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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册（外研版）
专题09 期末复习之书面表达15篇
一、书面表达
1．学习了《生命·生态·安全》课程，让我们明白了生命无价、安全第一、健康成长的重要性。请你根据下面提供的要点，以"How to protect ourselves"为题给校报英语专栏写一篇80 词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。
1）与同学友好相处；
2）遵守交通规则；
3）远离危险的地方；
4）健康饮食。
注意：
1）词数:80词左右;开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
2）覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯；
3）参考词汇:obey v.遵守;rule n.规则。
How to protect our ourselves
We only live once. It's important for us to have a sense of safety and grow up healthily. But in the face of possible danger in life, how can we protect ourselves Here are some suggestions.
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2．假定 Molly是你的笔友，上学期她作为交换生来到中国和你在同一个班级学习，期间因遇到了一些生活和学习上的问题而感到伤心。在同学们的帮助下，她渐渐克服了困难并喜欢上了这里的生活。请你用英语写一篇短文，讲述她在中国的经历及感受。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Molly is my pen pal. Last term, she came to China and studied in the same class as I was.
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3．下周的英语汇报主题为"放飞梦想，成就自我"，请你写一篇发言稿，谈一谈自己的职业理想。
要点:1. What's your dream job 2. Why do you dream of it
3. How will you make your dream come true
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词。
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4．中学生应增强安全意识，提高自我保护能力。暑假将至，请以"How to keep safe ”为题，用英语写一短文(80词左右），谈谈你的观点。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, in danger, call for, obey the traffic rules
How to keep safe
As teenagers, we should always keep ourselves safe.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5． 假定你是李华，你校将于下周开设少年"航天班"，作为一名航天有志者，你想参加"航天班"的课程学习。请你根据提示内容，用英语给"航天班"的老师 Mr Chen写一封电子邮件，介绍自己的优势与想法。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Chen,
It's my pleasure to write to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．“传递爱心，服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。“捧在手心”（Heart in Hand）就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。赵咏华是“捧在手心”的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，简要介绍赵咏华的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算。
Reedy to help others.
Zhuo Yonghua ※ help others for years ※ go to the old people's home twice a month (cut hair, wash clothes. do some cleaning) ※ offer people umbrellas or raincoats om rainy days
　 ※your opinion... ※your plan...
要求：1）短文内容必领包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
3）词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We need love and we should also give love to others. Many people do something helpful and useful all the time. Zhao Yonghua__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假如你是玲玲，暑假你打算去美国，你给在美国的笔友Sally发邮件介绍了自己的一些基本情况，请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
1）外貌：非常高，黑色长发，戴眼镜;
2） 爱好：喜欢弹奏古典音乐，跳舞，也喜欢运动，尤其网球。哥哥在校网球队，各方面都很优秀，以哥哥为荣。
3）感受：请包括以下情况时的感受(成绩不好时，和陌生人相处时，说英语时，不知道如何以适当的方式做事时)。要见到朋友了很激动，在美国时请Sally多多帮助。
注意：开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
Thanks for your last message. I'm glad to hear from you and I can't wait to meet you.
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Love,
Lingling
8．假如你是李华，去年暑假期间去英国参加某个学校开设的暑假课程（summer course）。你的好朋友Mary 给你发邮件想了解课程情况，请你根据提示内容给她回信。
持续时间 4周
住宿及饮食 吃住在当地的一个英国家庭
活动 参观一些著名的风景名胜； 与外国人交朋友； 学习英国历史和文化
收获 提高了英语口语； 喜欢上这个国家
注意：
1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
所给的提示要点要用到，可适当发挥，80字左右。
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你刚刚参加了英语演讲比赛，今天感到很兴奋，因为你获得了一等奖。根据下面的表格提示写一篇日记。
准备 连续三个周坚持每天练习口语两小时
比赛 起初紧张，但比赛中出色演讲
名次 一等奖
反应 老师满意，家长骄傲
感悟 勤奋努力是通向成功的钥匙
要求：
1）内容需包含所提示信息,可适当发挥，适当增加细节,以使行文连贯流畅；
2）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3）词数80左右。
March 10th，2020 Fine
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10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eddie因为自己先前的计划而缺席好友 Daniel 的生日会，这使 Daniel很生气，两人已经三天没有说话了，因此特意向你寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。请你用英文写一封邮件，给他提供你的建议。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel.
