精力于 be good for 对……有益
make friends 交朋友 hear from 收到……的来信
enjoy oneself/have fun 玩得愉快 tip/advice/suggestion n.　建议
in one’s spare time 在某人闲暇时 call for 需要
have trouble/difficulty in doing ... 做……有困难
take one’s advice 接受某人的建议 put one’s heart into 全心全意
share happiness and sorrow with... 和……同甘共苦
Task 2
1.What is Worried Friend's problem
2.Do you think Ms Luo's advice is useful Why or why not
3.What kind of advice did Susan Luo gave to this Worried Friend What other kinds of advice would you give
His/Her friend, ChenLei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Yes，I do./ No,I don't. Because...
3 advice：①talk to his friend; ②encourage his/her friend to try new hobbies; ③discuss the problem together.
Task 3
Try to tell your partner what does the passage(letter) mainly talks about.
Task 4
文章是什么体裁？
第几人称？
格式是怎么样的？
用的是什么时态？
主题是什么？
文章是如何组织的（结构）？
书信
第一人称
日期，称呼，正文，落款
一般现在时
Worried Friend非常担心他的朋友Chen Lei痴迷于电脑游戏，对他提一些建议，
Learning to write after the model
10 September，2018
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
I know what the problem is
I know how you feel
This is my advice and reason(s)
reason（s）
Date & greeting
Learning to write after the model
Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together
I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.
All the best，
Susan Luo
I think my advice will help
Wishes & Signature
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
1) Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/ her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Suggestion Reason
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
Suggestion Reason
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion Reason
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
2) Draft your letter according to the outline.
___________
Dear _________,
You wrote that ___________
I understand that _________
I think __________________
because ________________.
I am sure that ___________
Best wishes,
____________
Write the date and greet the reader.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.
Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.
Explain your reason(s).
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter.
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。
建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或看法。
内容包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出这种建议的理由等。
建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括日期、称呼、正文、结束语和签名五个部分。
开头 (beginning)
开门见山，引出话题，说明写信目的。（安慰对方并提出自己的看法。）
主体 (body)
对所提出的问题进行陈述，提出合理的建议并说明理由。（根据写作要点提示，提出建议并说明理由。）
结尾 (ending)
呼应开头，重申观点，表达祝愿。
建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
Four steps of writing a letter of advice
A State the _________ / writing purpose
B Express ______________
C Give ____________________
D Express __________________
understanding
advice and reason(s)
confidence/ wishes
problem
Letter of Advice
常用句式 useful expressions
A. 陈述问题/写作目的（State the problem / writing purpose）
You wrote that...
It is common for teenagers to do...
I am sorry that you have trouble in doing...
B. 表示理解（Express understanding）
I understand how you feel.
I know...
I can imagine...
C. 提出建议及原因 （Give advice and reason(s) ）
I would like to suggest/recommend that sb do…
I think you shoud/ had better do sth
Why not do… / Why don’t you do… / What about doing…
It is useful / helpful / important / necessary…for you to do…
It will certainly help a lot to do sth.
If I were you, I would do...
常用句式 useful expressions
D. 表达信心/祝愿（Express confidence/ wishes）
I'm sure that...
I hope you will find my advice helpful.
I hope you will consider my suggestions.
This will help you ....
常用句式 useful expressions
To begin with…; First/Firstly,…
What’s more…;Besides, …; In addition,…; Second/ Secondly,…
Last but not least…; In a word/In short…; Third/ Thirdly, …
3) Exchange drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft.
Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
1．段首常用语(照应材料，表明写作意图)：
①I am writing to express my views concerning...
②After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...
③You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some suggestions.
④I am very glad to hear that you want to...
建议信常用句式：
2．表达建议常用语：
①I think the most suitable...for you is...
②I would like to suggest that you (should)...
③You'd better.../It's better to...
④As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion/...
⑤For one thing...; for another...
⑥If I were you, I would...
⑦It seems to me that you could...
⑧I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
3．段尾常用语：
①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.
It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo

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