高中英语人教版(2019)必修第三册读后续写技能之环境描写课件(4份打包)

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UNIT 4 SPACE EXPLORATION
Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(四)
江河湖海
?高级词汇
1.ferry n.渡船;渡口
2.ripple n.涟漪
3.broad adj.宽广的
4.still adj.静止的
5.vast adj.广阔的
6.shallow adj.浅的
7.roar n.& vt.咆哮
8.rushing adj.湍急的
9.lakeside n.湖边,湖畔
10.reflect vt.反映;反射
11.glitter/spark/shine v.闪光;闪烁
12.muddy adj.泥泞的,浑浊的
13.bottomless adj.深不见底的
14.winding adj.蜿蜒的,弯弯曲曲的
15.rough adj.汹涌的,风浪大的
16.sparkling adj.波光粼粼的,闪烁的
17.choppy adj.波浪起伏的,汹涌的
18.glassy adj.像玻璃镜面一样光滑的,平静清澈的
?高级语块
1.to dry up枯竭
2.a freshwater lake淡水湖
3.a man-made lake人工湖
4.slow and gentle缓慢而温和
5.glittering surface波光粼粼的水面
6.to wind through弯弯曲曲地流过
7.the placid surface of the lake平静的湖面
8.to run through my hometown流经我的家乡
9.to row a boat on the water/lake水/湖上划船
10.to roar down the mountain(水流从山上)咆哮而下
11.to see right to the bottom (水很清澈)直接看到底部
12.to walk along the bank of the river沿着河岸漫步
13.to walk by the coastline沿着海岸线漫步
14.to watch the tide coming in and going out看潮涨潮落
15.to watch the tide coming onto the beach看潮水涌向沙滩
?亮点句式
1.A furious gale rose and stirred up the sea.
狂风骤起,大海咆哮不断。
2.It was morning, and the new sun sparkled gold across the ripples of the gentle sea.
清早,初升的太阳照着平静的海面,微波荡漾,闪耀着金色的光芒。
3.Masses of water shook the beach with a booming sound.
滔滔海水带着低沉的声响摇撼着海岸。
4.We stepped barefoot on the soft sandy beach, the waves poured on my calf, as if my mother was gently touching me, and my heart was suddenly warm.
我们光着脚丫踩在软绵绵的沙滩上,浪花扑过来打在我的小腿上,仿佛妈妈正在温柔地抚摸着我,我的心里顿时暖暖的。
5.The water of the lake was touched by the golden rays of the morning sun.How peaceful and beautiful it looked to him!
湖水被金色的朝晖抚摸着,在他看来,那是多么静谧和美丽啊!
6.In the distance, they could see the misty cloud that rose from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
在远处,他们可以看到湖的南边尼亚加拉大瀑布上方升腾着的雾霭。
?情境应用
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.湖水深蓝,阳光在波平如镜的湖面上熠熠生辉。
The water ________________ and the sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface.
2.阳光普照下的海湾,水面上点缀着渔民棕色的独木舟。
The sunlit waters of the bay __________________ the brown canoes of fishermen.
was deep blue
are dotted with
3.静的湖面就像一面镜子,映照出明媚的月光和如画的风景。
The calm lake nearby was just like a mirror________________________
__________ and picturesque scenery.
4.平静的湖水在冉冉升起的太阳下像玻璃一样闪闪发光。
The calm lake ___________________ in the rising sun.
reflecting the bright
moonlight
shone like glass
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.海浪永不平息。
The waves of the sea are never at rest.
2.微风在湖面上吹起了涟漪。
A gentle breeze made little ripples on the lake.
3.咆哮的大海渐渐平静下来了。
The roaring sea gradually calmed down.
4.海还是安安静静的,好像睡着了一样,没有风,也没有浪。
The sea was still quiet as if it had fallen asleep, without wind or waves.
Ⅲ.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写词数为100词左右。写作时尽量使用表示“江河湖海”的词汇和句式。
Last weekend, I went to Mark's new house near a forest for a little get-together.After lunch when I was chatting with him and his wife Cody, he asked me, “Hey, Thora, have you ever been to a secret spot?” Before I could even finish saying no, Cody and Mark were already at the door with their jackets on.And the next moment we were heading out into the forest with a camera, a fishing net and a plastic bucket.
We walked through the forest along a path by a small river.Breathing the fresh air, we three talked and laughed all the way.
