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高考英语考前冲刺押题预测 书信类应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 陕西模拟）假定你是李华，你在某英文论坛上看到了一位名叫Eric的留言。请你根据发帖内容给他回复。
My parents won't listen when I tell them things.I guess it's because they are adults and can't understand me.Do you have any suggestions？
写作要点：
（1）表示理解；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric，
You wrote that your parents won't listen when you tell them things.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
2．（2025 丽水二模） 假定你是李华，你校有些学生把老师的照片制作成表情包（meme）并在社交媒体上传播，针对这一现象，请给校英语报Letters专栏投稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述观点；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Editor，
____________________________________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2025 福建三模） 假定你是李华，你所在的学习小组对外教Patrick布置的"Discovering Campus Plants"项目式作业有疑问。请你代表小组写一封邮件向他咨询。内容包括：
（1）提出疑问；
（2）期盼回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
4．（2025 东城区一模） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim打算参加"我眼中的孔子（Confucius in My Eyes）"全球原创作品征集活动，来信询问你的建议。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2025 黄浦区二模）假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你想报考某外地大学，因为该校有你心仪的专业，且该专业在全国排名领先，但遭到了父母的反对。写一封信给你的父母，争取他们的支持（信中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。内容须包括：
（1）你的意愿；
（2）你的理由。
6．（2025 长春模拟） 假定你是新华中学学生会成员李华，你校计划与美国友好学校联合举办"中美青年文化交流周"（Sino﹣US Youth Cultural Exchange Week）。请你代表学生会写一封英文邮件，邀请美方学生参与。
内容包括：
（1）活动目的（促进文化理解，展示传统艺术）；
（2）主要安排（中国书法工作坊、传统音乐表演、文化交流讨论会等）；
（3）邀请对方分享美国文化特色项目；
（4）表达期待。
______
7．（2025 福建二模） 假定你是李华，你所在的学习小组对外教Patrick布置的"Discovering Campus Plants"项目式作业有疑问。请你代表小组写一封邮件向他咨询。内容包括：
（1）提出疑问；
（2）期盼回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6._____________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
8．（2025 杨浦区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生李华，你校计划举办"文化传承与创新"主题活动，拟从以下活动中选择其一，现向全体学生征求意见。请你给组委会写封信，内容需包括：
1）你的选择；
2）你的理由。
活动形式 时间和地点 活动内容
传统手工艺作坊 （Traditional Handicraft Workshop） * 5月16日（周五） 18：30 —20：30 * 506教室 *专业人士指导； *学生现场制作。
文创作品集市 （Creative Cultural Works Market） * 5月17日（周六） 9：00 – 15：00 *校园文化广场 *展示自创文化作品； *选购各类心仪作品。
文化名人讲座 （Lectures by Cultural Figures） * 5月21日（周三） 13：30 —16：00 *学校图书馆 *专家主题讲座； *互动交流。
9．（2025 虹口区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。为接待来自英国伙伴校的交流生，校学生会正招募寄宿家庭。你非常希望加入，但发现招募海报提供的信息比较有限。因此，你决定致信校学生会，内容包括：
（1）说明希望成为寄宿家庭的原因；
（2）提出想要进一步了解的信息，并表达对该活动的期待。
10．（2025 普陀区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，在本期学校英语报的"Troubleshooter（排忧解难）"专栏读到Mike的来信（内容如下）。你通过该专栏给Mike写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他脱离困境。你的回信须包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的理由。
Troubleshooter
I'm a freshman facing dorm troubles.One roommate smokes indoors，another watches videos late at night without using earphones.One roommate takes a shower only once a week，which is really disgusting.What can I do？Please help!—Mike________
11．（2025 西城区校级模拟） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，高考备考使你压力很大，你的英国朋友Jim经常通过邮件给你鼓励、疏导情绪，使你能够调整状态，重新投入学习。请你用英语给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示对他感谢；
（2）描述你的状态。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_____________________________
Li Hua
12．（2025 西宁一模）假定你是李华，你的美国网友David来信说，他自进入高中以来觉得身体虚弱，压力很大，想通过运动来改善现状。请你给他回信，推荐一种适合他的运动，并说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 静安区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你是高三学生李华，近期你向X大学申请了两门线上选修课，分别为"中医学入门"与"探索演讲的艺术"今日收到了该大学Admissions Office的电子邮件，内容如下：
Dear Li Hua， Thank you for your interest in our university's online elective courses.We are delighted that you have applied for both Getting Started with Traditional Chinese Medicine and Exploring the Art of Public Speaking.Due to limited course availability，each student is allowed to enroll in one elective course per term.Please select your preferred course from the two and explain your choice. Additionally，taking an elective course requires time and may influence your current high school studies.Please kindly include in your reply how you will deal with the situation.Thank you once again for your interest in our programs.We look forward to supporting your academic journey! Admissions Office X University
请根据该邮件中所提要求，写一封回复邮件。
（邮件中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
14．（2025 重庆模拟） 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友James最近对中文学习非常感兴趣，来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。在中文学习的众多途径中，有人认为参加中文课程系统学习是关键，也有人觉得沉浸在中文的语言环境（如观看中文影视剧、结交中国朋友等）更为有效。请你给James回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）阐述两种观点；
（2）提出建议，并说明理由；
（3）鼓励他学好中文。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2025 贵州一模）假定你是李华，你校本周六将举办主题为"中国传统建筑"的讲座。你的外国朋友Jack对中国传统建筑很感兴趣，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）讲座的基本信息；
（2）发出邀请。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
16．（2025 固始县一模）假定你是中学生李华，你因故不能参加下周日的中国民乐音乐会，想把票赠给你的留学生朋友John。请你给他写一封邮件告知相关情况，内容包括：
（1）你不能观看音乐会的原因；
（2）简介音乐会；
（3）如何取得门票。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi John，________
Best regards，
Li Hua
17．（2025 西城区一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你们学校的网站看到你们学校组织了"我的年度词（My Word of the Year）"的学生活动，发来邮件询问你的年度词。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）你的年度词是什么；
（2）你选该词的理由。
注意（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 辽宁二模）假定你是李华，你的外教Paul针对如何提高你的口语表达水平给你写邮件提出了建议，请你给他写一封回信，表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
19．（2025 奉贤区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校学生会计划开设一个名为"The Voice of Our Generation"的视频号，现正向广大学生征求第一期视频的内容，如：校园生活，成长故事，流行文化……。请你向学生会写封信给出你的意见。信件内容须包括：
（1）视频的主要内容；
（2）选择该内容的理由。
20．（2025 嘉定区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近收到笔友Tom的邮件，在邮件中他提到自己即将前往上海一所高中担任志愿者，教授该校学生英语，他想了解一下适合中国学生的英语学习内容。请回复他一封邮件，内容须包括：（1）你建议他教授哪些内容；
（2）你的理由。
高考英语考前冲刺押题预测 书信类应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 陕西模拟）假定你是李华，你在某英文论坛上看到了一位名叫Eric的留言。请你根据发帖内容给他回复。
My parents won't listen when I tell them things.I guess it's because they are adults and can't understand me.Do you have any suggestions？
写作要点：
（1）表示理解；
（2）你的建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric，
You wrote that your parents won't listen when you tell them things.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric，
You wrote that your parents won't listen when you tell them things.I totally understand how you feel.Many teenagers face the same problem.
