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Unit 8 Follow your interests
Your favourite hobby 写作优质课
（沪教版2024）七年级
下
Learning objectives
1
Lead in
Pre-writing
3
While-writing
Post-writing
5
Summary
Assessment
7
Homework
2
4
6
8
By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
1
2
3
4
Introduced your hobbies and talked about how to turn your hobbies into a career.
Used simple present tense and simple past tense to describe present and past behavior separately.
Learnt some writing skills: supplementing details to enrich contents.
Have a clear understanding of my career plan and be able to write an essay about it.
Learning objectives
01
Lead in
01
Writing an article about your favourite hobby
When introducing your favourite hobby, what should you talk about
Expressing my hopes for the future
Describing how I developed my hobby
Explaining why I like my hobby
Introducing my hobby
d
b
c
a
Pre-writing
02
Wang Yao wrote an article about her favourite hobby.
Read for structure
An eye-catching title
Pre-writing
02
Read for content
Reflect (反映) the topic of the essay;
Arouse (提高) readers' interest in reading;
Express (表达) the author's emotions.
A good title should include:
Introducing my hobby
Pre-writing
02
My favourite hobby is ...
Doing sth is my favourite hobby.
I enjoy doing ... in my free time.
It is + adj. + for me to do sth.
It is great fun for me to do sth.
I am interested in ...
Useful sentence patterns:
Read for content
Tense
simple present tense
一般现在时
Pre-writing
02
Describing how I developed my hobby
Tense
Simple past tense
一般过去时
simple present tense
一般现在时
How did I start my hobby
Pre-writing
02
Describing how I developed my hobby
Tense
Simple past tense
一般过去时
simple present tense
一般现在时
What did I do for my hobby
Pre-writing
02
Describing how I developed my hobby
How often do I do it
Pre-writing
02
Read for content
Tense
simple present tense
一般现在时
Explaining why I like my hobby
Emotion + effect
Pre-writing
02
Read for content
Explaining my hopes for the future
Tense
simple present tense
一般现在时
Title
Introducing my hobby
Describing how I developed my hobby
Explaining why I like my hobby
Expressing my hopes for the future
How did I start: ______
What did I do : ______
How often : ______
Emotion: ______
Effect: ______
Pre-writing
02
How to write an article about your favourite hobby
Now write an article about your favourite hobby.
Step 1: Plan Brainstorm ideas and make an outline to organize them. You may refer to Wang Yao’s outline and article.
While-writing
03
It is interesting for me to take photos.
Taking photos is my favourite hobby.
I enjoy taking photos when I am free.
What is your favourite hobby
Writing
What
My favourite hobby is taking photos.
It is great fun for me to take photos.
While-writing
03
My hobby is playing basketball.
It is great fun for me to play basket with my friends.
I usually play basketball with my friends after school.
Writing
While-writing
03
Lily is interesting playing the piano.
Lily enjoys plays the piano when she is free.
Lily loves playing the piano.
Writing
While-writing
03
When did you begin your hobby
Tips for writing:
Add details
When I was ten, I got a book from my father. The pictures in the book were so beautiful that I got interested in them. That was the beginning of my lifetime hobby.
When
Useful sentence patterns:
When I was…, I…
At the age of…, I …
…so…that…
That was the beginning of…
Writing
While-writing
03
details
Useful sentence patterns:
I used to/didn’t use to…
It was + adj. + (for me) + to do sth.
Doing sth. was + adj. + for me
How + adj. + S + V!
I used to go outside with my camera on sunny days. I took photos of many different things such as flowers, animals and buildings. They were so beautiful.
What did you do for your hobby
How
details
It was interesting for me to take photos of many different things such as flowers, animals and buildings.
Writing
While-writing
03
I took photos of many different things such as flowers, animals and buildings.
Taking photos of many different thins such as flowers, animals and buildings was really interesting for me.
They were so beautiful.
How beautiful they were!
Writing
While-writing
03
Useful sentence patterns:
I …every day/ once a week.
I usually… in my free time.