“Hey! What are you guys doing?” someone suddenly shouted from behind.Mark and Cody's eyes immediately widened, and without a word they started running.I had no choice but to follow them, getting my shoes wet and dirty with mud.We probably ran for about 10 minutes before Mark and Cody slowed down.I stopped to catch my breath and asked, “Who was that?”
Mark replied, “The most annoying neighbor ever.There's no telling what could happen if he caught up with us.He is always making fun of us.I dislike him.” We kept walking on for a few more minutes.
Then a beautiful lake appeared before our eyes.
“Wow! Amazing!” I shouted and could hardly hold back my excitement.
思路点拨:
本文讲述了上个周末,作者去了马克在森林附近的新家,参加了一个小型的聚会。午饭后,他们打算去个神秘的地方,他们就带着相机、渔网和塑料桶走进了森林,沿着一条小河边的小路穿过森林,一个美丽的湖泊出现在我们眼前。
段落续写:由续写第一段段落首句内容“‘哇!太神奇了!’我叫喊着,几乎抑制不住自己的兴奋。”可知,本段可描写湖的美景,湖水又深又蓝,周围有高大的树木,阳光在它晶莹剔透的表面上闪闪发光。环顾四周,我们看见一条船在岸边漂浮。可知,此段重点围绕作者的所见到的美景来写的。
参考范文:
“Wow! Amazing!” I shouted and could hardly hold back my excitement.The lake was vast and the water was deep and blue, looking so peaceful with tall trees around it.The sunlight glittered on its glass-clear surface.Looking around, we saw a boat floating by the shore.“How about going boating?” Mark asked.“Good idea.” I agreed.I was excited to find so many fishes in the lake.Before I could say a word, Mark had cast the fishing net into the water.“Look this way.Let me take a photo of you two.” Cody said, taking out the camera.Hearing that, I quickly approached Mark.But all of a sudden I lost my balance and fell into the water.(共25张PPT)
UNIT 3 DIVERSE CULTURES
Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(三)
花果树木
?高级词汇
1.flower n.花
2.apple n.苹果
3.tree n.树
4.forest n.森林
5.weed n.杂草
6.grassland n.草原/草地
7.wilderness n.野地
8.rose n.玫瑰
9.sunflower n.向日葵
10.cypress n.柏树
11.willow (tree) n.柳树
12.lily n.百合花
13.jasmine n.茉莉花
14.blossom n.& v.花;开花
15.rare adj.稀少的
16.lemon n.柠檬
17.treetop n.树梢
18.leaf n.树叶
19.daisy n.雏菊
20.orchid n.兰花
21.holly n.冬青树
22.orange n.橘子
23.chestnut n.栗子
24.peach n.桃子
25.banana n.香蕉
26.pineapple n.凤梨;菠萝
?高级语块
1.a grassy bank草坡
2.cut/mow the grass割草
3.a lawn with overgrown grass杂草丛生的草地
4.cherry blossom樱花
5.peach blossom桃花
6.apricot blossom杏花
7.a bunch/bouquet of flowers一束花
8.bear flowers/blossoms;come into flowers开花
9.chop/cut down a tree砍倒一棵树
10.be surrounded by trees树木环绕
11.a rose-scented bower玫瑰飘香的树荫
12.the knotty roots of the old oak tree盘根错节的老橡树根
13.fallen leaves落叶
14.dead leaves枯叶
15.be in leaf;come into leaf长出叶子
16.a rose bush/garden玫瑰丛/园
17.freshly squeezed orange juice鲜榨橙汁
18.lemon tea柠檬茶
19.a peach tree桃树
20.a bunch of bananas一串香蕉
21.fresh pineapple新鲜菠萝
?亮点句式
1.The green grass withers and yellows.
绿草枯黄。
2.The peach trees are starting to blossom.
桃树开始绽放了。
3.Flowers die away.=Flowers wither away.
=Flowers fade.
花枯萎/凋谢了。
4.A shower of leaves fell towards the ground.
树叶纷纷扬扬飘向地面。
5.I like the one with pineapples!
我喜欢那个里面有菠萝的!
6.The leaves formed a dark green rose.
这些叶子聚在一起,像是一朵深绿色的玫瑰。
7.The two friends then went under the pine tree which the wasp had shown in the dream.
然后这两个朋友来到梦中黄蜂指示的那棵松树下。
8.Small things stirred in the grass around the tent.
一些小东西在帐篷四周的草丛里窸窸窣窣地动着。
9.We used to meet at weekends and chew the fat over coffee and sunflower seeds.