Here are my suggestions.First，you can find a proper time to talk to them，like when they're not busy.Second，you should be calm and express your feelings clearly.you had better try to see things from their perspective too.I hope these can help you.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I totally understand how you feel.
翻译：我完全理解你的感受。
分析：运用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：First，you can find a proper time to talk to them，like when they're not busy.
翻译：首先，你可以找一个恰当的时机和他们谈谈，比如当他们不忙的时候。
分析：运用了when引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Eric，
You wrote that your parents won't listen when you tell them things.I totally understand how you feel.【高分句型一】Many teenagers face the same problem.（表示理解）
Here are my suggestions.First，you can find a proper time to talk to them，like when they're not busy.【高分句型二】Second，you should be calm and express your feelings clearly.you had better try to see things from their perspective too.I hope these can help you.（自己的建议。）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．（2025 丽水二模） 假定你是李华，你校有些学生把老师的照片制作成表情包（meme）并在社交媒体上传播，针对这一现象，请给校英语报Letters专栏投稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述观点；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Editor，
____________________________________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor，
I want to express my concern regarding a trend at our school：students creating memes of teachers and sharing them on social media.
While some may view this as harmless and creative，I think that it can also be disrespectful，harming teachers' reputations and undermining their authority.Furthermore，the unconsented use of teachers' images blatantly infringes upon their privacy.What's more，making fun of teachers' appearances or deriding their personal lives can inflict profound emotional wounds.Humor ought never to be achieved at the cost of respect；instead，it should be founded on the principles of dignity and consideration.
I suggest our school organize digital etiquette workshops to help students understand the difference between playful humor and harmful mockery.Additionally，creating guidelines for respectful meme creation could foster a more positive environment.After all，respect makes humor meaningful.Let's think twice before clicking"share"
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：While some may view this as harmless and creative，I think that it can also be disrespectful，harming teachers' reputations and undermining their authority.
翻译：虽然有些人可能认为这并无恶意且富有创意，但我觉得这也可能是不尊重人的行为，会损害老师的声誉并削弱他们的权威。
分析：本句运用了while引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句，以及现在分词短语harming teachers' reputations and undermining their authority作状语。
高分句型二：I suggest our school organize digital etiquette workshops to help students understand the difference between playful humor and harmful mockery.
翻译：我建议我们学校组织有关数字礼仪的研讨会，帮助学生理解适度的玩笑幽默和有害的嘲弄之间的区别。
分析：本句运用了suggest后跟that引导的宾语从句our school organize digital etiquette workshops to help students understand the difference between playful humor and harmful mockery，省略了that，从句用虚拟语气，谓语动词为should+动词原形，省略了should。
【解答】Dear Editor，
I want to express my concern regarding a trend at our school：students creating memes of teachers and sharing them on social media.（开篇点题）
While some may view this as harmless and creative，I think that it can also be disrespectful，harming teachers' reputations and undermining their authority.【高分句型一】Furthermore，the unconsented use of teachers' images blatantly infringes upon their privacy.What's more，making fun of teachers' appearances or deriding their personal lives can inflict profound emotional wounds.Humor ought never to be achieved at the cost of respect；instead，it should be founded on the principles of dignity and consideration.（陈述观点）
I suggest our school organize digital etiquette workshops to help students understand the difference between playful humor and harmful mockery.【高分句型二】Additionally，creating guidelines for respectful meme creation could foster a more positive environment.After all，respect makes humor meaningful.Let's think twice before clicking"share"（提出建议）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
3．（2025 福建三模） 假定你是李华，你所在的学习小组对外教Patrick布置的"Discovering Campus Plants"项目式作业有疑问。请你代表小组写一封邮件向他咨询。内容包括：
（1）提出疑问；
（2）期盼回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Patrick ，
I ' m Li Hua from Class 6.Our study group has some questions about the " Discovering Campus Plants " project .Firstly ，we ' re not sure whether we should focus on the common plants only or include the rare ones as well .Secondly ，regarding the presentation of our findings ，is a PPT enough or do we need to write a report ？
We sincerely hope you can clarify these points for us .Looking forward to your reply .
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Firstly ，we ' re not sure whether we should focus on the common plants only or include the rare ones as well .