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．许多同学选择在假期时提高和放松自己。阳光中学英文周报编辑部想了解同学们心目中难忘的一次研学旅行。假定你是李华，请你根据要点提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要点:1. Where did you go 2. What did you do there 3. What do you think of your trip
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于 80词。
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12．假设Ann是你同桌，英语课上老师要求同学们就"The Best Ways to Relax after Class"进行讨论并汇报。请根据下表信息将你与同桌的观点向全班作简要陈述
Ann's views(观点) Your views
(1) Watching TV (1)Having a free talk
(2) Doing shopping (2)…
(3) Playing games (3)…
要求:
1）补充完整你的观点(至少两条);
2）短文必须包括表格中所有信息内容，并可适当发挥;
3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Just now we had a discussion about the best ways to relax after class.
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13． 阳光中学的英语社团在学期中举办交流分享会，邀请同学们分享英语学习方法，共同进步。假定你是李华，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的学习方法。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
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I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
14． 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Bob最近来信说他得了重感冒，请你给他写一封回信，表达你的关心，并提供一些有助于恢复健康的建议。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实信息；
3. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am really sorry to hear that you have a cold.
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15．假如你是李华，上周参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得了一等奖。你的英语老师让你以"My Experiences of Learning English"为题,用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享你在英语学习上的成长经历。
注意：1.语句通顺，语意连贯；
2.词数：80~100；短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
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答案解析部分
1．How to protect our ourselves
We only live once. It is important for us to have a sense of safety and grow up safely and healthily. But in the face of possible danger in life, how can we protect ourselves Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Be friendly and nice when making friends. Second, we must obey traffic rules. When crossing the road, we should be careful with traffic lights. Third, we should stay away from dangerous places. For example, we shouldn't go swimming alone in the river. In addition, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food.
In my opinion, we'd better get enough sleep and exercise every day to keep fit and then enjoy a happy life.
考查命题作文和提纲作文。要求根据以下提示，以"How to protect ourselves"为题给校报英语专栏写一篇80 词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。要求包括提示中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯。
考查命题作文和提纲作文。内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语，如 in the face of 面对， get on well with 和……相处融洽， In addition 另外， instead of 而不是，等等及句型结构，如 It is important for us to have a sense of safety and grow up safely and healthily. （it is+adj+for sb. to do sth.对某人而言，做某事怎么样）， Here are some suggestions. （here be结构）， Be friendly and nice when making friends. （祈使句的肯定句）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
2．参考范文(基础版)：
Molly is my pen pal. Last term, she came toChina and studied in the same class as I was.
At first, she felt a bit sad because she missed her family. She also felt nervous when she answered questions in class because she was not good at speaking Chinese at that time. But with the help of our classmates and teachers, she could speak Chinese well.
Now, Molly lives a happier life in China. She likes Chinese food and she wants to travel to more places of interest. Also, she becomes close friends with many classmates now.
参考范文(提升版)：
Molly is my pen pal. Last term, she came to China and studied in the same class as I was.
In the first few days of our school, she felt a bit sad because she missed her family. She also felt nervous when she answered questions in front of the whole class. That was because she was not good at speaking Chinese at that time. But with the help of our classmates and teachers, she could speak Chinese better and better.
Now, Molly lives a happier life in China. She enjoys eating Chinese food and she can't wait to travel to more places of interest. Most importantly, she gets on well with many of our classmates now.