我们过去经常在周末见面、聊天,一边喝着咖啡,一边吃瓜子。
10.The wind raised the fallen leaves from the ground.
风把落叶从地上刮得飘了起来。
11.But every time I wanted a piece of wood, I had to cut down a tree.
但每一次我需要一块木头时都不得不砍倒一棵树。
12.She is cutting the grass, meanwhile her husband is planting roses.
她在割草,而她丈夫正在种玫瑰。
13.Rain begins to fall and peach trees blossom.
开始下雨了,桃树也开花了。
14.The Japanese maple that stands across the drive had just come into leaf.
车道对面那棵鸡爪枫刚吐新叶。
15.The fence posts took root and grew into the earth!
篱笆桩生了根,长在了地里!
?情境应用
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.___________________________ (叶子开始是淡绿色), and later get darker.
2.This region is the home of ___________________________(很多种类的野花).
3.We hurried on until we _____________________________________
(来到野草丛生的院子).
The leaves start out a pale green
many species of wild flowers
reached a courtyard overgrown with weeds
4.I could smell _____________________________________(瓜和桃熟透了的香甜味道).
5.That flower ________________________________(深深地扎进了我的记忆).I can both see it and smell it, at this moment.
the honeyed ripeness of melons and peaches
has stuck deep root into my memory
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.花开始绽放了。
The flowers are starting to open.
2.这座庭院杂草丛生。
The yard was overgrown with weeds.
3.春天来了,桃花都开了。
The spring comes and peach blossoms/flowers are all open.
4.那位老太太对自己的玫瑰园感到很骄傲。
The old lady takes a lot of pride in her rose garden.
5.那些叶子正面是绿色的,反面是银色的。
The leaves are green on top and silvery on the underside.
Ⅲ.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写词数为100词左右。写作时尽量使用涉及“花果树木”的词汇和句式。
My wife and I went to the Animal Emergency Hospital on Friday last year.We ended up there with Jack.
Jack was seriously ill, before we left we said we were not rich but we wanted to do an act of kindness and gave $1,500 for someone they thought really needed the help.
Within 18 hours the money ended up helping a single mother whose dog had been bitten(咬)by a snake.She had at least one child with serious illness, so the decision had to be made to help the child with the treatment the mother had booked,or to help the dog.We were able to help the dog so she could support her family.The hospital gave her my phone number and I received a heartfelt message from a stranger saying thank you.The vets also said it restored their faith in humanity and good people, which was nice.
We are still not rich, but acts of kindness are important.The fact is that emergency vets are not cheap for ordinary pet owners.I talked with some pet owners there and they said that sometimes they really couldn't afford treatment for their pets.I realized that I should do more then.
I invited some of my close friends to my house for a party about pet treatment.At the party, I asked some dog owners to share photos of their dogs’ lives and tell interesting stories about their interaction with pets as well as how the pets helped them.Everyone benefited saying that they learned a lot about pet therapy from the meeting excitedly.But others cited family difficulties and lack of extra funds to treat their pets.
As a saying says, “Give a rose, hands have lingering fragrance(余香).”
思路点拨:
1.通读全文,把握原文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)故事主线和线索:
①短文主要描述本不富裕的作者捐助1,500美元给兽医诊所希望帮助真正需要帮助的人,这笔钱就帮助了一位狗被蛇咬伤的单身母亲。因为她至少有一个孩子患有重病,需要接受治疗,单身母亲给作者发短信表示感谢。这也让兽医们恢复了对人性和好人的信心。
②续写线索:提出困难——救助行动——感悟收获。
2.细读续写段首句,推测故事情节
由续写段首句内容“俗话说:‘赠人玫瑰,手有余香。’”可知,续写段可描写作者的救助行动和收获。
参考范文:
As a saying says, “Give a rose, hands have lingering fragrance.” I decided to start a rescue group for sick pets.On the one hand, I posted online to recruit people who had experience in animal treatment to join our rescue team, and on the other hand, I conducted publicity in various communities to find pets which were in need of rescue help.More and more families in need received timely help, who gave our team great recognition.Helping others made us happy and made our life more meaningful.(共19张PPT)
UNIT 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY
Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(五)
日月星辰
?高级词汇
1.sky n.天空
2.sun n.太阳
3.moon n.月亮;月球
4.star n.星星
5.sunlight n.阳光
6.moonlight n.月光
7.night n.黑夜
8.shine v.闪耀;闪亮
9.bath v.沐浴
10.dot v.点缀
11.twinkle v.闪烁;闪耀
12.sparkle v.闪烁;闪耀
13.blink v.眨眼;闪烁
14.brightly adv.明亮地
15.overhead adj.头顶上的
?高级语块
1.spectacular sunrise壮观的日出
2.pale moonlight淡淡的月光
3.reach high up into the sky直插云霄
4.the starry sky布满星星的夜空
5.dim moonlight月色朦胧
6.be lit by a full moon被满月照亮
7.the cloudless sky晴朗的天空
8.a beam of sunshine一束阳光
9.burst through the clouds破云而出
10.hide behind the clouds躲在云后
11.the rising /setting sun朝阳/夕阳
12.be bathed in the silver moonlight沐浴在银色的月光下
13.stars twinkle the eyes星星眨眼
14.set in the west在西方落下
15.keep out of the sun避开阳光
16.rise in the east从东方升起
?亮点句式
1.By 3 o'clock in the afternoon, the rain had stopped and the sky was curdled gray burdened with lumps of dark clouds.