翻译：首先，我们不确定我们是否应该只关注常见的植物，还是包括稀有的植物。
分析：运用了whether ...or...引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Secondly ，regarding the presentation of our findings ，is a PPT enough or do we need to write a report ？
翻译：其次，关于我们的发现的展示，是一个PPT就足够了，还是我们需要写一份报告？
分析：运用了动名词短语regarding the presentation of our findings作主语。
【解答】Dear Patrick ，
I ' m Li Hua from Class 6.Our study group has some questions about the " Discovering Campus Plants " project .Firstly ，we ' re not sure whether we should focus on the common plants only or include the rare ones as well .【高分句型一】Secondly ，regarding the presentation of our findings ，is a PPT enough or do we need to write a report ？【高分句型二】（提出疑问）
We sincerely hope you can clarify these points for us .Looking forward to your reply .（期盼回复）
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025 东城区一模） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim打算参加"我眼中的孔子（Confucius in My Eyes）"全球原创作品征集活动，来信询问你的建议。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
Glad to receive your email.What an exciting activity!Here is my idea.
I'm thinking you can make a short animation film，which will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy.You can show how his ideas，like kindness，influence us teenagers to share，help each other，and build warm friendships，making school life more enjoyable.Even better，you can start a "kindness challenge" to encourage friends to do something nice every day and record their good deeds.
The new perspective will help people realize the eternal value of Confucius' thought.I believe this will be a good entry point.Good luck to you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm thinking you can make a short animation film，which will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy.
翻译：我在想，你可以做一部动画短片，重点讲述你对孔子哲学的理解。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：You can show how his ideas，like kindness，influence us teenagers to share，help each other，and build warm friendships，making school life more enjoyable.
翻译：你可以展示他的想法，如善良，如何影响我们青少年分享，互相帮助，建立温暖的友谊，使学校生活更加愉快。
分析：本句运用了how引导的宾语从句和现在分词短语making school life more enjoyable作状语。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Glad to receive your email.What an exciting activity!Here is my idea.（表达收到信的喜悦）
I'm thinking you can make a short animation film，which will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy.【高分句型一】You can show how his ideas，like kindness，influence us teenagers to share，help each other，and build warm friendships，making school life more enjoyable.【高分句型二】Even better，you can start a "kindness challenge" to encourage friends to do something nice every day and record their good deeds.（提出建议）
The new perspective will help people realize the eternal value of Confucius' thought.I believe this will be a good entry point.Good luck to you!（说明理由，表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
5．（2025 黄浦区二模）假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你想报考某外地大学，因为该校有你心仪的专业，且该专业在全国排名领先，但遭到了父母的反对。写一封信给你的父母，争取他们的支持（信中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。内容须包括：
（1）你的意愿；
（2）你的理由。
【答案】Dear Mom and Dad，
First，I want to thank you for your endless love and guidance.After careful consideration，I've decided to apply to the Computer Science program at a renowned university outside Shanghai.Their cutting﹣edge research and industry partnerships align perfectly with my passion for AI and robotics—fields where China is rapidly advancing globally.
While I understand your concerns about distance，this opportunity could open doors to internships at tech giants and collaborative projects with top engineers.I've researched the campus support systems and feel confident in my ability to balance academics with self﹣care.I promise to stay connected through weekly calls and shared updates.
Trusting my aspirations is the greatest support you can give me.Let's turn this challenge into a proud family journey.
Your loving son，
Li Ming
【分析】高分句型一：Their cutting﹣edge research and industry partnerships align perfectly with my passion for AI and robotics—fields where China is rapidly advancing globally.
翻译：他们的尖端研究和行业合作伙伴关系与我对人工智能和机器人技术的热情完美契合——中国在这些领域正在全球范围内迅速发展。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Trusting my aspirations is the greatest support you can give me.
翻译：相信我的愿望是你能给我的最大支持。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语Trusting my aspirations作主语。
【解答】Dear Mom and Dad，
First，I want to thank you for your endless love and guidance.After careful consideration，I've decided to apply to the Computer Science program at a renowned university outside Shanghai.Their cutting﹣edge research and industry partnerships align perfectly with my passion for AI and robotics—fields where China is rapidly advancing globally.【高分句型一】（自己的意愿）
While I understand your concerns about distance，this opportunity could open doors to internships at tech giants and collaborative projects with top engineers.I've researched the campus support systems and feel confident in my ability to balance academics with self﹣care.I promise to stay connected through weekly calls and shared updates.（理由）
Trusting my aspirations is the greatest support you can give me.【高分句型二】Let's turn this challenge into a proud family journey.
Your loving son，
Li Ming
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 长春模拟） 假定你是新华中学学生会成员李华，你校计划与美国友好学校联合举办"中美青年文化交流周"（Sino﹣US Youth Cultural Exchange Week）。请你代表学生会写一封英文邮件，邀请美方学生参与。
内容包括：
（1）活动目的（促进文化理解，展示传统艺术）；
（2）主要安排（中国书法工作坊、传统音乐表演、文化交流讨论会等）；
（3）邀请对方分享美国文化特色项目；
（4）表达期待。
______
【答案】Dear American students，
I'm Li Hua，a member of the Student Union at Xinhua Middle School .We're thrilled to invite you to the " Sino﹣US Youth Cultural Exchange Week ".This event aims to promote cultural understanding and showcase traditional arts .We've arranged several activities .There'll be a Chinese calligraphy workshop，where you can experience the beauty of Chinese characters .Traditional music performances will also be held，allowing you to enjoy the unique charm of Chinese melodies .Additionally，we ' ll have cultural exchange seminars for in﹣depth discussions We sincerely hope you can share some distinctive American cultural programs，which will surely enrich our exchange .
Looking forward to your participation and an unforgettable cultural journey together!
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There ' ll be a Chinese calligraphy workshop ，where you can experience the beauty of Chinese characters .
翻译：将有一个中国书法工作坊，在那里你可以体验汉字的美。
分析：运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：We sincerely hope you can share some distinctive American cultural programs ，which will surely enrich our exchange .