考查应用文作文。要求用英语写一篇短文，讲述笔友Molly在中国作为交换生生活和学习上的经历及感受。 短文要求包括提示中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第三人称单数，一般过去时。
考查应用文作文，内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如At first首先， a bit 有点， be not good at doing sth不擅长做某事， with the help of 在……的帮助下，等等，及句型结构，如At first, she felt a bit sad because she missed her family.（because引导原因状语从句）， She also felt nervous when she answered questions in class because she was not good at speaking Chinese at that time. （when引导时间状语从句）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
3．参考范文(基础版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, I enjoy reading the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.
To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day. I should try to read books every day and share my ideas with others at first. It may take a long time to become a writer, but I will study hard.
参考范文(提升版)：
Everyone has his dream job. Some want to be teachers and some want to be doctors. For me, I want to be a writer.
Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories. Besides, it's enjoyable to read the interesting works of those great writers. I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough for people to read.
In order to get closer to my dream, I know what I need to do every day. It includes not only trying to read books every day, but also sharing my ideas with teachers and friends. These are just the first two things to make my dream come true. There is still a long way to become a writer, but I will try my best to keep doing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，本文要求以"放飞梦想，成就自我"为题结合提示内容完成这篇发言稿，写作中要首先介绍自己的梦想职业是什么；然后介绍原因；最后介绍怎样实现梦想职业的原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：for sb.；dream of doing sth.；feel excited about doing sth.；want to do；in the future；enjoy doing sth.；make one's dream come true；need to do sth.；try to do sth.；share...with...；at first；in order to do；get closer to；not only...but also；keep doing sth.等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：现在完成时和状语从句I have always dreamed of being a writer in the future, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.；宾语从句和状语从句I hope that one day my stories will be interesting enough, so people can enjoy reading mine.；宾语从句To make my dream come true, I know what I need to do every day.；动名词做主语Becoming a writer in the future has always been my dream, because I feel excited about writing my own stories.等。连词because、besides、so、but、not only...but also、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．How to keep safe
As teenagers, we should always keep ourselves safe. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my ideas. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating bad food will not good to our health. Last, when we come to school or go home, we must obey the traffic rules. Summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In one word, safety must be the first thing!
这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的照目结合提示内容完成How to keep safe？这篇关于中学生应增强安全意识，提高自我保护能力的文章。写作中要包含你作为一个青少年的观点，要结合自身提出至少三条。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇文章很详细，全面阐明了自己对中学生应增强安全意识，提高自我保护能力的观点。其中使用了一些倒装句，主从复合句，包含状语从句强调句型和宾语从句等的准确使用，为文章增色不少。如 if we，so that，when we come to school， it's dangerous to swim in the river.学习中注意总结并车记一些固定句式及知说，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻铜性,更富有条理。
5．参考范文(基础版)：
Dear Mr Chen,
It's my pleasure to write to you. First of all, I'm very glad to show myself. I am a student from Class 1, Grade 8. My dream is to become an astronaut.
As a student, I will work hard at my lessons. It is important for me to learn about space technology. On weekends, I will join the science club. People have already lived on the earth for a long time. We get everything from the earth. I usually ask my teachers and classmates for help. Talking with others is good for us to learn no re about space. That's why I want to join the"Space Class".
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文(提升版)：
Dear Mr Chen,
It's my pleasure to write to you. First of all, I'm very glad to share something about myself with you. I am a student from Class 1, Grade 8. My dream is to become an astronaut.
As a student, I will work hard at my lessons. It is important for me to learn about space technology. On weekends, I will actively participate in the science club. People have already lived on the earth for a long time. It gives everything we need to us. When facing problems in learning, I will ask my teachers and classmates for municating with others helps us learn more about space. That's why I would like to join the"Space Class".
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一封自荐信，要求围绕申请加入 "航天班" 展开。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
整体来看，这篇文章符合题目要求，语言表达较为准确，能够清晰地传达作者的想法和优势。经典短语first of all；be glad to do sth；work hardl；be good for及that's why等。高分句型包括：①It is important for me to learn about space technology. ②Talking with others is good for us to learn no re about space. That's why I want to join the"Space Class". 但语言相对简单，可适当增加一些具体事例或描述来丰富内容，提升文采。
6． We need love and we should also give love to others. Many people do something helpful and usefulall the time. Zhao Yonghua is one of them. She is a member of Heart in Hand. She goes to the old people's home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. On rainy days, she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.