下午三点,雨停了,天空灰蒙蒙的,乌云密布。
2.The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the buildings.
太阳开始落山,红色的光芒透过建筑物之间的缝隙。
3.The sky was pale with light blue.Soon a streak of pink dawn broke over the horizon, expanding gradually and becoming brighter and brighter.
天空是淡蓝色的。不久,天边出现了一道粉红色的曙光,逐渐扩大,越来越亮。
4.The moon hid behind the clouds and the stars blinked their eyes in fatigue.
月亮藏在云里,星星略带倦意地眨着眼睛。
5.At first, the sky was dark, but soon a crescent moon slowly revealed its smiling face from the clouds.
一开始天空漆黑一团,但不久一轮弯月从云中缓缓露出笑脸。
6.There's not a single sound at night.Only the glowworms are still awake, carefully weaving a picture in the night sky.
夜里一点声音都没有,只有萤火虫还醒着,小心翼翼地在夜空中织着一幅画。
7.A ray of sunlight shone into my room, like a bunch of glittering gold thread, not only lighting up my room, but also my heart.
一缕阳光照进我的房间里,像一束亮闪闪的金线,不仅照亮了房间,也照亮了我的心田。
8.On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving slowly skywards from the chimney of his house.
在不远处的山丘上,他能看到烟从他房子的烟囱里袅袅升向天空。
9.The sun rose and shone on me, instantly feeling a warm current surging into my heart, blowing away the cold of winter.
太阳升起来,照在我的身上,顿时感到一股暖流涌上了心头,驱散了冬天的寒气。
10.Under the burning sun of midsummer, all the living things seem to have worn out their energy.
在仲夏的烈日下,一切有生命的东西似乎都已用尽了它们的能量。
11.The sky was blue, and the sun was like a soldering iron searing the back of my neck.
天空一碧如洗,烈日如烙铁般炙烤着我的后颈。
?情境应用
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.The sky is blue and _____________________(阳光明媚).
2.The moon _______________________________(在夜空中闪耀).
3.The sky __________________(繁星密布).
4.The clouds parted and _____________(太阳出来了).
5.The hills _______________________(沐浴在阳光下).
is shining brightly in the night sky
the sun is shining
is dotted with stars
the sun shone
are bathed in the sunlight
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.阳光下河面波光粼粼。
The river sparkles in the sunlight.
2.月光在水面上泛起波光。
Moonlight flashed on the water.
3.阳光灿烂,海水湛蓝。
The sun was shining brightly and the sea was clear blue.
4.但是天越来越黑,增加了我们找路的难度。
But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road.
5.星星点缀在空中,对着我们眨眼睛。
Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us.
Ⅲ.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写词数为100词左右。写作时尽量使用表示“日月星辰”的词汇和句式。
(2024·南昌高一检测)
I am Sadie.I love oceans, especially the one near my grandma's house with beautiful shells.Why That's what I am about to tell you.
When we arrived, Grandma told me to go upstairs and unpack my things while she spoke to my mother.When I saw a blue and green painted room with a huge window and a comfortable bed, I thought, “Moving to Florida might not be that bad.”I comforted myself as I walked towards the window.I opened the curtains and saw sky-blue waves slowly washing away the sand on the beach and sea birds flying in the clear sky.The ocean was only a few hundred meters away from here.
After my mother left, Grandma softly touched my shoulder, “I want to take you to the place I called ‘the Big Blue’.And I think you might like it.” (I guess you could know where it is.)