翻译：我们真诚地希望您能分享一些有特色的美国文化节目，这必将丰富我们的交流。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear American students，
I'm Li Hua，a member of the Student Union at Xinhua Middle School .We ' re thrilled to invite you to the " Sino﹣US Youth Cultural Exchange Week ".This event aims to promote cultural understanding and showcase traditional arts .（活动目的促进文化理解，展示传统艺术）
We've arranged several activities .There'll be a Chinese calligraphy workshop，where you can experience the beauty of Chinese characters .【高分句型一】Traditional music performances will also be held，allowing you to enjoy the unique charm of Chinese melodies .Additionally，we ' ll have cultural exchange seminars for in﹣depth discussions .（主要安排）（活动目的促进文化理解，展示传统艺术）
We sincerely hope you can share some distinctive American cultural programs，which will surely enrich our exchange .【高分句型二】（邀请对方分享美国文化特色项目）
Looking forward to your participation and an unforgettable cultural journey together!（表达期待）
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．（2025 福建二模） 假定你是李华，你所在的学习小组对外教Patrick布置的"Discovering Campus Plants"项目式作业有疑问。请你代表小组写一封邮件向他咨询。内容包括：
（1）提出疑问；
（2）期盼回复。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6._____________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6.I'm writing on behalf of our study group to ask for some clarification regarding the "Discovering Campus Plants" project assignment you gave us.
We're a bit confused about the scope of the project.Specifically，we're not sure if we should focus only on the plants in our schoolyard or if we can include those in the nearby botanical garden as well.Also，when it comes to presenting our findings，we're unsure about the format you expect — should it be a written report，a PowerPoint presentation，or something else？
We'd really appreciate it if you could provide some guidance.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm writing on behalf of our study group to ask for some clarification regarding the "Discovering Campus Plants" project assignment you gave us.
翻译：我代表我们的学习小组写信，希望您能就您给我们布置的"发现校园植物"项目作业做一些说明。
分析：本句运用了that引导的限制性定语从句you gave us，省略了that。
高分句型二：We'd really appreciate it if you could provide some guidance.
翻译：如果你能提供一些指导，我们将非常感激。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Patrick，
I'm Li Hua from Class 6.I'm writing on behalf of our study group to ask for some clarification regarding the "Discovering Campus Plants" project assignment you gave us.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
We're a bit confused about the scope of the project.Specifically，we're not sure if we should focus only on the plants in our schoolyard or if we can include those in the nearby botanical garden as well.Also，when it comes to presenting our findings，we're unsure about the format you expect — should it be a written report，a PowerPoint presentation，or something else？（提出疑问）
We'd really appreciate it if you could provide some guidance.【高分句型二】Looking forward to your reply.（期盼回复）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
8．（2025 杨浦区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生李华，你校计划举办"文化传承与创新"主题活动，拟从以下活动中选择其一，现向全体学生征求意见。请你给组委会写封信，内容需包括：
1）你的选择；
2）你的理由。
活动形式 时间和地点 活动内容
传统手工艺作坊 （Traditional Handicraft Workshop） * 5月16日（周五） 18：30 —20：30 * 506教室 *专业人士指导； *学生现场制作。
文创作品集市 （Creative Cultural Works Market） * 5月17日（周六） 9：00 – 15：00 *校园文化广场 *展示自创文化作品； *选购各类心仪作品。
文化名人讲座 （Lectures by Cultural Figures） * 5月21日（周三） 13：30 —16：00 *学校图书馆 *专家主题讲座； *互动交流。
【答案】Dear Organizing Committee，
I'm Li Hua from Mingqi Middle School .I ' m writing to recommend the Traditional Handicraft Workshop .
Traditional handicrafts are the treasures of or culture .Participating in this workshop，guided by professionals，we can create handicrafts on site .It offers a hands﹣on way to understand traditional skills deeply .Moreover，making handicrafts can relieve our study stress .The time on May 16th is also suitable for most students after school .I believe this activity will be a great success in inheriting and innovating our culture .
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Participating in this workshop ，guided by professionals ，we can create handicrafts on site .
翻译：参加这个工作坊，在专业人士的指导下，我们可以现场制作手工艺品。
分析：运用了现在分词短语Participating in this workshop作状语和过去分词短语guided by professionals作状语。
高分句型：I believe this activity will be a great success in inheriting and innovating our culture .翻译：我相信这次活动将在继承和创新我们的文化。
分析：运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Organizing Committee，
I'm Li Hua from Mingqi Middle School .I ' m writing to recommend the Traditional Handicraft Workshop .（你的选择）
Traditional handicrafts are the treasures of or culture .Participating in this workshop ，guided by professionals，we can create handicrafts on site .It offers a hands﹣on way to understand traditional skills deeply .Moreover，making handicrafts can relieve our study stress .The time on May 16th is also suitable for most students after school .I believe this activity will be a great success in inheriting and innovating our culture .（你的理由）
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 虹口区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。为接待来自英国伙伴校的交流生，校学生会正招募寄宿家庭。你非常希望加入，但发现招募海报提供的信息比较有限。因此，你决定致信校学生会，内容包括：
（1）说明希望成为寄宿家庭的原因；
（2）提出想要进一步了解的信息，并表达对该活动的期待。
【答案】Dear Student Union，
I'm Li Hua，a Senior 3 student from Mingqi High School.I'm writing to express my strong desire to be a host family for the exchange students from our UK partner school.The main reason why I'm eager to join is that I'm extremely interested in British culture.I believe hosting them will offer me a precious chance to learn more about it directly.Moreover，I hope to make friends with these students，which will broaden my horizons.Yet，the information on the recruitment poster is rather limited.I'd like to know whether there are any specific cultural﹣related activities we need to organize during their stay，and what kind of daily support is required.
I sincerely hope this exchange activity will be a great success and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The main reason why I'm eager to join is that I'm extremely interested in British culture.