I think I should learn from her. I'm going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. What's more, I'll ask my friends to join me and make the world a better place.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，简要介绍赵咏华的事迹，然后谈谈自己的观点和打算。写作内容包括赵咏华的事迹、自己的观点和打算。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称和第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对赵咏华的事迹、自己的观点和打算三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+名词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和I think+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的offer sb. sth.给某人提供某物，learn from sb.向某人学习，start with sth.从某事开始等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
7．Dear Sally,
Thanks for your last message. I'm glad to hear from you and I can't wait to meet you.
I'm quite tall with short black hair and I wear glasses. I love music a lot. I spend a lot of time playing classical music with my friends at school. I like dance music as well, especially tennis. My brother is in the school tennis team. I'm very proud of him. He's good at everything but I'm not. Sometimes I get bad marks at school and I feel sad. I should work harder. I'm quite shy when I'm with strangers. I feel nervous when I speak English. I'm always sorry when I don't know how to do things in the right way, so please help me when I'm in the US.
Love,
Lingling
这是一篇提纲作文，题目给出作文需要写的信息，首先介绍自己的外貌，包含身高、头发颜色、戴眼镜；再介绍自己的爱好，喜欢音乐、爱运动，还有自己的哥哥；最后描述一下自己的感受，并希望与Sally交流的事情。人称使用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。
这是一封书信，注意信件的格式，抬头称呼的Dear，以及结尾的署名需要居右。可能用到的词有tall，高，black long hair， 黑色长发 ， glasses，眼镜 ，喜欢弹奏古典音乐，跳舞，也喜欢运动，尤其网球。 I enjoy playing classical music, dancing, and sports, especially tennis.哥哥在校网球队，各方面都很优秀，以哥哥为荣。 My brother is on the school tennis team and excels in all aspects. I am proud of him.；成绩不好have poor grades；说英语时，不知道如何以适当的方式做事when speaking English, I don't know how to do things in an appropriate way.；见到朋友了很激动I'm excited to meet my friends…等；同时注意不要有拼写错误。
8．Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about my summer course in England.
The course lasted four weeks and everything was great. During the course, I stayed as a guest with an British family and take part in their daily life. We have meals together everyday.
I did many things there. For example, I visited some famous interests in England. And I have made some new friends with foreigners. At the same time, I learned a lot about the British history and culture What's more, I've improved my spoken English by talking with the local people. I've fallen in love with the country.
I really enjoy my stay there!
Yours,
Li Hua
考查提示作文和应用文作文，要求根据提示内容给Mary回信，告诉她暑假课程的情况，要求包括提示中所有内容，也可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯。本文主要使用第一人称，一般过去时。
考查提示作文和应用文作文，内容切题，意思连贯，时态表达准确，灵活，一些固定短语，如 take part in参加，For example 例如， At the same time 同时， fall in love with爱上……，等等和句型结构，如During the course, I stayed as a guest with an British family and take part in their daily life. And I have made some new friends with foreigners. 等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
9．March 8th. 2020 Fine
Today, I feel excited because I've won the first place in the English speech contest.
To be better and win a prize, I prepared hard. I have practiced speaking English two hours a day for three weeks. At the beginning I felt nervous, but I spoke very well in the contest. To my joy, I won the first place in the end.
My teachers are pleased with me and my parents are proud of me.
No pains, no gains. I think, if you want to succeed, you must work hard. Hard work can lead to success.
这是一篇材料作文，根据表格的提示内容写一篇日记。所给内容非常详细，要求用正确的语言表述，用合适的连词把文章接起来就可以了。人称要用第一人称，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这是一篇不错的日记，从自己当时的心情入手，引出获奖名次won the first prize in the Englishspeech contest.过渡自然。第二段讲述自己的准备及努力，最后谈论自己的看法或感悟No pains, no gains.及Hard work can lead to success。层次清楚，条理分明。一些固定短语,如practice doing sth，at the beginning of，be proud of等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
10．参考范文(基础版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you andDaniel. I want to help you and give my suggestions to you.