Before I stepped on the sand I could smell the ocean.Together we enjoyed the sunset with a whole lot of yellow and orange.Suddenly she picked out the most beautiful shell I had ever seen in my life.It was almost gold, shining in the sunlight.I couldn't move my eyes off it.
“The beautiful shells here gave me the courage to live on,” Grandma said.
思路点拨:
本文讲述了妈妈知道作者喜欢大海,所以决定把作者送到海边的奶奶家去散心。到了奶奶家之后,奶奶用她自己的经历给作者解开了心结,重拾好心情的故事。续写线索:去海边的奶奶家——奶奶带作者观海——欣赏大自然美景——重拾好心情。
细读续写段首句,推测故事情节由续写段首句内容“奶奶说:‘这里美丽的贝壳给了我生存的勇气。’”可知,续写段要写作者的奶奶告诉作者,观看美丽的大自然会给作者带来美好的享受。作者心情好起来,并相信自己会振作起来。
参考范文:
“The beautiful shells here gave me the courage to live on,” Grandma said.“Honey, you are still happy.Your mother rang me this morning, telling me that you love oceans.Therefore, I brought you here.Also I hope you can get in inspiration and courage.” Hearing this I looked up at the blue sky and the vast sea.The sun was shining.Suddenly, I felt a little relaxed and natural, and held the firm belief that I must cheer up, just like the most beautiful shell bathed in the sunlight, full of colors.(共22张PPT)
UNIT 1 FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS
Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(一)
春夏秋冬
?高级词汇
1.bloom v.开花
2.breeze n.微风
3.melt v.融化
4.fragrant adj.芳香的;香的
5.sultry adj.闷热的
6.scorching adj.酷热的
7.moist adj.潮湿的
8.freezing adj.极冷的;冰冻的
9.chill n.寒冷 adj.寒冷的 chilly adj.寒冷的
10.bitter adj.严寒的;痛苦的
11.snowflake n.雪花
12.blanket vt.覆盖 n.毛毯,毯子
13.icy adj.冰冷的;结冰的
14.bare adj.光秃秃的
?高级语块
1.come back to life恢复生机
2.be full of green充满绿色
3.be filled with/full of充满
4.in bud发芽
5.be a mass of blossom花团锦簇
6.pour down下着倾盆大雨
7.rain cats and dogs下着倾盆大雨
8.heat wave热浪
9.good harvest丰收
10.red maple leaf红枫叶
11.a chill wind一阵寒风
12.colorful fallen leaves五颜六色的落叶
13.be covered with被覆盖
14.build snowmen堆雪人
15.a snowball fight打雪仗
?亮点句式
1.春天
(1)On that day the mountain was full of flowers, and the trees had new green leaves.
那天山上开满了花,树上也长出了新的绿叶。
(2)There was a touch of spring in the air;the breeze was not chilly.
空气中有一丝春意;微风并不太冷。
(3)Flowers were smiling brightly.Birds were singing joyfully and my heart was dancing with delight.Cool and refreshing breeze touched her face.
花儿笑得很灿烂。鸟儿在欢快地歌唱,我的心在欢快地跳舞。清凉的微风拂过她的脸庞。
2.夏天
(1)The outside air was heavy, moist and sultry.
外面的空气阴沉、潮湿、闷热。
(2)The sun was burning, and there was a sound of the cicadas from a short distance.
太阳烤着大地,不远处传来知了的声音。
(3)It was getting more and more sultry.Hot currents of wind, carrying the smell of rotten leaves, swept through the woods.
天越来越闷热。阵阵热风夹带着树叶的腐烂味,吹过树林。
(4)The summer sun was scorching the land and there was no shade in the street.
盛夏的阳光炙烤大地,街上没有一块阴凉地。
3.秋天
(1)The leaves rustled in the wind.
树叶在风中沙沙作响。
(2)The skies are bright blue and the leaves on the trees are turning color, from green to orange and gold.
天空碧蓝,树上的叶子在变换颜色,由绿色变成橙色和金色。
(3)Golden leaves looked like beautiful butterflies flying in the sky.
金色的叶子就像美丽的蝴蝶在天空中飞舞。
(4)The leaves had almost all fallen off, creating a sea of fiery colors that crunched beneath our feet.
几乎所有的叶子都掉了下来,在我们的脚下形成了一片火红色的海洋。
4.冬天
(1)The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.
鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞,形成了一幅美丽的图画。
(2)It was a cold, wet January day, a day quite in keeping with his own miserable feelings.