翻译：我渴望加入的主要原因是我对英国文化非常感兴趣。
分析：本句使用了why引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：I'd like to know whether there are any specific cultural﹣related activities we need to organize during their stay，and what kind of daily support is required.
翻译：我想知道在他们逗留期间，我们是否需要组织任何特定的文化相关活动，以及需要什么样的日常支持。
分析：本句使用了whether引导的宾语从句；what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Student Union，
I'm Li Hua，a Senior 3 student from Mingqi High School.I'm writing to express my strong desire to be a host family for the exchange students from our UK partner school.The main reason why I'm eager to join is that I'm extremely interested in British culture.【高分句型一】I believe hosting them will offer me a precious chance to learn more about it directly.Moreover，I hope to make friends with these students，which will broaden my horizons.（说明希望成为寄宿家庭的原因）Yet，the information on the recruitment poster is rather limited.I'd like to know whether there are any specific cultural﹣related activities we need to organize during their stay，and what kind of daily support is required.【高分句型二】（提出想要进一步了解的信息）
I sincerely hope this exchange activity will be a great success and look forward to your reply.（表达对该活动的期待）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 普陀区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，在本期学校英语报的"Troubleshooter（排忧解难）"专栏读到Mike的来信（内容如下）。你通过该专栏给Mike写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他脱离困境。你的回信须包括：
（1）你的建议；
（2）你的理由。
Troubleshooter
I'm a freshman facing dorm troubles.One roommate smokes indoors，another watches videos late at night without using earphones.One roommate takes a shower only once a week，which is really disgusting.What can I do？Please help!—Mike________
【答案】Dear Mike，
I understand your situation as a freshman in a dorm.Dealing with roommates' habits can be challenging.Here are some suggestions that might help.
Firstly，communicate openly with your roommates.Express your concerns about smoking indoors，watching videos loudly at night，and infrequent showers.They may not be aware of the inconvenience they cause.Secondly，establish dorm rules together.Agree on quiet hours，smoking areas，and shower schedules，which can create a more harmonious living environment.
Remember，patience and understanding are key.Everyone has different habits，and it takes time to adjust.I hope these suggestions can help you resolve your dorm troubles.
Yours，
Li Ming
【分析】高分句型一：They may not be aware of the inconvenience they cause.
翻译：他们可能没有意识到自己造成的不便。
分析：本句运用了省略了关系代词that/which的限制性定语从句they cause。
高分句型二：Agree on quiet hours，smoking areas，and shower schedules，which can create a more harmonious living environment.
翻译：商定安静的时间、吸烟区和淋浴时间表，这些可以创造更和谐的生活环境。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I understand your situation as a freshman in a dorm.Dealing with roommates' habits can be challenging.Here are some suggestions that might help.（表达理解）
Firstly，communicate openly with your roommates.Express your concerns about smoking indoors，watching videos loudly at night，and infrequent showers.They may not be aware of the inconvenience they cause.【高分句型一】Secondly，establish dorm rules together.Agree on quiet hours，smoking areas，and shower schedules，which can create a more harmonious living environment.【高分句型二】
Remember，patience and understanding are key.Everyone has different habits，and it takes time to adjust.I hope these suggestions can help you resolve your dorm troubles.（个人建议以及理由）
Yours，
Li Ming
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
11．（2025 西城区校级模拟） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，高考备考使你压力很大，你的英国朋友Jim经常通过邮件给你鼓励、疏导情绪，使你能够调整状态，重新投入学习。请你用英语给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示对他感谢；
（2）描述你的状态。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_____________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm writing this email to pour out my heartfelt gratitude to you.As the college entrance examination approaches，the study load has become truly overwhelming.Endless mock exams and piles of assignments had almost crushed my spirit，leaving me in a state of constant anxiety.
However，your emails were like a beam of light in the dark.Your words of encouragement and rational advice gave me the strength to face my fears.Because of you，I've learned effective stress ﹣ relieving techniques and regained my focus.Now，I'm full of energy，actively engaging in review.Each day，I'm making progress，confident that I'll perform well in the exam.
Once again，thank you.I'm incredibly lucky to have you as a friend.
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As the college entrance examination approaches，the study load has become truly overwhelming.
翻译：随着高考的临近，学习负担变得极其沉重。
分析：运用了as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Each day，I'm making progress，confident that I'll perform well in the exam.
翻译：每一天，我都在进步，坚信自己能在考试中取得好成绩。
分析：运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm writing this email to pour out my heartfelt gratitude to you.As the college entrance examination approaches，the study load has become truly overwhelming.【高分句型一】Endless mock exams and piles of assignments had almost crushed my spirit，leaving me in a state of constant anxiety.（表示对他感谢）
However，your emails were like a beam of light in the dark.Your words of encouragement and rational advice gave me the strength to face my fears.Because of you，I've learned effective stress ﹣ relieving techniques and regained my focus.Now，I'm full of energy，actively engaging in review.Each day，I'm making progress，confident that I'll perform well in the exam.【高分句型二】（描述自己的状态）
Once again，thank you.I'm incredibly lucky to have you as a friend.
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12．（2025 西宁一模）假定你是李华，你的美国网友David来信说，他自进入高中以来觉得身体虚弱，压力很大，想通过运动来改善现状。请你给他回信，推荐一种适合他的运动，并说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David，
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling stressed and weak since entering high school.I recommend you to take up running.
To begin with，running is a simple yet effective exercise that can help build up your body.It strengthens the heart muscle，improving its ability to pump blood efficiently throughout the body.Besides，running provides a healthy outlet for stress relief，which promote a sense of well﹣being and positivity.
I hope you find it enjoyable!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling stressed and weak since entering high school.
翻译：很遗憾听到你进入高中后感到压力和虚弱。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Besides，running provides a healthy outlet for stress relief，which promote a sense of well﹣being and positivity.