First, communicating with Daniel is important. You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party. He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years. Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you. Try to be patient with him. It's important between friends.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文(提升版)：
Dear Eddie,
I'm sorry about what happened between you and Daniel. I'd like to help you and my advice is as follows.
First, try to communicate with Daniel. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing. I'm sure he will understand you because you've been friends for years. Second, you can not only give him a gift though it's small, but also invite him to do some interesting things together. What's more, it's important to be patient with him all the time.
Hope you can make up quick!.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作，主要介绍寻求使两人关系恢复如初的办法。时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先总体介绍给与建议；然后具体介绍怎样使两人关系恢复如初；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be sorry about；give sth. to sb.；communicate with sb.；prepare...for...；want to do；be patient with sb.；try to do sth.；a good way to do；feel sure of oneself about sth.；not only....but also；invite sb. to do sth.；what's more；all the time；make up等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如动名词做主语communicating with Daniel is important.；宾语从句You should tell him that you're sorry and why you didn't go to his party.；状语从句He will understand you because you've been old friends for many years.Second, prepare a gift for him, though it's small. That's because he may not feel sure of himself about the friendship between you two if you explain nothing.；宾语从句Or you can ask him whether he wants to do some interesting things with you.I hope my suggestions can help you. It's a good way to explain why you didn't go to his party.；祈使句Try to be patient with him.try to communicate with Daniel.Hope you can make up quick!等。连词first，second，because，though，or，not only...but also，what's more的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
11．参考范文(基础版)：
Last month, our school had a study trip to Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
We arrived at the museum at 9:00 am by bus. We spent about 25 minutes getting there. The building is very beautiful. When we got in, we saw many ancient things. I can hardly believe my eyes. I'm interested in history, so it is a good place for me to learn about the history of this city. I took quite a few photos of those wonderful works. I lost myself in those artworks.
All in all, it was a very amazing trip!
参考范文(提升版)：
Last month, we visited the Chengdu Museum. I think it was a great trip!
I got up early in order to take the bus with my classmates. It took us about 25 minutes to get there. When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building. I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there. I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history, and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them. It was really enjoyable for me to know about the history of this city.
What an enjoyable trip it was! I'm looking forward to my next trip.
这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍难忘的一次研学旅行。时态是一般过去时，人称主要是第一人称。文章首先介绍自己研学地点；然后介绍研学时做的事情；最后总结研学的感受。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：arrive at；in order to do；take the bus；It took sb.+时间段+to do sth.；enjoy oneself；in the past；take photos of；know about；the history of；look forward to等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如： 宾语从句I think it was a great trip!I can hardly believe that I could see so many beautiful works of art there and I wonder what life was like in this city in the past.；状语从句When we arrived at the museum, we saw a beautiful building.I enjoyed myself there because I'm a big fan of history. Those works were so wonderful that I took quite a few photos of them.；感叹句What an enjoyable trip it was!等。连词when、so、all in all；because、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
12．Just now we had a discussion about the best ways to relax after class. Here are the results.
Ann thinks the best ways to relax after class are watching TV, doing shopping with friends or playing games. In her view, they can not only relax ourselves, but help us increase knowledge and develop the friendship between friends.
However, I do not agree with her. In my view, having a free talk is a good way to relax ourselves. Besides, we can also listen to music or play sports with friends. I find them helpful to improve our health and enrich our lives. Surely, they help form close friendships with others. But each coin has two sides. What we should do is to relax properly in a healthy and happy way. What about your opinions
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据表格信息，就"The Best Ways to Relax after Class"进行讨论并汇报。写作内容包括Ann和作者的不同观点。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称和第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对Ann和作者的不同观点进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的here be句式和sb. thinks+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，agree with sb.同意， each coin has two sides每个硬币都有两面等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
13．参考范文(基础版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. Second, there are many things to do, like making a foreign friend and watching English films. We are certain to improve our listening and speaking quickly through these ways. We can also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we need to have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is very important for language learning. We should believe ourselves. We must be able to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
参考范文(提升版)：
I am happy to share my English learning ways with you. Now let me be clearer.