这是一个寒冷、潮湿的一月的一天。这样的天与他痛苦的心情极其相似。
(3)There had not been such a winter for years.The cold outside went right through us, like a knife to the bone.
已经有好几年没遇上这样的冬天了,外面寒冷刺骨。
(4)The snowflakes were dancing in the air, flying, hovering, falling straight and fast, and laying on the ground.
雪花在空中飞舞,或飞翔,或盘旋,或直直地快速坠落,铺落在地上。
(5)A persistent, cold rain was falling, mingled with snow outside.
外面不停地下着冰冷的雨,还夹杂着雪。
?情境应用
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.春天来了,万物复苏。
Spring set in and everything _______________________.
2.空气中弥漫着宜人的花香。
The air _________________ the pleasant smell of flowers.
3.一会儿,雪花开始静静地飘落,很快眼前的大地全白了。
A moment later,the snowflakes ____________________.Soon the land before my eyes was all white.
came back to life
was filled with
began to fall quietly
4.天太闷热了,我几乎无法呼吸。 我希望天气会很快变凉。
It is _______________ I can hardly breathe.I hope it will be cooler soon.
5.这会儿天开始下起雨来,雨滴越来越密,很快成了倾盆大雨。
And now it _______________;the drops fell thicker and thicker until it poured.
6.落叶在凉爽的中秋空气中翩翩起舞,告别了甜美的夏天,迎接秋天的到来。
Falling leaves ___________ in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in.
so hot/sultry that
began to rain
danced down
7.温度在下降,寒冷刺骨。
The temperature _________________.The cold seeped into the bones.
8.今年冬天,天气异常寒冷。 世界仿佛在这一刻停止了,河流也停止了脚步。
This winter, the weather is unusually cold.The world seems to have stopped at this moment, and the river has ____________________________.
was dropping
stopped its footsteps
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.花开始开花,在漫长的冬眠后醒来。
2.随着春天的到来,种子发芽,百花齐放。
3.公园里充满了春天的清新和美丽,阳光灿烂,鸟儿在歌唱。
Flowers are starting to bloom, waking up after a long winter's sleep.
With spring's coming, all seeds come out and a variety of beautiful flowers bloom.
The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.
4.天气越来越热,夏天来了。

5.随着秋天的临近,树叶开始凋落。
It is getting hotter and hotter.Summer has started.
As autumn draws near, leaves begin to fall from the trees.
6.棕色的落叶在冰冷的空中飞舞。

7.现在天气冷极了,地面都冻硬了。
Brown leaves were flying wildly in the frozen air. 
It was bitterly cold now and the ground was frozen hard.
Ⅲ.片段续写
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写词数为100词左右。写作时尽量使用描写冬天的词汇和句式。
An early morning winter storm had brought several inches of snow to my small town in the mountains. Schools were canceled, roads were dangerous and all I wanted to do was to stay in bed. Still, I knew I had to get the day started, so I put on warm clothes and walked outside. The snow got all over my shoes.The cold wind dried my lips and my eyes. My 47-year-old back ached in anticipation (预想) of the shoveling (铲雪) I would have to do if the snow didn't stop soon.
Yet, when I looked out on the white blanket that covered the ground, I couldn't help but smile a bit. It was so beautiful. It softened the bare trees and hid the dead grass. In the distance I could hear the sound of the snowplow on the road, the barking of a happy dog and the laughter of children playing outside, enjoying their day off from school.
The sweet music of that laughter brought back a hundred memories of winters past.
思路点拨:
本文讲述了清晨的一场冬季风暴给我位于山区的小镇带来了几英寸厚的积雪。原本我看到的都是降雪带来的不便——学校被取消,道路很危险,47岁的我将不得不去铲雪等等。但作者走出家门后看到的场景改变了作者最初的感受,作者感受到了雪后的美景,并由此勾起了作者的美好回忆。
1.段落续写:由续写段落首句“那甜甜的笑声勾起了我对过去冬天的无数回忆。”可知,此段衔接上段提到的笑声,重点围绕作者的回忆展开续写。
2:续写线索:雪景——回忆——欣赏
参考范文:
The sweet music of that laughter brought back a hundred memories of winters past. I remembered catching snowflakes on my tongue, building snowmen, making snow angels, running down hills and always losing snowball fights with first my brothers and then my own children. Standing there in that warm coat of memories made the wind a little less cold and my back a little less sore.

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