I… everywhere/in/at…
I prefer to… by myself, but…
How often do you do it
details
How often
Writing
While-writing
03
Now, I join a photography club. I have learnt more skills of taking photos. I also take photos with my friends everywhere once a week.
Why
Useful sentence patterns:
Doing sth. is great fun for me.
It can help me…
Doing sth. is + adj. + for me
With the help of …, I can/be able to…
Why do you like it
Taking photos is great fun for me. It can also help me remember the valuable moments in my life. Every time I learn a new photography skill, I will practise it a lot.
Writing
While-writing
03
Future
Useful sentence patterns:
I would like/want to be… in the future.
I dream of becoming… when I grow up.
To be a/an…, I need to do/be…
It is important/necessary for me to…
The key is to… if…
What do you want to do in the future
In the future, I would like to become a photographer. I hope I can used my knowledge to help people see things from a new view. I must be proud of my job.
Writing
While-writing
03
Taking photos is my favourite hobby.
When I was ten, I got a book from my father. The pictures in the book were so beautiful that I got interested in them. That was the beginning of my lifetime hobby. I used to go outside with my camera on sunny days. It was interesting for me to take photos of many different things such as flowers, animals and buildings. How beautiful they were!
Now, I join a photography club. I have leant more skills of taking photos. I also take photos with my friends everywhere once a week.
Taking photos is great fun for me. It can also help me remember the valuable moments in my life.
In the future, I would like to become a photographer. I hope I can used my knowledge to help people see things from a new view. I must be proud of my job.
Tips:
Clear structure
Good sentences
Correct tenses
Add details
Writing
While-writing
03
Step 2: Write Write about your favourite hobby. Try to give your article an eye-catching title.
While-writing
03
Tick ( ) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.




Post-writing
05
Step 3 Check and revise.
Taking photos is my favourite hobby.
When I was ten, I got a book from my father. The pictures in the book were so beautiful that I got interested in them. That was the beginning of my lifetime hobby. I used to go outside with my camera on sunny days. It was interesting for me to take photos of many different things such as flowers, animals and buildings. How beautiful they were!
Now, I join a photography club. I have leant more skills of taking photos. I also take photos with my friends everywhere once a week.
Taking photos is great fun for me. It can also help me remember the valuable moments in my life.
In the future, I would like to become a photographer. I hope I can used my knowledge to help people see things from a new view. I must be proud of my job.
What is your favourite hobby
How did you begin your hobby
What did you do for your hobby
How often do you do it
Where do you do it
Who do you do it with
Why do you like it
What do you want to be in the future
Writing
Post-writing
05
My favourite hobby
Reading books is my favourite hobby.
When I was five, my mother bought me a story book. Before going to bed, she often told me some stories from the book. They were so interesting that I fell in love with them.
I used to go to the library with my mum at weekends. It was interesting for me to read stories from all kinds of books. How wonderful they were!
Now I read books every day. And I read books at home and in the library. I prefer to read by myself, but sometimes I share books with my friends.
In my opinion, reading is great fun for me. With the help of books, I can learn more about the world.
In the future, I would like to be a writer. I hope to create more interesting stories to help children enjoy reading.
Tips:
Clear structure
Good sentences
Correct tenses
Add details
Post-writing
Post-writing
05
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
Post-writing
05
Summary
We learn:
1. To describe present actions with the simple present tense and to describe past actions with the simple past tense;
2. To add more details in writing;
3. Good sentence patterns.
We can:
Write an article about My favourite hobby
Doing sth. Is + adj. + for me.
It is adj. + for me to…
The key is to… if…
so…that…
Summary
06
Assessment
07
Self-assessment Marks
I can use an outline to write an article about my favourite 1 2 3 4 5
I can used correct tenses to describe actions. 1 2 3 4 5
I can use good sentence patterns in my writing. 1 2 3 4 5
I can provide enough details to describe my favourite hobby. 1 2 3 4 5
基础：
在小组内互读作文，用互评表互评作文，选出本组优秀作文。
Homework
08
提升：
完成《英语(七年级 下册)B》Unit 8 的writing练习
拓展：
把作文制作成Vlog，可以适当增加情节。
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