First, I think we'd better get interested in English. Do not think that it is just a course. As the saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher. " Second, there are many things to do, such as making a foreign friend. watching English films and so on. It is up to you. These things can help us not only improve our listening and speaking quickly, but also know more about the local culture. A language is not easy to learn. Finally, I think we'd better have confidence in ourselves. Confidence is important for language learning. We should believe that we are certain to learn more.
I hope every student can learn English well. Thanks for your attention.
这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇演讲稿介绍自己学习英语的方法。使用恰当的序列词是自己的方法逻辑清晰，至少提供三条学习方法。文章使用一般现在时，合理穿插使用复合句，观点清晰明确，积极向上。
考查材料作文。所给例文使用了First……Second……Finally……等表示次序的词将自己的观点逐条列举明白；建议一是对英语感兴趣，使用了had better短语，并且使用了祈使句；建议二是多做像交外国朋友、看英文电影这样的事情，使用了make a foreign friend、be certain to do等短语；建议三是相信自己，使用了have confidence in、be important for、be able to do等短语。文章逻辑清晰，观点明确，语言精炼。
14．参考范文(基础版)：
Dear Bob,
I am really sorry to hear that you have a cold. There are some suggestions for you.
First, you need to rest well and drink a lot of water. Second, have you gone to see a doctor since you were ill If not, you need to do it. Doctors can give you some healthy ways. Lastly exercising, such as playing basketball, is important. It not only protects you from getting a cold, but also improves your long- term health. I' ve played basketball for a year since the long illness. Now I'm very fit!
Looking forward to your reply and hope you get well soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文(提升版)：
Dear Bob,
I am really sorry to hear that you have a cold. I would like to share some of my suggestions with you.
First and foremost, it's important to rest well and drink plenty of water. What's more, I wonder if you have gone to see a doctor since you were ill. If not, it's also a must to see a doctor because they offer the best way to get healthy. Last but not least, you should do sports as often as possible. It not only protects you from getting a cold, but also improves your long-term health. I've played basketball for a year since the long illness. Now I'm in excellent condition!
Looking forward to your reply and hope you get well soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
考查应用文作文。 美国笔友 Bob最近来信说他得了重感冒， 要求给他写一封回信，表达关心，并提供一些有助于恢复健康的建议。 要求合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第二人称单数，一般现在时。
考查应用文作文，内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 a lot of 很多， such as 例如， Look forward to 期待，等等，及句型结构，如 There are some suggestions for you. （there be句型）， It not only protects you from getting a cold, but also improves your long- term health（固定搭配not only…but also…）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
15．One possible version:
My Experiences of Learning English
Last month, I took part in the National English Speech Contest. And I won first prize. My teachers, parents and friends were all proud of me.
At the age of four, I started to learn English by watching English cartoons and listening to English CDs every day. As I grew older, my interest in English grew too. When I became a pupil, my teacher, Miss Wang, taught me how to read and write in English. And I kept on practising. With her help, I learnt a lot. My spoken English also improved very quickly.
I got some gifts from my friends after the English contest. But I really think those gifts should have been given to Miss Wang! I can't have gone this far without her support and help.
这是一篇命题作文。时态是一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时，首先介绍上月参加英语演讲比赛得了一等奖，大家为自己感到骄傲；然后介绍学习英语的经历；最后表达感谢。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：take part in；be proud of；at the age of；start to do；listen to；teach sb. how to do；keep on doing；with one's help；get...from等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：状语从句As I grew older, my interest in English grew too. When I became a pupil, my teacher, Miss Wang, taught me how to read and write in English.；现在完成时的被动语态But I really think those gifts should have been given to Miss Wang!；现在完成时 can't have gone this far without her support and help.等。连词as、when、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。

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