翻译：此外，跑步提供了一个健康的减压途径，可以促进幸福感和积极性。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling stressed and weak since entering high school.【高分句型一】I recommend you to take up running.（推荐适合的运动）
To begin with，running is a simple yet effective exercise that can help build up your body.It strengthens the heart muscle，improving its ability to pump blood efficiently throughout the body.Besides，running provides a healthy outlet for stress relief，which promote a sense of well﹣being and positivity.【高分句型二】（解释理由）
I hope you find it enjoyable!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 静安区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你是高三学生李华，近期你向X大学申请了两门线上选修课，分别为"中医学入门"与"探索演讲的艺术"今日收到了该大学Admissions Office的电子邮件，内容如下：
Dear Li Hua， Thank you for your interest in our university's online elective courses.We are delighted that you have applied for both Getting Started with Traditional Chinese Medicine and Exploring the Art of Public Speaking.Due to limited course availability，each student is allowed to enroll in one elective course per term.Please select your preferred course from the two and explain your choice. Additionally，taking an elective course requires time and may influence your current high school studies.Please kindly include in your reply how you will deal with the situation.Thank you once again for your interest in our programs.We look forward to supporting your academic journey! Admissions Office X University
请根据该邮件中所提要求，写一封回复邮件。
（邮件中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
【答案】Dear Admissions Office ，
Thank you for your email .I ' m Li Hua ，and I ' d like to choose " Getting Started with Traditional Chinese Medicine ".
I ' ve been fascinated by TCM since childhood .Its unique theories like Yin ﹣ Yang and the Five Elements ，along with miraculous herbal remedies ，intrigue me .Learning TCM can help me understand traditional culture better and even assist in daily health management .
I ' m aware that this elective may impact my high ﹣ school studies .To balance them ，I ' ll make a detailed schedule .I ' ll allocate specific time slots for TCM learning on weekends and during holidays .Also ，I ' ll use fragmented time ，like listening to TCM lectures during commute ，to ensure I won ' t fall behind in my high ﹣ school courses .
Thank you again for this opportunity .
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning TCM can help me understand traditional culture better and even assist in daily health management .
翻译：学会TCM能帮助我更好地理解中国文化 甚至有助于日常健康管理。
分析：用了Learning TCM动名词短语作主语。
高分句型二：To balance them ，I ' ll make a detailed schedule .
翻译：为了平衡它们，我要做详细的日程安排。
分析：应用了To balance them动词不定式作目的状语。
【解答】Dear Admissions Office ，
Thank you for your email .I ' m Li Hua ，and I ' d like to choose " Getting Started with Traditional Chinese Medicine ".（表示感谢）
I ' ve been fascinated by TCM since childhood .Its unique theories like Yin ﹣ Yang and the Five Elements ，along with miraculous herbal remedies ，intrigue me .Learning TCM can help me understand traditional culture better and even assist in daily health management .【高分句型一】（参加这些课程对我的意义。）
I ' m aware that this elective may impact my high ﹣ school studies .To balance them ，I ' ll make a detailed schedule .【高分句型二】I ' ll allocate specific time slots for TCM learning on weekends and during holidays .Also ，I ' ll use fragmented time ，like listening to TCM lectures during commute ，to ensure I won ' t fall behind in my high ﹣ school courses .（参加这些课程后的具体规划）
Thank you again for this opportunity .
Best regards ，
Li Hua
【点评】在写作时要注意原文内容所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 重庆模拟） 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友James最近对中文学习非常感兴趣，来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。在中文学习的众多途径中，有人认为参加中文课程系统学习是关键，也有人觉得沉浸在中文的语言环境（如观看中文影视剧、结交中国朋友等）更为有效。请你给James回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）阐述两种观点；
（2）提出建议，并说明理由；
（3）鼓励他学好中文。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James，
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in learning Chinese.There are two main approaches to mastering the language.Some believe that enrolling in structured Chinese courses is essential，as it provides a solid foundation in grammar and vocabulary.Others argue that immersing yourself in a Chinese﹣speaking environment，such as watching Chinese movies or making Chinese friends，is more effective for practical usage.
I suggest combining both methods.Courses will give you the basics，while immersion will help you apply what you've learned in real﹣life situations.This balanced approach will accelerate your progress.
Keep up the enthusiasm，and you'll surely succeed in learning Chinese!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Some believe that enrolling in structured Chinese courses is essential，as it provides a solid foundation in grammar and vocabulary.
译文：一些人认为，报名参加结构化的汉语课程至关重要，因为它为语法和词汇提供了坚实的基础。
分析：这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句，as引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：Keep up the enthusiasm，and you'll surely succeed in learning Chinese!
译文：保持热情，你一定会成功学习中文的！
分析：这句话使用了祈使句+and+简单句。
【解答】Dear James，
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in learning Chinese.There are two main approaches to mastering the language.Some believe that enrolling in structured Chinese courses is essential，as it provides a solid foundation in grammar and vocabulary.【高分句型一】Others argue that immersing yourself in a Chinese﹣speaking environment，such as watching Chinese movies or making Chinese friends，is more effective for practical usage.（阐述两种观点）
I suggest combining both methods.Courses will give you the basics，while immersion will help you apply what you've learned in real﹣life situations.This balanced approach will accelerate your progress.（提出建议，并说明理由）
Keep up the enthusiasm，and you'll surely succeed in learning Chinese!【高分句型二】（鼓励他学好中文）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2025 贵州一模）假定你是李华，你校本周六将举办主题为"中国传统建筑"的讲座。你的外国朋友Jack对中国传统建筑很感兴趣，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）讲座的基本信息；
（2）发出邀请。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
This Saturday at 3 p.m.，our school will host a fascinating lecture on "Traditional Chinese Architecture" in the auditorium.Renowned expert Professor Zhang will share his insights，covering the intricate details of upturned eaves，symbolic decorations，and the harmony between architecture and nature.Knowing your deep interest in this field，I warmly invite you to join me.It's a golden opportunity to delve into the cultural significance and aesthetic charm of these architectural marvels.After the lecture，we could even explore some nearby ancient buildings to put our newfound knowledge into practice.I'm certain this experience will broaden our understanding and appreciation of China's rich architectural heritage.Looking forward to your company!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Renowned expert Professor Zhang will share his insights，covering the intricate details of upturned eaves，symbolic decorations，and the harmony between architecture and nature.
翻译：著名专家张教授将分享他的见解，涵盖上翘屋檐的复杂细节、象征性装饰以及建筑与自然的和谐。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语covering the intricate details of upturned eaves，symbolic decorations，and the harmony between architecture and nature作状语。
高分句型二：It's a golden opportunity to delve into the cultural significance and aesthetic charm of these architectural marvels.
翻译：这是一个深入探讨这些建筑奇迹的文化意义和美学魅力的绝佳机会。
分析：句子中it作形式主语。不定式短语to delve into the cultural significance and aesthetic charm of these architectural marvels作真正的主语。
【解答】Dear Jack，
This Saturday at 3 p.m.，our school will host a fascinating lecture on "Traditional Chinese Architecture" in the auditorium.Renowned expert Professor Zhang will share his insights，covering the intricate details of upturned eaves，symbolic decorations，and the harmony between architecture and nature.【高分句型一】Knowing your deep interest in this field，I warmly invite you to join me.It's a golden opportunity to delve into the cultural significance and aesthetic charm of these architectural marvels.【高分句型二】After the lecture，we could even explore some nearby ancient buildings to put our newfound knowledge into practice.（讲座的基本信息） I'm certain this experience will broaden our understanding and appreciation of China's rich architectural heritage.Looking forward to your company!（发出邀请）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16．（2025 固始县一模）假定你是中学生李华，你因故不能参加下周日的中国民乐音乐会，想把票赠给你的留学生朋友John。请你给他写一封邮件告知相关情况，内容包括：
（1）你不能观看音乐会的原因；
（2）简介音乐会；
（3）如何取得门票。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi John，________
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Hi John，
I won't be able to attend the Chinese folk music concert next Sunday and would like to offer the ticket to you.
The reason for my absence is due to an academic obligation which necessitates my full attention，one that unfortunately coincides with the timing of the concert.The concert，which is scheduled at 7：00 PM at the City Concert Hall，is bound to be an amazing cultural experience.Each performance promises to captivate your senses.Renowned musicians will passionately perform Chinese traditional classics，including High Mountains and Flowing Water，which I strongly recommend.
Just let me know if you're interested.The ticket is an e﹣ticket，so I can forward it to you via email.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The reason for my absence is due to an academic obligation which necessitates my full attention，one that unfortunately coincides with the timing of the concert.
翻译：我缺席的原因是有一项学术任务需要我全神贯注，而不幸的是，这项任务正好赶上音乐会的时间。
分析：本句运用了which引导的限制性定语从句that necessitates my full attention和that引导的限制性定语从句that unfortunately coincides with the timing of the concert。
高分句型二：The concert，which is scheduled at 7：00 PM at the City Concert Hall，is bound to be an amazing cultural experience.
翻译：音乐会定于晚上7点在城市音乐厅举行，这必将是一次令人惊叹的文化体验。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Hi John，
I won't be able to attend the Chinese folk music concert next Sunday and would like to offer the ticket to you.（写信目的）
The reason for my absence is due to an academic obligation which necessitates my full attention，one that unfortunately coincides with the timing of the concert.【高分句型一】（不能观看音乐会的原因）The concert，which is scheduled at 7：00 PM at the City Concert Hall，is bound to be an amazing cultural experience.【高分句型二】Each performance promises to captivate your senses.Renowned musicians will passionately perform Chinese traditional classics，including High Mountains and Flowing Water，which I strongly recommend.（简介音乐会）
Just let me know if you're interested.The ticket is an e﹣ticket，so I can forward it to you via email.（如何取得门票）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
17．（2025 西城区一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你们学校的网站看到你们学校组织了"我的年度词（My Word of the Year）"的学生活动，发来邮件询问你的年度词。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
（1）你的年度词是什么；
（2）你选该词的理由。
注意（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
Glad to hear from you!I'm thrilled to share my Word of the Year with you.
My Word of the Year is"Transformation" ，as this year has been an all﹣around journey of personal growth for me.The stress of exams and those endless late﹣night study sessions have shaped me into a more resilient and competent individual.Turning 18 was also a milestone in this transformation.Stepping into adulthood is a bit nerve﹣wracking，but it has motivated me to shoulder more responsibilities，not only for myself but also for others.This year has been like a caterpillar turning into a butterfly：slow，tough，yet beautiful.That's why"Transformation"feels so right.
How about you？What's your Word of the Year？I can't wait to see what word you choose.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Stepping into adulthood is a bit nerve﹣wracking，but it has motivated me to shoulder more responsibilities，not only for myself but also for others.
翻译：步入成年有点伤脑筋，但它激励我承担更多的责任，不仅是对自己，也是对他人。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语stepping into adulthood作主语。
高分句型二：I can't wait to see what word you choose.
翻译：我迫不及待地想看看你选了什么词。
分析：本句使用了what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Glad to hear from you!I'm thrilled to share my Word of the Year with you.（写信目的）
My Word of the Year is"Transformation" ，as this year has been an all﹣around journey of personal growth for me. （个人年度词）The stress of exams and those endless late﹣night study sessions have shaped me into a more resilient and competent individual.Turning 18 was also a milestone in this transformation.Stepping into adulthood is a bit nerve﹣wracking，but it has motivated me to shoulder more responsibilities，not only for myself but also for others.【高分句型一】This year has been like a caterpillar turning into a butterfly：slow，tough，yet beautiful.That's why"Transformation"feels so right.（选择理由）
How about you？What's your Word of the Year？I can't wait to see what word you choose.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
18．（2025 辽宁二模）假定你是李华，你的外教Paul针对如何提高你的口语表达水平给你写邮件提出了建议，请你给他写一封回信，表示感谢。
注意：
（1）写作词数为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul，
________
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
I am writing to extend my sincere thanks for the thoughtful email you sent regarding how to improve my spoken English.Your suggestions are not only practical but also very encouraging.I truly appreciate the time and effort you've put into helping me enhance my language skills.
I am excited to start practicing in accordance with your advice of speaking more English with my teacher and fellow students and practicing with an AI.I am confident that it will significantly boost my oral expression.Thank you once again for your support and guidance.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I truly appreciate the time and effort you've put into helping me enhance my language skills.
翻译：我真的很感激你花时间和精力帮助我提高语言技能。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的定语从句you've put into helping me enhance my language skills。
高分句型二：I am confident that it will significantly boost my oral expression.
翻译：我相信这将大大提高我的口语表达能力。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
I am writing to extend my sincere thanks for the thoughtful email you sent regarding how to improve my spoken English.Your suggestions are not only practical but also very encouraging.I truly appreciate the time and effort you've put into helping me enhance my language skills.【高分句型一】（表达感谢）
I am excited to start practicing in accordance with your advice of speaking more English with my teacher and fellow students and practicing with an AI.I am confident that it will significantly boost my oral expression. 【高分句型二】（个人做法）Thank you once again for your support and guidance.（再次表达感谢）
Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 奉贤区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校学生会计划开设一个名为"The Voice of Our Generation"的视频号，现正向广大学生征求第一期视频的内容，如：校园生活，成长故事，流行文化……。请你向学生会写封信给出你的意见。信件内容须包括：
（1）视频的主要内容；
（2）选择该内容的理由。
【答案】Dear Student Union，
I'm Li Ming，a Senior Three student.I'm writing to offer my suggestions for the content of the first video of the video account "The Voice of Our Generation".
I suggest the first video focus on campus life，which is an integral part of our growth，filled with various experiences.Not only can we show the academic pursuits of students，but also we can include extracurricular activities.The reason for choosing this content is that it is highly relevant to all of us.It can arouse strong resonance among students.Through this video，students from different grades can better understand the rich campus life and look forward to their own growth journey.
I believe with this content，the video account can gain popularity and play an important role in promoting communication and understanding within our school community.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
【分析】高分句型一：I suggest the first video focus on campus life，which is an integral part of our growth，filled with various experiences.
翻译：我建议第一个视频聚焦于校园生活，它是我们成长中不可或缺的一部分，充满了各种经历。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句及过去分词短语filled with various experiences作后置定语。
高分句型二：I believe with this content，the video account can gain popularity and play an important role in promoting communication and understanding within our school community.
翻译：我相信，有了这些内容，视频账户可以获得人气，并在促进我们学校社区的沟通和理解方面发挥重要作用。
分析：本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句with this content，the video account can gain popularity and play an important role in promoting communication and understanding within our school community。
【解答】Dear Student Union，
I'm Li Ming，a Senior Three student.I'm writing to offer my suggestions for the content of the first video of the video account "The Voice of Our Generation".（写信目的）
I suggest the first video focus on campus life，which is an integral part of our growth，filled with various experiences.【高分句型一】Not only can we show the academic pursuits of students，but also we can include extracurricular activities.（第一期视频的主要内容）The reason for choosing this content is that it is highly relevant to all of us.It can arouse strong resonance among students.Through this video，students from different grades can better understand the rich campus life and look forward to their own growth journey..（选择该内容的理由）
I believe with this content，the video account can gain popularity and play an important role in promoting communication and understanding within our school community.【高分句型二】
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 嘉定区二模）Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近收到笔友Tom的邮件，在邮件中他提到自己即将前往上海一所高中担任志愿者，教授该校学生英语，他想了解一下适合中国学生的英语学习内容。请回复他一封邮件，内容须包括：（1）你建议他教授哪些内容；
（2）你的理由。
【答案】Dear Tom，
Glad to know you're coming to Shanghai as a volunteer English teacher.Here are my suggestions.
Firstly，spoken English is a must.Many Chinese students can do well in written tests but struggle to communicate.Dialogues，daily expressions and pronunciation practice would help them gain confidence in speaking.Secondly，introduce some interesting English cultures，like festivals and customs.It can not only arouse their interest but also deepen their understanding of the language.Last but not least，English songs and movies are great teaching materials，which make learning fun and students can pick up new words and phrases unconsciously.
I believe with your dedication and these contents，students will surely benefit a lot.Looking forward to hearing your good news.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It can not only arouse their interest but also deepen their understanding of the language.
译文：它不仅可以激发他们的兴趣，还可以加深他们对语言的理解。
分析：这句话使用了not only...but also...意为"不但......而且......"。
高分句型二：Last but not least，English songs and movies are great teaching materials，which make learning fun and students can pick up new words and phrases unconsciously.
译文：最后但同样重要的是，英语歌曲和电影是很好的教材，它们让学习变得有趣，学生可以在不知不觉中学习新单词和短语。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Glad to know you're coming to Shanghai as a volunteer English teacher.Here are my suggestions.（写信目的）
Firstly，spoken English is a must.Many Chinese students can do well in written tests but struggle to communicate.Dialogues，daily expressions and pronunciation practice would help them gain confidence in speaking.Secondly，introduce some interesting English cultures，like festivals and customs.It can not only arouse their interest but also deepen their understanding of the language.【高分句型一】Last but not least，English songs and movies are great teaching materials，which make learning fun and students can pick up new words and phrases unconsciously.【高分句型二】（建议他教授哪些内容）
I believe with your dedication and these contents，students will surely benefit a lot.Looking forward to hearing your good news.（理由）
Best regards，
Li Hua
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